Date: 11/16/11 05:36 pm Title: Chapter Six
I knew Tom was doing something with his phone last chapter (his own not Bills) Like here:
~He shook his head and walked down the hallway, finding Tom sitting on the couch, his phone in hand. In front of him was a glass of water, two pills, and a bag of ice.
“Hey,” Bill said in an uncool way.
Tom turned at his voice and put his phone away in his pocket.~
At the time, I was thinking probably Tom called someone or was doing something. But it turned out he was putting Bill's address in his phone -_-;; Tom, didn't you know that was a bad idea? Since Bushido could easily steal his phone to try to look up info about Bill, like how he's done this chapter.
~“I prefer to see the eyes of my students so that I know they are paying attention,” his professor replied sternly.~
This part made me smile, since it reminded me of my old teacher! And also shows the fact, that if Bill chooses to fight, that other people would notice, And Gustav. After all he goes to school and work.
~“We all get a cut of the winnings. If you win, we win,” Bushido said diplomatically. “We don't fight as a team, but we win as a team.”~
But if they add Bill onto the group, won't everyone get less now that Bill has join? Unless of course, its true that Bill would make more because of his looks.
~"I will have you."~
Yeah, that pretty much made me laugh and go O_O;;
Because when I was in school, a english teacher got mad at one of the students and she got up all in his face. She then pointed to herself saying with every word, "You.Want.Me!" with a angry face. Then my friend was like, "I don't think he wants you." LOL Probably doesn't make sense to you but it was pretty funny.
And the fact that it sounds like Bushido has a thing for Bill? ^_~
~“I think you're really fucking sexy. After you fought Bushido and I came back here with you, all I wanted to do was show you how much that fight turned me on."~
Typical of a man to think that thats sexy. But I must agree with Tom on that! ;D
~It had Bushido's number scribbled on it, but it had Tom's, too.~
YES!!!!
Author's Response: Yes! That was precisely what he was doing with his phone in the last chapter. You're so smart to have caught onto that ;) Tom really should have known better though. :/
Aww I'm glad that part brought up fond memories for you! And yes, it does show that. There really won't be any way for him to hide the fighting from anyone, because they will all notice.
I think they are counting on Bill making them a lot more money, so they will get an increase in pay in the end. But we shall see about that!
Even though I obviously wasn't there for that, just picturing it made me laugh out loud! How incredibly awkward and hilarious! I bet that girl felt sooo dumb afterward, lol.
That is quite typical, but I'm right there with you both, haha. I think it's hot hot hot. :D
Helllll yeah! Let's see what Bill does with that number :) Thank you sooo much for reading and for this awesome and in depth review! You're great <3
Date: 11/16/11 04:38 pm Title: Chapter Six
OMG! The sexual tension was intense and so well written! I was expecting them to jump each other any moments! LOVED it! Awesome chapter as usual! I'm so worried for Bill, he likes fighting too much for his own good... I can't wait to see what he's gonna decide and how Tom is going to react! Oh and of course I look forward to read more amazing TOm/Bill interactions like this!
Author's Response: Thank you sooo much! The tension is just gonna continue to build and make us just as crazy as it makes the guys, I think. Lol. I'm so happy to hear that it was realistic! That's precisely how I wanted it to come across. I'm worried about that guy, too. But...I think that no matter what he decides, someone is going to be looking out for him :D Thank you sooo much for reading and I look forward to writing more interactions for you! <3
Date: 11/16/11 04:32 pm Title: Chapter Six
Ohhh... OHH! OHHHHHHHHHH! :D *squeal* I thought I'll just jump through my screen and do this: http://data.whicdn.com/images/16444846/tumblr_lqpa7eRxvF1qe1zr0o2_500_large.jpg when Tom said something about Bill being sexy jsadjfkljadsklfsl;akf;dl Whyyyyyyyyyy couldn't they do this NAU?! Bushido wasn't there! Nobody would seeeeeeeee just ussssssssss *complains*
Okay, I'll stop otherwise this comment won't look nice. All I wanted to say I'm excited, I want more and me like! 8D
Author's Response: OMG do you realize how much I adore you? Lmao I'm gonna save that image forever, for real. To be honest, I sort of felt like that while I was writing it haha. HAHA seriously you're hilarious and amazing. Nobody would have seeeeen. They should have just gone for it. They will have to keep that in mind for the future ;)
I would have been delighted if you had rambled on forever. I'm really, really happy that you're excited and wanted more! Thank you so much for reading and for this awesome review :D
Date: 11/16/11 02:30 pm Title: Chapter One
Yeah it has to happen!!!
