Date: 12/14/12 03:00 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
I just started reading your story about 2 days ago and I wanted to wait until I got to the most recent chapter before I commented. This story is so intriguing and I would have never imagined Bill to become a fighter! I really like their ~unspoken love~ for each other but we all totally know it's there. I really hope Gustav will understand. I couldn't bare to see him turn his back on Bill D: Hopefully he loves him too much to do that.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and for leaving me this lovely review! It makes me so happy to hear that you are intrigued by my story and that you've enjoyed what you read. We totally know their love for each other is there. :D I won't keep you waiting too long before you find out how Gustav reacts! Thank youu. :)
Date: 12/13/12 01:32 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
I can't wait to see what Gus is gonna do.
Author's Response: I won't keep you waiting very much longer!
Date: 12/13/12 12:40 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
I just....... duh.
Author's Response: Girl!!! I've missed you! I'm so glad you're still reading. <3
Date: 12/12/12 09:48 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
I'm glad Tom and Bill were ok around each other! :3
I think Gustav will flip out. It's an understandable reaction.
Author's Response: Hello, again!!! I'm glad too, phew. There was awkwardness but they will be just fine. :D
Date: 12/12/12 09:42 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
What an intense chapter! I'm so glad Bill won and took strength in Tom! Love gives such strength~ I imagine if Tom or Bill were ever threatened, the other would respond with such ferocity that it would eliminate the threat completely.
And then sex! Owie... I hope Bill and Tom don't acquire brain damage over the course of all this fighting and stuff.
Hopefully (omg what am I saying) the fighting only stays physical. It would be sad if anything were to happen to Bill and Tom's relationship, like that talk about Tom's rep. :O
p.s. I love you
Author's Response: Howww did you know that I was responding to reviews right now? O_O This isn't the first time one of your lovely reviews has popped up while I'm answering others! You read my kiwi mind, bee. I like that. And yep, love does give you strength and belief in yourself. A reason to fight for, in other words. Tom and Bill in real life would definitely be like that.
Date: 12/12/12 08:31 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
Sooo flippin fantastic
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really happy you like it. :)
Date: 12/12/12 12:28 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
EEEEEEEEEEEP. ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT. LITERALLY.
Author's Response: DON'T FALL OFF, GIRL. But seriously, can I offer you a pillow to sit on or a beverage to make you more comfortable? :D I won't leave you hanging for long, I promise!
Date: 12/11/12 11:55 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
Yea...I'm pretty curious about Bushido's cut myself...but hey, Bill got a better proportion than I expected, for his first time out, and based on what Bushido was saying
Oh dear...big fight in Tom's near future. I'm worried now. I didn't realize Tom was that good. Undeafted, pretty damn impressive.
I'm so glad Bill is confessing to Gustav, but daaaamn Tom had me worried for a minute there.
Fantastic work!
Author's Response: I think Bill made out pretty great! I wish I could be handed that much money on one occasion. But I can't imagine that happening unless I got into something illegal..which is what I try to avoid, haha.
Date: 12/11/12 09:43 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
“Why do you look so tense? -- I don't know about you, but *I* was super tense in starting this chapter O___O I'm agitated again just skimming it for the purposes of writing a review! XD
Oh, I too liked it that it looked like Bill would lose. If he was on top the whole time it'd be like one of those Disney movies where ~nothing~ can go wrong XD (I *am* a Disney fan besides, though)
I enjoyed reading about Tom caring for Bill afterwards. Not even in a sexual way, but just in an "aww" way :D
And of course the sex scene was good, lol. Short, but I think that was to be expected with how wound up they were over each other, hehe! ;)
Uh oh @ Tom's "heart-breaking reputation". But that's before he met ~Bill~, am I right?? =P *goes into YA romance novel mindset*
Author's Response: I'm sorry it made you feel tense! But at the same time I'm glad that the characters' feelings were able to permeate through the text to you.
Date: 12/11/12 09:25 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
Lol, I actually don't think Bu's being greedy. Three grand for a fight is pretty good, I think. But then my family's pretty broke and anything over a hundred sounds like a *lot* to me XD
Oooh, they're gonna tell Gustav! I think he'll stand by his friend after several minutes of spazzing. Or maybe even the rest of the night.
I can't believe I never got around to reviewing the last chapter D: I'll do that now.
Author's Response: That's A TON of money! I wish I could pocket that much. But he took a lot more than Bill got, so that's why eyebrows were raised. Since the dude didn't fight. Anything over a hundred is a lot to me too!
Date: 12/11/12 05:21 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
BABY YOU AND YOUR UPDATES LIGHT UP MY WORLD LIKE NOBODY ELSE
*pushes Bill away, grabs Tom and runs away* OK BYE
No, but seriously. Tom is absolutely perfect, I think I've already said that but I feel like once is not enough. XD
Oh oh oh and Gustav! I can't wait for his reaction! I'm sure he's going to be mad or something but well, Bill will use his charm and not for long, right??? I really hope he's not going to turn his back on him... And Idk but I also have a feeling something bad is going to happen during Tom's fight ;_; Let me be wrong!
