Date: 10/29/11 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 6
I gotta say, the revelation about Gordon was unexpected but not surprising.
Grr, Michael keeps blowing him off. Forget relationships, that sort of attitude can easily sink a friendship.
"Critical point"... Are they doing physics?
Lol @ Georg's "Dude, watch out for my hair!"
Another coincidence here (a disturbing one at that) is that just before reading this, I was on the yahoo frontpage where it said that 13 US soldiers had died in a bombing D: I was instantly worried, but then thought it was unlikely since my soldier pen pal is only a technician, hopefully far from danger. Ugh, but there's always the chance. Regardless, I feel sad :(
I'd be frightened for Bill, too, except this is a story and it sort of can't end here :P Something positive to think about for me.
Author's Response: actually they're supposed to be doing calculus homework. critical point popped up when i googled random calculus stuff, seeing as how i never took calculus and know nothing about it. and geo is very protective of his hair, ain't he? lol and don't feel sad! i'm sure he's okay. *hugs*
Date: 10/29/11 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 6
I'm hoping Tom wasn't one of those hurt. I hope Bill & his mom will be okay with what's happened with Gordon. Can't wait til u post again!
Author's Response: *crosses fingers for tom...and for bill and simone too*
Date: 10/29/11 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 6
omg, SAD CHAP! and again, i've had maybe two updates to my tracked since your last chapter. it's a dismal time for fiction, it seems...tom has to be okay tho, cuz cuz...they haven't even liked each other yet! kinda. michael is a douche. xD finally
Author's Response: i know! i've even had trouble finding the motivation to write lately. hopefully that will all change though.
Author's Response: i know! i've even had trouble finding the motivation to write lately. hopefully that will all change though.
Date: 10/29/11 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 6
Poor Bill. He's got it hard right now. I really hope it wasn't Tom, and I can't wait to see what he wrote back to Tom (if anything). Georg and Natalie are great as his friends! I like how you're writing them.
Author's Response: oh thanks! glad the supporting cast is as well-liked as the main characters!
Date: 10/29/11 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 6
OOH NOOO!!! I really hope Tom is ok :(
You need to write longer chapters, this is sooo good I can't get enough of it :D
Author's Response: well unfortunately these chapters are already written, so they won't be getting any longer. but thanks for reading anyway!
Date: 10/29/11 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 6
Michael is totally 'phoning in' his relationship with Bill. I get the feeling he just wants to keep a boyfriend around until he leaves for college. Bill should totally dump his ass.
Poor Bill. Of course Tom will totally not be dead and then Bill and Tom will meet (I am using my fantastic mind powers to urge this to come to pass). :-p
Author's Response: hmm, very perceptive about michael. as for your mind powers...we shall see...
Date: 10/29/11 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 5
Tom and Bill got to hear each other's voices! It perhaps should be embarrassing how exciting and sexy I found the thought of them talking to each other.
Michael sounds like he is on the way out. I just can't feel bad about that.
Date: 10/29/11 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh no! Poor Bill! You can't stop here... Wednesday can't come fast enough! lol
Awesome chapter as always! It's not a good period for Bill, with his parents drama, his relationship with Michael and now Tom... I hope he hears from him soon!
Author's Response: wednesday always seems so far away, doesn't it? and i know! poor bill right now! thanks for reading!
Date: 10/29/11 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 6
Poor Bill. And ass boyfriend. Hope Tom is OK.
Author's Response: great review! "ass boyfriend" *snickers*rn
Author's Response: great review! "ass boyfriend" *snickers*rn
Date: 10/29/11 11:56 am Title: Chapter 6
omg the cliffhanger is killing me XD
Author's Response: you'll live, i promise
Date: 10/29/11 11:44 am Title: Chapter 6
:O Noooo!! Tom can't be dead! Please tell me he isn't dead...:( *Looks at you with puppy eyes*
Author's Response: i can reveal nothing
Author's Response: i can reveal nothing
Date: 10/29/11 03:54 am Title: Chapter 5
Because im practically giving you Wendy's french fries i believe i should get another chapter .... My brother was in Afganistan for a year so i understand the feelings Tom's family has... And i love that Bill is such a nerd !!!! but he is my nerd and i love him for it lol
Author's Response: next chapter will be up momentarily
Date: 10/29/11 12:54 am Title: Chapter 5
*gasp* I would wait for the next chapter, but I couldn't wait ;)
I heard back from my soldier today! He said he'd love to have support from me, and thanked me for taking time to support the troops in general. He's almost two years younger than me, which I wasn't expecting XD (I'm about to turn 21) and was born and raised in Tennessee, lol.
Writing the reply now. (I still need stationary, gosh darnit!)
Author's Response: that's so awesome! here's to a long and wonderful friendship! meanwhile, i'm about to add the next chapter.
Date: 10/28/11 03:52 am Title: Chapter 1
Of course I mean it in a good way! I wouldn't have the balls to make that call.. or at least I don't Thank so. :) oh, boss is coming ;)
Author's Response: *shifty eyes* quick! put your phone away!
Date: 10/28/11 12:45 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG! I live in Seattle! Great chapter by the way. You writing style is unique:)
Author's Response: really? do you know bill? lol and i consider being unique the highest compliment possible, so thank you!
Date: 10/27/11 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 5
omg this is so gooood *.* just found this story and i totaly love it. and i liek the slow development of the characters xx
Author's Response: yay! three cheers for new readers! so glad you found it and that you're enjoying it!
Date: 10/27/11 10:52 am Title: Chapter 5
This is so cute! Love it. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: thanks very much. you can read more on saturday.
Date: 10/27/11 10:20 am Title: Chapter 5
Yayy for surprise call from Tom!! Is it weird that I actually screamed when I read that? O well XD Aww the little Happy New Year/Anniversary is so sweet :D
Author's Response: not weird at all. thanks for reading!
Date: 10/27/11 05:38 am Title: Chapter 5
This was a lovely little Christmas chapter :) I really enjoy this story, seeing the slow friendship forming, and then, something more simmering beneath the surface :)
Author's Response: its a low simmer, set over low heat lol
Date: 10/27/11 03:57 am Title: Chapter 5
Is it still long time till Tom meet Bill? 5 months for real, that's way too long.. D: hey I hope Michael cheating on Bill so he will get dumped xD
Author's Response: yep, 5 months, but it'll go by quick. and i will tell you that michael does not cheat on bill.