Date: 02/04/13 03:38 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Fantastic!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :*
Date: 02/04/13 03:27 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
When I first started to read this, I wasn't so sure about it. But after a few chapters, I'm addicted to this story now! I love it!
Author's Response: I am so happy that you gave my story a chance and that you love it now! Nothing is better than hearing that. :) Thank you so much!
Date: 02/04/13 03:14 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Tom better realize that he and Bill are perfect for each other. Bill doesn't expect Tom to be this perfect boyfriend, Bill loves Tom for who he is... since Bill met Tom in the beginning where he was so cold towards Bill, it's obvious that Bill has seen his good and bad sides and still cares very much for Tom, even when Tom chose to push Bill away. Tom better fucking realize that his perfect true love and soul mate is BILL and Bill's heart is breaking, because he loves Tom soooo much and Tom is being such a damn hardass, which I love and I understand why he is, but DAMN, SERIOUSLY, HE NEEDS TO GET A GRIP!!! It's understandable that they should focus on the fight now and NOT get into the whole "history" thing because if they got back together right away, it would be so hard to fight against one another, but AFTER the fight, or during it, Tom better realize that he can't live without Bill... Since Tom also said that the money and all that doesn't mean so much to him anymore, it's probably because of Bill... Tom wants Bill safe, Tom doesn't give a shit about the fights, the money or the rush... because he found something, or rather someone, who's so important to him it flushes away everything else... TOM LOVES BILL, and he needs to NEVER let Bill go. Because WE ALL KNOW that if Tom opens his arms for Bill again with love, then Bill will definitely not run away from him, that's for sure... !!! :) he'll run TO Tom! Into his arms, and never let go either... oh please... now I have to freaking wait for another week... *screams* this is torture... I love your story so much it hurts a little.
Author's Response: Deep down, Tom doesn't feel that he deserves Bill, and so he's trying to make up excuses to get Bill to lead his life and be happy without him. But, lucky for us, Bill is stubborn as hell and he isn't going to give up without a fight. So don't worry! You know Tom can't ignore his feelings forever. n.n THEY LOVE EACH OTHERRRR! I'm sorry you have to wait a week, but I promise it will go by fast! Thank you for being such an amazing reader and person. <3
Date: 02/04/13 03:09 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Tom still loves Bill. Obviously his feelings can't just go away, no matter how much he wants them to. I feel so sorry for Bill, because I can imagine how you'd try to drown your thoughts in work and busy yourself with distractions but the hurt and sadness is still right there beneath the surface, just waiting, and constantly reminding you that it's still not gone and it won't be for a long time... ohhh it's great that he has Gustav and I love how Gustav is so smart and sweet and his appetite for food... I feel like I'm a female version of Gustav - though I'm not big built or anything, but I might if I ate as much as Gustav. I really just WANT to eat as much as Gustav all the freaking time!!! :D he's so awesome and I always get into a better mood when I read about him eating... at least then I can 'imagine' that I'm eating too... like, he's eating nachos when he's opening the door or he's pushing Bill to eat his sandwich and chips, otherwise Gustav would love to enjoy that himself...!!! My mindset is exactly like Gustav acts... Seriously, it's funny and scary at the same time. LOVE BILL, TOM, GEORG AND GUSTAV. You manage to make them all amazing and different in this story, which is also the case in real life. Beautiful!
Author's Response: Kay, your reviews are so lovely to read!!! I love how you just write them as if you're talking to me, because that's how I am when I write reviews too. n.n Yes, Tom still loves Bill, no matter what he says and how he acts. We all know it. If you really are the female version of Gustav then you should probably be my best friend, okay? Okay! :D I'm really happy that you like all my characters! That means a lot to me. You're awesome, and I'm gonna go reply to your other review now. Thank youuuu. :*
Date: 02/04/13 03:05 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
"he couldn't seem to shake the feeling that this was the beginning of the end and Tom was just trying to break it to him gently." ---- AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!! *falls to the floor and cries* I love this story so much and I'm begging God (which is you, the fantastic writer) to let this story have some great chapters before it ends... not some quick cheesy happy ending - IF it'll even be a happy ending... I hope that it will be a great ending for Tom and Bill, together, not apart... not seperated, not away from each other but TOGETHER....
Author's Response: Nooooo crying, sweetheart!! I promise that things are gonna get better, okay? Just stick with me. I am so happy that you love this story. Your compliments brighten my day and I'm sure I don't deserve all your praise but I'm grateful for it! There will be a happy ending, I can assure you that. :) Thank you!
Date: 02/04/13 02:54 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
I AM SHKING! OH MY GOD.. I MEAN.. WHAT IS AIR.. AND.. OMG!!!!
Sweetie you nailed it. It was fantastic.. and OH MY... just please don't make this without a happy ending. I don't think my poor heart could handle it.
I love you and your stoy so so much!!
