Date: 11/15/11 11:33 pm Title: Chapter Six
They totally have to get into a fight and end up turned on and going at it like rabbits!!!
Author's Response: Mmm thank you for that wonderful visual! This might just have to happen :D Thanks for reading, girl!
Date: 11/15/11 11:15 pm Title: Chapter Six
oooooo - this is getting yummy!
Author's Response: Hehe, I'm really glad you think so! Thanks so much :D
Date: 11/15/11 11:04 pm Title: Chapter Six
Hiya! I wore sunglasses to class one day. My eyes were nearly swollen shut due to poison ivy, and they looked bizarre. I lied and said it was a migraine.
I was happy when Tom and Bill were together! They're so tough! Now it's like Tom is the softie. And they've acknowledged the sexual tension, hee hee hee ho ho ho... That's my creepy pervert laugh. I'm sorry I have to show you that side of me, Kiwi. I feel like them putting it out theyre and refusing to talk about it will result in the tensions increasing. I hope Tom trains Bill in the art of street fighting, and that they get hot and sweaty, and you know. Hee ho and all that.
I think it would be neat if Bushido had a thing for Bill. That would be lovely and complicated, and I do like the Billshido. A love triangle at lease with Bill/Tom/Bu. Or, that Bu has feelings for Tom. I dunno, I just like Bu paired with the twins.
You've been really busy and tired, Kiwi! I can read it in your writing. This chapter was shorter and not as rich as your usual chapters. Nothing wrong with that. I can just read into you, that you're tired. Am I right, or am I wrong like with the fic challenge on thf_fic on livejournal...?
Author's Response: Well hey there, good lookin' :D Omg I've never had poison ivy! You had it on your poor eyes? That sounds so awful :/ I woulda probably stayed home and felt sorry for myself, lol.
I am happy that it made you happy! I like writing them together, the dialogue just flows out ;D The have indeed acknowledged it! Now the sexual tension can continue to mount and we can all be frustrated with them, lol. Listen, I love you even with the creepy pervert laugh. There's not much you could do to make this deer stop loving youuuu. OMG IT'S LIKE YOU READ MY MIND. Should Bill accept the fighting, he might just need someone to train him :D
I sort of think that Bu might not be able to resist Bill, so there miiiiight be something there. MAAAAAYBE.
Yes, it's true! Ohhh no, I'm sorry it wasn't as rich. There was just a lot of talking in this chapter and not as much introspection on Bill's part. Which tends to be quite verbose, lol. You are right, though. I'm really tired lately. Lots of things on this kiwi's plate! Thank you so much for reading and sharing your love with me! It brightens my sleepy day :D
Date: 11/15/11 10:55 pm Title: Chapter Six
Nice big chapter. Nice nice nice.
God I love this story. Your dialogue is fantastic!
-TeaganBrooke
Author's Response: Thank youuu! I always try to make them a little longer so you have more to read :D I am so glad to hear that you love this! And thank you for the compliment on my dialogue. I love making them talk, haha. Thanks so much for reading and for this review!
Date: 11/15/11 10:18 pm Title: Chapter Six
YEa...knew bringing Tom back to the apartment was gonna backfire somehow >_> Stupid Busido ruining everything. Seriosly, has he ever been portrayed as anything remotely good in a twincest? I suppose from what we know he isn't bad persay in Cupid's Chokehold, just ridiculously overprotective...but even then he was still a jackass...
This was an amazingly interesting chapter. I'm sorry, but in real business and their 'business' I see no reason why a don't ask don't tell policy is not reasonable. You aren't there to fuck around, no one needs to know. Granted, I don't think anyone should b fired over it at a real job, but you know what I mean right?
I'm so happy they admitted their feelings, in a round about kinda way
Can't wait for more keep up the great work!!
Author's Response: You totally called it on that! I don't think Bushido has ever been portrayed as someone inherently good, but I will say that he won't be alll bad in this. But up front, he is going to be an asshole. He just fits the character mold for a bad guy, I guess!
I'm so glad you found the chapter interesting! Things are moving along a little bit :D And yes, I totally see your point. I don't think people should be discriminated for it but I also don't think it needs to be flaunted around without a necessary reason.
I'm happy they did, too! Let the tension begin to mount :D Thank you sooo much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. I'm really glad you enjoyed it! <3
Date: 11/15/11 10:07 pm Title: Chapter Five
I bet Bill's inability to sleep with someone watching is a symbol of the walls he keeps around himself to keep other/himself from knowing who he really is. And it's also probably a symbol of how much he doesn't want to be vulnerable, which is why he likes fighting. Because when you're fighting (especially when you're beating someone) you're more focused on what their weaknesses are, and how to break them down.
But there's also the flipside of fighting, where you're just as vulnerable as the other person because if they find out your weaknesses, then they might end up beating you. But if you have confidence in yourself (and in your fighting abilities) then your weaknesses become almost nonexistent, because they no longer matter because you know that they will not break you and you can overcome them and beat the other person.
