Date: 02/06/13 06:21 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
WHOA! You made such an emotional chapter again, or is it just me? Well, my inside exaggerates things too much sometimes, you know I was crying while reading this chappie. Because, they are indeed inseparable :'( aaaand you did such amazing job! whoa, I can't even....AH A CHAPPIE ABOUT THE FIGHT PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE!!!!!!!! XDD *le tickles you everywhere possible*
sincerely,
your biggest fan
Author's Response: I didn't realize it was so emotional!! But I guess it kinda was. ._. Other people cried too so you're not alone, honey! Thank you soo much, I'm really glad you liked the chapter even though it was sad. ._. YES, A CHAPTER ABOUT THE FIIIIGHT SOON!!! *squirms and laughs uncontrollably* I'm incredibly ticklish! u.u You are adorable, holy cow. Thank you so much for this and for being you!!! <333
Date: 02/05/13 10:56 pm Title: Chapter One
Ok whew *wipes brow* that's a relief. I dunno what I would've done if you did that to us. Probably love you anyway, and cuddle Tom through the trauma, and help him kick Bushido's ass myself *pounds fists and bats eyes* anyway. Fantastic work honey. I feel like I haven't given you due props these last few chapters...but seriously. They've been amazing, and I can't wait for montag.
Author's Response: You have given me plenty of credit for the chapters! Really, I look forward to your reviews and your compliments are always so sweet. I promise to never put you through something like that but I am so happy that you would love me anyway! As I love youuu. I hope you like the next chapter, darling!
Date: 02/05/13 09:23 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
I don't know if I will have a long review for you this time, but I have to say, this chapter was amazing. Sure there wasn't a whole lot of excitement or drama or whatever, but I thought it was so wonderful! Every one of your stories/chapters are wonderful, I just felt like this one was so exceptional. I don't know why and I don't know if I can explain it lol
Even though emotions weren't running as high in this chapter as much as they were the previous one, I swear, I could feel the pain and hurt that both Bill and Tom were feeling. It was all in what they weren't saying. You know? Bill is pretty easy to read, so I knew how he was feeling, but Tom, he's so closed off and keeps stuff to himself.
The whole time spent in the barn, I kept holding my breath because all I wanted was for Tom to say something, anything about how he was feeling. But really, he didn't need to. I could see how much pain he was in, just like Bill. It saddens me that things have come to this point, but I have complete faith in you. Not all stories are happy and full of sunshine and daisies and I definitely didn't expect this one to be like that. I honestly don't know if this review makes any sense, but I loved this chapter and I cannot wait to see what's to come.
I have a feeling the fight between Bill and Tom is going to be epic and the wool is going to be pulled over Bu's eyes. I sure hope so anyways! =D
Have a great week, love!
Author's Response: You did manage to make the review long and wonderful (as always). <3 I am so happy that you enjoyed the chapter even though it didn't have a ton going on. And really, your compliments are made me blush!! Whether you can explain it or not, thank you for saying that. It makes me smile.
Date: 02/05/13 04:37 pm Title: Chapter One
I feel more butterfly in my belly when I read this story then when I talk with a crush!...is that even normal? Ah I just need to hug someone now and you are on my way*hug*
thank you thank you thank you, for making my day
I look forward the next chapter on monday :D
Author's Response: I don't know if it's normal but I love that so, fly butterfly, fly! :D I know that feeling though, so well, and I'm happy that my story makes you feel it. *hugs you super tight* Thank you for making me smile with this review and always being such an awesome reader! I hope you like what's coming next. <3
Date: 02/05/13 02:08 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
*awkward turtle* There was so much tension! It was like my actual life, because everything is always so awkward. But I know (or think) that they'll move past this. I believe in them!!! I am also impressed with Larry's tongue ;) Do girls really love donuts that much? *takes notes*
Author's Response: Oh my gosh, I have a propensity for awkward situations as well so I totally feel you on that, haha. I agree with you, I think they will move past this. It's just going to take some time. :/ Larry is quite the impressive little guy, all around. ;) Dude, girls love donuts. But they will never buy them for themselves unless they want to feel horrible about themselves after eating the entire box, haha. True story. u.u
Date: 02/05/13 11:02 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Loved the chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm glad! :*
Date: 02/05/13 04:03 am Title: Chapter One
Promis?
