Date: 11/09/11 10:46 pm Title: Chapter Five
*flails* Holy Bejeezus! He won!!!! *kick flail*
Wow, won in a fight with BUshido, got in an argument with Tom...Fricken crazy ass day for Bill.
I'm worried now, about Bushido coming after Bill, and what he might do to Tom, if Tom won't help him get Bill. Yea *nods* Not good.
Tom knows where Bill lives now...If I didn't have faith in where this fic was going I'd be very worried...and I still am a little...hmmm
I loved this chapter. It was awesome sauce! Keep up the great work! *glomps*
Author's Response: Ohhhh hi my new twitter friend!! :D Bill totally won! Kick flails are only the best kind of flails! It was certainly a big day for Bill. And he thought he was just going for a leisurely evening at the club! Hmmph. All of your concerns are very valid. Bill should have probably not let a stranger who runs with a rough crowd know where he lives. But I guess we can blame the head injury on his dumb decision? Or maybe Tom just brings out the dumb in him, lol.
Don't be worried though! You know I wouldn't do anything too bad to these guys, I like them too much. And I like YOU too much to make you feel stressed whilst reading :D Keep up that faith, girl!
Thank you sooo much for reading! I am delighted that you loved it. I shall keep it up as long as you want it ;) *glomps and loves*
Date: 11/09/11 10:28 pm Title: Chapter Five
Oh, I wanted to ask a question that I forgot to ask in my first review. Since Bill is studying Pyschology, would he perhaps in some way be able to use that in helping with his fighting? If Bill does chose to fight? Since in the last few chapters Bill always seem to anaylze people and I believe that would help in getting to be more inform of people he may fight? Anyway just wondering! Wonderful story!
Author's Response: Oh hello again! :D I love that you have these questions. Thank you so much for sharing them with me! I think that you are so very right. The fact that Bill is studying Psychology can certainly help him if he fights. Getting inside an opponents head can be half the fight :D You're so awesome for thinking about these things! I'm really so happy that you're reading and enjoying. Thank you so much! <3
Date: 11/09/11 09:03 pm Title: Chapter Five
[edit: made a mistake in my first review, so posting it again error-free =O]
Zomg, I was just thinking longingly of this fic yesterday evening. (Lol, that wasn't creepy at all!)
Yay! I enjoyed this update. Grr, I'm too happy about it in general that I can't think of any parts in particular I wanna point out XD
Oh, except for that I'm happy Tom's moved away from his dad.
Author's Response: Hehe, you're so cute! I didn't even notice an error but you're sweet to repost <3
Noooo way? You have no idea how happy that makes me! It's not creepy at all. I love that, kay?
I'm very pleased that you enjoyed this update! The fact that it gave you an overall feeling of happiness is enough to make me feel the same :D I'm happy that Tom's away from his dad, too! Thank you so much for reading and sharing this lovely review with me!
Date: 11/09/11 09:01 pm Title: Chapter Five
Way to go, Bill! I knew he had it in him! The self-defense classes have definitely paid off. Although, the shot to the groin was probably his life-saver right there =]
We got to see a little bit of a sweeter side of Tom in this one. Even though he's all rough and tough on the outside, I have a feeling he's a sweetheart deep down. I'll just have to wait and see =]
I have a feeling that Bushido is going to try very hard to get Bill to join them. And if that doesn't happen, I have a feeling he may make Bill's like a living hell.
So many thoughts and ideas for what's going to happen next! I can't wait for what's to come =]
I hope you're having a fantastic week as well, hun
Author's Response: You're completely right! I don't know if he would have gotten out of there so quickly if he hadn't of taken that cheap shot, lol. But he definitely held his own! Where can I sign up for these classes and become a bad ass~ :D
Eeeee this made me smile! I think you're right. Underneath his rugged layers is a sweet filling. I can't wait for you to find out!
You are seriously on the exactly right track with your assumptions. It's gonna go one way or the other for sure :D You're so clever and lovely! I love all of your thoughts. I'm so happy that you are excited for what's next. Thank you soo much for reading and sharing this review with me!
My week has been great so far, thank you! <3
Date: 11/09/11 08:33 pm Title: Chapter Five
Woot woot! Bill kicked Bushido's ass! Now that calls for a good chapter ;) But now I wanna know what happens when Bu meets up with Bill again D:
I love you too :D
Author's Response: YES HE DIIIIID. I'm just really happy you enjoyed this even though you're a little sickie :( Thank you for taking the time to read and review, lovely! I really wanna see what happens tooo, haha. I wanna write so much, but there's so little time!
