Date: 01/16/13 08:50 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
Now that my dear was again PERFECTION :) haha xD I loved it, every part of it. Of course I'd like to kick Bushido's ass but I just hope they will get out of this mess somehow!.
I'm so happy we follow eachother on twitter as well
Author's Response: You keep getting lovelier! I'm happy we are following each other too because I love your tweets and you seem like such cool girl. :) I'm very glad you enjoyed the chapter! That makes me want to get the next chapter to you as soooon as possible. I will help you kick Bushido's ass, okay? Doubleteam. :D Thanks so much, darling!
Date: 01/16/13 02:50 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
Ugh! So many thoughts are running around in my mind! D: What if something bad happens?! What if Tom finds out about the research from Bushido or someone else and reacts badly to it?! What if Bill gets attack and is badly injured? SO MANY THOUGHTS!!! ... So yeah, as you can see, I'm thinking far into the future xD And I believe Bushido may have a "soft" spot for Bill :3 A LOVE TRIANGLE!!!
Author's Response: All of your thoughts are totally valid and believable! As always, I will stay quiet so that you will be surprised by the next chapter.. But I promise I won't keep you waiting long to find out what happens! Thank you sooo much for reading and for this review! The love triangle is a veryyy interesting idea. n.n
Date: 01/16/13 12:39 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
I heart pickles.
That is all.
No. Really, Kir. I don't know how you do this. You are so talented and such a beautiful person, and it shows with each word you have placed here.
Author's Response: I heart YOU.
Date: 01/16/13 12:16 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
Typo, I think, here:Because I've got all shit I need
“I dunno, maybe he thinks you're gonna hold up a homemade sign that says, 'I heart Tom',” Tom cracked up and Bill swatted his shoulder.
“You totally ruined my idea,” Bill teased. “Except it was gonna be a homemade t-shirt that says it. With glitter,” Bill chuckled, his smile bright. -- Omg.. I laughed so much at that XDD
Tom was quiet for a moment before he whispered. “I don't care if I win or lose anymore.” -- SHIT! O.O No no no no no, that's his *drive* messed with now DX Bill's screwed!
Oh, and in the first half I totally thought -- irrationally, most likely -- that Bill was going to get hospitalized (or die) by Bushido and that some crazy climax would come out of nowhere and the fic would end XD So I'm happy that that didn't happen, lol.
"Big and mysterious fight"? I'm not worried. Well, unless -- and here's my conspirative mind again -- Bushido is going to test Bill's honesty by abruptly pitting him against Tom in a "If you *really* don't have designs on him, then beat him up!" sort of way. But that's probably not going to happen, hehe.
Author's Response: Ohhh, thank you! Yep, I left out "the".
Date: 01/15/13 11:17 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
Oh my goodness! What a wonderful chapter!! Not surprising that it was so wonderful because every single one is, but damn I loved this! If I could, I'd shout it from the rooftops; 'I LOVE ROUGH!' lol cheesy I know. People would probably think I was nuts and wonder what I loved rough, but yeah LOL
I think the information in this chapter was definitely needed. In more ways than one, Tom and Bill are a lot alike. I hope Bill talks to Tom about his past and his parents soon. I think that would do them some good.
I am nervous that Bu knows about Bill and his thesis. I have a feeling Tom is going to find out sooner rather than later and it isn't going to be by Bill. I can only imagine how hurt he will be by it.
Ugh, I seriously want a Tom! He is so damn cute and sweet and...perfect. Gah!
You always put the right amount of fluff, drama, sweetness and sexiness in your work. There were so many awe-worthy moments in this chapter and my heart melted during the ending when Tom and Bill were alone.
You are so wonderful and I have to say 'THANK YOU' for writing this wonderful fic! Whenever I see an update, a smile instantly takes over my face!
P.S I totally would love to see Bill with a sign that says 'I heart Tom' lol Or even a shirt! HAHA
Author's Response: You don't even know how much this made me smile and laugh! Haha, if you do decide to shout it from the rooftops, please record it for me and people's befuddled looks in reaction to it. It would be glorious. xD You're awesome and I'm SO happy you love my story!
Date: 01/15/13 10:47 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
...I kinda want a grilled cheese now...
*stomach makes a weird and embarrassing noise*
All that fighting is becoming really unhealthy for Bill :/ It was cool at first but I think that Bill can't take it anymore...or maybe he will be strong enough to continue, who knows eh!
