Date: 01/28/13 06:10 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
I believe things will be ok with Bill and Tom. I figured something like this would happen tho :(
Author's Response: I like your positive attitude! I believe it too. Things like this just happen sometimes and if two people really care, they will work it out. :)
Date: 01/28/13 06:09 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
And it will be aching with pain and longing until your next chapter comes! :3 I hope it'll be soon. Maybe it wasn't a cliff hanger, but every end of every chapter feels that way because I JUST WANT MORE AND MORE AND MORE of your story!!! I crave more already. My heart aches for it.
Author's Response: Awww, you are sooooo lovely to crave my story! Honestly, I love writing this, I really do. So I won't make you wait longer than a week between updates. The reason I don't like to update more frequently than that is because then people get behind on the story when they don't have time to read. ._. Buuut, Monday there will be a new one! Promise. :*
Date: 01/28/13 06:08 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
MY HEART HURTS TOO...
Author's Response: *gives you the biggest hug ever to help your heart feel better*
Date: 01/28/13 06:02 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
There's actual tears streaming down my face. oH MY GOOOOOOOD ;__;
Author's Response: NOOOOOOOOOO. *hands you all the tissues* Cheer up, there's still things to be happy about in upcoming chapters! <3
Date: 01/28/13 05:47 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
You made me cryyyy! Seriouly, my breath was starting to hitch and everything.
Also, *gasp!* how dare you make Bushido look like a good guy a few chaps back and then switch it back around! *gasp! (again!)*
But I did love this so much. Really amazing when a story can move the emotions of the reader.
*heart for you*
Author's Response: I'm sorry it made you cry! It was hard for me to write, too.
Date: 01/28/13 05:26 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
Brb, imma put all those pieces of my broken heart in the jar.
Author's Response: Girl, we talked about this and you know I'm here to help you put your heart back together. Do not fear!
Date: 01/28/13 05:15 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
WHAT THE FUCK TOM!!!!?!!! I am going to run over to my bed and scream into my pillow. My heart is broken right now. Ahhhh, this is not a good Monday for me!!! :'( I hope your next update will be quick like this one so we can see what happens next as soon as possible. Your writing is lovely. But this chapter is so sad and I'm really shocked at how cold Tom was... I'm almost speechless... :'(
Author's Response: Sweeeeetie, don't be sad! Tom was caught offguard and he was already hurting a lot physically and he thought Bill was the one person in his life that wouldn't lie to him or hurt him, and he was proven wrong. You have to remember how Tom was in the beginning of the story; so cold and untrusting. He hasn't been in love for very long and so it's easy for him to go back to his old ways. But try not to worry, people that are meant to be always end up together again. :)
Date: 01/28/13 05:05 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
Ohhhh, the inevitable.
Author's Response: The unfortunate but inevitable, yes. ._.
Date: 01/28/13 04:25 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
Oh my god, this was the saddest chapter yet. I was literally reading with my brows furrowed and throat constricting. I feel so badly for both Tom and Bill, but I'm also really glad that you can tell Tom still loves Bill even if he feels so hurt and betrayed. Hopefully, given time, he will come around to forgive Bill!
Author's Response: It was sad for me to write, too. ._. I'm sorry it was hard to read but I'm glad it affected you on an emotional level! I like your positive outlook on it and I have to agree. Things can't be bad forever! Thank you so much for reading and for sharing your thoughts. :*
Date: 01/28/13 04:24 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
My heart hurts :(
Author's Response: *hugs you super tight* Feel better, heart! Things won't be this way forever.
Date: 01/28/13 04:21 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
FIRST A BLOWJOB AND THEN HEARTBREAK? You can't end it like that. ALL THIS SADNESS. ;_;
Looking forward to more! LOTS AND LOTS AND LOTS OF HUGS.
Author's Response: What can I say, I like to give the chapters varietyyy! I couldn't write an entirely sad chapter because life isn't like that. It has good little moments thrown in with the bad. Thank you sooo much for reading! I will have more soon. HUUUUUUGS.
Date: 01/28/13 07:31 am Title: Chapter Nineteen
will you update today?? *puppy eyes*
Author's Response: I just updated!! :D
Date: 01/26/13 06:29 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen
I'm emotionally attached to this story and to you as the writer, because you're so sweet and you put up with my frequent comments. I'm seriously looking forward to your next chapter - duuh! - and the biggest reason why I'm still on this website is to read your story and write feedback! :3 I no longer track any other stories here, because it's been more than 2 months since any of the other writers have updated and they don't even reply to your comments when you ask if they're even ever going to update this story - so instead of hanging on and waiting around for stories that might never be finished, I'm just going to focus on the BEST story on tokiohotelfiction.com... which is yours!!!
