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Reviewer: shitpisscatfuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/13 11:35 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

So much happened! I was scared shitless for a minute there. Glad that Georg and Larry were there though.

Author's Response: It was pretty much as intense as it could get. :/ But thank you for sticking it out! Thank goodness for Georg and Larry though, yeah. They kinda saved the day.

Reviewer: Loveluv67 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/13 10:51 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

Aw George nd Larry r so awesome

Author's Response: Eeee, they appreciate your love! Thank you for reading. :)

Reviewer: ChunyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/13 10:23 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

I am actually more worried about Bill not being completely truthful to Tom and what Bushido is going to do now O_o;;

Author's Response: I'm worried about that too, girl. :/ Time is ticking and Bill needs to do the right thing before it's too late! I won't keep you waiting long to find out what happens. Thank you!

Reviewer: TomsCanadianGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/13 09:07 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

OMG what an adrenaline rush! I was on the edge of my seat through most of this!

I am so happy Tom and Bill both opened up to one another about their pasts. I wish Bill would have told Tom about him doing this for school, but I think it was best that he didn't say anything before the fight.

I didn't think Tom would win the fight, but I definitely didn't expect him to get so hurt. You are right, though, not everything can be happy and easy all the time.

I'm so glad Bill didn't follow the rules (like he would have lol) and stepped in. May not have been the best decision when it comes to being on Bushido's good side, but definitely was the best decision when it comes to Tom.

I'm nervous and excited for what's to come. I'm scared of how Tom is going to react to Bill's secret and I'm so scared of what Bushido is going to do to them.

Time for Bill to be honest with everyone about everything. I hope not too many people get hurt, though.

Great chapter, hun!

P.S OMG I'M SO EXCITED THAT WE ARE GETTING A NEW ALBUM THIS YEAR!!! Definitely a great time in the fandom!!

Author's Response: It's like a roller coaaaaster! I'm glad it was exciting for you. :D

Bill needs to tell Tom sooner than later, especially now, but it was good that he didn't make Tom so upset that he would get hurt worse during the fight because he couldn't focus.

Everything just needed to snap. Bill needed to stand up to Bushido and Tom needed to realize what a horrible situation Bushido, the one who "rescued" him from his former life, put him in without a thought. I hate letting Tom get hurt but at least he has Bill to help care for him!

Ohh, I won't keep you waiting and nervous for long! I will have another update in less than a week, I think. Thank you so much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

P.S. YESSSSSS!!! Ahhh, I will be fangirling so much. I already do just with seeing the twins on DSDS and having not a clue what they are saying, haha.

Reviewer: caro4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/13 08:29 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

I don't know why but I always feel hungry after reading a chapter of yours...mystery, mystery...

Author's Response: Now that you mention it, I find myself hungry fairly often as I'm editing the chapters.. e.e A mystery, indeed!

Reviewer: caro4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/13 08:25 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

How do you manage to write so much(not to mention super good)text in such short time, I need your talent for school!!

Here I am,reading your chapter in the super cold bus stop,it's -30 right now in quebec D:, my hand are freezing but I don't care I needed to read this now!!

The old lady beside me probably thinks I am crazy(I was making weird noises and swearing while I was reading the chapter)

Georg and Larry would make the perfect couple...if he were human :O
I shall wait for the next chapter now, God I'm so worried about Tom but even more for Bill, don't hurt him please :(
Naa I know you wouldn't(not too bad at least)you're way too nice!

Author's Response: I wish I had a better answer to that than once I find the time to write, it just all comes pouring out! You are so sweet to say it's super good though. *-* I'm lucky that the result of my quick writing is one that you enjoy.

Ohhh, you poor thing! Here it is only -1 degrees, I can't even imagine the kind of cold you are dealing with. :( Hopefully my story distracted you a bit from the cold and the old lady was at least entertained by your reactions. xD

I think Georg and Larry would definitely hook up if Larry became human. o_o I don't know if the world could handle it! Anyway, you're right, I couldn't hurt either of them too badly. It'd break my heart.

