Date: 11/02/11 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 7
I knee it, I knew that we'd lose Gustav :((( I just had the feeling...
Tom's letter had me in tears, I don't even pinpoint the reason.. I guess Tom feeling blue shined thru from it :)
Love the pace you've kept with this story, if that makes any sense. Not too quick ans yet fast enough to keep it interesting :)
Hope things will get better for Tom, and Bill too. But most of all to you, you are a real person there, these guys ,even if really real like and lovable and all that are characters. So take care of yourself :)
Until.next chapter, that I hope will be soonish ;)
Author's Response: god dammit, everyone's making me cry tonight! that's the last time i ask for reviews to make me feel better! thank you so much for saying that though, it means a lot. next update will be saturday. and i know what you mean about the pace. i didn't want them falling for each other after just a couple letters.
Date: 11/02/11 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 7
You killed Gustav? Everything else in this chapter just went over my head.
Author's Response: well really it was the evil terrorist people that killed him, i just wrote about it. but yeah, it was kind of a whim. i was writing and i thought "i think i'll kill off gustav"...so i did.
Date: 11/01/11 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to tomorrow. I'm actually re-reading the story, while sitting in the train, on my way home from work :) and you can call me psycho, or danish or whatever.. I don't cheese my scrambled eggs! I eat them with ketchup ;-)
Author's Response: oh you're one of those ketchup on your eggs people. i've never understood that combination, never even tried it since it doesn't look or sound all that great. but if you like it, more power to ya. thanks for (re)reading!
Date: 10/30/11 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh no! I'm thinking it wasn't Tom, but I'm hoping it wasn't Gustav either. Great chapter! Can't wait for more! XD
Author's Response: thanks so much for reading. we shall see if your thoughts are correct.
Author's Response: thanks so much for reading. we shall see if your thoughts are correct.
Date: 10/30/11 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 6
ASKDFJLKSADFJLKASDFJSA.!
oh my good god.
HE BETTER NOT HAVE DIED.! OR I'LL HURT YOU.!
wheeee <3 this is turning out SO awesome :3 yay.!
update soon~
xx
Author's Response: such violence! tsk tsk thanks for reading!
Date: 10/30/11 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 6
NO!!!! Why would you stop there?!?! :/ Oh my... why am I having this sick feeling that, for some reason, Gustav might be the one shot down there? :( Anyway, please update real soon. This is quite amusing!
Author's Response: cliffhangers rock, that's why! next update wednesday.
Date: 10/30/11 08:38 am Title: Chapter 6
:o I really hope.. that Tom is not dead..
Author's Response: DUN DUN DUNNNNNNN. we shall see, my friend!
Date: 10/30/11 06:31 am Title: Chapter 6
this was a nice chapter!
i hope tom did not die!
if he did i be really sad!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: thanks so much for reading. glad you're enjoying it.
Date: 10/30/11 01:24 am Title: Chapter 6
I love this story and how you've written it. It's very well done.
Author's Response: thanks so much. glad you like it.
Date: 10/30/11 12:12 am Title: Chapter 6
im so glad i decided to read this. its really good.cant wait till bill and tom meet. and michael gets out the freakin picture. anyways lookin forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: michael: most hated character in fan fiction! lol thanks for reading!
Date: 10/29/11 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 6
o.o nein please
Author's Response: all will be revealed on wednesday
Date: 10/29/11 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh no!!! I want to cry now. Not Tom.
Author's Response: *hands you tissues* thanks for reading, and i'm sorry i made you want to cry.
Author's Response: *hands you tissues* thanks for reading, and i'm sorry i made you want to cry.
Date: 10/29/11 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 6
doing great
Author's Response: thanks muchly!
Date: 10/29/11 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 6
Aww I really hope tommi is okay:( LET HIM LiVE *Gives huge bag of gummy bears* plzzzz lol
Author's Response: i cannot be bribed!
Date: 10/29/11 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 6
I feel like a tool, because while everyone is worried about Tom, I'm worried about Gustav. I hope he's ok!
Author's Response: yeah! tom's not the only soldier guy in this story! good thinking!
Author's Response: yeah! tom's not the only soldier guy in this story! good thinking!
Date: 10/29/11 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 6
I have a prediction! Perhaps Tom got injured and will return home because of it...and then he and Bill will meet.
I'm way off, huh? :D I loved this chapter. As always!
Author's Response: yeah, way off lol
Date: 10/29/11 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 6
Yay, new chapter! So short though :( and evil you, leaving us with such a cliffhanger. It was still great :)
Author's Response: hey i'm 5'2", there's nothing wrong with shortness! lol
Date: 10/29/11 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 6
Mmm scrambled eggs. Were they cheesy? I love scrambled eggs with a bit of cheese on top...
*snaps out of cheesy egg fantasy* OH MY GOD HOLY FUCK!!! Is Tom okay??????? Tom wasn't killed was he?...*lightbulb* ohhhh.... I bet I know what happened. He wasn't one of the guys killled, but he was just wounded enough to get sent home. Knda like when Forrest Gump got "Shot in the buttock" Mmhhhmm *nodnod* That best be what happened or I will be very upset.
Yea...that little convo with Michael, or mike-ass as I refer to him in my head, did not help allievite my tick off-ed-ness at him. I understand senior year is rough, but why can't you do a bit ogf the homework at ill's house? They must have a class or two in common.
I get the feeling Bill's random questions letter might get slightly postponed, and e replaced with an 'omg are you okay, are you still alive' letter...Then again, I could see, if Tom were alive and stuck in a hospital bed, wanting to get those random, and possibly silly questions, to brighten his day. I look forward to the randomness, whenever we get a chance to see it.
I also feel bad that Tom got his last Slim Jim stolen. *imitates Stan from South Park* Those bastards!
Wonderful chapter. I can't wait to see more! Keep up the spifftastmic work!
Author's Response: what do you mean were they cheesy? what kind of psycho eats scrambled eggs without cheese? sheez, it's like you don't know me at all! lmao at "mike-ass" glad i could conjur up a character that inspires that much hatred. and brownie points for including a south park reference in your review!
Author's Response: what do you mean were they cheesy? what kind of psycho eats scrambled eggs without cheese? sheez, it's like you don't know me at all! lmao at "mike-ass" glad i could conjur up a character that inspires that much hatred. and brownie points for including a south park reference in your review!
Date: 10/29/11 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 6
Nooooo. Not a cliffhanger!!!!
Author's Response: cliffhangers rock!
Date: 10/29/11 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 6
O: oh no
Author's Response: oh yes