Date: 03/25/14 07:00 am Title: Chapter One
I just started to read this fic bc a friend of mine recommended to me.
This first chapter was really nice and I'm curious about Tom so I'll keep reading! Hahaha (:
Author's Response: I'm so sorry for my delayed reply! Thank you so much for giving my story a chance. I hope you're still enjoying it. :)
Date: 03/07/14 04:05 am Title: Epilogue
Ohh I forgot something!
First, I laughed when I read about Bushido, not because it's something wrong with working at mcDonalds but because it's him! Hehe
And Gustav got married!!! Yes!! :D you go Gustav!!!
Okay I'm on my phone again and it's dying, so sadly I'm done now, for this time ;)
Author's Response: Hehe, I love that you really did comment on everything! That is so awesome. I get what you mean about Bu. It was a big step down money-wise for him so you know he wasn't happy about it, lol.
Date: 03/06/14 02:25 pm Title: Epilogue
I'm smiling, and crying, and laughing, and sobbing! All at once. Oh my god! I knew I loved the ending last time I read it but I didn't remember it being this awesome! OH MY GOD THAT PROPOSAL!
Okay, I'm going to go through every part, so just deal with me, kai?
I LOVED how we got to meet Georg and Larry, and I'm really glad to see how Georg is doing so good, but still being the same person. The way he showed Bill to his office and then proudly showed Larry's little office as well, together with bragging about the little thing, it was so good. You managed to give Georg a great future, decent job and still keep him as he was before, which is brilliant!
Tom got his own repair shop! I'm so happy for him, he can do what he likes and awe, it's just so great. The part when he shows Bill the house... how romantic is that? Like dude.. can I have one of those guys? I want a Tom!
Then we got to meet Gustav again! And I can say that he's easily one of my favourite characters in this story, he's such a great friend, even though he shows up uninvited at a very bad time haha! Oh god I love him so much!
HOT SEX IN THE SHOP! YES PLEASE! I loved it, simply loved it. I always blush a lot when I read sex scenes, I'm a bit prude and mostly I just skip them, but this was so great, I loved it *-*
Bill's parents... I'm really glad to hear that they had changed, and that Bill didn't stay angry with Tom, I mean, I would probably have been pissed off, but in the end, having a relationship with your parents is important, if possible, so yeah, he did the right thing and I hope Bill can work it out with them.
HE PROPOSED! (we're back to that) AND IT WAS SO CUTE AND PERFECT! Look at me screaming at you, girl! I'm back to being a sobbing mess, but this time it's in a good way because omg it's so sweet.
Okay my mum is here with food now... so I can't write more than this, and I think that's for the best or this would quickly turn out to an even worse essay than it already is... BUT, I LOVED this, so, so much, and I can't believe it's once again over.. *sigh* I will miss it so much.
Thank you so much for writing this, it's brilliant, it's amazing, I love it so much! THANK YOU and LOTS OF LOVE for you! :') *hugs*
Author's Response: Ahhh I love that it made you feel SO MANY THIIIIINGS! I'm smiling already and I'm only just starting to read your review *-* Seriously, I just love you.
Date: 03/05/14 07:53 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
You made me cry on the bus. THE BUS! Filled of people wondering what the hell is wrong with the weird girl crying over her cellphone. Damn you and your amazing writing :'D
Serious now!
I loved this, I love how they went to Simone's grave, the little detail with Tom making sure she got a stone and the sign with a bird, it was beautiful!
The letter was great really, it wasn't all over nice and filled of love that's never been there before, it showed that Gordon had changed, but it wasn't overly happy and perfect. Which in fact made it perfect, but I hope you know what I mean because I'm sometimes shit with words...
I need to get off this goddamn bus soon, and I just noticed an old classmate staring at me.. Great, if he asks I will not tell him I was crying over a fanfic, I'm already remembered as the crazy girl who's obsessed with Tokio Hotel, we don't have to make it even worse haha!
Anyways, I've told you before, but I'll tell you again, I love this so much! You're such an amazing writer and this story is on my top 3 list of favourite stories, it's so darn good and I wish I never had to stop reading it. Love it!
Author's Response: Ohhh honey! I would totally have given you the biggest hug ever if I saw you crying on a bus. You are too cute and lovely! *-*x04;/p>Ah thank you for the compliments about those scenes. Looking back, the bird thing was maybe a little sappy, but I'm happy that it worked for the story. I TOTALLY know what you mean about the letter. I didn't want it to be some magical happy ending where Gordon was suddenly a good guy, because he wasn't and that was a fact, but I did want some closure for Tom.
