Date: 01/20/13 06:01 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
I really really REALLY hope you'll update tomorrow (Monday) I miss your story so much already it's crazy... seriously, if you'd made it into a book, I'd freaking buy it! I track several other stories but half a year has gone by and they still haven't updated their stories... they might have just given up on them or not wanted to anymore... You're the only writer who keeps regular updates and is in contact with the readers and stuff... it's amazing so we can talk with you and tell you what we really enjoy about your story and what we're excited about etc... and also to make sure that YOU are okay and that you've not left the story... because if there's one thing I hate, it's that people just LEAVE and don't even tell you that the story won't be finished... but you keep writing and posting and your chapters get more and more brilliant and you stay in contact with us and reply to all our comments and you're so sweet and kind and I guess I'm just trying to say that I like you very much...
Author's Response: I definitely will update on Monday! I'm not sure where you are from but I live in the US, central timezone and it'll probably be up around 3pm my time. u.u
Date: 01/19/13 05:37 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
I AM IN LITERAL TEARS HELP ME. That was SO intense, man, oh my god. I JUST WANNA HOLD BILL AND LOVE HIM AND PUT BUSHIDO IN THE NAUGHTY CORNER BECAUSE HE MADE HIM CRY. Also I really really love Gustav okay I want a personal Gustav. We'd eat and watch TV and be generally chill together and we'd talk about our problems and then hug afterwards.
Aaaaah I can't wait for the next chapter, I'm so excited and scared of what'll happen to Tom and Bill is probably gonna get his pretty ass into trouble again /shakes head disapprovingly
YOU'RE AN AMAZING WRITER AND I LURVE YOU LIKE TOM LOVES BILL AND VICE VERSA AND I HAVE SET UP PERMANENT CAMP HERE TO WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT UPDATE, K? *sinks down into beanbag, retrieves a bag of sweets from a mountain of fluffy animals and offers you one*
Author's Response: I swear you keep getting cuter and cuter and I don't know how you do it! *-* Bushido deserves to be in time-out for an indefinite amount of time, kay? Bill would very much appreciate your love and hugs, yep. If it's possible, I will make you your very own personal Gustav! But just know that he will probably eat everything that's in your fridge. If you keep him fed though then he will be very happy and give you lots of hugs! :D
Date: 01/19/13 01:59 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
Gah! Can't they just run away and move to a tropical island to fuck all day long? You are making me nervoys with these patterns here. So huge risk, so much in game right here.
It's good that you reveal us things and build up the story for the future. I'm anxious because of Tom's fight and I feel it'll be a crucial turning point of this story. Don't want to predict anything, just keeping my mind open.
Just hoping you make our boys happy and unharmed, okay? :)
Author's Response: I wish they could too! In fact, writing this story really makes me want to write a fluffy PWP one-shot to get all of that out of my system, haha. Don't feel nervous though because no matter what happens, in the end things are going to be okay. Just remember that, kay?
Date: 01/18/13 10:12 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
Holy hell, Bill should absolutely show up in an I heart Tom shirt with glittery sparkles. He could be all eye brow raising mockery toward Bu. But that'll turn out badly so...maybe he could wear it under a hoodie or something...or or OORRRR he could knit one for Larry! Lolzz
Glorious chapter. I'm anxiously am awaiting this epic street battle
Author's Response: Larry would love for Bill to knit him some clothes! Haha. I have the next chapter written and plan on updating on Monday so you don't have to wait long to find out what happensss. Thank you so much for reading, darling. I hope you're doing well! Be on the lookout for the next chapter soon. :D Thank you!
Date: 01/18/13 02:14 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
you beautiful writer, with your beautiful words and your beautiful story... i'm so in love... my god :3
Author's Response: Aww, I am blushing and smiling. ._. Thank you so, so much! It makes me super happy that you love my story and my writing. You are soo sweet. <3
Date: 01/18/13 02:13 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
Yes, that's sweet of you and I do understand what you mean that if you felt so pressured and stressed to force chapters every single day, then it might not be as good as they are now as you're taking your time and updating once in a while - not too slowly - but in time s you can really write some good stuff... I JUST FREAKING CRAVE YOUR STORY I LOVE IT, OMG PLEASE UPDATE ON MONDAY THEN!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for being so understanding! I'm not going to make you wait more than a week in between updates though. :D I pretty much have the next chapter finished, I just have to edit a few things and then I wills start on the chapter after that so you won't have to wait! I'm really happy that you love my story enough to crave it. *-* I will definitely update on Monday. Thank you!
Date: 01/17/13 09:12 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
omgee; im scared for bill, and for tom. ill be gladly kick bu'ass .
Author's Response: I think you should definitely kick Bu's ass! Tom and Bill will help you. :D Thank you so much for reading, darling!
Date: 01/17/13 04:20 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
Oh my god! I am speechless!! This is awesome and so cute and just amazing! And you should already know how i am reacting to this chapter XD more soooooon!
Author's Response: Ohhh, this is such an awesome review! It put a huge smile on my face so thank you for that. :D I'm really happy that you enjoyed the chapter and I promise not to keep you waiting long for the next. Thank youuu!
