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Reviewer: Skebe-Neko Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/13 01:38 am Title: Chapter Twenty

You broke my heart with this. Im reading this while sitting in a buss so i cant cry but i would if i was home. I hope they can figure things out and be happy together again. Fucking bushido...

Author's Response: I'm so sorry that it hurt your heart and made you wanna cry. ._. But just trust me that they are going to figure this all out in their own ways and it'll be better again. I agree though, fucking Bushido. -.- Thank you for reading! :*

Reviewer: s3s3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/13 01:34 am Title: Chapter Twenty

oh man!!! that was so sad. snif

Author's Response: I know. ._. If you need hugs, I hear Gustav is pretty good at them. :)

Reviewer: mcr1970 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/13 08:52 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Wow, what a chapter! Hope you will make Bushido pay for this.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I won't let him get away unscathed, don't worry.

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/13 02:41 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

waaaaaaaah ;_; nooooooo!! Ugh, I feel like it would have gone so much better if Bill had framed it how it really was - his professor had suspected, and he was scared that he'd get hurt and nobody would know, so he told an "academic" version to him to get off the hook to NOT have to reveal more, and ended up having to do the project because he'd made up the excuse. Plus, there's no way he'd be able to do it on anything else with all his time so consumed. ahhh! this reminds me of Asian dramas when the characters don't tell the whole truth so it sounds worse than it is. ughh! if they can't make up before their fight...which I hope they do, maybe Bill could deviate from the plan and get Tom to fight him for real so that he won't be free...but that's thinking short term :/ idk

Author's Response: It would have gone perfectly if it had happened like that.. But then, it'd all be easy and happy and the story would stay in the same place. It's like in life, how the good is mixed in with the bad and vice versa. Things never go quite like you expect them too. But, Bill didn't say the right things and Tom didn't react well because Bu ambushed them there and they got flustered and it just didn't work out smoothly. :/ But, don't worry because things are going to work out! Just stick with me, kay? I'm really happy you are reading. Thank you!!

Reviewer: tina12011981 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/13 01:40 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Please,uptade more often!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm really happy you do! The next update will be on Monday. :)

Reviewer: dillblaxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/13 12:57 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Enough. You made my tears fall down like waterfalls, or is it just me who's too emotional? Well, I guess, drastic emotion changes in a chapter is really your thing, eh? Great job, again! I looooove the way you make me feel like slapping the life out of that cold-hearted bastard Bushido XD I can't wait for the next chappie XD
sincerely,
secret biggest fan

Author's Response: Youuuuu! I'm so happy that you are following me on twitter now! *-* I'm so sorry I made you cry, apparently other people cried because of this chapter though, so you're not alone! I guess that is sort of my thing.. I can't have a chapter be totally sad without good stuff or vice versa! Because in life, the good and the bad are always mixed in together. I'm glad that you wanna slap Bushido! He deserves it. xD Thank you so much for reading. You're awesome and I am happy that you're here!

Sincerely, very pleased writer

Reviewer: shitpisscatfuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/13 07:47 am Title: Chapter Twenty

NO! EVERYTHING IS RUINED!! *refuses to accept a reality where streetfighter!Tom and streetfighter!Bill are not in love. This broke my heart

Author's Response: DO NOT FEAR, ALL IS NOT LOST!! I promise that things are going to work out, these dudes just have to go through some stuff first. *patches up your heart gingerly* <3

Reviewer: hexenhasel Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/13 03:28 am Title: Chapter Twenty

Waaaaahhhhh!!!! *sobs and sobs* It's just so angsty, and Tom you idiot! I mean, you smart idiot for coming up with the plan near the end...but don't push Bill away *lip wibble*

Author's Response: That's the thing, even while being stupid, Tom is still just so logical! Ugghh. Don't cry though, because I promise things are going to be okay. They just have to go through some stuff first. Who can stay mad at Bill forever? I mean, just look at his pretty face. n.n Thank you, love!

Reviewer: annatk Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/13 03:11 am Title: Chapter Twenty

HOLY SHIT I TEARED UP... I MEAN.. OMG I AM SO EMOTIONALLY WRECKED AT THE MOMENT!!!!

My dear! You made my day!! I don't know if Tom is really hurt, or he's just trying to protect Bill but OMG.. I feel so sorry for both of them. Geez... all this drama. I need a cold shower. *kisses*

Author's Response: *hands you boxes of tissues and gives you endless hugs* HANG IN THERE WITH ME, HONEY.

I'm so happy you liked the chapter, even though it was sad! It's hard to say what Tom is feeling right now deep down. But he is definitely hurt, confused and feeling like he can't trust anyone. Despite that, he doesn't want Bill to get really hurt.

I hope you got your cold shower and washed the drama away! Thank you so much for reading and being awesome, as always. *smooches*

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/13 02:44 am Title: Chapter Twenty

omg, my soul died a little practically feeling Bills heart and world break apart and the hurt and betrayal Tom is feeling. God please tell me that douche nozzle Bu will get what he deserves!!!

Author's Response: I'm sorry for your soul. ._. Things will get better and Bu will get what he deserves, for sure! I love the term 'douche nozzle', haha. That fits him quite well, doesn't it? Thank you so much for reading!

Reviewer: TragicStateofAffairs Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/13 02:05 am Title: Chapter Twenty

Fix. It.

Author's Response: I'm on it, girl!

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/13 11:48 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

wow. i'm so shocked after what happened. i wasn't expecting Bu to show up like this and do what he did. damn, i can't even imagine how after that is so hard for Bill and Tom but i'm hoping that they would be together again :)

Author's Response: I know everything in the chapter came as sort of a surprise. ._. But if they care about each other enough, and we know they do, they will find a way back to each other! Until then, hang on tiiight. :) Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Rachellita Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/13 10:42 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

EURGH, my review didn't submit completed.