Reviewer: TragicStateofAffairs Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/13 07:25 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

I'd go eat some pickles right now to drown my sorrows, but I am too sick to do that, so I will have faith that you WILL MAKE THIS OKAY...

Author's Response: Ughh, no stomach, stop hurting Jules! Now! I COMMAND YOU! ...did it work?

You know me, you know I do what I do and I will find a way to make this shit work out. :D

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/13 07:14 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

Wow! I'm anxious to find out what Bushido will do. Fantastic chapter, as usual.

Author's Response: I won't keep you waiting long until you can find out! Thank you so much, love. :)

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/13 07:10 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

Oh gosh I knew he was going to lose but not be injured so bad.
Your writing is so great. You always put quirky little things in your story that makes me forget about the serious important things.
How and why is Geo scared of the ice-cream truck? An entire awesome chapter like this and that's what got my attention the most (so ashamed lol)

Author's Response: I know, it was hard for me to let Tom get hurt like that. :/ But thank you so much for that compliment! I don't think I could write something completely serious without a few random things thrown in there. It helps lessen the heaviness of it all for me and I'm glad you agree! I think I might have to explain the Geo thing in another chapter. xD I think I know a way to work it in, haha. And no, I'm glad you remembered a little detail! I love that. Thank you for reading and for this awesome review! :)

Reviewer: pandasarelovex Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/13 06:56 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

Oh my goodness. I've had a nervous feeling in my stomach for this chapter. But i am so glad Bill intervened and I am so curious about what is going to happen to them all. And yes, I am so in shock that a new album is coming out soon! It's amazing there were no album leaks this time :P. I feel like the Tokio Hotel fandom has been dormant for so long. I can't wait for it to become alive again. I became a fan in about 2007, but I feel like the fandom has changed a bit since then for some reason. It just feels different or something. What do you think? When did you become a fan?

Author's Response: Helloooo! I'm happy you agree about Bill stepping in and stopping that madness, I'm sorry about the nervous feeling though. I understand that completely. :/ I won't keep you waiting too long for the next chapter, so you can see what goes down!

It's really amazing that there were no leaks! I mean, it could be at the end of the year that it comes out but at least we know it's less than 12 months, haha. I've only been a fan since 2009, after Humanoid came out. So I feel like I missed out on so much! I would have loooved to have been a fan back in 2007. Such a great time for them. Things have been pretty dormant since I've been around and I'm really excited that it's picking back up! It's interesting to see the twins doing DSDS and working on the album with the band. I can't wait to see what they came up with! Thank youuuu for reading and sharing. :D

Reviewer: EmZZz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/13 06:41 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

""I was crushed, scared and so alone, but.. I was relieved for her. She had found her only way to escape. She was free," --- Awww Tom is so sweet... that was heartbreaking to read. Ohhh and Bill was so sweet when he came to Tom's rescue... I'm so damn terrified for them now, since Bushido is damn pissed but I'm so glad that Bill stepped in and Tom is obviously thankful for that too. That was so adorable and heart warming for me to read... and I love how Bill was cussing Bushido out, calling him all kinds of things and telling him what a heartless piece of shit he is!!!! And that all he cares about is himself and money. You go, Bill!!!! :3

Author's Response: Awww, I'm so glad you liked the chapter, babe! Bill and Tom are pretty sweet together and Tom is finally opening up! I know it was sad and hard to read but I'm really happy you did read it. Thank you so much for this lovely review and for always being an awesome reader and person! Bushido will get what's coming to him if Bill has anything to do with it. u.u I hope you are having sweet dreams! :*

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/13 06:31 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

dammit! that's twice! you made me cry 2 chapters in a row!!!

god, i'm on the edge of my seat now! bushido's gonna be looking for some payback, and i just know bill's secret is gonna come out at the worst possible moment!