Author's Response: I promise you! :)
Date: 02/05/13 03:16 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
This is such an amazing story! I love it.
The whole time I read this chapter I just wanted to take their heads put them together and say, "now kiss."
Can't wait for the next chapter. (:
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really happy you're enjoying it, sweetie. And I wish it was that easy to just push them together and make them kiss! It would definitely solve a lot of problems. n.n The next chapter will be on Monday! Thank youu for your lovely words. :)
Date: 02/04/13 11:21 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
i like it. hopefully they will do their job really good and maybe make-up after what happened
Author's Response: Thank you so much! My fingers are crossed for all of that, too. Next update will be on Monday. :)
Date: 02/04/13 08:13 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Hahahahahahahahh i love Larry :D
Author's Response: Haha, I can always count on you to love on Larry!! Thank youuuuu!
Date: 02/04/13 08:04 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Ok. No. *mom look* tell me you aren't making Tom related to that asshat, no matter how distantly. Please tell me I'm reading too far into that, and that my mind is seeing things because its a sick twisted place...Tom's not Bushido's daughter's uncle is he?
So...how much time was there between Bill meeting Tom the first time, and then finding the fight behind the club? I'm a little confused about the time line of when Tom left his dad and stuff...
Bushido. Long walk, short pier, tall cliff .*nod* I've had it about up to here *holds hand eye level* with that asshat. And was so pleased someone has put him in his place at least once. I can't wait to here more about that!
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: You are reading too far into it, promise! I wouldn't go there, I swear. So don't worry about that, honey.
Date: 02/04/13 08:03 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Even though it's so sad right now, this is such a good love story. The dynamic between Bill and Tom is so perfect, and you can tell that they tragically love each other to such an extent that they're willing to sacrifice so much of their own happiness for the other. It's just so beautiful...but I sincerely hope that things will somehow work out for them in the end. Even though I love kind of sad but poetic endings, I've had such a depressing and gloomy week already that something needs to happy eventually! Wonderful job AS ALWAYS.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for the amazing compliments. I'm happy that you are enjoying the story even though it isn't particularly cheery right now. Bill and Tom really care about each other. The situation isn't easy but they're going to figure out a way to make it work and the ending will be a happy one! I'm so sorry to hear that you had a hard week, but I am very thankful that you took the time to read and leave me your lovely words! I hope tomorrow is a better one for you. <3
Date: 02/04/13 06:29 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
*writhes with emotion* Oh man, you really know how to pull a reader's strings! I'm not sure if their situation is looking up or staying the same. Maybe looking up XD
Gasp. A "her" in Bushido's life? Blarg, I still don't think I can like him again. No matter how much you humanize him! XD
[..] as Georg pulled out a little lizard snack and threw it up in the air -- I was reading this fast and completely missed "snack" and so read it as Georg throwing *Larry* up in the air XD
"I chose this life, you didn't" -- Or did the thug life choose *Tom*?
Yeahhh, I've been reading Kit's tumblr posts far too much XD
Going to do some stuff now, but will reread it later! Cuz it's that good, hehe.
Author's Response: It's definitely all up in the air, but I agree with you that it's better than it was before! I'm so happy that my chapters make you feel the things though. That's what I want!
Date: 02/04/13 06:22 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
seriously. i'd love to read a chapter from you and not cry. my heart is in a million pieces for bill right now. and tom is still so in love with him but is trying to be such a hard ass. ugh! i can't wait til this whole fight mess is over...even though i have no idea what will happen when it is.
