Date: 11/12/12 04:46 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
SFGH AA I LOVE YOU AND THIS STORY OK (btw it's still me, I changed my username eheh~)
SEXYTIMES>EVERYTHING
Author's Response: I LOVE YOU TOO, KAY. (I love your new username! It's super cute. *-*) Sexytimes are greater than most things, yep. :D
Date: 11/12/12 04:33 pm Title: Chapter Ten
VFGHJGHJSFDG AAAAAAA THINGS ARE HAPPENING
GOOD THINGS
VERY GOOD THINGS SDFGHF
Author's Response: GOOD THINGS ARE GOOOOOD! YAY, I'M STILL SQUEALING BECAUSE YOU ARE HERE!
Date: 11/12/12 04:18 pm Title: Chapter Nine
hgjsffh hI I'M BACK I'M SORRY I'VE BEEN AWAY SO LONG OH MY GOD~
all I can say to this chapter is ghjSADFDGHFKJDGHFGFHJ
SFDGHFGJH
BILL+TOM+KISSING+ANGST= GOOD
YUP THAT'S PRETTY MUCH IT
Author's Response: GUUUUURL. I HAVE MISSED YOUUUU!!! Don't be sorry, I'm just happy you're back! Yaaaaaay, dflksjdflsjf;adf is just what I was hoping for. :D I AM VERY PLEASED WITH THIS REVIEW. <3
Date: 11/12/12 03:43 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Omg, I just found this fic and omgggg you need to update soon omfg ;_;
Author's Response: I'm so happy you found my story! I will update as soon as possible, I promise. :) Thank you so much!
Date: 11/12/12 03:31 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Go write lazy! na not lazy, you know I liked it! a lot, now write more and let us have fun with your amazing way to write
Author's Response: I could write right now if I weren't talking to you. u.u I'm so happy you like it. I will try my best to keep you all happy and have a new chapter soon. Thank you! <3
Date: 11/12/12 02:09 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
That's why I love this fic so much; because it isn't like other fics on here. It's so well written and you keep me wanting more and more. I think more people should check it out! It's great!
I have to say, I love how you write Tom and Bill. In every one of your fics, they are written so well and their characters are so wonderful! You probably write the best Tom and Bill! No lie! =D
I look forward to not only reading more of this fic, but more fics of yours to come!
Author's Response: Ahhh, you are so lovely! I truly appreciate your compliments so much, they mean a lot. In regards to what you said about my Bills and Toms.. ._. Thank you. *-* I am so happy to hear that you think that. I try hard to make them unique yet relatable. I am so lucky to have you as a reader and I hope you know that. Thank you again, darling. <3
Date: 11/12/12 11:47 am Title: Chapter Twelve
This chapter was amazing :) It surprises me a little bit how tender is Tom, behind all the facade... :) They are so cute together, lovebirds :D
I loved the end. Their conversation about their soon to become real sex was so casually and sooooo sexy. Wow. You are very good at writing sexy scenes without sex ;) I kind of doubt that Bill will be in the mood for something more intimate then a massage after his big fight but Tom can always dream :) I am dreaming too because I would love to read it. I admit lol. BUT. His wrist is hurt. His ass will be kicked probably quite bad soon /angry Gustav/ and Bill will be happy if his lips and teeth will stay untouched after the fight.... So I am curious what kind of sex will they have LOL. No, I know. They can have it all ;) I can't wait :)))
Thank you for this great chapter. I loved it.
Author's Response: Eeeeep, thank you! *-* I like letting tender bits of Tom come out around Bill. He'd never show them around anyone else and I think that's what makes it so special to write. Tom and Bill, sittin' in a tree, k-i-s-s-i-n-g. :D
Date: 11/12/12 09:55 am Title: Chapter Twelve
First off, CONGRATULATIONS on being featured!! That is awesome and I'm so happy for you!
Second, I honestly felt like I was right there with them, feeling the sexual tension that was running through them. GAH! These two need to get it on! lol
I had a feeling someone was going to see them. I don't know why, but I just felt like their secret wasn't going to be so secret for much longer. Hmm, I wonder what's going to happen.