Date: 03/04/14 05:39 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
Ohh nvm! I had one more chapter to go before the epilogue *-* amazing!! *happy*
Author's Response: Ahhhh you are so cute! <3
Date: 03/04/14 05:37 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
I feel so horrible for how much I actually enjoyed reading about Bushido losing everything. He was suck a dick that I can't even bother feeling slightly sorry for him.
Poor Gustav haha! That was a perfect thing to add to the chapter I think :D some humour in all the sweetness is never bad and I seriously love that guy! Such an awesome friend *-*
I'm once again on my phone and I hate writing reviews on it, but I promise I will log on my laptop and give you a proper one when I've read the epilogue *-* can't believe it's almost over (again) I will miss reading this, it's so darn good :')
Author's Response: I honestly enjoyed writing that part, so don't feel horrible lol. he definitely deserved what came to him!
Date: 03/01/14 12:40 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Ohhh fuck you Bushido. Fuck you so much -.- go kick his ass Tom, and do it good! I actually don't remember the fight but I remember a happy ending, so it'll work out somehow!
My phone is dying so short and lame review, but man I'm so pissed off at that man for being such an ass. But I still love it ofc, it's brilliant! :D
Author's Response: I don't think I could ever write a sad ending! So even when things get bad, there will always be a rainbow at the end. A big, gay, Bill and Tom rainbow. :)
Date: 03/01/14 12:03 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Oh, oh oh!! I had forgotten about this plan actually, it was ages since I first read this fic after all, but I'm all excited now!
And I love the G's, they are such amazing friends, they're so right that Bill has to actually live and not just sit around and feel sorry for himself, Tom is not gone for forever after all!
I keep repeating that I love this story, but I can't help it, it's so good that I can't resist leaving you some love, so yeah, I love this and I will feel so empty when I'm done reading it, it's so good I wish it never had to end :')
Author's Response: I had forgotten about it too, lmao. I can't believe how long it's been almost a year since I finished this!
Date: 03/01/14 10:47 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
Can I kill Bushido? I seriously feel like beating the crap out of him. Give the guys a break, gah!
Okay, serious now.
Romantic Tom! I want one! Oh so sweet and I was squealing like I don't know what while reading it, I just want to hug them both for giving it another chance, they deserve some happiness and fluff and stuff.
But of course, Bushido has to call and ruin it -.- if I could I would strangle him. I was cursing so badly while reading about the phonecall, be happy you couldn't hear me, I got so frustrated. It's funny how a story can affect me this much...
BOYFRIENDS! Fuck yeah! Finally! And Tom being cute saying he'll buy Bill chocolate, awe!!!! Tooooom let me hug you!
Can you tell how much I love this? I never leave reviews like these on my phone, because autocorrect is a bitch and it takes me years to write something that wouldn't even take a minute on my computer, but I can't resist so feel special! *-*
A few more chapters to go, awe.. I will miss this so much, but I will most likely reread it again some day ^-^
Author's Response: I wanted to kill him in pretty much every chapter I wrote him in!
Date: 02/28/14 07:55 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
This chapter made me go completely nuts, so many feelings. You should have heard me when Tom finally kissed Bill, and I was like "fucking finally!!" and I got all excited and squealed like an idiot.
Then he goes all "not going to happen again" mode and I was like "noooo don't you dare ruining this!!" but he did, kinda and I sat here yelling at him (girl you have no idea how caught up I am in this story, I literally yell at your characters)
But then they started to talk about giving it another chance after the fight and I went "yes!!!" mode again...
You wake so many feelings in me xD and I already KNOW how it will end, I actually feel sorry for those who had to wait for an update when you were writing this, it would have killed me haha!
Olay I need to sleep now, I'm glad you're not getting annoyed with my random reviewing because I really can't shut up after some chapters *-* my poor feelings!
Author's Response: You prompted me to go back and read this chapter, too! Isn't it funny how when you read something you wrote a while ago it almost doesn't even seem like you wrote it? I'm in a surreal mood now, lol. I love that you squealed when they kissed!
