Date: 01/10/13 11:30 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
OH MY GOD THIS IS THE BEST CHAPTER SO FAR I FUCKING LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS AND UPDATING... AND SHARING THIS WITH US, THIS IS AMAZING, I CAN'T EVEN... HOLY SHIT, THIS IS FANTASTIC!!!
Author's Response: If you could see the grin on my face! Your review spam made my day soooo much better. Thank you so so much! I love you for enjoying my story and always saying such lovely things to me!! I'm gonna go respond to your other equally fantastic reviews now. :D
Date: 01/10/13 09:47 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
OMG! Total fangirl moment when I saw that you had updated!! WHOO HOO!! =D
I have so many thoughts running through my mind after reading this.
Man, Bushido always has to go and get under my skin. After the previous chapter of finding out he has a daughter and he is somewhat of a human being, I should have known he'd go and piss me off again lol
Good on Tom for pretty much telling Bushido what he had been thinking all along. It was smart, but probably not so smart when it comes to Bill. I can see Bushido lashing out at Bill now because he thinks he's all in love with Tom and he can't have that.
So much awesome-ness all in one chapter! Sex, an argument, and confessions of love. Man, this was good! I really enjoyed the argument. Might be weird, but I think they needed that!
I had this fluttery feeling in my chest when I got to the end and I just knew Tom was going to make a huge confession. I wasn't expecting that!
I cannot wait to see Bill's reaction to Tom's confession!
Once again, you definitely delivered, hun! =D
Author's Response: The fact that you fangirl over my story pretty much makes me smile soooo big it hurts. :D
Date: 01/10/13 08:50 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
awwwwwh! that's just tooo cute! yaaay! -flutter claps- i am soooooo excited to see what happens next! hehe, can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: I'm sooo happy you liked it! I will start working on the next chapter as soon as possible so I don't have to keep you waiting for long. Yay, thank you for reading and leaving your lovely thoughts! :*
Date: 01/10/13 03:39 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
OH MY DEAR GOD! You have no idea how much I am fangirling right now. THIS WAS THE BEST CHAPTER so far. I swear I am sitting here all shaky. The club scene - PERFECTION. The sex scene - PERFECTION. The Fight between them after - PERFECTION. and TOM's "I fucking love you."
Author's Response: I feel even more endeared to you now that we are following each other on twitter! What you said to Jules was so lovely and I'm really grateful to have you as a reader! Thank you for your thoughts.. They made me smile super big and goofy-like. :D And if I may add, this review was "perfection". Thank you! I hope you like what's coming next.
Date: 01/10/13 02:16 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Awww love the ending *_* I was hopeing that you would update today (or yesturday, since it is now 12:12 the 10th) GAH! I just love this story and would very much love if it has a happy ending as well! The twins on DSDS is awesome! I actually have 3 people that I like as contestants, Susan, Micha and Tim! Dieter is just blah to me right and Mateo is alright, I like his deep voice ^.^
Author's Response: Well, I'm glad I could update when you wanted me to! I feel bad for taking so long but it's literally impossible for me to write when I have my family all around me. Thank you soooo much! I'm so happy that you love this story, and I am rooting for a happy ending as well. n.n I love those same contestants, darling! Susan is especially amazing. Dieter is a jerk xD and Mateo's voice is very sexy. *-* Thanks again! <3
Date: 01/10/13 02:04 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
If it wasn't one o' clock in the damn morning, I'd call your ass over this one.
Author's Response: Girl, we just discussed this like an hour ago. u.u You're more than welcome to call me at any time of night and you know it!
Date: 01/10/13 01:11 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Shot just got real!
Author's Response: It totally just got real, girl! You better hang on tight. :D
Date: 01/09/13 11:29 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
wow. they both are definitely so crazy. having "sex" in the club...around all those people - definitely crazy hahah
damn, but that they were arguing about Tom said to Bushido. Good that he wanted protect them both but it somehow went like Bill is kinda sicko over him hahaha but come on...Tom loves him :)
i can't wait for next chapter :)
ps. DSDS rock with the twins :)
Author's Response: They know how to get wild, that's for sure. Hehe. Tom did his best to protect him and Bill but it definitely made Bill look a bit like a crazy.. xD However, at least he has Tom's love to help deal with that! Thank you so much for reading, I'm happy you enjoyed it. :) P.S. It totally rocks with them!
Date: 01/09/13 11:16 pm Title: Chapter Seven
I'm really starting to believe you're a stoner. You describe them SO well... o:
Author's Response: Haha, I'm actually not but I did live with a girl whose boyfriend was a TOTAL stoner! It was very amusing for me. :D
Date: 01/09/13 09:34 pm Title: Chapter Six
Holy shit. I think I'm falling in love with you. And this fic. And Bill. And Tom. Holy shieeeeet. It's amazing hoe addicting this is. c: Also, I wanna go to Hobbit's 4/20 party x3 -Huggles-
Author's Response: What a coincidence because I'm pretty sure I love you too! :D I'm really happy that you're addicted to this. I'm glad you are a reader! I would love to go to Geo's party. xD Hehe. Thank you!
