Date: 10/22/12 12:42 am Title: Chapter Eleven
@_______@ oh gosh. I'm excited to see how the fight will go :0
Author's Response: Eeeeep! I'm so happy you're excited, I'm excited to write it! Thank youuuu. <3
Date: 10/21/12 05:27 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
I love this story, and I can't wait for Bills first fight!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so happy you are enjoying it and I hope you like the fight. :D
Date: 10/20/12 07:13 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
*overly flourished bow* I'm glad you enjoyed my singing and dancing last review ^_^
Oh my gawd Bill... and Gustav. That. Was. Hilarious. With the squinty eyes, and the lying, and the pop tarts. I could barely contain myself. And then the piece de resistance... the masturbation sprain. Or so Gustav thinks. I was so looking forward to seeing how Bill explained that sprained wrist away, and it lived up to everything I've come to expect from you.
God...why was Bushi being such an ass about the sprain? It isn't like it was done on purpose, and its his own damn fault the fight could be screwed now, he never should've. Arranged a fight for Bill yet, let alone given him no notice that he was doing it!! GAAAHHHRRRGGG!! Stoopid eeediot. But good for Bill, being all spit firey and getting up in Bushi's face and telling him off and such.
Terrific work, I feel like such a broken record around you, I swear, because I can never say anything less. Keep up the amazing work. I am so anxious to see more.
Oh, and I totally understand what you meant about not being able to update this as quickly as Work Out. It was a special one...though, I am still waiting for the fateful day that Tom sees Bills hair in all its voluminousness, the voluminousness that even Bill thought was too much. *winkwinknudgenudge*
Author's Response: Gaaaaah, you are so adorable!! Your reviews always brighten my day and I'm sorry it has taken me a bit to respond. I had a friend in town, but reading your review for a second time has brightened my day again!
Date: 10/20/12 09:26 am Title: Chapter Eleven
._. I want more, is that enough review? amazing.
Author's Response: That is more than enough. ._. I'll give you more as soon as I can. Thank you, bsb. <3
Date: 10/19/12 04:33 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
This was a very very good chapter :) I would love to read chapters like this every morning, waking up would be so pleasant :D
Gustav is really cute and sweet. How he cares about Bill. First he gave him the opportunity to get laid and then he was all protective about Bill when he found out about his wrist :). That nonexisting accident where Bill had hurt his wrist during jerking off made me giggle almost hysterically. I am very sorry that my poor imagination can't find any possible scenario where this would be possible :D Okay, now I am lying, I have something in my mind but... It's better to keep some things unspoken lol.
My favorite part was the nipple scene. It was sooo hot. Passionate Tom, so open about his feelings and ready for... well anything :D They are just too sexy together. I think that nipple piercing will be Tom's death haha. I was hoping for some orgasms but that guy must ruin it always for me. Yes. I am talking about Bu. Really hope Bill will kick his ass one day really hard. And maybe some of Bill's shoes would be a big help :)
But.. OMG they have a date! I am so curious. Can't wait to visit Tom's flat. And only you know what will happen there... behind closed door. XD
Thank you for this awesome chapter, what a pleasure it was to read it :)
Author's Response: I wish I could wake you up like that every morning! I'm so happy you enjoyed starting your day with my writing. :D
Date: 10/19/12 01:09 pm Title: Chapter Nine
I LOVE IT!!!! I just read the whole story and it's great!!! Actually it reminded me a bit of Fight Club which is one of my favorite movies. Keep Up the great work! :D
Author's Response: I also love Fight Club! I'm so happy that you are enjoying it so far and I'm happy you started to read it when I'm back in the swing of updating regularly. I would hate for you to have to wait a long time for the next chapter. I hope you like what's coming next! Thank you so much. :)
Date: 10/19/12 12:07 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Okay :D annnd great chapi like always , Bushido is such a jerk :D can't wait for next chapi , Are Bill n Tom gonna do it? *u*
Author's Response: Hehe, I'm happy you accept my love! Thank you so much. I agree with you about Bu. :/ I hope you like what's coming next! My lips are zipped on that last question. ;) Thank youuu!
Date: 10/19/12 09:18 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Okay, so I was totally expecting Tom to regret everything and go back and continue to 'fight Bill', but I'm so glad I was wrong! OMG! I love these two together! Tom is so sweet and caring and I love seeing this side of him. I can only imagine what is going to happen if Bill gets hurt because of the fight. I have a feeling their feelings are going to get in the way of them being careful and Bushido is going to find out sooner rather than later about them.
Thanks for the update! I loved it! I cannot wait for more!
Author's Response: I had debated about Tom regretting everything he said but I think it had just gotten to the point where he couldn't resist things anymore. He's not strong enough when it comes to Bill. Your predictions are definitely valid! There will be conflict but also a lot of growth between the guys and I think with that they will be able to handle the challenges that are coming up. Thank you so much for reading! I love reading your reviews, I really do. You're lovely. <3
Date: 10/19/12 04:39 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Flutter clapping for Tom being awesome. The dynamics between the two plus with the fighting are ah, sort of something new on this site, and oh so captivating. Can't wait for their down time at Tom's!
Author's Response: That is such a great compliment, thank you! I was hoping to come up with something that hadn't really been seen before. Anything to captivate you and make you flutter clap will make me happy. :) Thank you so much for reading and for this lovely review! I hope you like the next chapter.
