Date: 11/24/11 02:35 am Title: Chapter Seven
Ok my darling I have to say I love this story more & more as I read it! I like how Bill worries but still wants to join in on fight club I mean let's be serious he really did want to even if he kinda thinks its batshit insane too haha
Author's Response: You have no idea how happy that makes me to hear that, sweet girl! And you are completely right about how Bill views it. He knows it's irresponsible and unsafe but at the same time he's really intrigued about how good he could be at it ;) And it might help a little bit that Tom is going to be around him so much, haha. Thank youuuuu for reading and sharing this lovely review with me! :D
Date: 11/24/11 01:49 am Title: Chapter One
You should! Just go back and edit it and have their faces go smoosh!
hmmm nein, I want a name that only I can call you :D -thinks thinks thinks- I unno :( But yay least you'll still love me :3
Date: 11/24/11 12:32 am Title: Chapter Seven
Ahhh, What an amazingly wonderful chapter to have recieved for the holiday.
Its good that Bill decided to include Jost to some extent. Very responsible, in a crazy situation.
Haha Larry in a red sweater. He will look very christmasey. The joys of observing high people astounds me every time.
Hope you had a nice trip out of town. I can't wait to see more, Keep up the spiftastic work. *hugs*
Author's Response: Awww you're just really sweet, kay? I am delighted that you enjoyed it! I knew that Bill needed to inform somebody about what he was up to. He's pretty responsible and even though he's doing an irresponsible thing, that responsibility doesn't just go away entirely. Hahaha Larry would really be the epitome of holiday spirit, wouldn't he? Red and green! I agree completely, it's hilarious to watch, haha. Thank you so very much! I hope you have a wonderful Thanksgiving! I'm so happy that you're liking what you're reading. Talk to you soon! *squeezes*
Date: 11/24/11 12:07 am Title: Chapter Seven
another brilliant offering.
Oooh, I love the flirting!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am so happy that you enjoyed it, love. :D
Date: 11/23/11 11:21 pm Title: Chapter Seven
Hooray, update!! Oh my gosh :)
Grr, it's too bad Dr. Jost (I'm still kind of amused at that XD) can't be relied upon to keep the real truth secret.
Omg, so his stagename's Priss after all? lol. Well, can't say I'm too surprised he went ahead with it.
A red jacket for Larry? Then he'll be all ready for Christmas!
Bill (and particularly Georg) need to stop drugging it up. They'll end up all dim-witted and old-looking by the time they're 30.
Hehe, a very Happy Thanksgiving to you. Can't wait to help make the food tomorrow. Have a good trip!
Author's Response: It delights me that you get so excited for my updates! :D
It is funny to think of him as a Dr. haha. I guess as a responsible adult, he would have to intervene and stop Bill from getting into it. What a drag, though.
Yep! He went with Priss, haha. I guess it kind of grew on him (and me) ;)
Hahah you're so cute. Larry will be the pinnacle of holiday spirit!
Dude, I know. They need to stop it, for sure. But that happens a lot with college kids, unfortunately. Pretty sure Bill isn't going to keep doing it once he realizes how focused he's going to need to be if he wants to fight AND go to school. He's got a lot on his plate. : /
Thank you so much! I'm very excited about the food. Mmm. Have a Happy Thanksgiving! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Date: 11/23/11 10:23 pm Title: Chapter Seven
Happy Thanksgiving indeed! This was a good chapter. Ha ha, I say that every time, but it's always true. Thanks for the update, girl. LOVE YOU! Enjoy the holiday!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it. And I'll never get tired of you saying that you did, so don't worry about that :D You are so welcome but thank YOU for reading! Love you, toooo ^_^ I hope you have a marvelous Thanksgiving! *huuugs*
Date: 11/23/11 09:07 pm Title: Chapter Seven
first off have a good trip! :D and woah amazing chappie, but seriously Bill!? ._.
Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much! I'll do my best to have one ;D I'm soooo happy that you enjoyed the chapter! And I know : / Bill has no clue what he's getting himself into.
Date: 11/23/11 08:48 pm Title: Chapter Seven
Gah! It's only chapter 7 and I want something to happen between Bill and Tom; so much tension is building up xD I love it.
Have a fun thanks giving :D
Hmmm P.S I need a good nick name for you :x Kit get's Wassee, but what to give you hrm.
Author's Response: I knowww! You have no idea how much I just want to push their faces together and make them kiss, lol. I'm so happy that you love it! You're just the sweetest. Thank you so much!