Aww shucks. You're the best <3 Love you!
Date: 11/09/11 08:24 pm Title: Chapter Five
Imma curl up here, and hang out, alright? *nods*
Author's Response: Kaaaay :D Lemme join you in a few. I have some homework but then maybe we can eat cupcakes and sit there lookin' crazy together. Cool? :<3
Date: 11/09/11 08:24 pm Title: Chapter Five
Fuck. Yes. I love you. That is all. :) :) :)
Author's Response: Excuse me while I wipe this smile off my face. I am so pleased by this review! Thank you so much. I love you, girl. For real <3
Date: 11/09/11 06:53 pm Title: Chapter Five
My God! I already love this fic! The funnies and the fights are perfect! I laughed and I fealt my heart pound in my chest! Having older brothers and being the only girl in the family has taught me to love fighting games. And also the boxer in me! ^^ Will be faveing and tracking the story!
Author's Response: You have no idea how delighted I am that you love this! You are making me smile sooo big :D Thank you so much! I'm glad that it made you laugh and get excited. Ohhh yeah, I have two brothers and I feel you on the fighting games, hehe. You're a boxer?? Damn, you're awesome. For real. I'm so happy you're gonna fave and track this! You are lovely <3
Date: 11/09/11 06:22 pm Title: Chapter Five
omg i'm totally digging bad ass bill! now can i please nurse him and tom back to health?
Author's Response: Girl, you and me both! I like seeing him tough like that. Mmmhmm. Sure! I'll send them over and make sure they're all pathetic and in need of your care, kay? <3 Thank you so much for reading!
Date: 11/09/11 05:55 pm Title: Chapter Five
Heheheheheheeeeee >: DDD I LOVE THIS
Author's Response: OMG YOUUUUUU /kisses your cheeks/ I could not be happier that you love this! Thank youuuu so much <3
Date: 11/09/11 05:31 pm Title: Chapter Five
That was AWESOME!!! Loved Bill kicking Bu's ass, I hope he gets to do it again. ;)
*snuffles*
Author's Response: Okay but not as awesome as youuuuu! I'm so happy you loved this. And I'm pretty sure he's gonna get the opportunity ;) Hehe. Thank you so much for reading, lovely!
Date: 11/09/11 04:55 pm Title: Chapter Four
thatīs not good... Bushido is very bad, bad boy. I hope Bill will survive it. But I know, love means doing stupid things :)
Author's Response: Bushido IS a bad boy! But...he may just be underestimating Bill, hehe. True words, girl. True words. I'm really happy that you're reading! Thank you sooo much for this lovely review! <3
Date: 11/09/11 04:23 pm Title: Chapter Five
Tom knows the first and second rule. Bill does not. And Bushido was right, Bill can't do the 'kick in the crotch' move. Boys don't do that. Next time, just hit him in the ear.
If I were Bill, I'd go spend some quality time with Georg and Larry to find out where the hell he got his pot from and what they hell they put in it that set off the chest monster lurking inside him.
Author's Response: Tom knows the rules and Bill is in the dark. Seriously, you can't just go around kicking men in the crotch like that. SUCH a cop-out. The ear! That is a great idea! I shall keep this in mind.
Hahaha. I think that is a fabulous idea! Because honestly, it had to be some kind of super pot. He might just have to do that. Thank you soooo much for reading and sharing this hilarious and awesome review with me :D
Date: 11/09/11 04:21 pm Title: Chapter Five
Thank youuu for updating this even if you're super busy! I appreciate it =D
Oh oh... Bill might be in trouble! I must say that the image of Bill fighting like that is a really hot one... Sexyy! I like how protective Tom was. Now I can't wait for them to meet again, even if I'm worried for Bill cause meeting Tom usually means trouble =P Looking forward to the next chapter! Hope you're having a fantastic week too =D
Author's Response: You are soooo welcome! But really, thank YOU for taking the time to read and leave me this lovely review ;D
He just might be! If he crosses over into the dark side... I'm so glad you think so! I love the idea of him being all tough. I can't wait for them to meet again either! Even though there will probably be dangerous things around them. At least they can stick up for themselves ;) I'm really happy that you enjoyed! And thank you so much, my week has been great so far! :D <3
Date: 11/09/11 04:07 pm Title: Chapter Five
woohoooooo this mighty fic has returned! *HAPPY DANCE* Bill totally owned Bushido, aawww yeaaahh! xD Cuz he's just that awesome. and NURSE TOM FTW! Lolol. It's like both of my predictions combined...success! and I awwh'ed at the moment when Bill looked into Tom's perdyful golden eyes~~ *daydreamy face* These boys and their perdy faces *sigh*. And ooooh, Bill secretly enjoyed beating up Bushido! He is going over to the dark side...:O *dramatic music* XD So yes, I did enjoy this chapter! Like, when have I ever not? I loves you too! and the amazingly awesome dramatic randomness that are your fics! :D And why thank you, I'm having a good week so far :D I've finally finished my long-ass (for me) fic after months of writer's block! I FEEL LIBERATED! XD I hope your week is pretty fantastic too ;) I shall be off now, here are your usual gifts: *empties sack of chocolate, gummy bears, fluffy toys, love-filled balloons and assorted pictures of the twins' purdy faces* Meow, bye!
