Date: 03/29/12 07:49 am Title: Chapter Seven
WHEN WILL YOU UPDATE!!!!?!!! :)
Author's Response: I just did!! Sorry, I know it took me forever. But thank you for your patience and I really hope you're still around to read! <33
Date: 01/13/12 09:20 am Title: Chapter Seven
*pokes you*
You know I read this again....Still no update. I guess I'll check back later........... nope still nothing.
Author's Response: I'm really happy you read it again! But I will update before the end of this month. If it's the last thing I doooo! <3333
Date: 01/05/12 04:31 am Title: Chapter Seven
**Pacing outside a gas station. Flourescent sign zzzzts "OPEN," (more line OP N because one of the letters is out, but all the same...) It looks like no one is there................
Lurker mutters to self: This is some assholery, for certain. Learned all about assholery in psych 101 - one type of assholery: baiting an audience. (taps on dirty window). "Hello?" Damn it. Sign says open. For the most part. (Cups edge of hand to glass and tries to see inside). There seems to have been someone here fairly recently - maybe within the last month or so. (Hand squeaks against glass as lurker lets it slide down). Paces. Damn it! (Looks around again....wind blows leaves across the empty parking lot). Wonder if they're gone for the holidays or something.... Such a cool looking gas station, too... you'd think there'd be someone around...."Hello?? Is anyone here??" Lurker fidgets, being the impatient type. Damn it... where is everyone? There's gotta be someone out there.... "Helloooo???"
Author's Response: Umm...can I just say that this is one of the most amazing reviews I've ever seen in my life? My goodness. So much imagery. Maybe I should defer to you when I'm writing, and take notes from you. I just...yeah, I'm in awe right now. You're amazing. And Do not fear! There is someone out there! And you won't be left out in the dark for long...I'll just say that. ;)
Date: 12/11/11 07:20 am Title: Chapter Seven
Oh dear, Bill, Bill, Bill. Why am I really not liking this idea at all. It's understandable but I'm not liking it at all. This is something that he's not going to be able to just walk away from, so you have me on tenterhooks about what the hell is going to happen. *bites fingernails*
Author's Response: I know. Bill really doesn't understand what he's signing up for. I think he may be a little too confident in his lucky break in the fight with Bushido. But don't worry, I'm a firm believer in happy endings. So...things will eventually be okay. I'm planning up updating this weekend! :D Thank you so much for reading, loves.
Date: 12/11/11 07:07 am Title: Chapter Six
Bill doesn't have a great deal of choice in the matter now does he?! Fucking Bushido *growls* And how are they going to ignore all that UST? Seriously, that is not going work boys LOL
Author's Response: Bushido seriously put Bill in a tight spot. He doesn't have a choice, really. Haha, I don't think they are going to be terribly successful in controlling it. I really don't. :D
Date: 12/11/11 06:55 am Title: Chapter Five
Eeep! I don't know how I feel about Bill kicking Bushido's arse. Don't get me wrong I'm glad he won and all but....I'm very much a run in the other direction kinda person. I am curious to know what happens but also squeemish sooo....*sigh*
Author's Response: I'm the same way as you, definitely. I know it got pretty intense...and it might continue to get that way. But I promise I'll make up for the fighting moments with sexual tension and goodness ;D Thank youuu, love!
Date: 12/10/11 04:08 am Title: Chapter Four
O.o I have no words....
Author's Response: I hope it's a gooood kind of speechless! <333
Date: 12/10/11 03:58 am Title: Chapter Three
Ngh Tom is doing bad things and it makes me sad. I did however love the banter between Gus and Bill. *nods*
Author's Response: He IS doing bad, very bad things. I'm glad you liked the banter. And thank you so much for reading and leaving me this review. I always love seeing your name pop up. :D
Date: 12/09/11 09:57 pm Title: Chapter Seven
MOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ!!! XD This story is so darn addictive!! meep!
Author's Response: There should be another chapter by the weeeeeeekend!!! Thank you so much for reading, love!
Date: 12/09/11 05:36 pm Title: Chapter Four
XF FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFIGHTCLUB! eeeeeeek! I love it! Also Im a major billshido geek so seeing them together in a erm..."friendly scuffle" is aaaaaaaaawesome heehee
Author's Response: I'm sooooo glad you love it! And I'm just so happy that you're reading. Seriously, thank you! I hope that you continue to enjoy it <3
Date: 12/05/11 04:06 am Title: Chapter Seven
NOOOOOO... No more chapters!
You have no idea how unhappy I just felt as I realized there is no "next" button... FUCK!!!!
OHMYGOSH, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I hate waiting but this story is worth it. I just read the whole thing now, me likey - I need more!!!
Author's Response: Haha, I'm sooo glad that you enjoy it so far! Like seriously, this review made me smile so big. I'm sorry there's nothing more yet! But! I am going to update this week, I promise. Thank you sooo much for reading and I hope you enjoy the next chapter! <3
Date: 11/26/11 11:43 am Title: Chapter Seven
Ouff! Intense chapter! I kinda knew what he was going to choose but stil...I will be so worried for Bill, even if he proved he can take care of himself... I must say the idea of him fighting is really really hot and I understand Tom perfectly, I would have a hard time resisting him too!
I hope you had a wonderful Thanksgiving! I'm not celebrating it but I'm still thankful for all the brilliant authors that share their work here like yourself. Thank you!
Love love love the tension between Bill and Tom, I really look forward to read how they are gonna hide it when they have to ``work`` together.
``"But, but, too cozy, Tom!" Bill sputtered, blushing at how it came out.`` - LOL! Bill sounded like a little child or something, adorable and hilarious!