Date: 01/09/13 09:32 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
and larry's back!
can't forget to comment on larry!
Author's Response: Yaaaay, welcome back Larryyyy!
Date: 01/09/13 09:25 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
*falls off chair*
THE FUCK???
as if the impromptu hand job didn't already have my chin on the floor, tom has to go and drop the L bomb??? first???
god! when tom started talking about making up a story for bushido, i thought oh hell, this is gonna be hella awkward and bill will storm out. but then...shit!
that's it. you've killed me. i'm dead.
excellent chapter!
Author's Response: *sits you back up* CALM YOURSELF.
Date: 01/09/13 09:23 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
THEY SAID THE L WORD OMG
Author's Response: LEMONDROP? Hehe, yes they did! Wheeeee, I love you!
Date: 01/09/13 09:12 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
Gustav is a good friend to care so much. Yay! Bill didn't get a concussion! I hit my head on a doorframe today and I also did not get a concussion.
Bushido still isn't the best guy for making people fight, but he is doing it for his kid. Idk though if the ends justify the means in this case. We'll see how Tom fares in his next fight. :X
p.s. Kiwi I'm packing and moving, and I was so sad to pack my pretty little deer away! I'll see it in a month or so after I unpack! ♥
Author's Response: Gustav might just be my favorite character to write in this whole story! He is just a sweetheart and I get to let out my random thoughts through him. Ohhh, bee! Is your noggin okay? Doorframes can be pesky!
Date: 01/09/13 08:54 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
OMGGGGGGGGGGGG aslkdasmkda *DEAD*
i fckin love the chapter and i love you aksmsk *----* so many emotions in this day ladmasd first DSDS and then this epic chapter
i just...i !!! GOsh the party thing dear good lord never thought about something like that kdjas hot as hell hahaha
and then xD ...kalsdkad it was just an amazing scene!!!!this part "Bill was being rewarded for his years of involuntary celibacy." hahahahha love it
and this one "Tom was pressed so close that Bill could feel his erratic heartbeat and it made the moment even more intimate and thrilling." *SIGH* love love that must be love!!
you wrote it so amazing that i feel like I'm flying in a dream hahaha
cant wait for the next one slakdma and i must read again!!!! thank you so much fckin awesome chapter!!!
Author's Response: Noooo, don't die on me now! We've still got a long way to goooo! But really, I'm so happy that I could add to your feels for the day. I made sure to wait until the show was over to update, haha. And there's something super hot to me about doing something dirty in a public place. u.u But hidden, obviously.
Date: 01/09/13 07:13 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
ekfn;djgnsfdlkjhslng.ndnfjkg ;-;
I wanna call you a bitch for ending it there, but I love you too much to do that. But omg wtf xD!! I really hope you update soon because maaaaaaaan I gotta see what happens next *O*
Love you Kirsty :D
Author's Response: Hahaha, you can call me a bitch! I would STILL love you. That's how great you are. :D I know it was a total cliffhanger buuuut I don't intend to keep you hanging there long. :D I'm happy you are excited for the next! :*
Date: 01/09/13 05:54 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
omg omg omg I looooove the chapter!! I had like, tears in my eyes when they started to fight ;_;
update soon, darling xx
Author's Response: Ohhhh, I don't want to make you cry! But I'm happy that it made you feel things. Thank you so much! I'm super glad that you loved it. I will update as soon as I can! <3
Date: 01/09/13 05:29 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
a ball of buzzing sexual energy xDDDD best part ever
Author's Response: Better than being a ball on the couch, like I was last night. xD I'm happy you liked it, nena.
Date: 01/09/13 05:09 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Loooove the chapter! My chest was aching while Bill was talking about his insecurity. And no dear, you are not the only one having problems with those resolutions...the show is awesome, that dieter guy is the biggest douche ever, neverthless it's still interesting seeing the twins so serious :D
Author's Response: I'm so glad we agree about resolutions and the show! Dieter is ridiculously rude and touches Bill way too much. xD But yes, I love seeing the twins in this new way. We've never seen them like that before! And I'm so happy that you enjoyed the chapter. Really. Thank you for your thoughts, love!
Date: 01/09/13 04:42 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Ok, I'm sorry this is going to be a completely pointless review but I don't know what else to say and I really want to write it so
OH MY FUCKING GOD ASDFGHJKL;
Author's Response: This was not pointless in any way! In fact, it was rather glorious. :D Thank you so much! I'm pleased that the chapter caused this reaction in you!