Date: 11/15/12 12:33 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
OOOOOOOOOOH AMAZING chapter, I love love love it. Beautiful. Please update really soon again. I need to read what happens after Bill's fight xD you know... the sex. ME LIKEY :D !!! I love when Bill said; "fuck me" and Tom was like; "I plan to" LOLOLOL, that had me going. Great, I could ramble on forever about this, but yeah... I love it and I hope you'll update really quickly, but no pressure... but a little bit, but not too much... we want a decent chapter like all the ones you've written so far... so not too much pressure, but a little. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Thanks for the lovely chapter.
Author's Response: I enjoy your rambling a lot so please, feel free to ramble forever to meeee. :D Thank you sooooo very much! I'm so happy to have you as a reader and this review made me smile super big. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and that you're excited for the next! I will update as soon as I can and still give you a good chapter, I promise you. A little bit of pressure is good for me! Hehe. You're cute. Thank YOU for reading and for sharing your thoughts with me! :)
Date: 11/15/12 09:45 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Eep!! I can't for the dang fight! You got me on edge about it xDD!!
Author's Response: PUMPKIN PIIIIIEEEE! Helloooo! I'm gonna write tonight so pray for my inspiration to produce good stuff. If it does, I will update tomorrow or Saturday. :D I'm glad you're excited! <3
Date: 11/15/12 08:33 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
I LOVED IT !!! as always.. I mean.. I really frikkin LOVE IT! :) I just hope you wont make it too bad for them. I really like how Tom is opening up to Bill, and how Bill gets taffer. Also I think the sexual tension between them is magicall. I am sitting here all asgdfaghdfagdfah *__* see you soon *kisses* and congrats on the featuring of the Fic ;)
Author's Response: THANK YOU!! You loving it makes me want to write more of it. I'm going to try my best to make it manageable for them, even when stuff gets crazy. The tension is the most important part of this story so I really appreciate your compliment on it! It's hard to keep it there when two hot guys just want to sex each other up, hehe. Thank you so much for the congrats! I really hope you like what's coming next, sweetie. :)
Date: 11/14/12 10:27 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
sdjakldjsdha HOt HOt end!!!!!!!! XD
OMG They are so cute !!!!!!!
i really love how you write their relationship !!! *---* is so sweet and intense
OHGOTT all the feelings!!!!!!!
in the past chapter i thought the problem with Knox was going to be worst i was so scared!!!! thanks to the lord Tom knew how to deal with it XD!!!!
OMY this part makes me so scared
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"“I promise,” Bill nodded with a creased brow, pondering over Tom's words. “I won't let it take me over. There's no way.”"
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makes think Bill is going to change in a bat way after some time T-T ..but hope no hahaha
dying again for the next chapter!!!!!! Thank you so much!!
Author's Response: You are BEYOND ADORABLE. Holy cow. I'm so happy to have you as a reader now! Thank you for all of the wonderful compliments. I couldn't make the Knox thing be too much of an issue. These boys already have to deal with so much. :/ Yaaay for Tom knowing what to do!
Date: 11/14/12 10:24 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
I'm sure Bill would love nothing more than to fuck Tom up. As would most of the people reading this. Wait... did I take that out of context?
So I've been on a Muse kick lately, The 2nd Law to be more exact. I know a lot of people hate it, but I love it. Now that I know that THE FIGHT is coming up, I have visions on Bill dodging and weaving and kicking serious ass to the song 'Survival'.
Author's Response: Ohh, you took it in precisely the context that I think ALL of us are taking it in. :D
Date: 11/14/12 10:16 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
*sits here and waits* The next update better come soon, 'cause I gotta go to work and stuff. I mean, I'm just sayin', alright?
Author's Response: Girl, I'm on it! If all goes well, tonight will be spent writing awaaaaaay. I won't make you wait, I know you gots stuff to do. n.n
Date: 11/14/12 07:47 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
I am still really enjoying this, but am hoping there is some sort of ending where they are together and don't have to fight anymore. Despite that I am looking forward to Bill's first fight.
Author's Response: I'm a big believer in happy endings so don't worry about these two. It will be difficult at times but they will be able to be together in the end. :) Thank you so much for reading and I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Date: 11/14/12 07:00 pm Title: Chapter One
Intriguing first chapter. I'm hooked. =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm happy you're here reading and I really hope you enjoy, love. :)
Date: 11/14/12 05:50 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
I can't with Tom. Bill should really lend him to me for a night, or two, or forever.
Just like Tom I hope Bill isn't going to change too much. Or at all, that would be perfect :P I can't imagine him being all Bushido'ish or something, lol.
And I totally can't wait for the fight! And... Bushido finding out. Seriously, I'm sure it's gonna be horrible but I really want to know his reaction and how will they handle it! *freaks out*
Author's Response: I'm sure you and Bill could work out some kind of sharing schedule. ;)
Date: 11/14/12 05:16 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
njerhtekqrwjrm, omfg, perfect chapter!!
