Date: 09/12/12 07:20 pm Title: Chapter Nine
permission to nag? really? i guess that is what big sisters are for, after all.
SHOTGUN! a hottie did that to me once. so lovely having a guy's mouth that close to mine, even if he wasn't kissing me.
*pictures backflipping lizards and falls out of chair*
tom? baby? seriously? just give in. you know you want to. that kiss was...damn! just damn!
Author's Response:
Exactly, you already had permission to nag me because of that. :D
Ohhh, whether he was kissing you or not it still counts if his lips were close to yours!! Might wanna hear that story sometime. ;)
*helps you back up in the chair and then squishes you* I'm so happy you liked that kiss! Tom needs to relax and let goooo. Thank you so much for reading and for this review, sis!
Date: 09/12/12 07:01 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Okay, I seriously did a happy dance when I saw that you had posted a new chapter. I've missed you, girl! Anyway, Larry doing backflips... Such a talented little lizard. The kiss was awesome. I'm wondering why Tom is so paranoid about a relationship sparking between them, but we'll find out soon. (I hope?) Can't wait for more! :) :) :)
Author's Response: Aww, I missed you toooo! I'm doing a happy dance because you enjoyed the chapter. Larry is just able to do anything. And you will find out soon about why Tom is being like that and what will happen between Tom and Billlll. I can't wait to gie you more! Thank you so much for reading and leaving your awesome thoughts. <3
Date: 09/12/12 05:39 pm Title: Chapter Nine
If a lizard can do backflips, there is no telling what he can do next. Bill is right to stay the eff away. Larry is not to be trusted, no matter what Georg says.
Author's Response: I completely agree, 100%. Larry is a wily little creature that can do just about anything, I think. Bill should just steer clear. Haha. Thank you so much for reading and making me laugh.
Date: 09/12/12 05:31 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Holy smokes, you're right that is too awesome not to share! Danke LillithValo!
*gigglefit* Ruffles. Please tell me Ruffles was a labradoodle, or some other curly/straight haired mix?
LARRRY!!!!! Will we ever see hin again, in more than just passing mention?
Wow... Bill really got into that fight...really fast. Almost scary. But YAY near sexy time because of it, yet BOO Tom getting all 'practical' about it and shizz *pouts*
I'm totes worried about Bill's schooling and grades. He's gotta be slipping. Which, obviously, would be bad.
Wonderful chapter! I was so happy to see the update! Keep up the fantastic work dear.
So...*pokes* wassup?
Author's Response:
She is amazing at the manipulations she does!! And yes, I totally pictured Ruffles as a curly/straight soft kinda dog, haha. xD
You will definitely see him again! I can't resist making that dude show up. ;) Tom just HAD to be the voice of reason. Psssht. He should have just let the sexytimes continue and felt bad about it later, haha.I think Bill will try his hardest to keep his grades up but I agree.. It's not like he can be totally attentive to everything at once. :/ Thank you so much for reading!! I'm really happy that you enjoyed the chapter, forreal. I'm really gonna be on top of updating because I seem to have my inspiration back!! Not much is up, girl.. One more month until I can chew again and the jaw is totally healed! I'm so freaking excited. xD I hope you are well!!! <333
Date: 09/12/12 04:23 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Hellooo:) It was so good, I wouldn't mind reading this story nonstop till the end :D I am so curious about everything, Tom is confusing sometimes. There were some really sexy scenes in this chapter (I personally liked the kissing scene when Tom is holding Bill pinned to the wall, dominant Tom is too sexy ;)).
I am really not looking forward to Bill's first real fight, just, please be gentle to him, he is too pretty to be beaten.
And I really really don't like Bu. He must be quite a bad guy when Tom is afraid of him...
Thank you for the update, it made my night :D
Author's Response:
I'm so sooo happy that you enjoyed the chapter!! Hopefully it won't be tooo much longer until this story is completed and you can read it from start to finish. :D Tom is definitely complicated but I'm happy you liked that kiss. ;)
I agree that he's too pretty to be beaten. Don't worry, he will be very prepared and nobody, including Bu, will hurt him badly. Thank you so much for reading and for sharing your lovely thoughts with me!
Date: 09/12/12 03:21 pm Title: Chapter Nine
it was cool!! the coolest, love it.
Author's Response: I'm super glad that you liked it! Thank you so much. You've gotta bug me to keep writing, kay?
Date: 09/12/12 02:28 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Oh my God this was so good! I nearly spilled my (cold) coffee on me when I saw you updated x) But man what the fuck is up Tom's ass (certainly not Bill! :x)?
Author's Response: I'm glad you didn't spill your coffee! Cold or not. xD I know it's shocking when I update these days. ._. I'm sooo glad that you liked the chapter, banana cream pie! Tom.. Is complicated. He could use some Bill up his ass, haha. Thank you!
Date: 09/05/12 04:34 pm Title: Chapter Eight
So cute! I don't know why I think it is but it totally is lol. Also: I missed you! & your writing which I love! To be fair I am seeing someone so I haven't spent as much time on this site but I still know you've been missing! Hugs & loves
Author's Response: I'll take cute!! I missed you tooo. I haven't been around much either, obviously, but I'm happy to know that I've been missed. Congrats on your relationship! I wish you every happiness with that and hopefully I'll have another chapter up for you in not too long. :) <33333
Date: 07/25/12 04:48 pm Title: Chapter Eight
fghjjhfg YOU'RE BACK~ I've missed you so much, omg. Awesome chapter as always! I've missed diva Bill and gangsta Tom, and all of the sexual tension between them, hehehe. Can't wait for more! :D
Author's Response: OMG!! I've missed you too, sweet girl. Seriously, it's been way too long. I'm so happy that you're still enjoying it. I'm hoping to update in the next week or so. Thank you so much for still reading, beautiful! <3
Date: 07/18/12 03:13 am Title: Chapter Eight
*SQUEEEEE***
OMG you updated!!
