Date: 09/13/16 03:15 pm Title: Chapter Five
You're really great at writing action. Loved it! I'm curious to see how this is gonna go down.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for saying that because it's not the easiest thing making what's in your head come to life through words when it comes to action scenes!
Date: 09/13/16 03:02 pm Title: Chapter Four
Ahh! Ok I forgot a lot of this. Great action! I apologize for the brief cell review. Onto the next chapter!
Author's Response: Hi, I love you and I think you are so sweet for taking time out of your day to read this and leave me your thoughts along the way!
Date: 03/06/16 10:30 am Title: Chapter One
Great story. I love it and a sequel would be also great i think. Sorry for short words but my english writting is not very good. But thanks to my kindle with translation options i understood the story very well. Angeleyes
Author's Response: I'm so sorry it took me so long to respond to this sweet review! Thank you so much. I'm really happy you enjoyed the story, love.
Date: 10/15/15 07:56 am Title: Epilogue
this was am awesome story!
u should do a sequel to this!
Author's Response: Thank you so, so much!
Date: 09/28/15 08:50 pm Title: Epilogue
I love this story to death d84; Amazing, amazing work
Author's Response: Thank you so much! This made me feel really good. <3
Date: 08/21/15 07:22 pm Title: Epilogue
I am so happy I read this, it's really something unique, I love the way you write Bill, I feel like in most stories he's always the same, and most definitely never the type of guy to become involved in street fighting! I was actually so nervous every time they had had to fight, like in Bill's first fight and Tom's fight against Bonecrusher my stomach was in knots the whole time! And I just KNEW they would end up having to fight each other, I loved the lead up to all that, them preparing and Tom finally letting down his guard again for Bill. It was so sad when he was all cold with him.
Gustav was so hilarious in this, I laughed out loud when he was talking about the late night trip to Taco Bell and Bill wasn't sure whether he was excited about the girl or the nachoes XD Your sense of humour is so close to mine, I really appreciated those little things haha.
Congrats on a wonderful story!
Author's Response: I am so impressed that you finished this so quickly! You're a fast reader, like me. I like that. I too am so happy that you read this, and I really appreciate your compliments about my Bill. I honestly loved writing him in a different light. I had never read a story where he was a badass, so, I decided to write one of my own. Anyway, I'm glad that the fights made you feel something!
Date: 06/15/15 12:20 am Title: Epilogue
Hi, mohanrocks.
I'm from Mexico, so I speak in Spanish but I had been learning English and it's the first time that I read a fic in English. I have to say that I loved this fic, it's beautiful and I like the way that you are grateful to your readers for read your history.
Thank you so much for share this with us :3
This history is been translated in Tokio Hotel Ficción but only to chapter 7 and I can't wait for finished it.
I don't know if had written fine this but I hope.
Author's Response: Hi! I'm so sorry it took me this long to respond to your sweet comment. It honestly means so much to me that you are enjoying it, and I'm grateful that it was translated so that it can be shared with more people. You are so lovely and I thank you for this! I hope you are still enjoying the story. Thank you, love. :)
Date: 06/02/15 12:11 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
I had to keep reminding myself the end of this one, Cus otherwise I was going to start crying any moment now……… wow.
Author's Response: It's good to remember that they get their happy ending! I had to go back and read this chapter because I totally forgot what had happened. :(
Date: 05/30/15 01:06 am Title: Chapter Six
This is one of my favourite chapters… the tension and the way Tom blurted all out.
Author's Response: Thank you. *-* I love that you're reading this again!
Date: 05/10/15 04:08 pm Title: Epilogue
Amazing! As simple as that :)
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much. Happy you enjoyed. :)
Date: 02/19/15 01:17 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
One quick question. The guys pronounce Georg like "Gay-org", right? So how do you pronounce "Geo"? I've been wondering that since forever. :P
Author's Response: That is something I've debated before! I think it's like "Gay-o". So, it rhymes with mayo, haha.
Date: 01/23/15 12:16 am Title: Epilogue
Oh my gosh, Gustav got married in this epilogue and no one knew. It's funny because he just REALLY got married and no one knew till after it happened. It's like you knew the future! XD Okay, gonna stop being a total geek, lol.
