Date: 11/09/11 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 9
This story is so welcome after a day spent studying. It was such an interesting chapter and we learnt a lot about the characters. My fav part was obviously when they talked about meeting each other cause I just can't wait for them to finally be face to face =P Thank you so much for this update, I fell more and more in love with this story with every new chapter.
Author's Response: thank you so much! i'm particularly fond of this story so it thrills me that it's going over so well! thanks so much for reading!
Date: 11/09/11 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 9
I wanted that Tom retunrs home and finally meet with Bill
Author's Response: patience grasshopper! patience!
Date: 11/09/11 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 9
Thats awesome that Tom agreed that it would be cool if they met up! I really can't wait to see what you have planned for that.
Author's Response: *rubs hands together* let's see what i can come up with, shall we? thanks for reading!
Date: 11/09/11 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 9
I just wanted him to be there to squeeze Bill when he told him about his parents fighting :(. I wish I could type more but my hand hurt from typing for NaNoWriMo so I'm cutting it short :(.
Author's Response: aw, hope your hand feels better. thanks for reading!
Date: 11/09/11 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 9
i always squeal when i this at the top of my "tracked stories" list ;D
but i can't help it, this is just seeeeewww guuud <3
keep 'em coming darling.!
I CAN'T WAIT 'TILL THEY MEET.! -squeals-
xx
Author's Response: i've got a squealer! i love it! i too squeal when an awesome story is updated. thanks so much!
Date: 11/08/11 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 8
I tried reviewing your story about a week ago and it was a really long review but for some reason this site hates me and it wouldn't post it. Anyway, I'll just make a new one.
I didn't mind Mike since he was nice guy and Bill loved him, but after reading the two chapters I haven't read yet, ( dislike him now. He didn't give Bill a chance to choose himself and that he basically didn't want to talk about their relationship to him. But am now glad that Bill ended it with him, so now he can do to Tom.
Aw, poor Tom. Gustav is gone. In my last review I tried posting, I was thinking to that something happened to Gustav and that Tom got away unhurt or was left behind at the base. But now I'm thinking to what if something happened to Tom? But then again if something did happened to him wouldn't he be sent home?
I love writing letters. There is just something about it that is much more intimate then texting, or emails. Like I used to write letters to my friend a long time ago. Sure we could have easily texted or emailed each other, but we didn't. But that was like almost two years ago. I wonder what my friend is doing now. She told me in her letters that she was planning on joining the Army Air Force, so probably now she's doing that!
Haha, so I take that the Marine doesn't wish to read your story now? It would have been interesting what he thought of it though.
Another thing that brought my attention to your story, the Military aspect of it! My older brother was thinking of joining the Army and I was worried about his decision. But so far he hasn't, he has a full time job as a manager at a Gas Station slash restaurant. But he has friends who are in the military. Fro who is in the Marines and last I heard was stationed at Japan. RuRu who just finished Boot Camp a couple months ago, but I don't know where he is right now *thinking* Yeah I forgot.
So I guess I'll end this here? Love your story and your a amazing writer! Much love!
Author's Response: i love letters! i used to have tons of pen pals, but i've lost touch with all of them over the years. and you're right, there's something about actually picking up a pen and paper that's just so awesome. email and texting, while also awesome, will just never be the same. it seems like everyone disliked michael and is glad to see him gone. now on to tom!
Date: 11/07/11 08:00 am Title: Chapter 8
well like tom said...it's for the best...i really hope that when tom gets home they make time to meet...it would be a shame if they didn't...
Author's Response: that would totally suck if they didn't get to meet! if i was bill i'd be heartbroken...about not meeting tom, not about douchebag michael.
Date: 11/06/11 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 8
Yay! I'm so very glad Bill got rid of his crappy bf... Now, we'll just have to wait till it's June and things b/w Tom and Bill turn a little bit more personal :P
Author's Response: a little more personal you say? well, whatever could you mean?
Date: 11/06/11 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 8
I'm really happy that Bill and Michael broke up, kay? And I really love this. I'm so happy that people are responding to it so well! You deserve it
Author's Response: yeah i think everyone's glad bill and michael broke up, kay? there should be a vote for most hated omc or something. lol thanks for reading!