You have a fun thanksgiving, too! And hmmm, you can call me whatever you want! A lot of people just call me Kir, so you could call me that? You could pretty much call me anything and I'd love you still :D
Date: 11/23/11 08:09 pm Title: Chapter Seven
so i totally used the haul ass line at work today! boss said we could leave as soon as all the money was counted and i stood up and said "let's haul ass, ladies!" then i laughed at myself and thought of you. and now i'm ready for bill to kick some serious ass! maybe he could wear gloves or something when he fights? you know, to cut down on getting blood and shit on his hands? anyhoo, have a happy turkey day and a safe trip out of town!
Author's Response: You have no idea how delighted I am that you used that. It really is applicable in more situations than you'd think! I use it as often as possible :D And also I'm just happy that you thought of me in any capacity, kay? I'm ready for him to kick ass, too! So ready. GLOVES! That is a brilliant idea. Perhaps he will wear some of those fancy gloves that he always wears in real life? Thanks so much for reading and you have a happy turkey day, tooooo! :)
Date: 11/23/11 07:53 pm Title: Chapter Seven
YAY UPDATE!!!!
I can't wait for more of this. To see how Bill deals with the fight, how his and tom's relationship builds and how it all ends.
*snuggles*
Author's Response: YAAAAY A REVIEW FROM YOUUUU :D
I'm so excited to write Bill training and fighting. I really can't wait to make Tom and Bill's relationship start to build up. Really happy that you're enjoying this, love! I hope you have a great thanksgiving tomorrow ^_^ Thank you so much!! *loves on*
Date: 11/23/11 07:48 pm Title: Chapter Seven
WHEE *flails everywhere as usual* kay, first thing, OMG LIZARD JACKETS. I can totally see Larry rockin' one. XD Georg is just the best XD and zomg, Bill said yeeesss :O He's gonna be one badass street fighter ;) And I don't blame Tom for not wanting to see him all hot and sweaty XD I'd just melt to the ground if I saw Bill fighting *_* is that weird? xD Whateverr. So yeah, I'm just camping out in my hub like, permanently, now. feel free to join me (Tom and Bill's purdy faces may or may not be a subject of discussion). Love you and your awesomeness! :D
p.s. Tom + Bill = INTENSE SEXUAL TENSION. just saying. :3
Author's Response: I just get so happy when I see your reviews! Hahah, lizard jackets. I kind of felt like I was writing 'work out' for a moment when I added that in. I could totally see workout!Bill talking about lizard jackets, haha. I'm so glad you like Georg! He's so much fun to write about. Yaaaaaay Bill is gonna fight! I can't wait to write his first fight. And the training for fighting ;) Dude, no, not weird at all. I'd be the same way! We can melt together and then go and become solid again in your hub. But then we would talk about their purdy faces and melt again! A never ending process, haha. Thank you sooo much for reading and sharing your loveliness with me! Love you, kay? But you're way more awesome.
YESSSS I KNOW. You want some more of it? ;)
Date: 11/23/11 01:36 pm Title: Chapter One
Oh hey! Long time no talk! Seriously though..it's been FOREVER. Sorry about that. School makes me lose track of time. BUT THIS IS MY FIRST REVIEW ON THIS STORY. AH. I love it. Like seriously I love the tension and the sexual frustration and all the fighting. It's not usually something I would read but PSH GIRL IT'S YOURS, I HAD TO GIVE IT A TRY! And I'm so glad I did! I NEED MORE I'M SO FREAKING ADDICTED ALREADY. Ah.
Author's Response: Oh, hellllllo! It's so lovely to hear from you :D Don't even apologize, though! I know that school can totally suck up all of your free time. I'm so happy to have you reading here though! You're amazing for giving it a chance even though you wouldn't normally read something like this. Seriously, so glad you're enjoying it! JUST posted the next chapter so there's more to read if you want it! Thank you sooo much for reading and reviewing. It's so great to see your cute little name up there ^_^
Date: 11/23/11 12:26 pm Title: Chapter Six
Okay, I reread through the story again! This part made me laugh and made me fealt bad for laughing so hard XD ~"Do you wanna go out tonight?" Gustav came and flopped onto the couch next to where Bill was studying, causing Bill's entire person to bounce several inches in the air.~ And this next part I just confused from from trying to understand which way was which. ~"Thats not tempting to you? That much money?" Tom's voice bright and Bill was alarmed to see how pleased he was by the prospect.~ So does that mean that Bill was surprised how he was pleased at how he reacted to how bright Toms voice was or Bill was surprised how Tom was glad that Bill didn't care for that much money? I know, I'm probaly asking a stupid question xD But after thinking about it, I just confused myself. ^^;
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad that part made you laugh! It made me chuckle when I was picturing it :D By they way, you're awesome for reading through the story again! And I just posted the new chapter so you can read that too, if you want ;) About that part, I think Tom's voice was bright because he is very influenced by the money part of the fighting. So Bill was alarmed to see how pleased he was by getting money for beating someone up. But we'll see if Bill continues to feel like that! That's not as stupid question at all! I'm really happy that you asked it :D Thank you so much for reading again and sharing your thoughts with me!