Author's Response: This entire review was amazing and sweet and put the biggest smile on my face yet!! Thank you soooo much for being such a wonderful reader and reviewer and person. <3
Date: 01/25/13 05:21 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen
You know, I actually didn't expect any happy turns in this. Somehow it wouldn't have fitted here. This was good, really this was.
Though I was a nervewreck and biting my nails once the fight was starting. That was intense, girl! You managed to bring in the desperation and I liked the way you handled this long-waited chapter. And awww, the beginning! It ached my heart!
I guess there'll be things to figure out and I feel so sorry for poor boys, but I think this was the right move with the story.
And the album, YES!!! :D
Author's Response: I so appreciate you saying that it was the right move! I know that the chapters stress you out sometimes because you worry about how the boys will ever make it out of this, so that means a lot that you agree with my choices. Thank you so much for reading and for leaving me this fantastic review! There is definitely a lot for them to figure out but there is time and I will do my best to help them along with it! :) Thank you. :D
Date: 01/25/13 03:23 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen
OMG poor Tomii <3 great update as always :D and you are realy sweet I can't help but leave a review for you! hihi <3 waitin for more!
Author's Response: I love that you take the time to leave me a review! It means a lot and I so appreciate you reading. I'm happy you enjoyed the chapter and I won't keep you waiting long for the next! Thank youuu. :*
Date: 01/25/13 02:53 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen
Kirsten rocks. Kirstenrocks. You rock! *hugs*
Author's Response: Aww. *squeezes and loves* You're the one that rocks, kay? <3
Date: 01/25/13 09:26 am Title: Chapter Five
"“chilling” with Georg and Larry the lizard" LMFAO, Georg is hilarious! :D
Author's Response: If only we could chill with them too. xDD
Date: 01/25/13 05:17 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
I really fucking love Bill's friends too. Gustav who eats all the time, loving bacon and nachos and shit like that - I LOVE EATING TOO! :D hehe, so I can see a bit of myself in Gusti... and I'd be protective of Bill if he was my close friend as well... And Georg is awesome too. He's so much fun, talking so loudly and then insiting that he's not talking too loudly and bringing his lizard to a party. He's so cute in his weird way. I LOVE GEORG AND GUSTAV AND BILL AND TOM... Both in your story and in real life. OH, look at how that ads up! You've managed to make all four characters in this story amazing and that fits to how they really are in real life... The more I read this story and notice things, the more I realize how fantastic a writer you are... oh wow! Well done. *claps* --- I just sat and clapped like an excited, retarded, baby seal... :D the last part where Tom says: "I fucking love you" gets me every time!
Author's Response: I would love to have Georg and Gus as my best friends and I'd be happy to share with you! You are so sweet and lovely and your compliments make me smile so much. xD I'm sure you are an incredibly cute baby seal! Aww, really, thank you darling. You make my day brighter!
Date: 01/25/13 05:01 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
"“Do I really seem like the type that would cook breakfast for any bitch I've had in my bed?”" --- I love how Tom is such a hardass, yet you know he LOVES Bill so he's never felt this way before and he'd never do anything for anyone else besides Bill... it's the kind of things, like this, making breakfast for someone, a sweet gesture like that, I find so romantic and cute and just ahhh-mazing!!! :3 I keep reading this story over and over again and imagine myself being with Tom and that he's such a hardass, yet soft and romantic with me and that I'm special to him and... ughh, dreams... I adore this story so much, I feel like I don't have the words to describe it. Your updates are so great and frequent and the quality is so wonderful, I think you should get so much more credit for your writing, but I can tell that you have a lot of readers who love this story too - and that is no mystery to me... as I'm your number 1 biggest fan! :P
Author's Response: You are by far the cutest and sweetest number 1 fan that I could ever ask for! *-* I love that you went back to read this again and that the story makes you feel all the things. ._. Thank you!!
Date: 01/24/13 07:13 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen
Reading this again - just because. Your story is LOVE! :3 Tom + Bill = LOOOOOVE!
Author's Response: HOLY COW, YOU ALWAYS MAKE ME SMILE SO BIIIIG. *-*