Date: 01/17/13 02:43 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
Yay this chapter was adorable :) & yeah Bill got yelled at by Bu but we all know Bill is better than him haha. Gustav's cooking scares me & I'm sure it scares Tom too. Not sure about Bill though. Anyways :) you & your awesome stories
Author's Response: Aww, thank youuuu! Bill is definitely tougher than Bu thinks. :D And if I were a girl, I would never want Gustav to cook for me. I'd insist he take me out to eat, haha. Thank you so much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it and I hope you like what's coming next. :)
Date: 01/17/13 11:18 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
When will you update again? :3 I love your writing, I love this story so much. I wish you could update every single day!!! x
Author's Response: I wish I could update every single day for you too!! I just worry that it wouldn't be good quality if I tried that. However, I am thinking I will update on Monday or Tuesday So you won't have to wait much longer. I'm so happy you love this story. <3
Date: 01/17/13 11:16 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
I'm excited for Tom's fight. This story got ten times more adorable (as if adorable would be the right word for a fic about street fighting) now that Tom and Bill are all in looooooove. I liked Gustav in this chapter, too. He's the perfect balance between funny and supportive. Though, admittedly, I'm hoping that Georg and Larry can wheedle their way into next chapter... >_> I love silliness.
Author's Response: I'm excited for you to read it! Adorable works for me, kay. :D What can I say, the looove just brought out the cheese in these two guys. And who doesn't love cheese? I think it's pretty great.
Date: 01/17/13 09:52 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
amazinggg
Author's Response: Thank you soooo much! :)
Date: 01/17/13 02:48 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
I like how the new information and revelations fit into the chapter so well. It all flowed so nicely. Tom's upcoming fight makes me kind of nervous and I just hope everything is fine D:
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! It's good to hear that it flowed well as I know it was a lot. I know it's a nerve-wracking thing. But I won't keep you waiting long until the next chapter so you can find out what happens! Thank youuuu. :D
Date: 01/17/13 01:36 am Title: Chapter One
You update so fast, yet with so much QUALITY. What's your secret?! Are you a robot?
Anyway, lovelovelove this (as per the usual). I have a feeling that something's going to go down with Bushido, etc. sooner than later. Yikes!
Author's Response: Haha, sometimes I think I just might be a robot! But really, when I start writing I can't stop and whatever comes out just comes out. Thank you for that amazing compliment!
Date: 01/17/13 12:42 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
i like it :) the fact that Bushido knows about Bill's paper maybe isn't that bad. and of course Bill and Tom seams so cute together. tho Tom said that Bill is more important that fight - definitely means something :)
Author's Response: I'm so happy that you like it, darling! Thank you for reading and I appreciate you leaving your thoughts. I agree, that definitely does mean something. :)
Date: 01/16/13 05:28 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
Oh my God, Tom was so amazing throughout all this chapter. Please, can I have him, too? He's just too adorable. The way he said "I love you" to Bill, the way he waited to hear those words back from Bill, the way he just is. Bill, hold him tight for me, please, 'cause I obviously can't :((
I think I hate Bushido lol He's just an ass, even if he knows what love is ('cause he cares about his daughter) I don't think he's going to let go about Bill and Tom loving each other. I have a bad feeling of him trying to obstacle their love by making them fight against each other. I hope I'm wrong, even though it'd be kinda hot seeing them fight.
I think Tom is going to win the big fight, but he's going to have a really hard time. Bu wants to test him, maybe even to let him know that he's the boss, that he can send Tom back to his miserable life whenever he wants. He's such a dick, I hate him.
I have this amazing scene in my mind. After the big fight, Bill and Tom are in their bed, cuddling and relaxing. Tom is hurt, he's trying not to say a word 'cause he just doesn't want Bill to worry for him, and Bill tries to tell him how great he was, how hot he was, too. Tom tells him that it hurts too much for sex, and Bill decides to fullfill his wish of a blowjob, just to make him happy lol
Sorry, I'm sooo perverted :P
I can't wait to read the next chapter, I'm sure it's going to be amazing!
Author's Response: You will have to fight Bill and some other readers for him but, you should go for it! I bet you could win. :D He appreciates all of your compliments and so do I, really. I am a sucker for cheesy and protective Tom. I will make Bill hug him and kiss him lots on your behalf. I'm sure he would be happy to oblige. ;)
Date: 01/16/13 03:32 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
Woooow, I just read the entire story and I LOVE it. Like, fucking ADORE it.
So please, new chappie soon?
Author's Response: Ahh, I'm sooo happy you decided to read my story! The fact that you enjoy it so far definitely makes me smile all big and cheesy-like. :D Thank you, thank you!
Date: 01/16/13 02:10 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
Welll! that was an absolutely amazing birthday present! so sweet at the end, I'm nervous to see what happens next with the fight, i dont want tomi to be hurt. im always nervous about bu, and what's up with him and bill... post soon? :3 prettttty please?
Author's Response: Oh my goodness, is it your birthday?? HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU, HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOUUU! I hope it was a wonderful day, sweetheart! I will update as soon as I can so you won't have to wait long to have your questions answered. Thank you so much for reading and for this lovely review, birthday girl! <3
Date: 01/16/13 11:04 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
Where can I get a Tom? I have money, I need a Tom for myself right now.
I seriously can not. They are so perfect and they relationship is so perfect and Bushido is still an ass and I'm still nervous, even more now after their little chat, what will happen when they get caught! And Bill's thesis, omg he better tell Tom about it, I don't want any of them to get hurt, mentally of course, cuz physically is quite unavoidable, lolhaha... no.
Did I mention that Tom is perfect?
Can I hug you? Let me hug you. *hugs*
Author's Response: I'll see how much he costs and see what I can do for you. You might just have to fight Bill for him a bit. But, I mean, that might be kinda fun too. :D
Date: 01/16/13 09:52 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
love love love love it soooo much! xx
Author's Response: I'm soooo happy that you did! *-* Thank you a lot, darling. :*