This is the conclusion I believe that Bill will come to realize through fighting. How you must have weaknesses to have strength, and that when you become at peace with yourself, the weaknesses actually become a part of your strength.
But I could be wrong.
Author's Response: Wow. You are seriously incredible and intuitive! I am highly impressed by your assumptions and conclusions. I think what you've predicted is very valid and resonates a lot with the characters and the plot of this story. Thank you sooo much for sharing these amazing thoughts with me! I can't wait to write more so that you can see if your assertions come to pass! <3
Date: 11/15/11 09:51 pm Title: Chapter Six
kiiiiiiiiiirrrrssssttttttttten In the name of all that is holy and Tokio Hotel, why would you just end it after all that tension between the two is shared ;-; that's like some serious torture right there.
Author's Response: I'm sorrrrrry I stopped it there, okay. Forgive me? Just think of giraffe Bill. It'll make you smile, I promise :D Thank you sooo much for reading! I really do adore you <\3
Date: 11/15/11 09:44 pm Title: Chapter Three
Holy fuck. I think I just creamed. My pants. Holy fuck. I'm so in love. Street fighter Tom? Fucking sexy.
Author's Response: Dude, noooo way. I'm very pleased that you're enjoying this so much! Seriously. I'm so happy that you're reading. I'll do my best to keep making it that good for you, kay? :D Thank you so much!
Date: 11/15/11 09:32 pm Title: Chapter Six
let's hear it for sexual tension!!!
seriously, this story is fucking amazing! it's different from what i'm used to from you, and i completely mean that in a good way. yeah, you still included larry, but otherwise it's totally different. kudos chica!
Author's Response: Lots and lots of it!
Okay listen, thank you so much for saying that. I feel so flattered by your compliments. I really wanted to do something different. But yeah, Larry still snuck his way in there, haha. I'm just trying to keep up with your awesome self, kay? <3
Date: 11/15/11 09:31 pm Title: Chapter Six
asldfnljsdbg. Well okay now. This story will be the death of me. Tom and Bill want to bone eachother and they can't because Bushido will end up killin' 'em? Nice. I doubt they'll be following that regime for long, abhaha. There was something seriously sexy and cute about that little scene right there, I must say. I knew Tom wasn't on the straight and narrow road, hehe. So Bill is going to become a fighter? REALLY NOW. Won't his dainty little face get a bit too bruised up...and I'm sure Gustav will get beyond suspicious at some point. Tom better stick to his word and protect Bill, or else. >.> And Bushido...I never like him in stories, so I want him to die already LMFAO. Is that bad?
I could read your writing all day, for serious. Much love my dear, you rock.
Author's Response: Okay but I want you to stay alive because I like you too much for you to go away :D For real, who needs to bet on fights? They should be betting on how long it will be until Tom and Bill crack and end up all over each other, haha. I'm so glad you liked the interaction between them! Tom has definitely traveled some winding roads :D Bill might just become a fighter. We'll see what his stubborn nature decides. Seriously though, if he does start fighting then he needs to wear a mask or something to protect that sweet little face. And Gustav, he's gonna be hard to lie to for long. I think Tom will do his best to protect Bill, but he might not need to :D I feel you on Bushido, girl. I rully do, lol. That's why I pretty much never read Bill/Bushido pairings. Nooope.
You honestly made me so happy by saying that. Thank you so much! Love to you and I must say that YOU are the one who rocks :)
Date: 11/13/11 06:08 pm Title: Chapter Five
I hope you are not planning to put Bill into another fight (ok, I´m sure you will do it). He has so perfect teeth, it would be shame to broke that beautiful smile :)
And Tom is absolutely adorable. Love him.
Author's Response: I promise that if he does get into another fight then he will be able to protect his teeth well, kay? <3 You're so sweet to worry about that, hehe. He really does have a beautiful smile! I'm so happy that you love Tom. Thank you soooo much for reading and leaving me this lovely review!
Oh and I'm really happy that we're twitter friends now! Eeeeee! :D
Date: 11/12/11 05:55 pm Title: Chapter Five
It's not exactly surprising me how Bill got lost into the world of fighting. I personally think that we all are more leaning towards more primal instincts and joys than we like to admit. Violence, fight and power being part of that primal side.