Date: 02/28/14 05:52 am Title: Chapter Twenty
I'm literally crying right now, if it weren't for the fact that I already know the ending I would probably throw my phone away and hide under my blanket being a sobbing mess, this is so sad and my heart is breaking for them both, awe... Those sweet guys, I can't .__.
Author's Response: I actually had to go back and read this chapter because I couldn't remember what happened! Man, this one was a tough one for me to write. Can't believe I put those two through this
Date: 02/27/14 03:47 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
Am I annoying with my random reviews yet? Well.. Since I started to actually review on this page I have a hard time to shut up when I read something I like, be happy I'm on my phone and not my laptop, I always write essays when I'm on the laptop ^^
I really liked this chapter, I remember liking it the first time I read it as well, the moment with Bushido is really well written and the part with Bill and his past is so sad and yet so good, and I'm so glad he's got a friend like Gustav :)
Aaah I love this story so much, it's even more amazing this time because I'm not all impatient to get to know what will happen so I take longer to actually read it properly without missing details, and it's so good I wish I could keep reading the whole night.. Sadly I kind of need to sleep and stuff *sigh*
Author's Response: You could NEVER annoy me, girl! I'm the same way when I'm on my laptop, haha. I cannot be stopped because I type so fast. Like literally 90 words per minute.
Date: 02/26/14 04:59 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Do you have any idea how much this chapter made me smile? It's so cute and Tom is so adorable I just want to hug him! Awe I love this story so much, and your characters are simply amazing *-*
Author's Response: I'm happy I could make you smile ;) Gosh, thank you so much!
Date: 02/25/14 12:52 pm Title: Chapter Three
Reading this again, and omg I had completely forgotten about Georg and Larry, haha awe, I'm already looking forward to read this story again, I remember loving every single chapter when I read it the first time ^-^
Random babbling, just leaving some love! Now imma keep reading :3
Author's Response: Getting around to reading your reviews and I already have that giant smile on my face again! Georg and Larry sure made a great team, eh? Hehe. I'm so happy you love this story enough to reread it! <3
Date: 02/15/14 07:17 am Title: Epilogue
Okay i've already commented on this like a million times, but i just absolutely love this fic and this is totally one of my favorites, maybe even the most favorite one :D and in that last chapter before this epilouge, i always cry when Tom and Bill are visiting Toms moms grave :'( kt's so sad but not in a bad way. I just absolutely love this whole story and now i'm kinda sad that i gotta wait a lot of time before reading thks again. This last chapter always makes me so happy my heart aches.
Author's Response: Ohhh my goodness, you don't know how happy this review made me! Thank you so much. I'm thrilled that you like this story enough to read it again. That makes me smile really big, kay? <3
Date: 10/20/13 03:30 pm Title: Chapter One
After almost two months, I finally finished reading this story! haha xD
I'm not gonna lie, this has definitely got to be one of the best stories I've ever read! It's become a new favorite of mine! :D
You're such an amazing writer! Don't ever quit writing stories, you hear? x3 haha
Author's Response: Congrats on getting through a beast of a story, haha! Thank you so so much. I'm totally flattered that this is a favorite of yours now. :) I will do my best to keep writing! Reviews like this definitely encourage me. <3
Date: 10/05/13 07:08 pm Title: Epilogue
Okay so I red this again! And I still love it! This is probably my favorite fic! This is just soooooooo awesome, adorable, full of drama, fluff, and seeeeex. This is just PERFECT and I know I've like said this a million times already, but you are just awesome and this story is awesome and I hope my life would be as awesome as this story! Okay not in the fighting thing awesome, but yeah, just awesome XDD And I know this comment is awesome! Did I say awesome enough? Awesomeeeeeeeeeee!
Author's Response: You have no idea how happy this review made me! I've been trying to write something new and I have to say, you've helped motivate me! I'm so thrilled that you enjoyed this story and super flattered that it's your favorite *-* YOU are awesome, okay? Thank you so much!
Date: 09/10/13 12:39 am Title: Epilogue
Oh my god. I don't even know where to begin! I've been addicted to this story for the past few days, upset anytime my eyes couldn't handle the prolonged hours of reading this amazing story. It's certainly be a rollercoaster of emotions for me. I've laughed so much, cried, loved, hated..I just loved it in it's entirety. You are truly a gifted writer. Everything was perfectly laid out, developed, described, everything came around full circle and just wow. I am in love with this. The comic relief exhibited by Gustav and Georg was excellent and extremely comical! Gosh I love those guys. Larry and Georg! hahahaha. The goodness that was eventually seen in everybody was uplifting. I'm glad everybody ended up with what they deserved! Bill and Tom..where to begin! The development of their characters, their relationship! Gosh I wish this was a movie! It was an incredible read is all I can say about them. Thank you for writing this! Im so sad i finished it! haha. Absolutely amazed at your skills. Definitely the best fanfic on this website.