Author's Response: Hey, I've always said I'm a little bit psychic. ;) Haha, not really but, that is a pretty freaking awesome coincidence, so that you for pointing it out to me!
Date: 01/21/15 06:22 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
Oh my gosh. I only JUST caught this. I think you might've switched the name of Bushido's daughter. First it says Sasha and then: Bushido spoke quietly as he looked at Leslie. Lol, this story has long been over, but, erm, just in case you wanted to perfect something... ^^
Author's Response: Oh girl, thank you SO much! I never would have realized that. I went back and fixed it, and I always so appreciate your edits. :)
Date: 01/21/15 04:46 pm Title: Epilogue
Mind if I borrow Priss (a.k.a. Streetfighting!Bill) for a fiction? There just wasn't enough of him fighting in this and I really wanna make a one-shot and a full story of him as a street fighter now. (email me your answer please)
Actual Review:
Fantastic, loved it. It was well written and (le gasp!) finished! It's hard to find a fic that coincides with something like that so spectacularly! You especially did well with the epilogue. I love it and I'm sure you'll be hearing from me again soon as I intend to return to your stories frequently, ready to sink these sharp veneer (ed fangs) of mine into more.
Author's Response: Heyyy, I just sent you an email with my answer. :)
Date: 01/21/15 10:01 am Title: Chapter Seven
Larry and Georg are my new OTP! I can picture in now, running in slow motion on the beach to be in one anothers arms, leaning over a table and getting the same noodle, Georg feeding Larry insects as if it were chocolate covered straw
berries.
Author's Response: Hahaha, that's an amazing OTP! I seriously feel like you completely understand their love for each other and their relationship. You're awesome. ;)
Date: 01/16/15 05:55 pm Title: Epilogue
OMGOSH!!!This was one hell of a read.Love it!!Tom street-fighting had me like...gahhh..then adding Bill?I was under dope.The plot..terrific,the humour..my sides are gone,the snifflers..third packet of tissues(hope not too much of exaggeration)..especially the wretched letter,Bill and Tom...I'm floating still and EVERYTHING!!!!Let me sum this up:Woooohoooooooooo(sorry,had to get that out):) my nerves are still fried man...[YOU=AWESOME]
Author's Response: Ahhhh you don't even know how much this review made me smile! I'm terribly pleased that you enjoyed the story, that it made you laugh, and it got you emotional because that's exactly what I love to hear. But listen, YOU are the awesome one. Thank you so much!
Date: 01/11/15 08:34 pm Title: Chapter One
No matter how many times I read this.. Larry is my hero :')
Author's Response: Larry is so proud to be your hero. ;)
Date: 10/26/14 04:28 pm Title: Chapter One
I finished this for the second time and I love it to death!!!!! The last chapter is my favorite hands down. You know, that one scene in the shop, desperate times call for desperate measures. That. ;) I love the fight scenes too. I got so into them, especially Bill's fights. I firmly believe that no matter how femme and fashion Bill may be, he could kick some serious ass if he wanted too. :D
Author's Response: I am so flattered that you went back and read this again and enjoyed it a second time! The last chapter was a labor of love for me to write, because it's always so hard to wrap up a long and complicated story. And yeah, I enjoyed the scene in the shop, too. ;) I totally agree, Bill could kick some ass if he needed to. He may look dainty but there's a badass underneath. :) Thank you for this lovely review!
Date: 09/07/14 10:43 pm Title: Chapter One
Oh my god so many memories from this story, *sobbing*
I want to reread it so bad but it's 150000 something words and I just started uni >.<
One day I will reread it one shot...one day.
Author's Response: It really is a lot of words, hahaha. Thank you so much for loving it enough to want to read it again!! This made me happyyy. Good luck with the start of uni. :)
Date: 07/23/14 07:09 am Title: Epilogue
Oh... I have no words... I fell in love with this story so much! Thank you for amazing feelings during reading this story. I'm so happy for Bill and Tom, and Gustav too, of course :D
Even I feel a little bit sorry for Bushido...
So just THANK YOU!!!
(will you post some next story one day??? )
Author's Response: Thank you for this incredible review! I'm so happy you enjoyed the story. I would looove to post another story. I'll just have to find the time. :)