Date: 12/10/12 07:37 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
Best day ever when I see an update from you!! I don't think I say it enough, but I absolutely love this fic!!!
It was so cute how awkward they were with each other the morning after. And Tom is such a sweetheart, always worrying about hurting Bill. I want a Tom!! lol
I swear there were so many 'awww' worthy moments in this chapter, I just don't know where to begin.
Even though there wasn't a lot of action in this chapter, I do feel like a lot happened. Bill and Tom are still getting to learn and get to know one another and I think chapters like this are sometimes the best. Not a lot of action, but I definitely feel like I learned more about both of them.
You know I love this story and you're writing and that is not going to change! Thanks for the lovely update! I hope you have a great week, hun!
Author's Response: You are seriously so sweet! Once again you've put a huge smile on my face with your review. :)
Date: 12/10/12 06:53 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
good that now is alright between them after all the worries and Bill's uncomfortable questions. Well, even if Tom sometimes acts like really asshole, he knows how to be sweet too :) Hmm...and Gustav....i can't wait for more
Author's Response: Tom still isn't totally sure of how to act around someone he likes, I think. xD Good thing he has a sweet side. Thank you so much for reading! I'm really happy that you're excited for more, love. :)
Date: 12/07/12 11:32 pm Title: Chapter One
SPEACHLESS!!!!!! I love this story so much!!!! Your such a talented writer! While I was reading it was like I was there witnessing it all, which I AWESOME but kinda creepy. But I can't wait to find out what you have in store for these boys next.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so so much! Your compliments mean a lot to me and made me smile soooo big. I'm really glad that you felt like you were there while you were reading it! That's exactly what I hope for when I'm writing. :D I will be updated in the next couple of days so you won't have to wait long. Thank you for reading and for this awesome review! :)
Date: 12/03/12 04:09 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Can it even get any better than this? This was an absolutely amazing chapter and Tom/Bill sex was incredible too ... so full of everything... so full of meaning. Loved it!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! Reviews don't get much better than ones like this. I'm really happy you enjoyed it and I hope you like what's coming next. :)
Date: 12/02/12 06:11 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
UNF UNF UNF! Finally - the fight and sex fterwards. There was just something sop forbidden, kinky and hot in a way the fighting turned them both on, how touching the wounds was part of it. So, so hot. ;)
I realy liked this chapter and I like the way you wrote their sex scene as well. It was somehow fresh and very hot.
Oh, what wiull happen? Idk. But I need to fimd out! :D
Author's Response: I'm sooo glad you found that hot! I know some people think blood and things are gross when it comes to sex, but I think it can be hot when it's done delicately. :D
Date: 12/02/12 05:33 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
*______________* jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiminy
Author's Response: Haha, that was one of the coolest reviews ever. Thank you! :D
Date: 12/01/12 10:51 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Ahhhhhhhhhhhh Just saw this story on my recent Updated Stories, and then saw is was by Mohanrocks. So i HAD to read, there was just no way i couldnt. So basically i started reading it and didnt stop until i came up to the last updated chapter, so yeah, i missed precious sleep. But who cares, this story was better than sleep.
Author's Response: You are just awesome. I've missed seeing your cute username! You don't know how happy I am that you decided to read this story. I'm sorry that you missed sleep but I'm not sorry that you enjoyed what you were reading. Really, this review made me smile a lot. Thank you! I hope you like what happens next. I won't keep you waiting long. :D Thanks again, love. :*
Date: 11/30/12 07:23 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
AMAZING ... Totally worth the wait!!! Tom and Bill are perfect for each other. I really hope it'll be a happy ending for those two - after many many many more sexy chapters :D please!!! thanks for the update... I'm glad you didn't make a cliffhanger or something, I was worried you'd stop before the sex just to tease all your readers... I'M HUGGING THE SCREEN to hug you to tell you I'm so thankful you let the sexscene be in this chapter WITH Bill's fight... it was all very very very good :D but of course my favorite part was the last one... and when Bill and Tom fall asleep together and Tom's arms are wrapped POSSESSIVELY around Bill... I think Tom is really feeling something strong for Bill - and the same way around. I SO LIKE THAT!!!