*snacks on acrylic fingernails*

Author's Response: Sis, don't hate me for making you cry. ._. I owe you big hugs, okay?

Don't you dare fret or ruin those pretty nails! You know I'm gonna find a way to make this all work out. *hands you a cookie to snack on instead*

Thank you for reading! Don't stress!

Reviewer: giuliagd Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/13 05:47 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

I don't know what to say. Feels like I'm experiencing so much pain, both from this chapter and the fact that I'm not going to be able to read another chapter in I don't know how many days.

Yes, it's really different from what I was expecting, but It also was perfect. I hoped Tom would win the fight, but it was pretty obvious that he was going to lose, so the story could develope even more. I really really liked that Tom opened up with Bill about his past; he trusts Bill, he wants Bill to know every little secret, every little part of his past, in order to live with him his present and to be his future. It was so sweet, I was almost crying.

The fight was... wow. I can't even explain how I felt when I was reading. It was the most perfect, yet painful thing I've ever read. Bill was so worried for Tom, I guess that shows how much he loves him. And he stepped in to save Tom, 'cause Bushido was an asshole. God, I wish someone could beat the hell out of him, so maybe he would understand. I think he's going to be a problem from now on, I don't even know how Bill and Tom could escape from him. I guess I just have to wait and read :D

I feel like a stupid asking you not to make me wait too much :P I'm selfish, I wish you could spend all your free time writing the next chapters lol I'm kidding, but I do want to read the next one as soon as possible, 'cause I'm addicted to this story!
I've added you on twitter. I had an account but actually I've never used it. I guess I'll start just to be able to talk to you more lol

Thank you for this amazing chapter, you have my unconditional love!

Author's Response: I don't want to cause you pain! Since I can't really take back what has happened in the chapter, I will promise that I won't keep you waiting more than a week for the next update. Kay?

You are very right, Tom needed to lose in order for certain things to fall into place. But, he made big steps with opening up to Bill and I think that is winning in a much more important way. I'm glad you liked that part. :)

You're making me sooo happy with your sweet compliments! The fight was really difficult for me to write because I don't like seeing Tom get hurt. But he is tough and Bill is there to defend him. Bushido isn't going away without a fight, but I can promise you that he will get what he deserves before the story is through! But yes, keep reading so you can find out how it happens. :)

You're not selfish! Seriously, I wish I could spend all my free time writing too. I love to write, especially when you are enjoying it so much. But, as I said, no more than a week! I can promise you that.

Yaaay, I'm happy you're following me on twitter now! We can definitely talk there and I look forward to it. :) Thank you for reading and for this lovely review, really! You have my love and internet huuugs. <3

Reviewer: nathalicious Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/13 05:18 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

I'M SO DAMN PROUD OF BILL! A bit disappointed he didn't manage to tell Tom, though, because shit got real now and omg... I just officially reached the highest level of worriedness (Is that even a word? Nope? So I just invented it.) about them.

Absolutely amazing chapter, as always. I think I don't even have to mention how much I loved the fact that Tom's opened up to Bill. *toomanyfeels*

PS. I AM EXCITED ASDFGHJKL;

Author's Response: Bill appreciates your pride! I wish he could have found a moment to tell Tom the truth too.. I think worriedness sounds totally legit so let's go with that, haha. But, don't worry too much because at least Bill can take care of Tom! Nurse Bill. Nothing wrong with that. :D

Oh, thank you soooo much! I'm really happy that you liked the chapter and Tom's confessions brought on the feels. That's what I like to hear!

P.S. I AM TOO, YES, YES! *-* We have to fangirl on twitter together now. :D

Reviewer: Rainii93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/13 05:13 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

K, brb I'm gunna go cry now! Gah, fucking Bushido ;-; I actually skipped over the fight, I was too scared of the outcome xD But wow, crazy shit :o cannot wait for the next chapter, Kirsty. Love you~!

