Date: 12/03/12 02:23 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow. I have never read a story on THF before that included a, "star-fucker." This is new and different for me :D And I love it! You should totally continue writing this! xD
Date: 10/16/11 10:26 am Title: Chapter 1
yay! this is exactly what i've been waiting for. i hope you continue this story. pleaese don't abandon it :)
Date: 10/16/11 01:17 am Title: Chapter 1
THIS IS GONNA BE INTERESTING. TOM IS A MAJOR SUPER SODA JERK! KEEP IT UP!!!
Date: 10/13/11 03:54 am Title: Chapter 1
WOW You should absolutely continue!!
This is awesome. :)
I love the way you portray this character...
We don't know if we should feel sorry for her or not. I mean, she has a rough life but doesn't whine about it like so many others would do in the same situation...
One of my favourite parts was "Why do I do it? Maybe it's because daddy left when i was just a little girl growing up in the trailer park in Florida and these men are a substitute to fill the huge crater he left behind. Or perhaps I was raped at a college frat party on a stained sofa and this is how I chose to regain control of my life. Or it could just be that the money is good, and I never could handle a standard 9-5 to pay the bills. I'll leave that up to you to decide."
She acts so nonchalant! The last line killed me as well...
Anyways, please DO continue. xD
Date: 10/13/11 12:55 am Title: Chapter 1
ooh! i'm intrigued... :D
Date: 10/12/11 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
This story has potential, I like it :)
Date: 10/12/11 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm really excited to see how this plays out.
Date: 10/12/11 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
continue. its a cool concept.
Date: 10/12/11 10:19 am Title: Chapter 1
Interesting. Can't wait to see what else is going to happen.
Date: 10/12/11 10:16 am Title: Chapter 1
Interesting. Can't wait to see what else is going to happen.