I have no idea of what could happen next chapter, everything is just so unpredictable with you, I'm just wishing for some drama (just a bit though) and yes, yes I'm am that kind of person, I secretly enjoy it, when something turns bad. I can't help it hehe. As long as there is a happy ending xD
Author's Response: Sometimes there's just nothing better than a good grilled cheese, okay?
Date: 01/15/13 10:31 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
bitch, you made me cry!
bill's asshole family and tom being all sweet and bushido knowing about bill being in school and...augh! so much in this chapter! not the most exciting, my ass!
but now i'm afraid tom will find out about bill's "research" and think he was just using him or something...*wrings hands*
Author's Response: Sisterrrr, I'm sorry! :(
Date: 01/15/13 09:24 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
Awesome chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG i thought Bushido was going to hurt Bill really bad ;u;
pretty intense part dalskdmalsk
Gustav and Bill was just perfect!!!!! their dialogue reached to my heart and soul you have no idea!!!!!!
must love Gustav lakdakdma
and the end!!!!!!!!! omg they are so beautiful and cute knkasdnad omg lovelovelove
perfect perfect chapter!!!!!!!!!!! *-----*
Tom is going to win!!!!!! but is going to end up really hurt so Bill is going to take care of him but then maybe Bushido is going to see Bill there and is going to punish him sakmds so both are going to end up really injured in next chap hahha ok no!!! i really hope no :'D!!!!!
thank you so much!!!!!!!!!! for this chapter!! dying for the next one!! *u*
Author's Response: Ohhh, thank you! *-* I couldn't let Bushido hurt poor, defenseless Bill! But yes, pretty sure 'intense' is Bu's middle name. :/ But I'm happy that you liked the moment between Gustav and Bill. I really, really enjoy writing that dude.
Date: 01/15/13 07:59 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
fantastic!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! <3
Date: 01/15/13 07:00 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
Ohhh I think it would b an interesting twist if the person tom was fighting was someone bill knew from his past
Ohhhh or if George ended up at the fight nd seen bill cant wait for the next update
Author's Response: I like the way you think! Seriously, these are all clever ideas and for now, I will keep my lips zipped so you can be surprised. Buuut, I hope you'll read to find out what happens! Thank you sooo much!
Date: 01/15/13 06:55 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
Wooooooo updates!!!! I'm at the gym right now so that was perfect timing On your end for an update. But I'm freaking out whats going to happen when Tom finally finds out about Bills research!! Eeps!!
Okay time to get off. This damn bike! I luuuuurve you kirsty! And ignore any typos I'm peddling right now so it's hard to type xD
Author's Response: I planned it because I secretly know your gym schedule. ;) Juuust kidding. I'm not THAT creepy. :D Just the regular amount. I look forward to writing the part when Tom finds out because, well, I don't even quite know what will happen yet.. I usually don't until I start writing it, haha. Thank you so much for reading and I'm so proud of you for working out, girl! Props to you. <3
Date: 01/15/13 06:37 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
But before I go... I'm going to write one last message, because I WANNA BE THE 500TH COMMENT on this story. HECK YEAH!
Author's Response: You definitely deserved the 500th review! Thank you soooo much, sweetheart. You are so special. :)
Date: 01/15/13 06:36 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
What if maybe Tom will have to fight against Bill? If Bushido arranges a fight between Tom and Bill and they'll have to fight each other... hopefully, if that's true, then Tom won't hurt Bill... OH MY GOD, I CAN ALREADY IMAGINE THE SCENARIO IN MY MIND... That Tom and Bill try to fight each other but eventually Tom looks deeply into Bill's eyes with such sadness, and then he goes down on his knees and looks up at Bill, waiting for Bill to make a move... and Bill gets emotional and goes down on his knees too, even though people were yelling at Bill to hit Tom, but neither of them could hurt one another because they love each other too much. OOOHHHH... If Tom and Bill ever have to fight against each other, I hope it'll be like that... and I hope Bushido gets what he deserves in the end, because even though he's got a soft spot for his daughter, he's selfish as fuck. He only cares about earning money and by that using Bill AND Tom for it, and not give a shit about their feelings, so hopefully Tom and Bill will make it together and somehow not die from their love, because it's dangerous with Bushido and those other guys... TOM AND BILL!!! GO TOM AND BILL! I'm so in love with Tom and everytime I've read a chapter of yours, I imagine in my head that I'm the girl versoin of Bill in this story and that Tom is in love with me... and that he loves me more than anything/anyone in this world. :'S ohhh, this story makes me feel so emotional. I love it so much! You're the best writer ever. *hugs you* God, it's 1 o'clock at night here... Now, I'm gonna go to bed and dream of Tom. Sweet dreams.