I love the interaction between Bill and Tom and I'm really impatient to see them moving... forward. :)
Author's Response: I completely agree with you. Even though it's not something that many people would readily admit, I do think that we enjoy those things more than you'd expect. Bill is just learning that truth about himself through firsthand experience. :)
I'm so glad you liked the interaction! I'm impatient, too. Haha. I just want to fast forward a bit so we can get to the good stuff between them ;) Thank you sooo much for reading and leaving me your thoughts! <3
Date: 11/12/11 08:04 am Title: Chapter One
Look here, look here....my, my my....Kung Fu Bill on the prawl?, MOHAN????are you serious????...O_O....LOL BTW don't under estimate the skinny they really kick hard in the ass with matching "splinters"....harharhar, again I can't say something more coz I'm speechless *doubt it*, "fighting Bill...uhhh...kicked Bushido's ass, but I'm not going to conclusion".....updates and I'll find out how egdy Billa would be....^_^ and Larry? What kind of a lizard species is he now?, in WO he's a flying lizard, then in PS he's comodo then into a dimwit common household lizard? then can he be a iguana for Georg's pet? lol...well I'll be tracking for more girl *grinning wildly* Mwah!. Well it so happen I love Larry girl I hope you understand....till then hear from yah soon.....Mwah!
Author's Response: Hahaha yes, I am totally serious! It's true, you should never underestimate the skinny guy. LOLOL you're hilarious and delightful. I can't wait for you to find out what happens next! It really is best to not jump to conclusions because anything could happen :D You will definitely find out more about what form Larry is in soon!! I'm so happy that you're tracking, lovely!! Thank goodness you love Larry :D Thank you sooo much for reading and sharing this delightful review! *hugs and loves*
Date: 11/10/11 10:12 pm Title: Chapter Five
Cray cray bay-bay. I liked this chapter, I liked that Bill showed his edgy side. Tom being the caring one was a really enthralling flip flop of events.
I'm really worried for Bill's brain. And Bill's overall body too, if he's gonna be doing this sort of stuff regularly. Here. /hands you a thick roll of bubble wrap, pillows, duct tape./ I gift these to you, that you might pass them along to Billy-bob. Bill beating up Bu was really cool. :3 Wae u so osm?
Author's Response: Indeeeeeed! I'm so happy you liked this chapter and enjoyed seeing different sides of those two :D
I know you're worried for that brain. But I promise there aren't going to be serious head injuries, kay? I'll go ahead and wrap their heads up in that nifty bubble wrap right now. And I'll make sure that Bill duct tapes pillows around his torso. Bahaha. That image just made me LOL. Hehe. I liked Bill beating up that guy, too! It's exciting to write him as a tough dude. Oh and hey, I love you. Thank you so much for reading!
And to answer your question: Becuz u maed me liek that <3
Date: 11/10/11 05:35 am Title: Chapter Five
HAHA that was fun!! Iknew Bill will win xD great update :3
Author's Response: You totally knew it :D I'm so happy that you enjoyed the chapter! Thank you sooo much for reading and sharing your thoughts with meeee :)
Date: 11/10/11 02:57 am Title: Chapter Five
yay Bill won! I am glad he won even with cheating way :)
Tom was being so care and sweet while bill being a little bit bitchy :D
Author's Response: Haha, he totally cheated! But yes, I'm glad he won too :D You're so right, Bill really was being kind of a bitch to Tom when he was just trying to help. Not cool Bill. Hehe. Thank you sooo much for reading! I really hope you enjoy the next chapter :D
Date: 11/10/11 02:54 am Title: Chapter Five
Nooo Bill you better not join Bushido! D': lol Loved the chappie :D
as for my week---it was, to say the least, terrible! lol and now Im down with fever go figure XD
Author's Response: Seriously! He needs to stay away from trouble. Hopefully trouble doesn't come looking for him! I'm so happy that you loved it :D Ohhhh noooo. I'm really sorry you've had a bad week. I hope that you feel better soon, love. Thank you so much for reading! <3
Date: 11/10/11 02:46 am Title: Chapter Five
As usual I loved it darling :) I think it's funny that Bill secretly (or not so secretly) likes the fight club atmosphere and I love Tom's personality too. Till next time!
Marissa
Author's Response: Heeeeey you! :D <3 I'm so happy you loved it! I think that's funny too. It's hard to imagine him like that! I'm really glad that you're enjoying it so far and that you like Tom's personality :D Thank you sooo much for reading and for this lovely review! I hope you like the next one :)
Date: 11/10/11 01:14 am Title: Chapter Five
Now, will Bill become the kickass master and teach all the fools some respect?
Author's Response: Maaaaaybe he will! Hehe. I hope that you'll stick around to find out. Thank you so much for reading, love! <3
Date: 11/09/11 10:59 pm Title: Chapter Five
I can't see it! I can't see Bill getting involved in a fight club or something, but hey, I guess if he's wiry and strong and quick, maybe? Especially if he's trying to help Tom. Yeah, I can see that. and we can haz fan art of sweaty, aggressive Bill??
Author's Response: I can't see him getting into something like that either. He may have gotten an adrenaline rush and it felt good, but he knows that it's dangerous and illegal. But as you've pointed out, there are always exceptions to logic ;) Hehe, actually- something is already in the works in regards to fan art for this. Eeeeeee! Thank you so much for reading and talking to me here! <3