Author's Response: THE WAY THAT YOU WRITE REVIEWS GETS ME OVERWHELMED :D
Date: 12/11/12 03:22 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
awwwwwww so sweet and beautiful... I LOVE TOM AND BILL'S RELATIONSHIP... I hate Bushido in this and I hope he doesn't end up hurting Tom or Bill :'( I mean, I guess he will, but I just don't want Bushido to ruin everything, so I of course sincerely hope that they will have their happy ever-after and that Bushido will get kicked and that he won't truly hurt or kill Tom or Bill!!!
Author's Response: Yaaaaay, it's you! I love seeing reviews from you. I'm happy you are liking Bill/Tom together. :D I don't like Bushido much either.. But there will be some answers in the coming chapters of why he is the way he is. I promise that I will let Tom and Bill have their happily ever after! Even if they have to deal with stuff along the way that's not great. Thank you so much for reading and for the review, love! <3
Date: 12/11/12 02:15 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
God, Bushido is going on my nerves very successfully. I can't stand this guy...
And he is planning a fight for Tom... Why doesn't he fight he? I would like to see his arrogant ass beaten, I would enjoy that scene. But I know myself and so probably I would end feeling sorry for him what is the last thing I want haha.
Soooo. The morning after the night together was... awkward. I don't know what did I expect, maybe some sweet morning kisses, or Bill waking up to see that Tom was watching him sleep... :D But somehow your scenario is much more real and believable, because even if I want to see loving and caring Tom, there is so much inside his heart, his head, that we don't know and he is still a mystery. It would feel wrong to see "soft" Tom so suddenly. I would like to know more about him, to understand better. What happened to his mother? Why is he so afraid of his father, when he is much more stronger then him?
Plus he can cook. I think this changes everything. HE CAN COOK. I want him. I love Tom. Bill is so lucky. :D
And I am afraid to ask... but I am going to ask lol. What will happen in the next chapter? I am quite worried now.
Thank you for the update
Author's Response: I know, sweetie, he's a pain in the ass. But it is my goal in the next chapter to unveil a bit of why he is the way he is.
Date: 12/11/12 10:28 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
awesome chapter!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I hope you like what's coming next. :)
Date: 12/11/12 03:09 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
OMG :) I loved this chapter! A perfect end to my birthday & my finals
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And happy late birthday! Congrats on finishing the semester, too. I know that's a really stressful week! I hope everything went well. :)
Date: 12/11/12 02:23 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
um...this is a little scary. I've been really busy lately, so it hasn't crossed my mind, but as I was walking somewhere today, I thought about this story and briefly wondered when there'd be more and what would happen. are we twins?!? how did you know I wanted this today? haha. anyway, AHHHHHHHHHHHH. cliffhanger?? honestly, you people kill me. but yayyyy, kissy sexyness and ooey gooey tom/bill. :) uh oh, shit's hitting the fan soon, or is it a sort of good crazy? probably not, but don't tell me xD I'll wait
Author's Response: I've been trying to figure out a way to break this to you gently, but yes, we are twins and we were separated at birth. Because of that, you will always know when I'm going to update. A pretty cool skill, yeah? :D Hehe, seriously, it's awesome that you even thought about my story. That makes me all happy. Sorryyyyy to leave you with a cliffhanger, but I am going to start working on the next chapter tonight! I'm happy you found some things you liked in here. :) I will keep it a mystery if the shit that hits the fan will be good or not. xD I'll have to shut off our twin bond so I don't reveal any secrets! Thank you so much for reading and for taking the time to review! :)
Date: 12/11/12 12:54 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
EEEE!! haha what a lovely surprised to come home to tonight! I can't wait for Gustav's reaction to this whole mess!! Amazing as always Kirsty
Author's Response: It makes me so happy that you get excited when I update!! Thank you so much, buttercup. I am going to work on the new chapter starting tonight so hopefully you won't have to wait long! :*
Date: 12/10/12 10:22 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
great. just great. i get over worrying about bill's fight, now i have to worry about tom's. thanks a lot!
and i'm gonna be optimistic...no really, i am...and say gustav will have his back. sure he'll be concerned or worried and maybe a little pissed that bill put himself in that situation, but i think he'll be around when/if bill ever needs him.
and woo hoo for shower shenanigans!
Author's Response: Ohhhhh sis. I'm so sorry. xD But you know I believe in happy endings, so don't worry too much. I think your assessment on Gustav is pretty spot on. I'm going to work on the chapter tonight and we will see what comes out! Thanks for reading, as always. I knew you'd love those shower shenanigans.. Perhaps that's why you were thinking about this chapter in the shower!!! :D
Date: 12/10/12 09:39 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
And so the plot thickens... Muahahahaha. Loving it as always :)
Author's Response: Indeed, it does!! Ahh, it's so great to see you here. I'm really happy you're enjoying it. Thank you so much! :)
Date: 12/10/12 08:11 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
Oh, the suspense.. Update!!!!! :D
Author's Response: I won't leave you hanging for long, I promise!! Thanks so much for reading. :D