Author's Response: You're not the only one who is speculating that! For now, I will keep my lips sealed because I want you to be surprised when you read the next chapter. I think it will even surprise me a bit when I'm writing it. It always does because I never have a clear plan about how the chapter will go until I start writing it and it comes out! But your idea is so lovely and you should know it. :)
Author's Response: You're not the only one who is speculating that! For now, I will keep my lips sealed because I want you to be surprised when you read the next chapter. I think it will even surprise me a bit when I'm writing it. It always does because I never have a clear plan about how the chapter will go until I start writing it and it comes out! But your idea is so lovely and you should know it. :) Bushido is definitely selfish and rude and everything that a person shouldn't be. All I can say for sure is that Bill and Tom will be happy in the end. In between now and then, a lot could happen. :/Aww,I love that you adore Tom that much. Feel free to imagine whatever you wish as you're reading! That's one of the best parts of reading a story. Really though, you are so amazing and I appreciate your support and reviews so much. They always put a huge smile on my face and I'm thankful for you! I hope you had sweet dreams of Tom. <3
Date: 01/15/13 06:31 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
I'm so in love with Tom's and Bill's relationship.
Author's Response: Then I've done my job right. <3
Date: 01/15/13 06:31 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
AAAAAAAAAH I LOVE THIS SO MUCH... GENTLE, SOFT, LOVING, WORRYING TOM... I love how he cares for Bill so much and Bill cares for Tom so much too! It's so beautiful.
Author's Response: It makes me so so happy that you love this story! I can't lie, this is my favorite kind of Tom to write. I was super hard for me to make him mean in the beginning. Happy he feels comfortable with Bill now!
Date: 01/15/13 09:00 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Update tomorrow? YES THAT'LL MAKE ME SO HAPPY!!! And I'm so excited now. And one more thing: You're not only an amazing writer, you're also very sweet. You actually take the time out to read comments and respond to all us people who love your story and you reply with such friendliness, I like you even more now and I'm so glad you actually replied to my comment and that I now know you'll update so soon. I'm SO happy about that!!! Many other writers don't even reply to their readers, so you're even more awesome for that.
Author's Response: Awww, youuuuu. I love talking to my readers! You are all the best and the idea of not responding to your comments is just out of the question. I know some writers don't do it, but I think it's important to show how much I appreciate you and all of the lovely things you say. You could easily just read and move on without leaving a review, so it makes me so happy that you take the time to do that! Expect the update later todaaaay. :D Thank you so much.
Date: 01/14/13 12:44 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
*girly squeal* Tom loves Bill!!! *runs around room with joy* Ahhh. When will you update this beautiful, sexy, intense, interesting, exciting, lovely story of yours?! :3
Author's Response: Yesssss, he loves him!!! I am planning on updating tomorrow. :D Does that make you happy? Because it would make ME happy if you're excited. Thank you so much for all the compliments and being an amazing reader! <3
Date: 01/14/13 12:34 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
Yeah, what happened to Tom's mother?! Tom didn't answer Bill there and I could understand it would be difficult for Tom to open up... but I wonder if we'll get to know about Tom's family more in the upcoming chapters... at least about what happened to Tom's mom.
Author's Response: That's something that you will definitely be finding out in the next few chapters! About both Tom and Bill's family. u.u
Date: 01/14/13 12:06 pm Title: Chapter Three
“I like pie,” Georg shrugged." LMFAO, Georg is hilarious!!! :D
Author's Response: Pie is good, okay? xD Awww, Geo is happy that you think he's funny! :D
Date: 01/14/13 11:52 am Title: Chapter One
Gonna read this story all over again until the next chapter comes up. Love this so much! :3
Author's Response: Why are you so awesome??? Really, I am so happy and like, big cheesy grinning over here because you love my story. Thank you!!