Author's Response: I fully agree!
Date: 11/16/11 01:08 pm Title: Chapter Six
Right now I hate Bushido - very intensive...
Tom was adorable again and Bill is my hero, I admire his huge balls and dick :D
Author's Response: I'm right there with you on hating Bushido, girl. But hopefully Bill will continue to be tough and not let Bushido boss him around :D
OMG you're amazing, can I just tell you that? Haha. I'm really happy that you like the characters and that you admire Bill's impressive package, lol. Thank you sooo much for reading and for this lovely review! <3
Date: 11/16/11 11:14 am Title: Chapter Six
I LOVE THIS SO FUCKING MUCH IT BRIGHTENS MY DAY LIKE YES
Author's Response: Listen- YOU brighten MY day. Okay? I hope you're alright with that because it's just not gonna change. :D Thank you soo much for reading and for making me smile! <3
Date: 11/16/11 09:55 am Title: Chapter Six
Awwwww the kisssss was close haaa :D lol Tom is gayy!!! uff Pooor Bill will fuck his face up if he agree to fight! :(
I love ur storyyyy :D *huges u* hihiii
Author's Response: It was realllly close :D Lmao Tom totally likes dudes. Bill needs to wear some sort of protective mask to protect all of that pretty, if he ends of fighting! It's too pretty to ruin, haha. I'm sooo happy that you love this! Thank you so much for reading and for this lovely review! *hugs and loves*
Date: 11/16/11 08:54 am Title: Chapter Six
Gah! I read this chapter last night but forgot to review! I thought about it and then ended up going to bed =/ OoPs!
Anyways....
I was wondering if we were going to see some more of Bushido in this chapter. I'm happy to see I was right. Although, having Bushido around isn't what I would call a good thing lol I'm glad he wasn't alone and that Tom was with him =D
I knew it! I knew Tom wanted Bill in some way! It's too bad they can't act on their attraction to each other. Then again, I can't see them not doing anything lol
I am so excited to see what happens next!
Author's Response: You're so sweet to come back and review! I'm glad you got sleep though because that's way more important than reviewing :D
You were totally right about Bushido! But yes, he might not be the best person to have around, haha. I'm glad Tom was there, too. Your guesses are so spot on with this story! You're awesome. It is definitely too bad...but I have to agree with you, I really don't see them not acting on it eventually! Haha. The tension is just going to keep building and driving us all crazy if they don't :D
Thank you sooo much for reading and taking the time to come back here and leave me this lovely review. I'm so happy you're enjoying and excited for moer! <3
Date: 11/16/11 08:05 am Title: Chapter Six
..omg. i'm frustrated. omg omg.
Author's Response: I know, I totally left it hanging at the end there :( But I'll make it up to you, I promise! :D Thank you soo much for reading!
Date: 11/16/11 07:33 am Title: Chapter One
Now here and Damn it MOHAN KIRSTEN ROCKS you always give us your major cliffhanger between Bill and Tom smut.....I'm reading and apprehensive that they would do "IIIITTTTT!", all those flirting and dirty talks end again in vague????cool huh, I had this teeny weeny flitter flutter in my tummy coz I'm sooooooo excited about Billa will indulge in streetfighting and his style of fight would be....?????...uhhh???... now you tell me alright.....LOL. being a Psych student would be a great advantage in reading logically thru physical body language am I right? Now ok can't wait for the next chappy.....mwah, mwah,...love you girl, you always make my day....hear from you soon mwah and BTW Tomi here is slowly showing his other side of himself and I love it.....:D
Author's Response: Heheheh, I'm soooorrrry I always leave you on a cliff! They were sooo close to kissing, it's true. You're hilarious and awesome, lol. I too have a flutter in my stomach when I think about Bill streetfighting! I hadn't even thought about what kind of style he would have! See, you're giving me ideas because you're awesome like that :D You're so right though, being a psych student would certainly help Bill get into the heads of his opponents :D I'm so happy that you're excited about the next chapter! I love you toooo, and you make me smile so big! Tom is definitely starting to show a different side of him. I'm happy that you like it :D Thank you sooo much! Talk to you soon, love <3
Date: 11/16/11 02:11 am Title: Chapter Six
I AM BACK FROM EUROPE AND READY TO REVIEW. KAY. SO. UHM. SEXUAL TENSIONNNNNNNNNNNNNN~ Such a beautiful, wonderful, magical thing! OH boy, things are getting HEATED. Phew girl, I haven't been so excited for a story since Precarious Serendipity. Or Work Out. You get the point. But yes. BEAUTIFUL. I love you and I've missed you and your amazing talent and creativity and knack for bringing your characters to life and making everything to possibly real and yet just perfect for imagination and... did that make sense? No? I'm jetlagged so, let's use that as an excuse for my not-making-sense-ness.