Thank you for the update, I can't wait to read more =D
Author's Response: I'm worried for him, too! I think he's getting into a lot more than he realizes. And who knows, it could have just been a fortunate accident that he was able to take Bushido down in that fight. We shall see! I'm so glad you think it's hot! I really do, too. :D It's so out of character for him and it's exciting to write. We will all have to join Tom and drool over Bill when he fights ;)
Thank you soo much for the Thanksgiving wishes! It was such a great trip and lovely time with family. You have to know that we authors would be nothing without wonderful and loyal readers such as yourself. So thank YOU. :)
I'm really pleased that you like the tension so far. I'm really so excited to write them having to pretend like they don't feel anything for each other. :D
Hehe, he did sound like a little child. He won't be able to get away with things like that in a fight, so he needs to be careful!
Thank you so much for reading and leaving me this lovely review! <3
Date: 11/26/11 09:33 am Title: Chapter Seven
Uh, the app. Don't remind me.... *still pissed and upset*
Anyway, I can
t wait to see them getting into real action, so hopefully you'll update soon. I'm still bathing in that lovely, twisted tension between Bill and Tom. :)
Author's Response: I'm with you about the app, girl. I really am.
The next chapter is definitely going to have some action ;) I'm so glad that you're luxuriating in the tension; there's going to be lots more of it! Thank you so much for reading and leaving me this review. I really appreciate you taking the time to do so :)
Date: 11/26/11 12:04 am Title: Chapter Seven
this story is so good! Bill fighting is like, really hot. can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I'm really happy you're enjoying it and that you like the idea of Bill fighting ;) I hope you continue to like it. Thank you!!
Date: 11/25/11 03:30 pm Title: Chapter Seven
n/ Larry! n/ Sexi Tomi! woohhooooo.
Author's Response: I'm really glad you're happy about the things in this chapter! Your love of Larry and Tom makes me smiiiile. :D Thank you!
Date: 11/24/11 10:35 pm Title: Chapter Seven
me encanta y me muero x el sgte capi :D
Author's Response: ˇMuchas gracias! Estoy muy contento de que usted lo ama y que usted está leyendo mi historia :D
Date: 11/24/11 05:43 pm Title: Chapter Seven
well... I thought that Bill will say no but I understand that the safety of his friends is more important then his own for him...
Sweaty Bill...hmmm... poor Tom will be very distracted from now. And I am afraid that they will be nursing each other quite often. But they always can kiss their injuries better :D
And yeah, definitely red jacket for Larry! He would look more dangerous :D
Author's Response: Heeeey you! :D It probably would have been smarter for him to say no, but he was definitely looking out for the people around him. We shall see how his decision goes for him!
Tom is definitely going to be distracted by him! They're both going to have to work on their self-control ;) I can't wait until they can kiss each other better, hehe.
Larry would look awesome in a red jacket, lol. Thank you sooo much for reading and leaving me this lovely review! <3
Date: 11/24/11 05:40 pm Title: Chapter Seven
Will Bill breaking his cellphone cause problems with Jost?
I'm sorry, Kiwi! I don't have much to say about this chapter. It was mostly dialogue, but it was good dialogue. Well, it will get exciting next chapter for sure. I miss your commas, a little.
Author's Response: It might possibly cause problems in more ways than one!
I know this chapter didn't have a lot of action. But the next one definitely will ;) Thank you for reading and reviewing even though you didn't have much to say! You're really sweet to do that :D I'm too embarrassed by the commas :( I went through and edited two chapters of Work Out the other day and I was really ashamed of them ; / Thank you for accepting me despite them!
Date: 11/24/11 12:08 pm Title: Chapter Seven
I LOVE this story! Fighter!Bill - who would ever have thought? Excellent idea!
Author's Response: Thank you soooo much! I'm really happy that you've never ready anything like this before. :D So glad that you're reading and I hope you continue to enjoy! :)
Date: 11/24/11 06:15 am Title: Chapter One
HAPPY THANKSGIVING mohan k rocks.....lol...have a safe trip BTW...hmmmm, anyways Bu's proposal to Bill would take shape to the next chappy aren't he? and I'm glad he sticks to his steetfighter name "PRISS" and I love it you know....and you did mention precarious twice in this chap...LOL and being a Criminal Psych major really rocks for him and the research that he's going to be involve in SF is way too advantageous for him. AND LARRY again being the christmas iguana (is he?)with a red jacket is hilarious what if we let him wear a matching read leather skinny jeans and iguana boots huh and a flaring blood red iguana hat?....HAHAHAHA just picture it out....LOL...I'm lost for words and I review crappy for now....I'm having a gloomy day anyways and my reading can't help me cheer up for now. I hope tomorrow I could cope up with, soorry for a lifeless review I'll make it up to you next time, BTW Bill's fighting skills remember? tell me ok when time for action comes.......Miss you for 4 days girl....mwah, mwah!.....:D
Author's Response: Hahah your reviews are seriously the best! They always make me smile so big. Thank you for the happy thanksgiving and the trip well wishes! I believe you are right about Bu's proposal! :D And I like the name Priss, too. It grew on Bill AND on me, haha. I did use that word twice, and it made me smile a little bit lol. I completely agree! Fighting with those guys is going to be such an interesting experience for him in terms of criminal psych. He's going to be able to observe so much. I like Larry is an iguana in this! I'll have to find a picture of what I see in my head and post it. OMG HAHAHA picturing Larry in a full on leather and red outfit is hilarious. You're awesome. Your review is not crappy at all! It's marvelous! I'm sorry that you're not having a good day :( I hope that you get feeling happier! I'll try to keep writing to help cheer you up, if I can ;) Seriously though, thank you so much for reading and reviewing; even though you're not in a great mood. *hugs* Yes! I will definitely tell you about Bill's fighting skills! I'll miss you too, darling! *squeezes*