Date: 12/19/12 09:41 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
*hugs Gustav* Ohhh, there's the over-protective Gusti-bear ich liebe. *pets his horny little head* Sex. The ultimate motivational tool. Lol
Wow...I really didn't see that coming, with Bushido having a little girl, and not being a dead beat dad. And Bill's reaction seeing them! It was wonderful! I love how protective Bill was. It was so sweet.
Wonderful work! I can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: Awww, you popped up right when I was responding to reviews! So you get an immediate response because you're awesome. :D Gusti loved the pets and hugs from you.. Maybe a little too much. Hehe. Sex and food are what this guy's all about, it's true! Well, and friendship. u.u
Date: 12/19/12 04:03 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
I see Bu has some nice nicknames now lol. I quite like it. :). He is so confusing. I understand that he wants the best for his daughter but what is he doing... The risk that some of "his" guys can be badly hurt or even killed in the worst scenario... sorry, but I can't feel sorry for him. And what he told Bill about Tom's next fight... My blood was boiling.
Gustav is the opposite. Cute and protective, what I love in characters. True friend, he supports Bill even when he don't like what he's doing.
And Tom.... I can see the little changes in his attitude. He is joking, talking about his emotions, that he missed Bill and that he wanted to sleep with him. Awww. I liked this very much. Bill is helping him a lot I see ;)
The final part of this chapter was so perfectly written, I enjoyed it very much. Because you know... you are very good with words. That little moments when you write something and it totally changes the atmosphere in the best way possible - it makes me smile... I LOVE it. Like.... Blowjob in the morning, or Gustav eating nachos or with the jelly on his shirt. Or Bullshito omg haha. It was awesome. I adore you. Thanks for making another morning beautiful :)
Author's Response: I think the nicknames are rather fitting, hehe. I know he's confusing. He's got a daughter and he's trying to be a good dad, but that doesn't make him a good person and it isn't my goal to make you think that he is. He's a jerk, through and through. His daughter is just the little piece of humanity that he has left.
Date: 12/19/12 11:09 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Ssomething tells me that they will fight against eachother, or something since Bushido said that I would be Tom's toughest fight. Cant waitto se :)
Author's Response: I like the way you think! Thank you so much for reading and sharing this review. I hope you continue to enjoy!
Date: 12/19/12 08:06 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
LOVE the chapter!!
Author's Response: I'm so happy to hear that! Thank you!!
Date: 12/19/12 07:21 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Oooh I love your story so much. Everything about this story. I'm actually happily surprised that you put a twist to this, letting us know that Bushido has a daughter. It actually makes him seem much more human and not so ice cold. He loves his daughter and is a part of her life and that's really cute, but it's also sad that he's taking advantage of Tom and I understand Bill's confused emotions and angry thoughts towards Bushido about that... It's so obvious that Bill loves Tom and Tom adores Bill too. I'm wondering if maybe Bill could use this knowledge (of Bushido having a daughter) to somehow get both himself and Tom out of this fighting... ? Hmmm.... Anyway: I loved Gustav's reaction when he found out about Bill fighting... And calling Bushido for "Buffalo" and "Bullshito" that WAS really great... and then Tom chuckled, but Gustav shot him a serious look and Tom then in response rolled his lips in... I can just freaking imagine all those things. This story is perfect. Thank you SO MUCH for sharing this story, your beautiful idea, inspiration and chapter with us - thank you for sharing ALL of your chapters of this amazing story with us... I'm so thankful and glad that I found this story. I will always love it! You're an amazing writer. I love the mix of romance, sexiness, action, suspense AND humor in this story. I could continue with this comment for minutes and minutes and minutes, but I'll end it with this: YOUR STORY IS SUCH A MASTERPIECE - love it. Absolutely love it. Keep up the good work! I'll look forward to the next chapters.
Author's Response: Okay, you should just know that this review seriously made me smile SO much. I love that you are so attentive when you're reading and you point out specific things that you liked in the chapter! That means a lot to me that you take the time to do that. Nothing means more to me than the story seeming real and making it possible for you to picture it as I see it in my head. So, thank you!!! I'm so thankful that I have you as a reader, and that you enjoy my updates. It makes me want to keep writing! So again, thank you for this AMAZING review and for just being a sweetheart and encouraging me. I hope you like what's coming next for these boys! <3
Date: 12/19/12 03:47 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
I was pleasantly surprised by Bushido's soft side :) he's a reglar human being just like all of them! Merry Christmas.
Author's Response: Underneath it all, we've all got things that make us human, even jerks like him. I'm happy it was a pleasant surprise for you! Thank you so much and Merry Christmas!
Date: 12/19/12 01:03 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Oh yeah, big surprise...Bu has a daughter!
I really look forward to your updates, this story is diff from anything else i've read and it's a nice change!
Author's Response: That is a huge compliment! Thank you so much. It means a lot to me to bring something fresh and original to the table. I'm happy you enjoy it!
Date: 12/18/12 11:40 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
>_> alright.
