Date: 09/20/12 03:09 am Title: Chapter Ten
O_O *sits down and eats from the jar of pickles* Well. That was interesting. Oh! Look! These are Kosher! *munches*
Author's Response: Haahaha. Never change, okay? Gonna need you to promise that. <3
Date: 09/20/12 02:36 am Title: Chapter Ten
I haven't been on this site for a while, so imagine my surprise and happiness when I saw two new chapters waiting for me! :3 I really do like this story, the charactors are amazing and with some humor thrown in, its awesome! I missed you ;~; and am glad that you're back again!
Author's Response: I missed you tooooo! It's so good to be back and to have you here reading and enjoying. I'm completely flattered that you like this story and I hope you'll stick around to see what's coming next. Thank you so much for reading and leaving your lovely thoughts. <3
Date: 09/19/12 10:57 pm Title: Chapter Ten
I love that Bill never listens to Tom haha
I feel like it's been forever since I commented on this story, and I don't know if it has, but if so, I apologize! I love it so much!
I was surprised that Tom gave in to his feelings but not surprised there are rules to follow. My heart broke a little when Tom said he spends his whole life fighting and that he didn't want to fight what was between them. I think that might be my favorite line of this chapter. So heartbreaking, yet sweet at the same time.
I am so looking forward to what's to come!
Author's Response: He seriously never does! Maybe his hurt wrist will teach him to at least try to listen. Haha.
Date: 09/19/12 09:26 pm Title: Chapter Ten
yooouuuu light up my liiiiifffe, you give meeee...oh, sorry. on to the review!
“I'm saying that my whole life is spent fighting and I never get a break from it. I don't want to fight this,”
AWESOME! awesome line! love it! finally tom's giving in...a little bit.
but oh god, bill's gotta fight someone!
Author's Response: Totally sang that in my head as I was reading it. :D
Date: 09/19/12 06:05 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Oh I forgot... :D I will pretend that I didn't read the end of the chapter. In fact I think I will sneak into the story, delete the message and then visit Bushido and tell him what I think about his business... ;)
Author's Response: Haha! Do whatever you need to do to take care of this. I'm sure Bill will appreciate it very much. You are sooo cute. n.n
Date: 09/19/12 05:57 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Great chapter. At first I was frustrated because I thought omg they are so stupid, they will fight their feelings forever.... Stubborn Bill is a cutie... but I bet his poor wrist thinks something else ;).
BUT I AM SO GLAD THAT HE HURT HIS WRIST because Tom was all "come here Bill and let me take care of you." awwww. From this moment I had the feeling they will kiss and indeed they kissed :).
I admit I hoped Bill will kind of ehmmm "rape" Tom or something, you know seduce him, when his roommate left him the flat for night. Their relationship will be interesting :D no public affection... Bill is so spontaneous I think it will be hard for him to pretend, Tom is so much better at pretending.
Okay. Whoops. It's late. Goodnight. Next chapter tomorrow? ;)
Author's Response: I think his poor wrist is finding stubborn Bill to be quite stupid at this point, haha. But yesss, it's a good thing that he hurt himself because Tom got to step in and care for him. ;-; I have a weakness for caregiving Tom, for sure. :D You totally knew they were going to kiss! You are psychic and fantastic.
Date: 09/19/12 05:40 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Hehe! Yeah, I remember when you updated almost every day. That was with Work Out, wasn't it?
Anywho, I was just cringing and rolling my eyes at the whole part of Bill being pointlessly stubborn and not letting Tom wrap his hands. Grr.
Lol, it's kind of strange how I keep encountering fics where the charas take asperin for pain instead of the much more modern Ibuprofen or Tylenol. Asperin, dude, that's like 1950s XD
I'm glad that Tom's finally giving an inch, but the shipper in me wants MOAR intimacy... lmao ;)
Oh my gosh, Bill's fight *bites nails*
Author's Response:
Date: 09/19/12 05:12 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Love it love it love it! :D
Author's Response: I love YOU! Thank you so much. :D
Date: 09/19/12 03:50 pm Title: Chapter Ten
This indeed was a really nice surprise to wake up too!
I'm glad Tom's finally chilling the fuck out, and I'm excited for Bill's fight X)!!
Author's Response: Aww, I'm happy that I could surprise you! It's nice to have Tom relax a bit for sure. It's hard to write him so angsty. xD Yaaay, I'm glad your'e excited because I am toooo! Thank you so much for reading and for you review, buttercup. <3
Date: 09/15/12 11:50 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Fights do give you a rush. Same goes for heated arguments and physical exertion (especially in competition). It's a rather dangerous way to get turned on though, because it'd be so easy to let it get out of control. :/ Hope they're all ok! *gives them padded helmets*
Author's Response: Yesss, I learned about that in social psych and behavioral analysis. It's a very dangerous way to get turned on, I agree. They will be okay! It might get a little intense but you know I'm not the type of writer to hurt these cute boys badly. Thank you so much for reading and for your lovely thoughts, Bee!
