Date: 02/17/13 12:55 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I love your story so much. Nothing new about that - guess I just wanted to write that again. (:
Author's Response: You are seriously so adorable! *-* I can't wait to hear what you thought of the new chapter. <3
Date: 02/17/13 12:54 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I haven't even given you enough credit for the photo of this story. You see Tom's black eye and Bill beside him and Tom's sexy face and his cornrows... I have no idea how you got that made and edited, but it's amazing. Tom looks as gorgeous as always with those cornrows and I zoomed in on the picture in another window and the quality of the picture is so great... so beautiful!!!
Author's Response: Thank you sooo much! I have an awesome friend that made the banner for me. She just edited together three pictures and made it all work for the story perfectly. I couldn't be happier with it! Thank you, again sweetie. :)
Date: 02/17/13 08:22 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Hi.
I didn't know what I expected before reading this chapter, but I will only keep one word to describe it: HOPE! futur or lack of it....
- Bill doesn't know if he must loose hope about an "us" fot Tom and himself. There's still feelings and a strong desire too.... but he doesn't know if it's better or worse for him. he doesn't know how to handle it, to have faith or to loose it...
- Bushido.... Serve you right Bastard!!!!!!
Oh, so you enjoy Bill and Tom's predicament, now take a shot of your own medicine, karma and life are bitches and you will fully taste it soon.
It will be hard for Sasha to loose his father.... but he's such an awful and detestable man, she doesn't know it but he will get what he deserves.
- Gus... dear Gus, what will Bill do without him? He always here to cheer Bill up and to give him the right tips about his life. Gus has an unbiased view on Tom and Bill's relationship, so he can see what's still good and hopeful in it.
-Tom is hard on Bill during training, but it's necesseary and making up for repressed desire. The hardness is needed for Bill to stay focused and serious.
Tom is also realistic about their situation concerning Bushido, he could see through their charade and it would be good if they weren't prepared.
It's interesting to see them fight against each other, even if it's fake. It's different from the training they have before. And I love the teading depite the seriousness of it all.
THEY KISSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND TOM MADE THE FIRST STEP!!!!!!!!!!
You can see I'm happy about it, but I'm not too surprised. Fighting has always been a turn-on and had a strong sexual tension for them, so fighting each other... it must be a step higher!
But of course, Tom backs off, Bill is upset, and once more there is a misunderstanding between them.... but they clear it out.
Bill can't do it without hope there will be someting more, he couldn't handle it to fight, kiss without having the certitude it's not trully over. Tom seems to feel the same way, and it's a good thing they could make it clear. Now they know where they stand, what they want, and that it's mutual.
They have a promess for after, they will try after the fight is over. The feelings are still there and Bill and Tom will be ready to free them when they are free themsleves.
And I'm sure Bleak will have a key hand in it. But how and with which consequences on the lovers???
One sure thing: Be ready Bushido, justice and revenge are coming your way.
The final count-down began. The fight, their futur... everything will be decided in the next chapter...
It will so intense no matter what. I'm excited, stressed, I can't wait to read it but I fear it in the same time. So many things will happen, and I don't know which will be good... it could so easily go all wrong.
Don't be too harsh on Bill and Tom, be rightfully harsh on Bushido.... And be sure I'll be there to read it.
Love.
Kiki
Author's Response: Once again, you're so awesome for pointing out the details of the chapter! You seem to understand the characters well. :) And yesss, they kissed! They couldn't fight that tension for too long. I hope the new chapter that I just posted answers some of your questions.. I can definitely promise you that Bushido is going to get what he deserves. I really hope you enjoy the new chapter and thank you sooo much for reading and leaving me such an amazing review! Love, love. :*
Date: 02/16/13 03:53 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Can't wait for the fight to come (my sick perverted little mind drools alraedy, lol).