Author's Response: yeah i think everyone's glad bill and michael broke up, kay? there should be a vote for most hated omc or something. lol thanks for reading!
Date: 11/06/11 08:59 am Title: Chapter 8
hahah Great chapi, finaly Bill is single :D
Author's Response: yay for single bill!
Author's Response: yay for single bill!
Date: 11/06/11 04:00 am Title: Chapter 8
Knock knock - just me again. I do believe this is the most reviews I have ever left for one story. I am really trying. I do not really have anything to say, mostly rambles but as you seem to don't mind I am gonna try to keep those up.
So finally they broke up. I have been waiting since chapter one for that to happen. Yep, I actually read the pairings and I know for a fact that Bill and Tom will at the very least end up kissing but I am suspecting it will result in a relationship *looks very smug because she figured that one out*. I can't help but to think that something will happen around graduation. Just a teeny tiny inkling, or maybe it is because I have watched too many military homecomings on youtube. Man, I am a sucker for those - they get me everytime. I blame the combination of music and images - yes the music is very powerful! Uh, I did actually read this saturday, so for once I was on time, only being on time also resulted in very late and therefore the energy to write anything had already gone to sleep. Yay for wednesday, which of course is tomorrrow by the way ;) yeees!?
Author's Response: i know exactly what you mean! i had to stop watching those happy military homecoming shows cuz they always made me cry. a little boy opening a giant gift box and out pops his dad! yeah, couldn't do it. well i hope you'll find bill and tom's first meeting to be as sweet and sappy as one of those homecoming shows.
Author's Response: i know exactly what you mean! i had to stop watching those happy military homecoming shows cuz they always made me cry. a little boy opening a giant gift box and out pops his dad! yeah, couldn't do it. well i hope you'll find bill and tom's first meeting to be as sweet and sappy as one of those homecoming shows.
Date: 11/06/11 03:19 am Title: Chapter 8
this was a nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: thanks so much for reading!
Date: 11/06/11 12:19 am Title: Chapter 8
I love this story. I just started reading it a couple days ago, on Wednesday actually. I really liked it. So, it's getting to the point where I wish the updates would come faster in the week. :)
I really enjoy this story, so thank you for putting it up. :)
Author's Response: but if the updates come faster then the story will be over sooner. thanks for reading, and wednesday will be here before you know it.
Date: 11/06/11 12:09 am Title: Chapter 8
the marine story for your intro was a riot, I bet he changed his mind they always do. LOL your doing great
Author's Response: yeah, i thought people would get a kick out of that little story. thanks for reading!
Date: 11/05/11 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 8
he broke up?? WOOOOOOOOOOOOO o yeaaa *doing backflip*
Geo such a very funny derp :D
Author's Response: wow! happy?
Date: 11/05/11 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 8
I'm glad Bill has broken up with Michael. Heartbreak sucks, but Tom is right and it will get better for him. And Georg rocks as a friend.
Author's Response: *sigh* wish geo was my friend
Date: 11/05/11 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 8
Ugh, Michael's a JERK. Talking about still being able to see Bill when he came home was the clincher. >:( Bill's better off without him.
Tom covered in silly string would be awesomely cute. :)
Author's Response: omg it would be so adorable!
Date: 11/05/11 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 8
well im happy bill ended it with mike.guy..... cause that means Tom is coming home soon and they are gonna meet right? anyway all i wanted to say is i really like the slow development of the characters but send Tom home... shot him or something i dont care and then make Bill take care of him xD
love it :P
Author's Response: LMAO! advocating violence much? thanks for a hilarious review, but you don't reeeeally want me to injure tom, do you?
Date: 11/05/11 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 8
lol @ "I've got to to do more manly Marine things..."
I'm glad that he and Michael are over. Michael was starting to wear on my nerves with his distance. I like the way Bill told him off too. "You want to see other people, start seeing them. We're done." Yeah I'm not that witty when I'm in situations like that so I applaud him. ^_~.
I love Georg in this.
And the story you posted in the Chapter notes IS funny. You warned him! lol. Lovely chapter.
Author's Response: protective geo rocks!
Author's Response: protective geo rocks!
Date: 11/05/11 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 8
Tom and bill getting drunk together ;D man, id like to see that :)))
Author's Response: hell i would too!