Date: 10/18/12 11:48 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
So I'm sittin here. Texting you. Eatin ice cream. And readin this. And I realized that it was a deja-vu moment and I freaked out. *goes to hide*
Author's Response: I think your evening's activities were wonderful, if I do say so myself. :D We have definitely been in that situation before so deja-vu is expected. xD Don't hiiiiiiiide. Come back! Thanks for reading, girrrrl. <3
Date: 10/18/12 11:19 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Yay! I had a busy day with taking care of three kids today, so coming home and seeing this ruled! X)
But maaaan fuck Bushido -.- I wanted more Bill!Tom sexy time. Although I can't wait to see the out come of Bills fight :O!
Good chapter Kirsty
Author's Response: Awww, I'm so happy to make your long day a little better. Sorry you had to deal with three kids. D: Bushido is a cock block! Thank you so much for reading, I'm so happy you enjoyed and I hope you like what's coming next. <3
Date: 10/18/12 11:14 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
okay, first of all...girly gustav. just the thought of mr. serious batting his eyelashes and looking all moony and dreamy...hilarious!
second of all...daaayyyuuummmm! with the kissing and the wandering hands and tom remembering certain things about what turns bill on. *fans self*
i'm predicting bill wins his fight and follows it up with some congratulatory sexy times with tom. unless they do it sooner. cuz, you know, anytime you want to make these guys do the mattress mambo is just fine with me.
Author's Response: It's super funny to me too. xD It's hard for me to imagine that guy as anything but serious and cool. Hehehe, I like the things that you enjoyed in this chapter. :D You and I definitely have similar tastes when it comes to stuff like thaaat. *fans us both* I like your prediction very much, indeed. I honestly can't wait for these two to get it on. Mattress mambo!! You are my favorite. Have I told you that? Thanks for this, sis. <3
Date: 10/18/12 10:50 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
-falls over laphing- poor boys are gunna get blue balls XD
Author's Response: They really are! Don't worry, I'll make sure they get a bit of what they need soon. :D Thank you so much for reading!
Date: 09/25/12 03:04 pm Title: Chapter Ten
I'm so relieved to see Tom (and finally) finally giving in and just letting it all happen. I agree with Bill: this is not going to be easy, but.. oh boy, they are in love and blindly so. They've fought long enough.
But, but.. let's not forget the actual fighting. Uh, two weeks from now? This is going to be interesting...
Author's Response: I'm as relieved as you are! I've been excited about writing this portion of the story. It won't be smooth but it will be exciting and new. I promise Bill will be as prepared for the fight as he can be. Don't worry. :) Thank you so much for reading and sharing your lovely thoughts. Love hearing from you! :)
Date: 09/24/12 04:43 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Great, great chapter. More... please...soon:-)
Author's Response: Thank you so, so much! I will hopefully have a new chapter ready by this weekend. :D
Date: 09/24/12 04:13 pm Title: Chapter Nine
That was so good! Loving all the tension and supressed sexual attraction, though I have to admit I feel also a bit sorry for them. Silly situation.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying it and I appreciate your compliments. I feel sorry for them, too. But hopefully they will be able to make the best of this situation.
Date: 09/22/12 01:03 pm Title: Chapter Ten
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!!! SO PERFECT. ASDFGHJKL
Author's Response: THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH!!! <333
Date: 09/20/12 03:45 pm Title: Chapter Ten
YAY YAY YAY! So glad that Tom is going to let it happen. :D He's so uptight in this story, glad he's letting go a little. Thanks for the update, I love you. :D
Author's Response: I'm glad he's letting go a bit, too! It's hard to write uptight Tom and not let him just let go, haha. Thank you so much for reading and letting me know what you thought! I love seeing you here and I love you too. n_n
Date: 09/20/12 11:58 am Title: Chapter Ten
:D yay I really loved this chapter & can't wait for more. I'm glad Tom gave in but I can already tell there will be major problems as they move forward. Bill's first fight is coming up!? Not sure how to feel about that especially with his hurt wrist! Hopefully it'll all be fine :) hugs & loves for you!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, love! I agree, there will be some conflict because this story isn't about people with easy lives. Buuut, I promise I won't throw Bill into a fight without his wrist being healed up. You are a darling and thank you for the hug and loves. Sending some right back your way! <3
Date: 09/20/12 04:06 am Title: Chapter Ten
*fist pump dancing* its peanut butter jelly time, peanut butter jelly time. Where ya at, whaere ya at? So there ya go, there ya go. *squee*
Ao, yea, that was me singing and dancing because its been updated so quickly. Thank youuu!!
Holy spumoni with coffee cake! What spiftasmic progress! There's rules and they have to hide it and be careful, but they're gonna try! *squees againn* and something about Tom's line of 'I've been fighting my whole life...' was just so heart breaking. I just wanted to cuddle him, or have Bill do it. But I also know they aren't there yet.
The tension was fantastically played out. It felt like the right amount of childishness on Bill's end, and Tom's fanger was appropriate to his frustration. And then bill getting hurt and we got to see TLC!Tom... this was just full of well balanced emotions.
Yay, Bill managed to get some school work done! Let's hope he can still manage to take a day or two off because of his wrist and use the time to catch up on some more things. Which, with a fight in two weeks, I'm thinking one or the other isn't going to want to wait to get training again, but I do think Bill needs at least a day to heal up either way. It could cause more harm than good. Or they could have, like, a strategy session if Tom finds out who Bill is fighting, go over strengths and weaknesses together or something.
I'm curious to see Gustav's reaction to Bill spraining his wrist on this 'date' and how Bill's going to explain it. I hope that gets written in, and not left off in 1riter's Lost Scenes Land. ^_^
Fabulous work. So happy to see you inspired again. I've been pretty worried about you and Kittles, but I've really fallen off the social media world. Keep up the great work. Maybe we can get back to those daily update soon? *winkwinknudgenudge* can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: Hahaha, omg, you are beyond CUTE. Totally picturing you doing that dance. :D You're so welcome for updating quickly!