Author's Response: Don't cryyyyyyy, pretty girl!! You skipped the fight? xD Dude, I probably would have done the same thing if I was a reader, hahaha. Crazy shit, indeeeeed. ._. I love you too, lots! I am happy you're excited for the next. Thank youuuu! <3

Reviewer: owly Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/13 05:13 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

OKAY SERIOUSLY CAN YOU POSSIBLY MAKE ME CRY ANY MORE AAAAAH. I LITERALLY CANNOT EVEN EXPRESS MY FEELINGS THROUGH WORDS RIGHT NOW I'M EMOTIONALLY TRAUMATIZED WHY MUST YOU DO THIISS~ *breathes deeply and whines* bABIES I WANT TO CUDDLE TOM INFINITELY AND JUST UFHSDGJH. I hope he's alright and that Bill can kiss it better TOM IS A FIGHTER HE CAN PULL THROUGH THIS YES. Also Georg and Larry omfg my love for them will never die okay I really want my own chill lizard (and possibly a chill Georg why not).
okay so yes I LOVE YOU SO MUCH/HATE YOU BECAUSE OF ALL THE THINGS YOU PUT ME THROUGH/LOVE YOU AGAIN BECAUSE FLAWLESS WRITING. I'll be here, waiting :3 *noms on chocolate cookies and cuddles big teddy named Victor*

Author's Response: DARLIIIIIING COME HERE AND LET ME HOLD YOUUUUUU. ;-; Don't cry, kay? *rocks you in my arms and sings random Tokio Hotel songs* I know it was an intense chapter and poor Tom got hurt. ._. But Bill is gonna take good care of him and you just don't need to worry about him healing! He will be okay. Christina Aguilera's song "Fighter" is about Tom, didn't you know? xD I think you should get a Larry and a Georg. Yep. I support this. I HAVE ALL LOVE FOR YOU OKAY. You are so sweet and I'm glad you liked this even though it was saaad. .-. *hands you a plate of more sweets* You and Victor just sit tight for a bit. <3 Thank you. :)

Reviewer: aliensvoice Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/13 05:04 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

This is seriously one of my favorite fictions of all time. I can't even describe how good it is! :)

Author's Response: You don't even know how big this made me smile! Thank you so much, I'm really happy that you are enjoying it. :-)

Reviewer: giuliagd Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/13 04:24 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

I haven't read the chapter yet, I just wanted to let you know that I'm a loser, I've spent the whole day (I live in Italy, it's 10.30 pm right now) refreshing the "recent" page, 'cause I was hoping to see this update lol

Talk to you later, after I read the chapter

Author's Response: You're not a loser, on the contrary, I think you're pretty adorable. n.n I know some Italian! Not a ton.. I studied abroad in Cefalù in Sicily during the summer of 2010. Italy is beautiful!

I love that you were excited for me to update! I hope you enjoyed the chapter and I can't wait to hear what you thought. :D Grazie, cara!

Reviewer: EmZZz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/13 12:55 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

you haven't updated yet :'(

Author's Response: I just updated! It's 3:20pm my time so I'm just running 20 minutes behind. :) I can't wait to hear what you thought of the chapter!

Reviewer: green_and_blue Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/13 10:06 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

A super nice chapter. Bu is f****g scary and I would have surely vomited too after such an intense discussion. To operate by keeping others in constant state of fear is nasty habit and I hope he will pay for it, in one way or another.
Bill and Tom are so in love:) I can't even imagine how hard it must be for them right now - showing nothing, having to pretend when stakes are so high. Tom's fight makes me nervous....

Author's Response: Thank you so much for saying so! Yes, I would have thrown up and been a mess afterward too. :/ Bushido will definitely pay for his sins, I won't let him get away scotch free.

Bill and Tom still have a lot to go through, but the love definitely makes it all worth fighting for. :) Thank you for reading and sharing your lovely thoughts! I just posted the new chapter and I hope you enjoy.

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