Sorry for not commenting your last couple of chapters. The development has been really good, first I was kinda pissed at Tom for being such a stupid twit, believing Bu, mistrusting Bill and thinking that Bill would be really capable of using him as his school project rabit like that but then it all smoothed out and I am happy now.
As for Bubu... I am very much interested to see how you plan on punishing him for all this shit he has been putting Bill and Tom through.
Author's Response: I'm super excited to post it as my equally sick mind enjoys writing that sort of thing and seeing your reactions. :D
Date: 02/16/13 11:50 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I truly loved the tention in this chapter. Like the kiss (ah, the kiss!) was really just meant to happen. It was like a spring gathering tension and by releasing it, it released quite a lot for them. I know things will be okay with them in the end, as you always say so. Just excited to see how they get there.
Btw, it was also nice to see you bringing Bushido and his background more in this story, making him actuallymore important character than I first assumed when I started to read this fic.
The fight will be epic. I'll be waiting for it. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! The tension is such an important part of this story and I'm glad I was able to do it justice between these two. It really did release a lot and it gave way for some genuine talking. I'm glad you're excited to see what's gonna happen next, because I'm excited to post it!
Date: 02/15/13 05:14 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
The nice thing about thinking an author might have put her/his story on the shelf is finding out they've continued it. This way, I've had so many chapters to catch up on. :)
I love all the history coming up between everyone, what motivates Tom, Bill, and especially Bushido to do what they do. It gives the story a wonderful depth and the tension between Tom and Bill is just... gah! :)
Author's Response: Hey you! Long time no talk, darling. I did stop writing this for a bit while I finished up my schooling and had jaw surgery, but now I'm back with a new update every week until the end. I'm happy you got to have a bunch of consecutive chapters to read! I love being able to do that too. :)
Date: 02/14/13 04:47 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I don't know how Bushido is able to be suck a dick towards Bill and Tom when he clearly seems able to love. I know that she's his daughter, but holy hell, he seems to have two different personalities!
I think I hate Tom, but just a little bit lol
He wants to resist Bill, but he knows he can't. He also wants to give in, but he's too afraid of many things. He's afraid of Bushido and what Bushido would do if he finds out that they're still together (even though with Bleak seeking revenge I don't think he's going to care much about Bill and Tom). But Tom is also afraid of his feelings, and he's so sweet. It makes me wanna cuddle him all night long ;__;
I honestly don't know how the next chapter will be, so I can't wait to read it *-*
Thank you so much for writing this amazing story and for uploading every single week! Reading the chapters is the best part of my mondays *-*
Author's Response: He really does seem to be two different people! But then again, even the meanest people have a soft side that one or two people can bring out. I guess his daughter is just that person for him.
Date: 02/13/13 01:43 pm Title: Chapter Three
i love larry
Author's Response: I'm pretty sure he loves you too! :)
Date: 02/13/13 11:49 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Ooooooooohhhh I kneeew he was gonna be at the barn as soon as I heard he was out! I just wasn't sure if he'd eavesdrop or be there when they walked in or walk in on them...I guess he's sneaky sneaky.
I don't know if I'm just cynical about this because of my experiences with my brother in jail...but Melissa is stupid. People do not change in jail. but hey, she had chosen him over Bushido already, so love'll do that to ya. I am curious about her animosity toward Bu though.
Oh my god. Thank goodness the tension bubble has finally popped. This chapter was getting me to the point where I wanted to cut my heart out the tension was getting so high...but we've finally gotten some delicious resolution.
I think the decision to incorporation a lot of flips and stuff in is a good idea. Its got a lot of showmanship, and visual impact, but little real damage.
That darn cat >_> its a conspiracy...he's deliberately trying to keep your attention from writing lol.
Fantastic chapter! I look forward to monday's update!
Author's Response: Bleak is a sneak, hehe. You are clever to have figured that out! You're not cynical, I agree that Melissa is 100% in denial. But as we can see from her falling for Bushido, she doesn't have the best judgement when it comes to men. :/ I might go into Bu and Melissa's relationship a little more in another chapter!