Date: 11/21/11 02:27 pm Title: Chapter Six
Nice to see the ice is cracking between T and B. I didn't review last day I read but, yay! larry, wooohooooo. You make me wanna get a Lizard. And a Tomi. Have you read Letters from Home by Elvisfan too? Marine Tomi is hawt. I love you. And I love Larry and Tomi toooo. ok, i had sugar and I'm rambling. love ya bye!!!!!!
Author's Response: Oh hello there!! How I have missed you! I'm happy to see that ice breaking, as well :D Your love for Larry makes me so happy. You don't even know! Maybe you should get a lizard. But I probably won't get one because they still terrify me, haha. I definitely support you getting a Tomi. Yesss I've been reading! Such a great story. Hawt hawt HAWT. Listen, I love you, tooooo! Larry and Tomi love you as well. They told me so. Pretty sure that you on sugar is adorable. Thank you so much for reading! I always love hearing from you. :D Okay love you good bye!
Date: 11/20/11 05:43 pm Title: Chapter Six
Yay! Squeeee... The tension, OMG yes! i loved the weay you handled the tension between Bill and tOm, things they are "not talking about" and how it all came real. Really nice move.
Like Bill said, he doesn't have any choise - and I don't think he'd evben want it.
I expect some hot fighting sex in a future. *grin*
Author's Response: I'm sooo happy that you liked the tension! It is definitely going to build for a bit between them. Probably driving us all as crazy as it drives them, haha. Thanks so much!
You're completely right. I think he might want to fight more than he's letting on. But I don't know that he realizes all of the consequences of making that choice.
I'm glad you expect it because it juuuust might happen ;) Thanks so much for reading and sharing this review with me!
Date: 11/17/11 09:23 pm Title: Chapter Six
:D I can't wait for the next chapter. Great characters, and the story's edgy and draws me in. I can't wait for where this goes next.
Author's Response: Hey, thank you so much for the amazing compliments! I'm really happy that you're reading and enjoying :D I hope I can make the next chapter just as pleasing for you.
Date: 11/17/11 06:59 am Title: Chapter One
*wiggles and flutter claps*
YAY!!!
Date: 11/17/11 05:24 am Title: Chapter Six
So far this is amazing. Keep it up! I can't wait to read the next one.
Author's Response: I'm really happy that you're enjoying it so far! Thank you so much for reading and I hope that you like the next chapter :D
Date: 11/17/11 02:18 am Title: Chapter Six
Damn... so close and then Tom shuts the door in his face... what the kiss is concerned :)
I love the sexual tension there's been between them from the beginning, and now Tom acknowledges it. It's great.
It's incredulous how some people just think they can bully others to make them do something they don't want to. To think it's okay to change their lives because it suits their purpose. I so wish for Bill to kick Bushido's arse again, and leave him alone... but that is not the purpose of this story, and I want to see Bill in action again :D
I'm bad, but Bill is a badarse and, in spite of all his protests, he actually wants to try it again.
Great update :)
Author's Response: It was very close! And I have a feeling that they might find themselves in many similar situations in the future ;)
I'm so glad you like the tension that's been building! Thank goodness one of them finally said something about it.
I agree with you 100%. Bushido's way of going about things is completely wrong. But I'm sure that he won't get away with it forever. :) I want Bill to do both of those, too! We will have to see what he chooses. :D
Haha, it's so true. He really wants to do it again, deep down. It's exciting seeing him all powerful though!
Thank you soooo much Maria! I'm really happy that you enjoyed it :D
Date: 11/16/11 06:37 pm Title: Chapter One
He needs a theme song!!!