Author's Response: Reaaaally?? Thank you sooo much! I'm happy you enjoyed. :)
Date: 11/14/12 04:09 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
hopefully what Bill "planned" will work and they won't be caught again :) well, and they work together pretty well with so-called relationship and fighting :)
Author's Response: I hope so too, love! I'm glad you think they work well together. n.n I think they're getting along smashinglyyy. Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to leave me this review! I really appreciate you for that. <3
Date: 11/14/12 03:36 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
OMG! I absolutely love Tom! He's so sweet and caring and an absolute hard-ass lol I love rough and tough Tom, but I love that he has a sweet side as well! Bill is good for him =D
I am dreading the moment when Bushido finds out about them. I can only imagine how horrible it's going to be. Although, I think seeing Bill take care of Tom if and when that happens is going to be awesome!
YAY!! I am so looking forward to the fight! (And the aftermath lol) I can't wait! I'm literally on the edge of my seat, in anticipation for what's to come!
Author's Response: Well hellooooo to you! So great to see you here again, love. I'm so glad you love Tom. I'm really enjoying letting his sweet side come out for you all. But yes, he is definitely tough when he needs to be. :D
Date: 11/14/12 01:39 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
kajsdhaksjdhasjd Hello!!! New reader here *---*!!! I'm so glad your Fic was featured!! congratulations !!!
I really loving it just started reading it yesterday and i couldnt stop just to sleep hahaha
i really love your Bill and Tom they are amazing so sexy cute funny alksdjasdk and hot hot!!!!
this last chapter was so cute and hot!! xD!! full of love, and sweet feelings aksdjasdkja OHGOTT!!!! dying for the next one!!!!!
congratulations again!! and thank you so much for share it!!! *----*!!!
Author's Response: Welcome! I'm so happy you decided to give my story a chance. And thank youuuu! I am super happy that it got featured. *-* I am delighted that you're enjoying it a lot so far. You are just adorable! Thank you for taking the time to read and leave me this fabulous review. I appreciate it a lot. Thanks again and I hope you like what's coming next!! <3
Date: 11/14/12 01:37 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Still no sex XD. I never thought I will say it but... I want the fight! Now :D
The chapter was perfect. I laughed, I smiled, I was worried and I liked it all. I love the conversations. They are very realistic, just like the characters, what means that you did a great job, again.
I don't know what else to say. There were parts that I more than loved.... /Introduction to Tom's dick :D/, Gustav is an awesome friend, I must smile when I read his sms, I was wrong, no ass kicking :D The last words of the chapter were very well chosen... Picture of a predatory smirk on Tom's usually neutral face makes me want to have next chapter asap. And maybe I am a weirdo but they fighting against each other is beyond sexy XD.
LOVED IT. Thank you. And I am kind of hoping next chapter will be here soon. :))
Author's Response: Nope! If I had put the sex in the chapter would have been soooo long. Not that it's a bad thing but, I needed to split it up. I want the fight too! It's gonna happen. :D
Date: 11/14/12 01:29 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
aw! they're so sweet together! now i hope bill doesn't get beat up too badly cuz he's got some sweet lovin' coming his way. actually if he does get beat up bad, the thought of tom being all sweet and gentle with him...aw dayum!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, sis! I think whether he gets beat up badly or not, he's going to get lots of attention from Tom. :D It will be good, I promise. I'm happy you enjoyed!
Date: 11/13/12 09:46 am Title: Chapter One
Holy smokes!?!? You were featured!! Congratulations! Sorry I didn't notice earlier, I was reading from my phone, and I have Tracked stories bookmarked, so I didn't see the honepage. *HUGS*
Author's Response: YES, I AM FEATURED! I was so surprised and I am so delighted by it. You guys are all awesome. Thank you so much! *squuuuuuezes*
Date: 11/13/12 12:09 am Title: Chapter One
Yes, yes. Kittens too. Possibly even cuter than puppies.
*chuckle* well, with a username like LadyX how can I not use such a precocious adjective now and then?
*huggles* I believe you wouldn't put them through anything they couldn't recoup from. Keep up the fantastical work.
Author's Response: You are so lovely and sweet! You are quite right, I should expect precocious things from you. n_n You will have another update coming your way soooon! <3
Date: 11/12/12 05:26 pm Title: Chapter One
hgjdfg AAH I'VE MISSED YOU SO MUCH OK~ *offers you cookies as well, and throws assorted fluffy animals at you*
Author's Response: I've missed you tooooo! You adorable girl, you. *collects the gifts happily* You're the sweetest. <3
Date: 11/12/12 05:03 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
I swear all of your fics are just perfect and pretty and uhdgsfDFGH~ I just love how adorable Tom is to Bill and the sexual tension between them and aaah I can't wait for more! *sits down with tub of ice cream and eats it whilst waiting for the next update*
Author's Response: Do you even know how cute and lovely you are? *-* Just, thank you so much! It's so great to see you and I appreciate your reviews more than you know. *grabs a spoon and steals some ice cream* Oh.. I suppose I should go write, eh? :D Thank you so much!
Date: 11/12/12 04:50 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Omg, this story is SO DAMN GOOD ASDFGHJKL;
Tom is totally perfect! A bad boy with a soft side, omg CAN I BE BILL, PLEASE?
And congratulations on being featured, you definitely deserved it!!!!
Author's Response: THANK YOU SO MUUUCH! You can most certainly be Bill! I'll just talk to him and arrange it. :D Eeeep, thank you so much, love. I am so excited and thrilled about the future! It's all thanks to amazing readers like you. <3