Author's Response: I am so flattered that you read two of my stories this week! Thank you so much for your kind words and I am honestly smiling my face off because of you. I'm happy that you enjoyed the characters and the plot and how everything progressed. Man, this was so awesome to receive, thank you! It made my night even better. Thank you for taking the time to read and for sharing such a beautiful review with me! <3
Date: 08/06/13 10:25 am Title: Epilogue
This epilogue is..... breathtaking and unbelievable!!!
- our boys are all successful in their own way. They manage to make it in what they love. Congrats to them!
- Bill and Tom are... so relaxed, happy, cute... pefect together. they have come a long way and are now making a new big step in their relationship: a house. I didn't picture Tom to be so ridiculously romantic to want "their" own house but hey, I love it!!!
There's still something rough in them.... They have softened in a good way but there's still this hard edge in them that brought them together, it's a part of them, of their history...
- I was surprised it's Gus that gave them news about Bushido. It's unexpected, he has really changed. It's hard to believe but seems however finally "right". People can change is trully the governing principle of this epilogue ;p
- A last sexy time between them... You couldn't end this story without giving us this beautiful and mindblowing moment. with Bill topping nonetheless; LOVED IT!
- I liked seeing Bill in professionnal mode, even if it's short-living. His parents back in his life. I couldn't believe it. Wasn't it a bit harsh for the epilogue??? There's surely will be hell to pay later for Tom - in a wicked and delicious way, I suppose- But maybe it's trully for the better after all.
Bill is emotionnally wrecked, I didn't think you could outdo yourself once more... and once again yo prove me wrong. How you have so amazing ideas is beyond me.
- The proposal briefly crossed my mind but I didn't really think I saw it. Nice choice with titanium and its symbolic for them. So perfect for them.
A really good way to end this story.
I had a amazing time reading this story. Thank you so much for writing it and good luck with your future stories. I would surely be there to read them.
Love, Kiki
Author's Response: Oh my gosh, THANK YOU!! Your reviews honestly make me smile so big. It was really hard to write the epilogue for several reasons. One, it made me sad to let the story go, and two, it was hard to wrap things up without it seeming too contrived. I wanted the characters to get the endings they deserved though, and I'm so happy that you enjoyed the ending and liked my ideas! It always feels good to have writing appreciated. I put in a lot of hours and love while I was writing this and I'm so happy that you had a good time reading it. Thank you so much, Kiki! You're so lovely. <3
Date: 08/06/13 09:27 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Hi dear.
I'm sorry - and frustrated- I couldn't read this and leave you a review sooner. My life was a bit hetic those last monthes... Now I'm in holidays and I finally can read it!!!!!!!!!
- Tom and Bill fall in an easy routine.. But being too much together could become a problem since Tom can't find a true peace of mind after all they went through
Thank god, Bill is a great therapist and understands what his lover needs, what holds him back. Tom is in a unsettling, new, relaxed situation where he thinks he's below Bill.... Not true but when you're trouble, everything is deformed
- Tom needs to let his father go... And because of Bushido he couldn't do it when Gordon was alive...
But Otis gives Tom a new light on his fathe's behaviour. Even if it doesn't excuse what he did, it allows his son to better understand... to forgive???
- The scene in the cemetary... I saw it coming. It's a bit cliche with the blue bird... but so strong and necessary for Tom to trully move on.
- Gus.... always so weird and cute.
- The letter was less an ordeal than I feared. Gordon didn't made a 180°... but he just told the truth to his son for once. It doesn't change the past... but allows Tom to finally build a future. The challenge of having his own shop is perfect for that.
- There a sappy moment with Bill... But they're back on tracks for a better life together with nothing holding them back anymore.
Nothing??? Maybe not since there's still an epilogue.
Let's see this at once!!
Love Kiki
Author's Response: Hi sweetie! I'm sorry I took a bit to get back to you. I'm happy you got holidays and got to relax! Thank you so much for taking the time to come back and read.