Date: 02/11/13 11:01 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
OH MY GODDDD. I kind of think I love Bleak in a sick sadistic way... :D This chapter was nothing short of amazing, Love. I'm so excited about the fight and maybe afterwards sexytime? Yeah. Sexy time is always nice c:
GOD I am such a nut. Welp. I don't want this story to end any time soon. Stretch it girl, stretch it real good. I never want the goodness of our favorite little twins here to end. Damn, I can't wait for the next chapter.
And on a darker note... Alone on Valentines day! Here's to being single for now and the rest of my life! Maybe if I do a google search on
'how to make band members appear naked in my room' one MIGHT just show up! -Huggles-
Author's Response: I'm happy you like the Bleak twist! :D I'm excited about the part he plays in the story. I totally agree, sexy time is always very nice. n.n We will see what happens, hehe. :)
Date: 02/11/13 09:58 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
awwww, Im glad B & T will figure things after the fight... and its like maybe they'll not really or that their fight will interrupt by Bleak...something like that. hehe finally bu'ass gonna be kicked
Author's Response: I'm glad those two stopped trying to fight it, too! Your ideas are definitely good, and I won't leave you waiting long to find out what happens. ;) Thank you so much for reading and always leaving me your thoughts!
Date: 02/11/13 07:36 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
THIN MINTS!!!
okay, sorry. just had to get that out.
okay, so tom has finally admitted that he's powerless when it comes to bill and maybe they'll manage to be okay again after the fight...but now we've got a whole buncha ugly that just got out of prison who i'm assuming will be nothing but trouble.
why do you do this to me, sis? i'm old. i can't take it.
at least i didn't cry this time.
Author's Response: THEY ARE MY FAVORITE!!!
Date: 02/11/13 07:08 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGG i almost had a heart attack at the end!!!! i fckin thought it was Bushido
DEAR GOOD GOTT aklsdjalskda xD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AMazing chapter
THERE IS HOPE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*sobbing* OMG
the training was so hot OMG!!! and so funny (thedickpartlol)so much tension and then the kiss waaa almost died of happiness but then almost cry cause silly Tom wanted to end everything poor Bill :(
Awesome really awesome chapter!!!the final part is just perfect
everything is perfect omg i need to read again asdkaskldja
thank you so much for share with us this chapter even when you were so busy!!*-----------* and omg congrats for your new baby :3
Author's Response: Thank goodness it wasn't Bushido, oh my gosh! That would have been the worst thing imaginable. D:< There is hope though, yesssss! Haha, I'm so glad to see you happy! You deserve it after the past couple of sad chapters. :(
Date: 02/11/13 07:02 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
amazing... amazing... amazing!
Author's Response: You? Yep, you are. <3
Date: 02/11/13 06:57 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Oh my God, so much chaptery goodness. So loooong! But then, the last five or so have been really long too XD
Yikes, that Melissa is a bit of a dumbass. A person faking that they've ~changed~ while in prison/jail is the oldest trick in the criminal book.
Lord, I wouldn't want to have a roomate who brought home hook-ups while I was there. That would suck extremely DX
And omg, the sexual tension. Hehe, I was quivering with delight while reading it. *heart*
Lastly, gah, I hope that Bleak -- totally didn't see his character coming into all this -- doesn't tell Bushido that they plan to act out the fight (at least initially). Otherwise I don't entirely care that he's going after him =P
Author's Response: Yes, they've been so long lately! I feel like if I make them shorter again then I'll cheat you guys out of a quality chapter because I always feel so disappointed when I wait for an update and only get like 1,000 words. So I try to make it as long and rich as possible. :)
Date: 02/11/13 06:39 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
This was one of the perfect things to get to read before going off to get my wisdom teeth removed! But oooooooooo what the fuck is going to happen at the fight, I've got some ideas but I'll just wait and see.
AND FINALLY! God those two stubborn asses and their stubbornness. But I'm so freaking glad they're back together. EEep!
Hope Pip doesn't steal toooooo much more of your time I can't wait to read what comes next!!
Author's Response: Ohhhh honey, I wish you so much luck tomorrow! It will be fine and you won't feel any pain because they will give you good drugs. u.u I wonder if your ideas are the same ideas that I have? We shall seeeeee. :D
Date: 02/11/13 06:28 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I loved the chapter! Everything is kinda starting to get better for their relationship, looks like bushido's rival( forgot his name :O) didn't really change ey...
Awww you got a cat, what race is it, I personnaly ADORE bengal cat, oh and is it a kitten?? Always wanted to get a cat but my brother is allergic :( ...we have a turtle though!