Author's Response: I didn't mean to make you cry with this one, I really didn't. .__. But you are a sweetheart for feeling for Bill. Tom is trying to be a hard ass and he honestly thinks that Bill can do better than him, so he's trying to push him to a better life. Bill isn't going to stand for that though! I'm actually happy that you don't know where the story is going, because I like to keep you guessing and surprised! I will try to not make you cry next chapter. ._. Thank you so much, sis!
Date: 02/04/13 05:53 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
askdjlaksdjlasd I bow!! this was like a really awesome example of how one should act!! they are so strong akfjalkf!!
i was thinking, OMG if i was in a love situation like this i will be crying and dying of pain :'D hahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sad, amazing, heartbreaking chapter i just love it!!!!
OMG Tom and pencilia haaaaaaahaha i just loved that part hahaha it was so perfect and funny!!!
and Geo and Larry xD!!! and Bill thoughts LOL
;u; aaaaaaahhhhhhh everything hurts!!! dear lord ...i will be dying for the next one!!
thank you so much really amazing chapter!!!
Author's Response: You are SO cuuuuute, oh my gosh! This was the kind of review that puts a giant smile on my face, okay? :D I'm really happy you loved the chapter and that it gave you all the feels! The boys are definitely being a lot stronger than I would be too. ._.
Date: 02/04/13 05:47 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
e_e
Author's Response: n_n <3 :* :D
Date: 02/04/13 05:03 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
yeeeaaaah I still wanna cry. Fucking Tom and his damn stubbornness! But I guess in the end it's going to work out best for the fight -- which, admittedly, I'm scared to read! I'll prolly have to read it behind my fingers, but don't know how easy that will be.....
Oh well, till next time pretty lady
Author's Response: Don't cry anymore tears because of these silly boys! ._. Tom is stubborn and Bill is stubborn too, but they are going to figure this shit out somehow. Reading behind your fingers is certainly a challenge but not impossible. xD You are so cute!! Thank you, sweetie. I hope you like what's coming next! :*
Date: 02/04/13 04:28 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
I am still waiting for something that is going to change their situation. Don't know what it will be, because Tom is pretty determined to not to be with Bill. He loves him and still don't want that relationship because he is not a guy who does relationships. Can I slap him please? I know he is injured, but I hit like a girl, it won't hurt him. Much.
And Bill? I can't believe him. So passive. I can't wait to read more, because I have no idea about your next move. Girl, you know how to play the game. ;)
And I really can't wait to see them fighting, I want to read their thoughts so much, omg, hope you will write about their emotions during the fight, I know I am weirdo, but this... will be awesome haha. I love seeing into their minds when things happen lol.
Author's Response: The thing is, Tom doesn't think he is anywhere close to good enough for Bill, and he thinks that pushing Bill away is for his best. Luckily, Bill is incredibly stubborn and isn't going to let Tom push him away like that without trying hard to fix it. Go ahead and hit some since into Tom though! He could certainly use the push, haha. :)
Date: 02/04/13 04:27 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
I just came here to write a fabulous review under the last chapter, as I promised, and here you are with another one, not any less heartbreaking. YOU.
"... he couldn't seem to shake the feeling that this was the beginning of the end and Tom was just trying to break it to him gently."
;____________________; You are so lucky I have a super glue and my heart probably isn't going to break any time soon again. But this actually depends on you, you know. *glares*
The tension. Omg, the tension was seriously killing me. I could feel it radiating from my screen. ;_; And I just want to punch Tom for acting like a hard ass when in fact he's as soft as a fucking marshmallow. Just let them be together ok? OK?
Anyway, fabulous chapter, you fabulous thing. *sends lots of love*
Author's Response: ME. AND YOU. I can't promise that there won't be more heartbreaking moments in the future, but I can promise to be here with extra super glue and hugs if you need them!!
Date: 02/04/13 03:58 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
lecker lecker chapteeer!! keep the level, darling!
Author's Response: Lecker lecker WAFFLEEE! I mean.. What? :D Danke, danke.. DANKE. I shall keep it up, nenaa! <3