Date: 11/23/11 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 13
Happy Thanksgiving!
THANKS for GIVING us this new chapter! See what I did there? I know you did. ;)
I could never be anything but happy about one of them getting a blow job.
Tom is Bill's and Bill is Tom's! Yaaaaay. Okay loved this love you gonna go now bye.
Author's Response: yeah yeah yeah, you're real clever with your little play on words there. lol glad the blow job was as satisfying for you as it was for tom.
Date: 11/23/11 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 13
Guh, I'm sorry -- I'm reviewing like every other chapter. My family's been doing a lot of stuff, and if I *do* have an opportunity to review, I don't know what to say.
Also, I think this fic might be subconsciously reminding me that my soldier person still hasn't emailed me back after I saw that 13 had died in the last few days of October. I've emailed him twice since then. Still hoping he's just busy, which is the norm anyway. (It's weird cuz I'm not even attached to him where I'd call us friends. We're still just acquaintances)
Also sympathize that you had a tough week last time :(
Anyway, on to the chapter itself.
Construction Tom :D
Hmm, I don't generally like any physical contact at all, but I make an exception for romantic touches. So I guess I would like touchy-feely XD
Wow, I felt particularly satisfied (uh, not in that way O.o) when Tom got a blowjob from Bill, since he has gone soo long without feeling that sort of pleasure. It was hot *and* nice XD
I wonder why Tom didn't want Bill to kiss his neck. I'm assuming it's because then he'd get aroused again :P
For some reason I think it'll go badly if Bill has dinner with his dad. What the hell kinda man asks the woman with whom he cheated to attend a dinner with his son?
Awwww, they're each other's. *heart heart*
Oh my gosh, Happy Thanksgiving to you, too :DD *gives cranberries*
Author's Response: yeah so i can totally picture a sweaty muscular tom swinging a hammer or putting up drywall or something. yum! and of course he needed some kind of...release. good thing bill was there to give it to him, huh? oh, and bill's dad's an idiot. okay bye!
Date: 11/23/11 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 13
Best...chapter....ever you need to be featured now, this is original this is captivating :3
Author's Response: okay, if a blow job...well, if WRITING a blow job gets me featured i'll just die laughing. glad you liked it so much though!
Date: 11/23/11 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 13
this was so amazing...they are definitely made for each other...
Author's Response: thanks so much! they just fit together so perfectly, don't they?
Date: 11/23/11 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 12
aww...that's so sweet...it's great that they both feel the same way...
Date: 11/23/11 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 13
O naughty Bill tsk tsk tsk XD This fic is sooo cute I love it =D Finally together!!!
Author's Response: hey, he was just helping out! lol thanks for reading!
Date: 11/23/11 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 13
Awww! Love the last sentence, so sweet! The part about Gustav was really sad. I can't even imagine how Tom must feel, seeing your best friend getting killed right in front of you...
That was another awesome chapter! I adore these characters you created and the universe... it's brilliant!
Author's Response: yeah i kinda got all warm and fuzzy when i wrote that line. i really like it, so glad you like it too.
Date: 11/23/11 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 13
This was so sweet. My heart is now a puddle of goo. Yay if you got a 4 hour workday today
Author's Response: yep, walked out of the office at 12:15, and i don't go back til monday. yaaay! oh, and thanks for reading! *helps you mop up your heart*
Author's Response: yep, walked out of the office at 12:15, and i don't go back til monday. yaaay! oh, and thanks for reading! *helps you mop up your heart*
Date: 11/23/11 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 13
I got a big smile on my face when I saw this update and it did not leave while I read the chapter all the way through. Lovely!
Author's Response: and i smiled while reading this review, so yay!
Date: 11/23/11 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 13
I love the last line! sugary sweetness.
Author's Response: yeah i kinda love it too. thanks for reading!
Author's Response: yeah i kinda love it too. thanks for reading!
Date: 11/23/11 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 13
Aww yay! I think its sweet that they've finally considered they belong to each other :D love love loving the story ^_^ Have a good thanksgiving tomorrow.
Author's Response: you too! i plan to be in a food coma by 3. thanks for reading!
Author's Response: you too! i plan to be in a food coma by 3. thanks for reading!
Date: 11/23/11 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 13
I've been reading this story since the beginning (I don't usually comment) and I've been loving it so much but this chapter was my favorite! It's so damn cute. Lovely Tom is lovely!!
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Author's Response: on the outside, he's a badass marine. on the inside, he's all gooey and sweet. glad you enjoy it.
Date: 11/21/11 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 12
AHHHHH!!!! I'm too fucking excited by this! I'm really looking forwards to read the following final chapters! Gee... those two needed to meet already xD
Author's Response: now now, good things have come to those who waited
Date: 11/21/11 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 12
Are you sure I can't have a Marine Tomi? *pout
Seriously though hunny, this story is sweet, endearing, just beautiful Thank you for writing it. I really do look forward to your updates and smile while they come.
Author's Response: if i can't have him, you can't either! and thanks for reading! so glad i make you smile.
Date: 11/20/11 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 12
Seriously I am so happy for them! ^_^
Author's Response: me toooo!
Date: 11/20/11 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 12
Kisses!! I love kisses :D And I'm happy that there's another chapter. So excited for Wednesday!
Author's Response: have i ever mentioned my theory that tom is an amazing, earth shaking, damn near orgasm inducing kisser?
Date: 11/20/11 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 12
Very glad to learn that there's one chapter extra! =D And I know I've said it before but they are SO cute together, really perfect. Loved the kiss scene, the chemistry is obviously there! Can't wait for more =)
Author's Response: yeah, i just want the story to go on forever! okay, maybe not forever. but the ending i had just didn't seem all that...endingish? like that new word i just made up? anyhoo, yeah, there's an extra chapter now. and thanks for reading!
Date: 11/20/11 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 12
I'm happy about the extra chapter, too!
Lovely chapter!
Author's Response: hope you enjoy the extra chapter as much as all the others! thanks for reading!
Date: 11/20/11 05:46 am Title: Chapter 12
smiling smiling smiling smiling smiling smiling smiling smiling smiling smiling smiling smiling smiling smiling smiling smiling smiling smiling smiling smiling smiling smiling smiling smiling smiling smiling smiling smiling smiling smiling ...................... ;-)
Author's Response: don't your cheeks hurt from all that smiling? i know mine would. but i'm glad it made you so happy!
Date: 11/20/11 05:19 am Title: Chapter 12
jesus................. so sweet.
Author's Response: my apologies for any toothaches. thanks for reading!
Author's Response: my apologies for any toothaches. thanks for reading!