Author's Response: I'm sooo happy you think it's worth the wait! I'm a big believer in happy endings, you should know. They will go through rough stuff but in the end it'll be happy. :D Thank YOU for reading. I couldn't leave you all hanging again. You've waited so long for it! I'm hugging the screen baaaack. :D I'm really glad that you enjoyed the chapter and all the parts. That means a lot! I like possessive Tom too. *-* I hope you like what's coming next. Thank you again for reading and leaving me this lovely review. <3
Date: 11/30/12 05:50 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
fsgdhjfDFG I AM A MESS OF EMOTIONS. Why do you do this to meeeee XD I really enjoyed this chapter, you're flawless, srsly. THE FIGHT WAS AWESOME OK AAAH I'M SO PROUD OF BILLI~ And the sexytimes oh my god hOW DO YOU WRITE IT SO WELL GFHGFD. I wub you and I wub this story and I shall wait excitedly for more of it :D *gathers ice cream and fluffy animals and prepares to camp out*
Author's Response: CUUUUUUTIE!!! Helloooo! I do this to you because I looove you. :D I'm so very happy that you enjoyed the fight and the sexytiiiiimes. You should give Bill a congratulatory kiss. He would like it. :D THANK YOU! I am always nervous about writing sex so I'm happy you enjoyed. I won't keep you waiting in your camp too long, I promise! *gives you some toppings for your ice cream and pats your head* I wuuuub you too. <3
Date: 11/30/12 01:43 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Excellent chapter...but then again, what's new :)
Author's Response: You're a doll. Thank you so much! I'm very happy you enjoyed. :*
Date: 11/30/12 03:09 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
*hugs*
Author's Response: *squeezes* <33
Date: 11/29/12 07:53 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Wow! You definitely exceeded all my expectations with this chapter! You normally do, but yeah, this chapter was wonderful!
I absolutely loved the fight! I'm glad you had it so Bill didn't come off winning right away. It seemed realistic and I could totally picture it happening. I felt like I was right there in the crowd, cheering Priss on lol
I have really no words to describe how much I loved the sex scene and everything else after the fight. It was brilliant and written so very well. I absolutely love your writing and you never cease to amaze me.
I love this story and I can't say it enough!
Author's Response: Your reviews light up my life! I think I've mentioned something similar to that before, but I do mean it. You are lovely! Thank you.
Date: 11/29/12 05:37 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
This was so worth the wait! And you don't even have to guess what i am doing right now; Creaming my pants, AGAIN! This is so awesome and i really, really, REALLY loved this. You are so great! I love you!
Author's Response: I'm so happy you think it was worth the wait!! You are so cute. xD YOU are so awesome, okay? I'm thrilled you enjoyed it so much. Hopefully I will have the next update for you soon! I love you tooo. :D Thank you!
Date: 11/29/12 05:32 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
moreeee where is the rest butterfly?? I liked it
Author's Response: You know it makes me very happy that you liked it. <3 I shall write more soon!
Date: 11/29/12 04:23 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Eeeeeeep! I'm sorry for not reviewing sooner! This chapter was so awesome buddy & I'm so proud of you for getting featured! Hugs & loves
Marissa
Author's Response: Ohhh love, don't be sorry! It's always great to see you here and reading. Thank you so much! It was great to be featured and know that people are enjoying. I'm happy you enjoyed the chapter! <3
Date: 11/29/12 03:30 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
OH MY GOD *flails all over the room* That was perfect! The fight, the sex, everything!! And Gustav is totally amazing :D And Bu... He's not as stupid as he seems to be, damn.