ANYPOODLE, I'm so excited to see what happens. I really want Bill to join then Tom to get hurt and Bill saving him and Bushido flipping out because they've become "friendly" and they have to escape together to like, the Bahamas'. Or Iqaluit Nunavut. Where they can take up residence with some lame girl who loves them very much.
Kay?
Incorporate that in there and I will give you head whenever you want.
ILOVEYOU.
Author's Response: OMG I'VE MISSED YOU SO MUCH OKAY YOU JUST DON'T EVEN KNOW. Welcome baaaack!
Sexual tension, indeed! It shall increase and build and drive us all crazy along with the guys :D Things are heating up and I'm just really glad you're here to watch them buuuurn. Okay but seriously, why and how are you so awesome? I see you haven't lost your ability to make me grin like an idiot!
Seriously though, everything you said made perfect sense and you have no idea how much I appreciate and value your compliments. I hope you get some sleep so that you get over the jetlag! That's the worst :( I really hope you had such a fantastic trip, kay? :D
OMG PERFECT PLAN. BRB, WRITING THIS FOREVER KAY. Hehe, but seriously I kind of want Bill to join up, too. Fighting Bill and fighting Tom sort of excites me. But really, I'mma go write it so that I can get that head.
Thank you sooo much for reading and I'm so happy that you're back! ILOVEYOUOKAY
Date: 11/16/11 01:56 am Title: Chapter Six
YHJGHFJEKGYDFBHEDJESVGRBFBJVHBD
I HAVE NO WORDS.
Just...freakin'...omg...aahhhhfhshtrdevsbhukf
no. words.
I need a moment. *holds up hand and takes deep breaths*
...TOM HAS BEEN PULLED IN BY THE POWER OF BILL'S SEXY FACE. raargghhh I WANT MOAR D:
I love you too, dude!
Author's Response: IS IT BAD THAT I THINK I UNDERSTOOD THAT
EVEN WHEN YOU DON'T HAVE WORDS, YOU MANAGE TO MAKE ME SMIIILE
Hehe, okay you need to stop being so adorable now. Jk, keep it up because I love it.
We don't need words. Our love is greater than that.
*breathes with you*
OMG HE TOTALLY HAS. I'LL GIVE YOU MORE
K, I love you bye bye :D
Date: 11/16/11 01:56 am Title: Chapter Six
Omg! That was so cute at the end. Gawd why can't they just make out already!?
Author's Response: Hehe, I'm so happy you liked it! And girl, I'm with you on that. I really want them to just get it on already. But then the story would probably really suck, haha. Thank you sooo much for raeding! <3
Date: 11/16/11 01:15 am Title: Chapter Six
THIS! Or should I say "THUS" because apparently, that's how auto-correct sees fit to fuck up my life and then some? Anywhoooo. This story is just...love. I love it. Love you. Makes the whole thing better. And you know what? Imma ramble for a bit, why? Because I can. So my lips are chapped and I've lost my chapstick and this is terrible- think a Napoleon Dynamite experience, and little known fact, I love that movie, so so so much. I don't care that it's retarded. It was worth it in the end, even if it makes me think of my ex hubby guy dude. We'll call him The Gamer, k? I just went off in search of my chapstick, it has been found, no need to sound the alarm, k? Anyways, so I went to a surprise bday party for Dusty's mom at her Salon today. Made me wish I was still cutting hair, I always get that itch whenever I step foot inside a salon, you know? OH! And I bought Christmas cards today!! *sings* They are GLITTERY and make my life just THAT much sparkly. Also, I've been nursing this damn migraine for IDK how long, thanks to those effing hormones that HORRIBLE woman put me on. WHICH I still haven't heard back from her on when she wants to yank out my life from the inside out. Erg. AND furthermore, I really love tea. Did you know that? I am sure that you did. I wish I had some! Well, I do, but I'm far too lazy to go make any. Also, I made a bunch of jewelry tonight, and I have war wounds! >_> My thumbs are all kinds of fucked up. Would you like me to make you a peice for christmas? It's entirely up to you, my friend. MOVING ON! I know what this seems like, but I am 100% entirely sober. No pills. No drink. No NOTHING. Also, one more thing before I go, I smell delicious. I bought some new perfume from Victoria Secret, one of those new Pink Sprays that bitch has out, I think this one is Pretty and Pure, but really I'd love to smell like Bombshell Seduction, jsyk. Okay. Enough rable for you. I will catch you on the flip. :D
Author's Response: Okay here's the thing- you astound me to the millionth degree. Like seriously, this made me smile and laugh and just all sorts of emotions, kay? It also made me aware of my own need for chapstick, lol. THUS. I'm really happy that you love this story, I really am. AND THAT YOU LOVE MEEEE. :D
I love that movie too, okay. Ain't no shame. Let's watch it together and eat pickles. You make jewelry?? OMG I would looove it if you made me a piece for Christmas. You're so sweet. I love tea, too! We can drink some while eating pickles and watching the movie. GLITTERY CHRISTMAS CARDS SOUND TOO MAGICAL FOR WORDS. Lol I'm jumping all over the place in response to your review. I'm sorry you hurt your thumbs, you should wear thimbles!! THUS. THIMBLES.I loooooooove the pink sprays from VS. I have the clean and something or other one. Clean and crisp? Pure? I don't even know. But my fave scent from there is 'Incredible'. It's literally one of the best things I've ever smelled.