Great chapter, hun! As always =D
I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Oh darling, THANK YOU! I am so thrilled and pleasantly surprised. I knew when I started writing this story that it wouldn't be super popular just because of the subject matter, so I'm very grateful for wonderful readers like you that made all of this happen. <3
Date: 11/12/12 08:08 am Title: Chapter Twelve
OH MY GOD, I LOVE THE PART WHERE TOM ADMITS HOW BADLY HE WANTS TO FUCK BILL! Please please please PRETTY PLEASE update as soon as possible!!! I want to read the sex scene so badly xD
Author's Response: YAAAAAAAAY! If you like it when they just talk about it.. I believe you will like it a lot when they actually do it. :D I really am going to update soon because this story just got featured today! I don't want to leave all of you lovely people hanging because I'm so grateful for you. Keep on the lookout! <3
Date: 11/12/12 07:57 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Oh my God, I so love this story. And I have no idea where this is going - I mean, how it's going to end. I hope it'll be a happy ending with Tom and Bill and that Tom will protect Bill from Bushido when the time is right. And that Bill will take care of Tom. They are so meant to be in this story... oh my, Tom asking Bill to come to his place! That even had me blushing. I love that Tom isn't fighting his feelings anymore, that he's actually just kissing Bill and... uhh, I hope they'll do more! xD okay, breathe... *coughs* I'm gonna read next chapter now!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you sooo much! This review left me all warm and fuzzy inside. *-* I'm actually really pleased that this story keeps you guessing. But just know that I am a definite believer in happy endings for the characters I write and thus, happy readers. n.n I'm really so happy that you are enjoying it! You're so cute. xD I shall go and respond to your other lovely review now! Thank you again, sweetie. <3
Date: 11/12/12 06:01 am Title: Chapter Twelve
I love it... and you are so right.. the sex after an adrenaline pumped up fight will be just asfdasgaf!!! I can't wait for the next update :D kisses
Author's Response: Thank you, darling! I'm so glad you agree with that. I will be all sdlfkjsdl while I'm writing it and then all adlkfjsl when I'm waiting to hear what you think of it! *-* I hope you like what's coming next. Kisses back to you. :*
Date: 11/12/12 12:38 am Title: Chapter Twelve
*frowny face* sadly my birthday isn't until august the tenth. But! But, christmas is just around the corner! ... as amazing as Bill's hair taking over the world is, I think it conquring the fort is more feasible. And naturally Tom's face cannot get away unscathed. Lol
Uh oh...I'm not sure I like that forshadowy bit at the end there...that sounds really bad. *nodnod*
Aw full belly Bill always reminds me of soft wittle puppies, with their rounded lil bellies and puppy breath. Is that weird O_o? I adored their sleepy bed time somewhat horny conversation though. That did not remind of cuddly little puppies.
Supercalifragalisticexpialidosious. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Well in my world Christmas is all year round!!! Yes, you are quite right. The hub would definitely be the first victim of the hair, followed quickly by Tom. haha.
Date: 11/12/12 12:20 am Title: Chapter Twelve
WHYYOUDOTHISTOME?!?! *shakes fist*
Author's Response: *dances* BECAUSEILOVEYOU
Date: 11/12/12 12:09 am Title: Chapter Twelve
I HATE YOU
I LOVE YOU
OH GOD.
I DUNNO WHAT TO DOOOO
*flails* x__x
Author's Response: SO MANY FEELINGS. But really, all you've gotta do is keep on reading because I promise I'll make it allll better. I love you, okay? Just breaaaaathe and keep the flailing to a minimum!
Date: 11/11/12 11:49 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Eeee I love this story almost as much as I love you :D! But damn some shit is gunna go down next chapter :o dare I be scared?
Also, I find it weird that two people I refer to as older siblings write stories with sex in them, then I sit here reading it xD Special family alert :D
And lastly here you go to nom on :D
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Author's Response: Do you really? *-* That means so muuuuch to me! I love you too, and yes the next chapter is gonna be crazy. Don't be scared, just excited!
Date: 11/11/12 11:40 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
YOU TEASE!!!
oh god, i totally thought i'd be reading some sexy time tonight! yeah, i get why it's not a good idea...but i really wanted it!
and oh crap, someone saw them! what will happen???
and i just know bill will win his fight. won't even ask about that. but sexy times next chapter, yes? please? for me?
Author's Response: Girl, you know how I do!
Date: 11/11/12 11:37 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
i like it and i'm happy that between Bill and Tom everything is good...for now :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, love! That makes me happy that you are happy. :)
Date: 10/25/12 03:31 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Absolutely amazing. I love your pace with it, I love the tension, I love the build up... loving it all. Even that prick Bubu, I love everyone in this fick:-)
Can't wait for Bill's fight and his visit to Tom's place:-) Can't wait:-)
Author's Response: This review made me smile so big! Thank you for sharing your sweet compliments. I couldn't be happier that you are loving it and I hope you enjoy the next chapter! Should be coming this week. :D
Date: 10/22/12 06:37 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
What the flippin' heck? I didn't review this?? Rawr.
Hi, Kirsten :D
Tom's hands hand just begun to explore the curve of Bill's ass -- Woah there XD (oh yeah, and typo)
“I promise I'm not going to let you down.” -- Oh geez, I feel like he jinxed it.
Back to the top, Bill was crazy blessed that he didn't see the text 'til morning. Any normal person -- which excludes Tom XD -- would likely not get a wink of sleep.
Oh yeah, and I squeeeeed at this part: Bill barely had a chance to respond to the kiss before Tom pulled away. “Sorry, I.. Don't think I could focus properly until I got that out of the way."
Now I'm squeeing again just typing it XD
Yay!
Author's Response: Hi! So happy you reviewed!! Ahhh, I knew a typo would creep up. e.e But haven't I gotten much better about them?? I feel like I have so I hope so!
Date: 10/22/12 04:39 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Damn Bu, alwaus messing up the good right-about-to-happen smut! :D
I just love the flirty tone the boyus have now, it's much easier fopr my impatient mind than just waiting for them to surrender to their own feelings.
I'm a bit worried of Bill's fight though, but I can't weait to see what happens in Tom's place. :)
Author's Response: He has the worst timing! I have to admit, I'm impatient as well, so it feels goo to let the natural flirting just happen with them. I will make sure Tom gets Bill as prepared as he can be. Hehe, I'm excited for Tom's place too. :D Thank you for reading, love!