I totally can't wait for the next chapter! :D
Author's Response: Look at how absolutely adorable you are!! Thank you sooo very much. I am happy that you enjoyed everything and that you like Gustav! He is so fun to write. Bu is a bit of a mystery at this point, eh? More will be revealed soon. ;) I will update as soon as possible for you. Thanks, again! :D
Date: 11/29/12 11:40 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Hiiiiiiii :D
You have no idea how happy did you make me in the morning. Because the only thing I love more then updates of my favorites stories are LONG updates of my favorite stories. When I saw that number I was like omg, awesome.. and omg too long to read it all at home... Lol. So I read a little part of this chapter at work too, when I had time. :)
You did an excellent job, really.
I was soo nervous when Bill prepared himself for the fight, I could feel my insides dancing wildly and when Bill began fighting and was lying there and thinking that he is going to lose that fight, I was on the edge of a breakdown. But then he looked at Tom and I knew it will be okay. I could breathe deep again. That part of the chapter was awesome, making me feel things, what only good novels do (like... Hunger games ;)). I like that suspense, my body not very much but the reader in me thinks it was so goood, seriously.
Then there was the other half of the story, after fight. Sexy as hell. I am sorry for Bill and his injuries, but thanks god his teeth are untouched so I am happy and can't wait for a tender Tom to appear in the next chapter, because I know Tom would feel bad about Bill's sore body and he would like to help him somehow, I don't know, maybe massage for tired muscles will help. :D
But back to this chapter. They had sex, finally :) It was perfectly written... Before, during, after,... everything. And do you know what was the hottest there for me? Tom and his passionate and tender side.... When he said “Hands and knees.. Now." I was blushing even behind my ears, I am sure. I just want to say, that this chapter was great. Thank you, Kirsty :)
PS: I just don't know how Bill will explain all the bruises....O.o
Author's Response: Sweetie! I have to say, your reviews are always such a joy to read. I love how detailed and honest you are in them. I think you could tell me you hated a chapter and I would still be happy just to have a review from you. xD Byyy the way, I think my chapters are going to be longer from now on. Stuff is happening and the stuff needs all the words!
Date: 11/29/12 10:20 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Holy wibbuh wuhbbah *explodes*
*puts self back together* okay, seriously you have nothing to be nervous about. This was fantastic.
I'm glad Bill had a chance to go be a normal college student, however briefly, and had some 'za with the bros. Bee tee dub, poor Larry, puberty is rough *pouty face*
I am worried about the whole Bushido thing. You really haven't put too many indicators in...but I just am getting a major skeazy feeling from him in this one. I don't want him getting any ideas about using his new little 'robot' for a different kind of fight. If you know what I mean.
The fight was very well written. It was kinda typical movie fight scene printed out. But it worked, and I had a much easier time picturing Tom getting up than I do in other similar situations I've read.
As I've said before, I love TLC!Tom, and it was beautiful here too, both before and after the sexy time.
Soo...Bill mentioned knowing he can't keep this a secret forever...but how long does he think he can now that he's actually started fighting? He's pretty well marked, Gustav's gonna see.
Oh, and, I love you. You wrote 'I couldn't care less' which is the right way, its a real pet peeve of mine when people say/write 'I could care less' when they mean 'couldn't'
Fantastisch.
Author's Response: Ahhhh, thank you for helping to calm my nerves! When a lot of big stuff happens in a story I always feel inadequate to the expectation! So that means a lot, love.
Date: 11/29/12 06:12 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Aw I'm exactly like Gustav when it comes to coffee! lol
Words can't describe how much I loved this chapter :)
Author's Response: I totally am too! We are coffee soulmates then. Is that okay with you? :D I am so happy you loved the chapter. Thank you for reading and for leaving this lovely review. <3
Date: 11/29/12 02:56 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
oh oh oh i love this chapter!! Update soon!!
Author's Response: Thank you, thank youuu! I will update as soon as possible. :)