Author's Response: If anyone else wrote me this review, I'd be like, "Oh.. Maybe they didn't like it. :(" But you.. You couldn't have said it better. You know I heard it in your voice too. u.u
Date: 12/18/12 10:08 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
Wow :) this chapter was awesome! I feel like we know enough about the characters finally
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it and learned more things about the characters! They are all a bit mysterious, except for Gustav, of course. u.u He's pretty straightforward. Hehe. Thank you!!
Date: 12/18/12 08:56 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
seriously love gustav in this chapter! i mean it? can i take him home with me? *puppy eyes*
love the end scene, tom coming over just so he could (literally) sleep with bill. so sweet, even though he tries to hide it.
interesting about bushido's daughter. i'm assuming this little factoid will come into play later on?
Author's Response: Sure! I heard he's on loan for the holidays. The only requirement is that you feed him cookies and extravagant meals. His request, not mine.
Date: 12/18/12 08:03 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
Amazinggggggg *-*
Author's Response: Ohhhh, thank you so much!! :D
Date: 12/18/12 07:12 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
I was expecting Gustav to react much worse than he did, and I can't lie and say I wasn't surprised lol Maybe once it all sinks in more he'll let out all his anger!
And, who would have thought that Bushido a decent human being. Sure he's still an asshole, but I can see where he's coming from now. Doesn't mean I like him anymore, though lol I hope Bill keeps his secret to himself for now because who knows, it could definitely be something he could use to get out of the mess he's in!
I'm worried about Tom's next fight. I have a feeling he's going to get hurt. =/ I sure as hell hope not, though!
At least Bill's got his back! =D
I don't know what else to say other than this was a great chapter and I am loving this more and more each time I read an update!
MERRY CHRISTMAS to you as well, hunnie!! I can't believe it's next week already! It came so fast!
Enjoy and I hope Santa brings you everything you were hoping for and you have a lovely time with friends/family and eat lots of yummy food! =D xoxo
Author's Response: Hi! I think he definitely needs time to let it all sink in! He'll stick by Bill but that doesn't mean he won't be on his back about how stupid he thinks this all it.
Date: 12/18/12 06:19 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
Aww Bushido had a little daughter, so he is just a softie with a hard shell :3 and the last line just made me awwww all over the place "He would have Tom’s back, no matter the fucking consequences."
Author's Response: A softie deeeeeeep down in there. He definitely isn't a nice person to anyone but her, really. He could learn a tip from Tom about softening up! And yaaaay, I'm happy it made you awwwww. *-* I'm really glad you're enjoying. Thank you!
Date: 12/18/12 06:16 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
i like it. good that Gustav's reaction wasn't worst and that Tom was with Bill when he was telling him was so nice :) and of course his little sneak in to Bill's :)
that moment with Bushido - i wouldn't never thought of that
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you liked it and I'm relieved that Gustav didn't kick his roommate out or something. He knows that pushing Bill away right now would only make things worse. Surprise, Bu has a daughter! It definitely makes you think a bit more about him. Thanks for reading, love!
Date: 12/18/12 05:55 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
I want a Gustav for Christmas and that Leslie kick his father on the face while she is in the swing, can you? nein, too aggresive for that, right? or not..well i let you the idea, it's free because it's you and i love you
Author's Response: I will see if I can send you a Gustav for Christmas and I'll tell Leslie to kick her father. Deal? Just for you. Do you know why? Because I love you.
Date: 12/18/12 05:24 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
1stttt now I'm going to read ok?
Author's Response: I still think this is so funny and cute. xDD
Date: 12/18/12 05:24 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
mooooore please?
Author's Response: I gave you more like a good girl. u.u
Date: 12/16/12 03:01 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
Absolutely amazing! I have to admit that had it been a cuddly, sweet, tender, loving morning after I would have been disappointed. You wrote it just right, imho. Tom has obviously a lot of baggage and ridding of it may take some time. Slow approach is my favorite anywaaaaaaaaaaaaaay. So I am more than pleased.
Perfect chapter!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you agree with how I wrote the morning after. From some reviews, some people kind of expected them to just click and be perfect and cuddly the next morning. But you're so right, Tom has a lot of baggage and he's not used to this. It's not like just one night of sex, no matter how amazing it was, will change a person. He's already changed a lot from when he first met Bill! I love a slow burn too. *-* Thank you so much! It pleases me that you are pleased. n.n I love your reviews.
Date: 12/15/12 06:14 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
Awesome!!
Author's Response: Thank you!! But I think you're the awesome thing here. :)
Date: 12/15/12 05:37 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
Eek! I'm more than excited! From sweet, hot morning cuddling to a fight plans and harsh reality? Tom is going to fight? Ooooh shit, it's going to be in-ten-se, I just know it...And Tom has so much point on how Bill ne3eds someone from outside. I feel a bit desperate about their love, because I just don't know how they'd get out from this all eventually.
Really excellent chapter, very exciting!
Author's Response: This was such a lovely review! I'm really happy that you enjoyed the chapter and that you're excited for what's coming next. I know I see on twitter that you get stressed about keeping up with stories here, so I just want to thank you for taking the time to read mine and always giving me your feedback. That means a lot to me, okay? <3 Also, I am a big proponent for happy endings.. So I'm going to make sure these two get theirs somehow! I won't keep you waiting too long for the next chapter! :)