Author's Response: Okay but that's nowhere near as exciting as the fact that YOU have returned! Yaaaaaay *tackles you with hugs*. Oh, uh...sorry about that. I'm just really happy to seee you! Bill IS that awesome. He had to own Bushido, it was inevitable. Haha, nurse Tom indeed! Except he doesn't have the best bedside manner, lol.
I'm so glad you liked that moment! They just have the perdiest of faces. He DID secretly enjoy it! Wuh oh. Haha I love your dramatic music, it's lovely!
I'm so happy you liked the chapter! You're just super sweet, kay? I'm just really happy that you enjoy my random things that I write. I love youuu, I doooo! You are so very welcome. I'm pleased to hear that your week is going well OH! That's always amazing when you get inspiration to write again. Congrats! It feels so great to finish a story. My week has been busy but good! Thank you my deaaaar :And thank you so much for reading and sharing your lovely review!!
*smiles endlessly while I collect your sweet gifts* You're too good to me. But please, don't stop :D <3 Ruff ruff, k bye!
Date: 11/06/11 05:24 pm Title: Chapter Four
Fight club! My first though, haha :D.
Really, I'm disturbingly addicted and hooked to this fic. You are really talenrted writer with a unique idea, so why not?
This was really intense chapter (again). Damn, those fighting scenes just happen to be hot, I have to admit. I noticed how I just held my breath. And as I've said earlier, there are sometimes Tom's characters that I feel uncontrollably attracted to - usually somewhat twisted and yet vulnerable. "Your" Tom is one of those. I just might have a crush on your character. Oh dear. :D
Author's Response: I like that thought, a lot :D
Have to say, I am quite pleased that you are hooked on this! And thank you for the compliments on my writing. That means a lot! But yeah, please- stay hooked! I love it. :)
I'm so happy that you enjoyed reading this chapter, and the fights! I'm glad they were intense and hot for you ;) Seriously though, I am delighted that you have a crush on this Tom, because hopefully that will keep you wanting more of him! Hehe. Thank you SO much for reading and sharing this awesome review!
Date: 11/05/11 02:27 pm Title: Chapter Four
I was certainly not expecting Bill to do so. He's kicking Bu's ass and that was completely unexpected, too.
Can't wait for more Tom/Bill interaction!
Author's Response: I'm glad I could surprise you a little bit! Bill is totally holding his own against Bu :) I can't wait for you to read what happens next. I'm excited about the Tom/Bill interaction, tooo :D Thank you SO much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me!
Date: 11/04/11 07:55 pm Title: Chapter Four
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Author's Response: NO WAY, REALLY? <3 <3 <3
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Date: 11/03/11 04:30 pm Title: Chapter Four
OHHHHHHH EXCITING! Me like :D
And I definitely can't wait for their interaction *flail*
Author's Response: I'm SO glad you like it and that you're excited for the next! Hehe, you're so cute. Thank you so much for reading and leaving this lovely review! I hope you enjoy the next :)
Date: 11/03/11 09:30 am Title: Chapter Four
Bill was fighting!!! first time I ever seen, wow like a miracle. you know that's so cool, I hope he win it coz I don't want his pretty face fucked up. btw bill's ability was unexpectedly cool. nice chapter, update very soon please xD
Author's Response: That's soo great that you've never seen Bill like this before! I haven't either but I thought there might be a story somewhere out there. I want him to win for that same reason, haha. I'm so happy you liked the chapter and were pleased with the twist that it took! I won't make you wait as long for the next chapter :) Thank you so much!'