Don't kill yourself by writing to much! I wouldn't mind getting the chapter on tuesday or wednesday if it means that you are still alive!
Plus a cat means a lot of responsability ^_^
Next chapter is the fight right? Hope it will go humm Ican't really say well but yeah, hope it won't be terrible :/
Author's Response: I'm so happy you loved it! Haha, Bleak is still mad at Bushido, even after having years to get over it. We will see what he gets up to.. u.u
Date: 02/11/13 06:18 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
where's Larry? :D i miss him :p Great job! :DDD
Author's Response: Larry so appreciates you missing him! I'll let him know that he should make an appearance next chapter. ;) Thank you!
Date: 02/11/13 06:14 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
write fast little kit kat e.e
Author's Response: Yes, ma'am. ;) Really though, you know I'll do my best. Thank you, sweetie pants.
Date: 02/11/13 05:53 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
THEY KISSED ASDFGHJKL;
I'm freaking out not only because they kissed and pretty much got back together or are on their way to get back or something like that but this Bleak guy!!! Omg, what is he going to do? Do I want to find out? No I don't, but I can't wait for your next fabulous chapter anyway!
*sends lots of kisses and hugs*
Author's Response: THEY TOTALLY KISSSSSED. :D
Date: 02/11/13 05:24 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I giggled when Tom told Bill to get down on his knees. :D hehehe... oh and this moment: "Instead of answering, Tom leaned in and pressed his lips firmly to Bill's" OH MY GOD, yes!!! Tom had to kiss Bill, he's been craving him so much. I LOVE THIS !!!!!!!! I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT. OoOOHHHHooHHH OHH and it sounds like Bleak will get to Bushido and things will get even more dramatic with Bushido and Tom and Bill... and now this guy Bleak. Maybe Tom and Bill will save Bushido's ass or his daughter's because Bleak will try something, and then Bushido will owe Tom and Bill and they will want Bushido to let them go and he will because he owes it to them and then Tom and Bill can be together, laugh, cry, and have amazing sex and kiss as much as they want and be happy together. OHHHH!!!!! Lovely chapter. I was soooo looking forward to this and though I wish it was longer, I'm definitely not disappointed. Now I'm looking forward to next Monday and the next after that... ughhh, your story is fantastic and you're my favorite writer because you're so sweet and friendly and your updates are incredibly stabile. I applaud you. *bows down for you*
Author's Response: I knew you would like that kiss!!! That's the thing, when you still love someone it's hard to resist kissing them when you're around them, no matter the situation. :) I'm so happy you love it! Bleak is definitely going to add some more drama, but not really for Bill and Tom. So that's good. u.u I like the way you think about the rest of the story! Amazing sex is always a good idea. n.n Thank you sooo much! I wish I could have made it longer, but the next definitely will be since a lot will be going on. :) Thank you for your amazing compliments. It's impossible to not be sweet and friendly to you because you are adorable. Next update will be long and ready on Monday for you! Thanks again for all of your support, darling. <3
Date: 02/11/13 05:22 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you, sweetheart!
Date: 02/11/13 05:06 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
THERE I GO!! BE READY
Author's Response: Nope, I'm not ready for your cuteness.
Date: 02/10/13 05:25 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
HI!
Once more, I think you manage to outdo yourself with each new chapter. The best part in this chapter being Tom's and Bill's tight discussion.... But more in details...
- Bill was hit really hard by the previous chapter, he neglects himself by being to bothered about what happened and 'losing' Tom.
-Hopefully, Gus is there - like always- to kick his ass and put his head straight.... with no pun intended!
- Tom is better physically, but morally he's not better than Bill.
- The more I see Bu, the more I despite him... but his chat with Tom give me a little spark of hope, Tom sees Bill didn't lie to him and what he didn't say wouldn't have stay that way...
So, there is more about Bu's daughter, Tom may use it later and have a pressure point.
- Like Gus, Geo is great, like always and has Bill's back. Will the G's have a hand in the future fight? Maybe in Tom's ans Bill's reconciliation? I'd like that!
- It's the first time Bill and Tom see each other after their 'break-up'
They try to act tough - mostly Tom- but neither is dupe, and Tom somehow admits he still care for Bill. I never doubt it because it wouldn't be that hard on him if he didn't love him so much.
They do their best to don't act on it, but since the begining we know, it never was that easy between them.
- We learn more about Bu, not that I care about what happens to him, but it could be handy later...