Date: 02/13/13 05:10 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
“I said I was sorry!” Tom argued. “I couldn't resist..” --- Awww Tomi! :P I hate that Tom just said that he'd never kiss Bill again and all, but I hope Tom just said that because he doesn't want them to get too wrapped up in one another before the fight... I wonder if Tom will be able to fight Bill when the time comes... ooOOHhhh it would be so romantic if Tom just stared into Bill's eyes when they stood facing each other and they were both quiet for a long time while exchanging the intense gaze and you'd be able to see the pain in Tom's eyes and Bill would feel his heart beating fast and hard and somehow, things would work out where Bushido would get what he deserved for putting these two up against each other when their love is so strong and Bill certainly doesn't want to end his relationship with Tom, but I can tell Bill is confused and uncertain about it and he does NOT want Tom to just dismiss the idea of them getting back together. I'd be hurt if Tom just did that too, because he LOVES Bill!!! He can't just let go of him and spend the rest of his life without Bill... They belong together. Bill loves Tom so much too. And Tom said that he doesn't even give a shit about the money ANYMORE, so I believe it's Bill who means the most to Tom in his life and that's why the fighting and the money doesn't play such a huge role for Tom now and Bill is his number 1 priority.
Author's Response: That's exactly why Tom said that, so don't worry. ;) There will be a lot of emotions during the fight for sure, and a lot of hesitation, but they will really have to go through with it if Bill wants to be free of Bushido. it's gonna be super hard for them but they know what they have to do so things can work out in order for them to have a chance to be together. But definitely, Bill is Tom's number one priority and that means that he will do everything he can to be sure that Bill gets free from this dangerous situation. :)
Date: 02/12/13 05:04 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
THINGS ARE GETTING BETTER YAY! I kinda hope Tom gets fucked up in the fight just so Bill can be his sexy nurse ;) Actually, I think I'd rather see that the other way around, with Tom taking care of Bill
Author's Response: IT'S YOUUUUUUU! I can definitely promise that at least one or both is going to need some tender loving care after the fight. n.n I agree though, it'd be nice to see Tom taking care of Bill. *-* I love me some caring Tom. Thank you, awesome unicorny dude!
Date: 02/12/13 01:48 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I love it! Like, Tom is soooo cute!!!! I love the new turn that the story took, it's awesome!!!!
I can't wait 'till the next chappie!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Tom appreciates the compliment. n.n I'm glad you liked the twist at the end and I hope you like where it goes in the next chapter. :)
Date: 02/12/13 11:22 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I read this an hour after you posted, trying to be a hipster by giving a review when there were only 4 revs but my internet connection decided to fuck up :/ :p oh and you know what? finally I didn't cry! But this is quite emotional, though, as Tom couldn't handle Bill's aura XD AND NEVER SEEN BU SO WORRIED AND STUFF OMG I'M SO EXCITED FOR HIM TO MEET UP WITH BLEAK AGAIN X'D And I can't wait for the fiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiaiaiaiaiiiight please update as soon as you possibly can, I can bear my heart being in my throat because of the tension ok :"D
Author's Response: Haha! Trying to leave a review before the chapter was cool. I love it. xD I'm happy that you didn't cry, but I know that you enjoy a good cry during a fanfic, so maybe next chapter there will be some tears! There really probably will be, now that I think about it.. Tom totally couldn't resist Bill's aura. xD It's crazy to write Bu as a nervous guy! It seems so out of character for him, but we all have at least one person that we really feel uneasy around. Yaaaay, I'm glad you're excited for the next! It'll be on Monday for me which is Tuesday for you, right? Timezones suuuuck! Thank you so much. n.n
Date: 02/12/13 05:15 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Arrrrggghhhh!!! This is getting even more exciting! And awww Tom and Bill are just soooo cute! And I'm glad that they will try to be an item again after the fight! Now for some sick reason I've started to feel bad for Bushido about the whole Bleak thing. I really hope that nothing bad happens to Bushidos kid, she is just an innocent child. But I am sooooo waiting for the next chapter and arrrrgh I so hope that you will update soon! You are awesome, you know!!!!