Date: 09/15/12 07:14 pm Title: Chapter Nine
I love to see you updating this! I always enjoy this original, hot and a bit forbidden fic. You better keep those updates comning, girl. :)
The tension was there again and I loved to see Tom slipping and Bill understanding the rush. It was very intense and I kind of understand that rush. It made the kiss, tyhe whole thing very sexual. My guess is that they can't fight it forever and when things really happen, it'll be rough. Yes, please! ;)
Author's Response:
I will definitely keep the updates coming! I already have the next chapter written. It just needs to be edited. :) I love the way you describe my story. You're awesome.
I've never been in a fight or really witnessed one but I do understand the adrenaline rush that comes along with such an even. It just affects Tom and Bill in a more physical sort of way. ;) I like your guess and I think it's a good one! I hope you enjoy what's coming next. Thank you so much for reading and leaving your thoughts!
Date: 09/15/12 11:03 am Title: Chapter One
OMG, this. This was so fucking awesome, I have no words. I loved everything. The characters, the pace, the delicious sexual tension, the thrill of the fights, the kiss... OMG, the kiss!! Must have more....please!!! Please, please, please! I'll be keeping myself busy with your other stories while I wait...anxiously.
Author's Response: THIS was such an amazing review and it left me with the biggest smile and good feels. I'm so happy you love it. It's hard to keep two hot guys from just going at it but everything will definitely be worth the wait. :D I plan on updating this week so hopefully you won't have to wait long! I hope you enjoy my other stories. You're awesome, kay? Thank you!! <3
Date: 09/15/12 06:52 am Title: Chapter Nine
DAMN IT!!!!
You know what I want!! I want a hard fight between them to turn into harder sex! This was such a tease! Love you! can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I know what you want because I want it toooo! I missed you a lot, girl. I hope you enjoy what's coming next and I love you! Thank you for readiiiiing. <3
Date: 09/15/12 01:14 am Title: Chapter Eight
I want Tom to show up at my house in baggy sweatpants and a wifebeater and help me relax please.
Author's Response: Just keep your night clear and I'll see what I can do. ;-) Ahh, it's so good to see your name here! Thank you for reading, Bee. <3
Date: 09/13/12 07:03 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Yaaay!! I love this so much *0* The kiss.
Unf. This whole story is just. sdibgdnsinbi
Yes. I think that sums it up.:3
Author's Response: I love the way you sum it up, hehe. You're awesome and I'm really so happy you enjoyed the chapter. Thank you so much for reading and leaving your thoughts with me! <3
Date: 09/13/12 06:30 am Title: Chapter Nine
This chapter was... awesome and hot! :D I love this story so much!
Author's Response: I love those two adjectives and I'm super flattered you thought that! Thank you so much for reading and for enjoying it. I hope you like what's coming next. <3
Date: 09/13/12 04:19 am Title: Chapter Nine
Lmfao, Tom in that pic. [edit: I do think Bill's body is too muscular and that he wouldn't be *that* aggressive to the opponent, but heck, I know that base photos are hard to find]
Oh my gosh, I literally said, "No.. way..." when I saw this in Recents. I was so happy I thought I was seeing things! XD
Omg, omg, omg. I luffed this chapter. As much as Bill seems to be pumped in watched ppl fight (and Tom is aroused like woa in watching ppl fight -- lol wut?), I'm STILL worried about Bill's first match. Actually, about him fighting at all. Darn my constant desire to squish Bill (rl or fic) and shield him from everything.
And that part near the end was hot *fans self* I'm a sucker for sexual tension.
Author's Response:
The funniest part of that is that it's a face he really made onstage. xD (The picture is definitely more fantasized and Bill isn't that muscular but it's still nicey nice to drool over. :D )
I'm so sorry I made you think you were seeing things. xD I'm not gonna be an update loser anymore! I'm so very happy that you enjoyed this chapter. I'm with you.. I don't want Bill to get beat up either. Don't worry, I will make sure he is adequately prepared. I promise he's not gonna get hurt badly.
Super happy you liked the end! I looove sexual tension like that too. Thank you so much for reading, girl! <3
Date: 09/13/12 04:17 am Title: Chapter Nine
Daw they kissed. Even if it made Tom mad haha. I really love this story though. Their attraction is so deep and, as the story is aptly named, -rough- :) keep up the amazing work sweetheart!
Author's Response: Haha, it did make Tom mad. xD But it was definitely because he liked it. I'm so happy that you loved the chapter! I completely agree about their attraction and the pull between them. Rough. ;) Just thank you soo much for reading and for leaving this sweet review!!
Date: 09/12/12 09:07 pm Title: Chapter Nine
wow, i'm curious about Tom was taking about and i like that this pic :)
Author's Response: I'm glad I've got you curious! The picture is awesome. I wish Bill was as badass as that. xD Thank you for reading! I hope you enjoy what's coming next. :)
Date: 09/12/12 08:16 pm Title: Chapter Nine
*flails some more*
Author's Response: *jumps up and down with you and gifts you a jar of pickles* <333