- The situation could be far more easy between Tom and Bill if only they could give themselves another chance.... And Tom's few lapses trully show it
But maybe it's not the right time, maybe it need to wait until they're both free...
- OOh, Tom os ready to give up his fighter's life, he only needs time??? He started thinking about it because of Bill, didn't he?? Before their spat..
- Tom admits the figth isn't to get rid himself of Bill, but so he could be safe??? What a déclaration!!!!
He's not mad anymore but convinced that everything was to prove they weren't menat to be together. But depite everything, he still loves Bill, even if he didn't say it with those words.
I can't say I'm trully happy or reassured by this chapter.
Of course, they talk, and there are some good things in it about "them"... But nothing is settled and it could easily swing one way or another, for the better or the worse....
I didn't expect it to be all cuddles and butterflies in only a few lines, it doesn't work this way between them, because of your wonderful writing...
But it doesn't seem to go the right way despite all they still feel.
I guess it's only the beginning of something: the end of "them" or their revival.
I have a new hypothesis for you. I'm still adamant the fight will be a true
one. But after that, if Bill wins, he won't hear from Tom for a long time...Then Tom would come back in his life free and maybe ready to trully love him.... in Tom's fucked up way of love :P
I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Love. Kiki.
PS: Thank you so much. It trully will be a pleasure to translate and share this story!
DOn't worry, I always give the credits to the author when I translate a story. I'll send you a link to it when I post it... Usually, I wait to have the full story translated before posting it.
XXX
Author's Response: Thank you sooo much for reading and for leaving me another wonderfully in depth review! I love how you focus on all the details and think about them, that makes me very happy as a writer. The chapter definitely didn't reassure that they'll be okay, but it showed that they could still talk and be around each other, because they do care for each other. Thank you for the wonderful compliments! I think your hypothesis is a great one and I will keep my mouth shut for now, but I think you're on the right track. :) I'm so happy you want to translate my story! I wish you luck with it, love. Thank you again and I just posted the new chapter, so I hope you'll enjoy! :*
Date: 02/08/13 12:42 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
I just red all the chapters again , don't know why. Maybe because this is an amazing story and i just can't wait to read more. These few days will be hell. I'll be counting seconds to the new update this whole weekend! :D You're amazing!!
Author's Response: I am so happy that you like my story enough to read it over again!! The next update is coming very soon.. Just one full day left! YOU are amazing, kay? Really, this review brightened my whole night. Thank you! <3
Date: 02/07/13 01:37 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
It's not beginning of the end right? They'll work their shit out right? And they'll live happily ever after right? And Bushidos ass gets kicked right? And you will update soon right? And i will stop saying right, right? This was amazing i wanna read more soon so be fast with the update like you have been in the past >:)
Author's Response: Haha, all of your questions are perfectly justified and I would ask them too if I were you! I will say that there is still time for them to work their shit out and figure out a happily ever after. u.u And Bushido will get what's coming, and I will update again on Monday!! Say right as often as you want, girl. I'm so glad you liked it! Thank youuu and I hope you enjoy the next chapter. :)
Date: 02/06/13 05:50 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
I sense hope in the air for them. I refuse to believe that once things are said out loud, people let things slip through their fingers. I'm just like that, I guess. The fight will be interesting and not easy, but I'm sure the guys can handle us. More I'm worried of what'll happen after that...
Author's Response: I agree with you completely. Once things are addressed, they are out there and can't be ignored or pushed away entirely. The fight will definitely be a challenge physically and emotionally and afterward is all very mysterious, even to me still. But I will have another chapter on Monday that will shed more light! Thanks for always being such an amazing reader. <3
Date: 02/06/13 03:33 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
/stumbles into review box and falls over
SO MANY FEELINGS~ I'm glad that Bill and Tom have made up a little now though yay~
(also Bill playing Danny oh my god I agree with Tom I'd pay so much to see that) BABIES I DON'T WANT THEM TO FIGHT *wails and holds them tightly against self* YOU CAN'T HAVE THEM, BUSHIDO, YOU ASSHAT.
So yes, you're amazing and I still luurve you and I shall be waiting in my little hub for the next update, k :3 *showers you with sparkly cut-out hearts and confetti*
P.S. Srsly Larry is the COOLEST lizard I need him now omg
Author's Response: I don't know how you manage to get cuter EVERY TIME OMG.
Date: 02/06/13 03:19 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
This chapter killed me.
It's so sad seeing them like this, I just cant ;__;
Author's Response: You are here! I've missed you because I haven't seen you on twitter. ._. And don't be sad, honey. Things will look up! Stick with meeeee. <3