*kisses*
Author's Response: I have to say, you tweeting while you read Rough pretty much made my day! Seriously, I love how excited you get about my story and I feel super lucky to have you as a reader. <3
Date: 02/04/13 02:24 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Jeeez, now all I want is to see these guys together.... *brokenhearted*
But, oh well, at least they've talked... sort of xD
New chappie soon?
Author's Response: Their talk definitely didn't solve things, haha. But, there is still time for things to be worked out! I will post another chapter on Monday. :) Thank you so much for reading!
Date: 02/04/13 02:05 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
i sware you keep making me cry so mean :P
Author's Response: I swear I didn't mean to make you cry. :( I'll make it up to you!
Date: 02/04/13 02:00 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
I JUST WANT MORE. AAAAAAAH. HOW WILL IT END? THESE QUESTIONS, OH THESE QUESTIONS.
It's really good. LOTS OF HUGS.
Author's Response: Many questions are left to be answered!!! But I will definitely get to them all, just for you. :D Thank you so much and BIIIIG HUGS. <3
Date: 02/04/13 05:28 am Title: Chapter Twenty
IT IS MONDAY TODAAAAAAAAAY! *sings happily*
Author's Response: Yessss, it is! :D Update in about thirty minutes. n.n
Date: 02/02/13 09:26 am Title: Chapter Twenty
Hi.
I was a bit sceptical when I started reading this story..... But, after the two first chapters, I was so caught in it that I read it in one go, in a few hours.....And I didn't leave you a review sooner. Sorry but now I'm here!
Since the beginning, you know, one way or another, there will be a lot of drama and it couldn't end well.
But FUCK, YOU'RE SO MEAN WITH THEM!!!!!!!!!!! but it's so well written that I almost forgive you.
Let's take it since the beginning:
- The plot is really good, a unexpected, very special subject even if it didn't come right in the first chapter. Street fighting, I never read a story about that, but you manage to present it well and smoothly.
- Betweenn Tom and Bill.... it's a bit hard at the beginning. Tom is so strong, almost insensible. And it's so funny to see how Bill manage to creep his way into his heart, and vice-versa. they drive each other away but the attraction is growing slowly but unavoidable.
- The first time between us is.... SO HOT. Sure, the miw hurt and sex is a bit disturbing, and not totally normal.... But Hey, what's normal in their relation???? The first "I love you" by Tom surprised me, too. I didn't expecte him to say it- and Bill neither- but it has so much menaing this way.
They have lots of problems, mostly psychological ones, they're so fucked up, but somehow, they're perfect for each other. There are strength, weakness, doubts,lies between them..... but hopefully thet will overcome all of it.
- Bushido.... I totally hate him!!! even when we discover a little human side with his daughter....He's rally a bastard, and it's an understatement. He almost deserve to loose his daughter for putting Bill and Tom against each other. Being bit or dying would be too kind to him.
- On another side, I love Geo and Gus. They're true friends, a bit out of phase, sometimes wild type, but Bill can trust them... and he will need htem after this last chapter.
- About this last chapter, anyway....it was so good between Tom and Bill in the first part, despite Tom's physical state.
And then Bu... I slowly saw the fight coming, but it's no easier to cope with it.
Tom's plan is good. Magistraly interpreted, the fight could be a solution to their problems.... only could, if Tom wasn't ready to trully break up with Bill.
I know he's hurt by Bill's supposed lack oftrust. But is'nt what they live together more important than this little misundertsanding? Because it is a misundertsanding, Bill has always planned to tell him, it only was never the good time.
And I trully would have liked to see what wnet throught Tom's mind during their conversation. Tom was hurt by life and thinks he is right to see it like a betrayal. He hasn't faith in them. Will he really be able to turn away from Bill? I doubt it's possible!
About what will come next...
I'm sure the fight - if we trully get to it- won't go as planned, even if they staged it. I don't know why but I clearly see Bill finding an infiallible argument to free Tom from Bushido, even if it's against Tom's will and best judgement. Something Tom can't let pass.... And Bill and Tom will trully fight!!!
I can't wait to sse what you have in store for us. I'm already sure it will be astonishing!!!
Love. Kiki
PS: after this long review... I have something to ask you.
I'm french and do a few translations.
I'd like to add this wonderful story to the ones I already translated.
Would you allow me to do so??? Feel free to think about it and tell me your answer. Even if it's no, I would hold it against you!!!
XXXX
Author's Response: Hello!! I am so happy you decided to give my story a chance and I'm impressed that you were able to read it straight through like that! And this review was plenty for the whole story, really! What an amazing review. *-*
Date: 02/01/13 11:59 am Title: Chapter Twenty
Heyyy! I'm so sorry for my lack of reviews... I fell behind while I was aways a few months back but now I'm all caught up and will read as you post! I miss following a good TH fic and having new chapters to read... Anyways! This story just keep getting better and better. Seriously, the way you handled the progression of their relationship is flawless. Love the characters and the plot. This chapter was sad but I trust you to make it all better for them eventually... Thanks for this story, there's not a lot of TH fics being updated these days so I'm very grateful that you're still writing for this fandom! =)
Author's Response: Hey you! I'm so happy that you are all caught up now, and please don't worry about not reviewing. I know you were a traveling girl! It's great to see you back. :) I know.. It makes me sad that a lot of my favorite authors don't post anymore, and I feel so lucky that people get excited for my updates each week. Because I know how that feels to look forward to an update!