Author's Response: I didn't even realize I never replied to this!! Giiirl, I updated! I can't even tell you how much I miss you. It's been too fucking long since we've talked. I'm so happy to see you still reading!! <3
Date: 07/15/12 03:31 pm Title: Chapter Eight
Ahw, our little Bill is full of surprises, isn't he? He definitely can throw some serious punches when he wants or needs to. Tom is so love doomed. Who can resist a guy like this:-))) I can't wait for the awkward moments when they get turned on each other while they watch the other fight:-) And all possible scenarios that may follow( and are already solidly implanted in my sick head, lol) - Tom and Bill making out all bloody, sweaty, bruised, sore and generally obused. Gosh.... where did THAT come from? Your story corrupts me!
Mooore. Pleeeeeeeeease!
Author's Response: He is full of many surprises...most of which have yet to be revealed! ;-) I definitely wouldn't be able to resist a guy like that...so it's a good thing I don't personally know one. xD I can't wait to write those moments! I've already played out many of them in /my/ sick head, haha. It hasn't corrupted you, merely opened up your eyes to a new way of getting excited. hehehe. :D Thank you soo much and I will have more for you as soon as possible!
Date: 07/15/12 03:22 pm Title: Chapter Seven
Oh, I adore their interraction so much! Partially interest and intrigue, partially genuine caring, partially sexual tension, partially business.... and I can't get enough of this tougher, rougher kind of Bill. Loving him (and Tom of course:-)
Author's Response: Ahh, I'm so happy that you're loving them like this. I really enjoy writing a tougher side of Bill. :D Your reviews are lovely and I really appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts. Thank you so much!
Date: 07/13/12 04:14 pm Title: Chapter Six
Lovely build up, just lovely.
"We won't talk about it" - yeah, as if it helped, haha.
Author's Response: Thank you for that compliment. It's so hard for me not to just let them go at each other but the tension is definitely important between them. And you're right, that definitely didn't help. Haha. <3
Date: 07/13/12 03:34 pm Title: Chapter Five
Interesting.............more!
Author's Response: There is a bit more! I'm working on the new chapter, too. :D Thank youuu.
Date: 07/13/12 03:07 pm Title: Chapter Four
Oh my, that was so surreal and unexpected. Bill getting ready to kick Bubu's ass:-) I am loving it.
Author's Response: Eeee, I'm so happy you're loving it! Thank youuu! You're making me smile so big. :D
Date: 07/13/12 01:41 pm Title: Chapter Three
It is getting more and more interesting. I like your characterization of both Tom and Bill in this story - so unusual somehow. But really interesting. Lovely.
Author's Response: Yaaay, I'm happy it's getting more interesting. I wanted the characters to be very different but accessible. Thank you so much for reviewing as you go along! I can't tell you how amazing that is.
Date: 07/13/12 12:44 pm Title: Chapter Two
So it seems that behind all that harsh interrior Tom is a kind of softie after all. Nice chapter.
Author's Response: He definitely has a soft side somewhere in there.. But it's hard for him to reveal it. Thank you so much!
Date: 07/13/12 12:22 pm Title: Chapter One
That was such an interesting beginning. I like the darkish surroudings, somewhat gloomy atmosphere of a house Tom lives in. I am intrigued-)
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you liked the beginning and that it drew you in! That makes me very happy, and I saw that you continued to read and review and you're just awesome. Okay? Yes, you are. <3
Date: 07/13/12 03:17 am Title: Chapter Eight
Hey Kirsten!
I'm thrilled you're already back with is. I hope your surgery was successful because I was crossing my fingers and toes for you :D
I love how Tom is the one more focused on his attraction to Bill than the opposite *s* It's going to be a bigger problem for him than Bill, I think, to keep his hands away. Now the training is going to take place and I'm going to love all the intense close interaction that can only rile up their hormones *I hope...* Ehem... better keep my own intact!
I'm sure Bill didn't have another choice but to accept the whole thing. Even if he doesn't want to admit it to himself, he likes the adrenaline rush and it'll become a drug to him like it is to Tom. It's a serious matter he's going into. It's also going to be interesting how he's going to incorporate that into his school paper.
Looking forward to more. Thanks :)
*hugs*
Author's Response: It's so good to hear from you, Maria! Thank you so much. My surgery went well and I won't be completely healed until October but I'm feeling good. :D
Date: 07/12/12 07:30 pm Title: Chapter Eight
Heeey, I promised you a review tonight, didn't I? :)
So nice to see this back, because this is such a great story, And you, too, of course! I still love Tom & Bill's relationship, which is so full of tension, but funny is, how it is almost invisible. Like the whole twisted situation dominates the reader so much that I almost forget them and then they come across with a smirk or a touch or whatever and remind me.
I think Bill is not quite getting his situation, is he?
Anyway, lovely to read, so easily flowing writing. Great job once again!
Author's Response: You are absolutely darling. Do you know that? <3 Thank you!