Okaaaaay, we both know that my response didn't do your review justice. But just know that I appreciated it so greatly. You're hilarious and amazing. THANKS SO MUCH FOR MAKING ME SMILE. k bye
Date: 11/16/11 01:14 am Title: Chapter Six
Oooooh, you're such a tease! Not even one kiss? Argh... Lol, when it finally happens, it's gonna be big, I can feel it. Love you! :) :) :)
Author's Response: I'm sorrrrry :( But you're totally right! The tension has to build so that when they DO kiss- it'll be explosive :D Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts! Love you! <3
Date: 11/16/11 01:00 am Title: Chapter Six
PPS: Reading it again, forgot to make these comments...
Bill knows what everyone is thinking except for Tom? Zomg, Twilight. Zomg, I'm kidding XD
And I gotta agree on that sexually tense goodness. One minute Tom's threatening to beat Bill up, next he's admitting that Bill turns him on :D *squirms and writhes in chair*
Heehee @ Tom's numbah.
Author's Response: Okay listen, you're awesome for reading this again AND for leaving me another sweet review.
Hahaha omg I didn't even think about it like that. But I guess it IS appropriate since the new movie is coming out this week, lol!
Ohhhh mg I'm very pleased that you feel the same way about that! There is something really sexy about the idea of it. Eeeeee.
He's a sly guy, what can I say? Haha <3
Date: 11/16/11 12:45 am Title: Chapter Six
You bloody evil tease! Really, that was seriously sexy. I love how they are being quite straightforward about their attraction.
Author's Response: I'm sooorrrrry xD But you know I've gotta keep you wanting more ;) I'm really glad you found it sexy! It is kind of hot how upfront they're being. Let the sexual tension begin! :D Thank you so much for reading, love!
Date: 11/16/11 12:13 am Title: Chapter One
Of course I forgive you. Ahhh giraffe Bill. Warms the hearts of children every night before they go to bed. BUT NO! Thank you for posting.
P.S I adore you too!
Author's Response: Hahaha. Giraffe Bill is so good at tucking in little children and then haunting their dreams. :D
Date: 11/15/11 11:51 pm Title: Chapter Six
I hear the bells of people liking and in love with each other! wooot! -huggles and loves on you- and Damn Bushido, he just WANTS to fuck Bill's life over dosent he! =_=
Author's Response: Ahhhh yes, those bells are glorious! Hehe. *squeezes you tight* Bushido is just not coming from a good place :( But I have faith that Bill is going to be able to stand up to him :D Thank you sooo much for reading, lovely!
Date: 11/15/11 11:45 pm Title: Chapter Six
Zomg. I was just spazzing this entire chapter.
It's great that Bill can fight someone off in a pinch, but guh, I don't want him to join D: It looks like he has to, though.
Grr Bushido. Protective Tom ftw.
PS: 'X-men Origins: Wolverine' in the beginning XD With the teacher telling a student to remove his glasses, when he's got 'em on to hide something.
Not sure why I felt the need to tell you that. God, I am such a nerd.
Author's Response: I do appreciate some good spazzing! :D
I'm with you on that one. It's just not what he should be getting into. Maaaaybe he can find a way around it? We shall see!
Agreed on both sentiments :)
If by nerd you mean awesome, then yes, you are :D Haha I love that you shared that little tid bit with me. Thank you soo much for reading and leaving your thoughts here! <3