Date: 01/31/13 11:04 am Title: Chapter Twenty
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
I find it soooooo sad!!!!! Why'd do this to us?! :(
Puhleeeease new chappie soon!!!!!
Author's Response: :( I'm sorrryyy, but you know this wasn't meant to be easy for them. The new chapter will be up on Monday and these two can start figuring out how to work this out! Thanks so much for reading. :*
Date: 01/31/13 06:01 am Title: Chapter Twenty
Damnit... really. I somehow knew that at one point you'd put them fight each other, but it's still so tragic. I really love this pairing and I'm head over heels in love with this Tom. Haha, well, I always am, but still...
It's like those moments, when it's so dark right before the sunrise.
I'm sure you'll make it work, but it's still so tragic to be cornered like this.
Author's Response: You did have an idea earlier on that they would fight each other, I remember
Date: 01/30/13 07:05 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
I am so mad at Tom for not understanding Bill's research situation! But i understand that he just went through a lot of stressful situations so i am just hoping time will fix this problem :(.
Are you a college student? If so, what are you majoring in? I am majoring in Spanish and Psychology.
Author's Response: You're exactly right, Tom has been through a lot of situations that make trusting people hard and putting faith in people even harder. So, he's let down and expecting the worst. Time and care can fix anything though! :)
Date: 01/30/13 06:58 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
Well what the fuck. How do you keep managing to fuck everything up? NO. Noooo. Nein. Bill and Tom cannot split you evil son of a-
Okay. Rage mode, go away. Goooo. Goddamn it. This chapter made me sadder than I thought it could. So you know, I'm just gonna go eat for a while, make myself feel better. xD
All in all, it was still amazing just like everything else you write. I'm SO looking forward to the next chapter. TELL ME. How do you write so much in such a short amount of time? My fics are KILLLLING me. Damn, you're an inspiration. c: -Huggles-
Author's Response: Your rage mode is definitely warranted, haha. I know, I know, things fell apart. But this isn't the end of the story and there is still lots of time to fix things and work them out. :3 However, until then, munch on some yummy foods to make you feel better, yes. u.u
Date: 01/30/13 04:55 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
Because of you I actually look forward to Mondays, of course only because that's when you update, so you just automatically make my Mondays better. Thank you for that! :3
Author's Response: I am so flattered that I can make your Monday better! I know how horrible Mondays can be. :/ You're so welcome, but thank YOU for making my Monday great by reading my story and always leaving your lovely thoughts. :)
Date: 01/30/13 01:54 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
I am in a swimming pool of tears. BUSHIDO SHOULD BE PUSHED OFF A VERY HIGH CLIFF SO HE HAS TIME TO THINK ABOUT WHAT HE HAS DONE ON THE WAY DOWN. Tom, GET YO MIND RIGHT BOY. BILL IS IN LOVE WITH YOU WHY CAN'T YOU JUST UNDERSTAND THAT!? and Bill, c'mere poor baby you need a hug /squeezes him and strokes his hair
Author's Response: SWIM SAFELY TO SHORE!! ;-; Bushido really does deserve horrible things to happen to him, I agree with that. And Tom is too busy feeling hurt and betrayed to think about how much Bill loves him. ._. But really, Bill needs a big hug and so you just keep hugging him. Maybe feed him some gummy worms. He'd like that a whole lot.
Date: 01/30/13 12:33 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
NOOooooooooo! *falls to knees and grasps head*
What the, how the, why the...I don't even...WAS DIE FICK?!?!
So...um...*distracts self from the horrible ending* Georg. Sober. I'm proud of them for being all 'we aren't going to let this asshat run our lives' but kinda disappointed they didn't march Bill to the police or at least his professor. But at least Gus is rooming with Larry for a few days. ..btw, why may I ask was Larry not included in that little powwow? He was a witness he deserves some recognition ass such lol...
Author's Response: *drops to my knees to comfort you sadly* It'll be okaaaaaay! However, I am glad that the chapter made you feel things, even if they weren't the best things. :(
Date: 01/30/13 07:16 am Title: Chapter Twenty
Awww poor Bill T.T this was so sad! can't you kill Bushido? :D or his doughter! that would cause him some pain :D hehe anyway update soon pleaseeee <3 can't wait till Bill and Tom's fight, even though it's fake. waitiiing for moreeeeeeee *u*
Author's Response: I wish that it was that easy of a fix! But I promise that the guys are going to figure this out and it won't stay like this forever. :) Bushido definitely deserves to suffer, though. Thank youuuu so much for reading! There will be another update on Monday. :D