I totally thought that Bushido was going to have them be in a porno or two to make up for some lost cash monaaay. //facepalm

Author's Response: Omg.. That would be one hell of a plot twist that, honestly, would be pretty damn hot. xD I'd enjoy writing it! Don't facepalm, I like the way your mind works. xD

Reviewer: TomsCanadianGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/13 10:11 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Awwwwww you broke my heart =[

But, I trust you and I know you're going to make this better =D

I knew it! I knew Bushido was going to say they had to fight each other! Shitty but I was expecting it for some reason.

If only Bill would have told Tom sooner! Dammit Bill! Stupid Bushido! I'm not surprised Tom reacted the way he did. I know if I were him I'd react the same way. It's sad that things have turned out this way.

Like I said, I trust you to make it better =D

Even though this chapter was sad and upsetting, it was really, really good! You blow me away with every chapter you post and everything you write!

I'm nervous and excited for what's to come! Have a lovely week, love!

Author's Response: I will try my best to fix it! :(

I'm glad you trust me, and you know that I wouldn't let the story end with things being bad. I promise that.

You totally guessed that! It is shitty but Bushido is shitty so, I guess it's not that surprising. Still unfortunate though. :/

The timing was horrible and the stress and abruptness of the situation made everything come out all wrong. If Bill could have told Tom in private then I don't think it would have been so bad. Siiigh. But yes, I will make it betterrr. :)

Thank you sooo much for always complimenting my writing, even when it's sad or upsetting. I appreciate you so much as a reader! Thank you, thank you. Have an amaaazing week and I'll talk to you next Monday, I hope!

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/13 07:39 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

NNNNNNOOOOOOO!!!!!

you have got to quit making me cry!!! i just knew all of this would happen, but it's still tearing me up! tom has to forgive him! he just has to! let bill win the fight, bill will be free, and tom can leave town with him!

things WILL be okay, right? you WILL make everything okay, right??? *stares you down*

pretty please?

Author's Response: I'm sorrrrrryyyyyyyyy! ;-;

You know I don't like to make you cry, sis. ._. I won't tell you any secrets, but I will remind you that people who are meant to be together, always end up together. u.u That's alllll I'm saying! Also, I will make an effort to not make you cry so much, kay? ._. Because I love you and stuff.

Reviewer: Rainii93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/13 07:29 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

I have nothing to say SINCE I'M NOT BAWLING IN THE CORNER!!!!!!!!!!!
;-;

Author's Response: NOOOOOOO DON'T BAWL. ;-; *curls up with you in the corner, sniffing* It'll be okay, I promise. <3

Reviewer: caro4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/13 07:27 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

God I need another chapter...okay, okay I'll just reread the chapter x-

Author's Response: Rereading is good, but I will agree with you that a new chapter is better. u.u There will be one on Monday, I promise!

Reviewer: caro4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/13 07:24 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

And you my lady are the best writer in the WORLD!! (to me, at least :D)
The ending was sad but I'm sure at 100% that Tom won't stay mad at him, I mean, really who can seriously stay mad at Bill, right?
Georg I just fucking loooove you, he's just hilarious.
I might be a bit like gustav when he's hungry but like ten times worse(yes, yes it is possible)
I feel like the end of the story is near, hope that i'm completely wrong :O

Author's Response: Ohhhh, you flatter me! *-* Thank you so much, that's an amazing compliment.

Totally agree with you! All you have to do is look at Bill's face and you can't even remember why you were mad. :D

Hehe, Georg loves you too! He provides a good little relief in all the sadness.

O_O Are you really worse than Gustav? I will make sure to always give you food then! *hands you a plate of snacks*

It's closer to the end than the beginning.. But, I have no idea how many chapters there will be. Still a lot that will happen though so don't worry! Thank youuuuu. :)

Reviewer: thosechocolatebrowneyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/13 07:08 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

omg you have NO IDEA how much that lizard LARRY makes me laugh!!!! Imagining him with Georg.. I CAN'T STOP LAUGHING! :'D thanks!! :p great story btw keep going!

Author's Response: I can't tell you how happy I am that you focused on Larry in this chapter!! I wanted him to lighten up the sadness a little bit. Thank you sooo much. Laughter is good! I'll keep going for sure. <3

Reviewer: nessavonkaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/13 06:32 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

the pain OHHHHHHHHHHHHH the PAIN!!!!!!!!!!!
*sobbing* OMg andkjanfajdnf
SAD SAD!!!!!!!!!!!!! so sad it hurts
kill this feelings ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
;---------;!!!!!!!!!

Dear good Lord i just can't believe this happened
i had so much faith Bill was going to tell Tom everything and be his nurse lkadfkaf why oh God Why ;0;

Gosh!! and now the fight!! that fckin Bushido :'(

Amazing Chapter so hot!! so sad just Mind blowing
i will be dying for the next one
*sobbingalittlemore* OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: NOOOO DON'T CRYYYYYYY OR BE SAAAAAD. ;-; *hugs you and gives you cookies and other sweets until you are happy again* Better? u.u

I know, it wasn't what most people expected. But, it won't ever be predictable and I don't want it to be because you shouldn't have to read something that you've already pictured in your mind! I want it to be brand new. The fight though, yes. :/ Fuuuck Bushido, I agree!

Thank you so much. I'm really happy you enjoyed the chapter and it made you feel all the things! No more than a week till the next. :*

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