Author's Response: The fact that you are excited makes me even more excited to write the next chapter! I will have a new one for you on Monday, of course. :) I'm glad that Bill and Tom decided to make things work, too. It was hard to keep them apart! I understand feeling bad for Bushido a little bit and worrying about his daughter. You just have to remember how horrible Bu has been to everyone but his daughter and that he definitely deserves some sort of payback. Thank you sooo much for reading! Just 6 more days until the next. n.n
Date: 02/12/13 03:33 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I loved the chapter. You deserve every bit of applause for it. I am pretty sure you're one of the best writer's I have seen here. It's so amazingly written. The tension, the feelings.. the fight descriptions everything is perfect.
I am hoping that in the End Bill and Tom will help Bushido dealing with Bleak and Bushido will let them go.. but that's just my wish :)
I hope Pip is doing fine and I see you on twitter. I love your story and you're such an amazing sweet person *smooches* !
Author's Response: You are seriously such a doll! Thank you so much for the amazing compliments. I have to say, this site has helped my writing grow and improve so much, and it is greatly due to such wonderful readers and people like yourself! Your encouragement is what makes me strive to be better. So thank you.
Date: 02/12/13 02:14 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
You are going to kill me with each Chapter that comes next until the end, aren't you? AREN'T YOU?!
Author's Response: I promise you that it's not my goal to! But in case I do, I will revive you with pictures of Pip and a brand new story after this. n.n So happy to have you as a reader!
Date: 02/12/13 01:23 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
that was really good. i knew it that they can't be long without each other but i wouldn't except that. i even think that after the time they spent together everything went back to them, specially Tom and hopefully the fight will be as they think.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm happy you liked that Tom and Bill found their way back to each other, in a way, and that they don't plan on giving up. The fight will be interesting and even I'm not sure how it'll turn out, since I haven't written it yet! I hope you'll stick around to find out. :) Thank you!
Date: 02/12/13 12:26 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
This is sooooo beautiful! (Vanillalatte88) I am so in love with this story. *sigh*
Author's Response: I had no idea this was you! <3 That makes me so happy that you love this story. *-* Thank you, fellow Texan. :)
Date: 02/12/13 12:05 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I like glitter.
Author's Response: I like YOU. Just saying.
Date: 02/11/13 11:14 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Have I told you that I love Mondays? And of course the reason is because that is when you update!
OMG I am totally stoked for what is to come! I'm so glad Tom admitted that he can't stay away from Bill and I know that means something good has to come out of all of this junk that Bushido is putting them through. Tom and Bill belong together and I can see that Tom realizes that as well.
You have no idea how happy I am that Tom kissed Bill. I was nervous that Bill was going to slip up but really, I had no reason to be nervous because Tom was the one who kissed him! Defintely shows that he isn't over Bill. Although, I never, for once second, thought that he was over Bill and could stop being with him. That boy is head over heels! =D
I'm definitely nervous for the fight, but excited as well. I'm scared that Bushido is going to realize that they are faking it and they will in fact have to fight for real. Obvoiusly ,this is what Bu wants to happen so I have a feeling he is going to realize they aren't putting their all into it. I sure hope it doesn't come down to that and he's damn oblivious! I think Bleak being back is going to cause some drama and may make Bu not notice as much going on with him around. Maybe make him not pay as close attention to Bill and Tom's fight? Guess we'll have to wait and see! =D
Great chapter hun! I loved that Bill and Tom spoke more in this as well. I see a happy ending is near =D
Enjoy your week! xoxo
Author's Response: The fact that I can brighten your Monday definitely makes me feel super special! I know how awful Mondays can be! <3