Date: 02/18/13 08:40 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
Oh my god, sweet baby Lucifer! That fight scene was amazing. Sad but brilliant. So many feels, love. So many. You don't even know how anxious I was to read this chappie. I saw you in the recent stories and literally turned into a gay brid, flapping my wrists around and awkwardly squawking. Yeah, all that weird shit.
-Sigh- I don't want this story to end. Why would you do thaaaat? D': I literally am in love with this fic, you don't even know. Lemme tell you a secret. -psst, this is my all time favorite story- Okay? Okay.
Just know that.
And on your little ps, I DO love sweetheart Tomi. He's such a romantic and doesn't even know it. And god, you don't know how much that thing about Bill and chocolate made me laugh. He's so gay. Too gay to function, it's adorable. I just want to wrap him up in a big rainbow blanket and throw glitter on him.
I loved this chapter and I'm SO looking forward the the next one, Love. I can't wait! -Huggles-
Author's Response: Thank you for saying that! Fights are hard to write because there are so many technical details. D: I'm glad it brought on the feels! Haha, I bet you made a fantastically cute gay bird. :D
Date: 02/18/13 07:50 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
GOD DAMMIT!
*wipes eyes*
stupid tom talking about angels and buying bill chocolate and shit! and now he has to leave??? nein! nein i say!
know what tom? you should just tell bleak where bu is, then he can kill him and you really will be free to take bill on dates and buy him chocolate and make sweet happy love to him whenever you feel like it. *nods*
Author's Response: Did I make you cry AGAIN? I'm a baaaad little sister. ._. I know it's a bad time for him to leave, but you know he's gotta get that heavy monkey Bushido off his back so they can be cheesy and eat chocolate together!
Date: 02/18/13 06:32 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
Choclate can fix any situation, okay Tom?
I kind of like Bleak, I mean I don't even know the guy but he seems promising...for the moment at least
Thanks for the chapter! Best thing to cheers you up after a horrible chemistry test : P
Author's Response: Oh my gosh, it's so true! Tom needs to learn. Bleak has definitely helped start the process of taking down Bu, so I like him so far too for that reason. You're so welcome but thank YOU for taking the time to read and leave me your thoughts! I bet you did awesome on the test. I believe in you!
Date: 02/18/13 05:53 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
:')... FUCKIN' AWESOME! :D please include Larry in the next chapters ! :D i know i'm annoying
Author's Response: Hahaha, I can always count on you to ask for Larry! You're not annoying, you're awesome. I'll have Larry in the next chapter just for you!
Date: 02/18/13 05:51 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
I officially pronounce romantic Tom aka tough softie my endless love. *wedding bells ringing*
"You're the perfect combination of tough and soft." SO MUCH, SO SO SO SO MUCH I CAN'T EVEN. I absolutely loved their little bath moment, loved loved love it!
You're some kind of a fanfiction genius, you know that, right? If you didn't, you do now. This chapter was so fabulously long! AND FANTASTIQUE AND MAGNIFICUE AND Idk, just felt like speaking French.
I have to state the obvious - Gusti bear is an amazing friend! :D And another one - Bu wants to be punched in the face, with a kalashnikov. I really hope everything turns out good for Tom and that their little plan doesn't go wrong. Well, it actually MUST turn out good for them. I don't see any other options here.
Oh my God, and the moment I read Bushido's "FIGHT!" I thought I'm gonna dieeeeeeeeeee! I was literally like, half kneeling and half standing on my chair, all dying of anticipation ;_; Just like Bill I wanted them to get the fuck out of there and hide in Narnia or something because my poor heart wouldn't cope with another portion of bad emotions. But phew, everything ended up pretty well! I hope it was the worst they had to go through in their lifes!
I'm sorry if I don't make any sense, ok?
Anyway, I can't wait for your next fabulous chapter! :) *lots of love and hugs*
Author's Response: *throws flower petals on your both and whisks you away in a limo with 'Just Married' on the back* :D
Date: 02/18/13 05:49 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
More than 8000 words chapters, do you know how much I love you!!!
Author's Response: Pretty sure my long chapters are a symbol of how much I love you too!
Date: 02/18/13 05:42 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
Man, have I told you lately how much I hate Bushido? No, well, I have to say it; I HATE BUSHIDO!
Now that that's out of the way lol What a intense chapter! Gah! I swear I was on the edge of my seat through the whole thing and I had this silly grin on my face, loving how Bill and Tom were pulling the wool over Bu's eyes! Damn, I'm so glad things worked out but shit, Bu has go go and ruin everything!
I think Bill and Tom's plan is a good one and I can't wait until Tom is free from that jackass!
I know I've said this before, but I absolutely love your Tom and Bill.
Tom is such a sweetheart and I really hope he gets to go back to Bill a lot sooner than later. I love love love romantic Tom! I need me one of those as well! lol
I'm gonna be sad when this is over, but I always say, all good things must come to an end, and this my dear, is definitely a good thing! A great thing!
Author's Response: He's the first villian I've really written before, so going by everyone who hates him, I guess I succeeded! But really, I can't stand him either. I really can't.
Date: 02/18/13 05:09 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE :3
Author's Response: You get cuter every week!! <3
Date: 02/18/13 05:09 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
I think Bill's idea about Tom and Bleak and Bushido is great. I really want Tom to be free too. Ohhh and when Tom said; "Don't cry Bill, we haven't even had our real beginning yet" I just had to remove myself from the computer and curl up into the fetal position and wheep - silently - because it's 11 o'clock at night here... xD and everyone else is asleep, but I HAD to wait and read your chapter tonight because it's what I look forward to when it comes to Mondays... you make shitty Mondays less shitty. Thank you for being such a lovely writer and keeping up these updates so we can all count on you posting a chapter this day every week... You're so talented and great... I really love that you keep updating when you say you will. THAT - besides this lovely story - is what makes you my favorite author on this website.
Author's Response: I want Tom to be free too! Good thing they were both thinking clearly enough to come up with that plan. xD I'm sorry you had to weep silently! But really, they haven't had their real beginning yet. At least not a fair beginning. Thank YOU for making my Mondays better by always being so great. You can count on me for updates because I don't want to let you all down! You are so sweet to say I'm your favorite. ._. That makes me very happy! Thank you, darling. Really. <3
Date: 02/18/13 05:06 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
I HAVE TO ALSO JUST SAY THAT GUSTAV IS AN AWESOME FRIEND!!! Again, I love that he loves food so much. And Bill was hoping food could distract Gustav from coming to the fight, but even though Gustav loves food, he still came for Bill to watch and support and that tells me a lot about what a wonderful and fun friend Gustav is... and that he's also able to have humor through these hard times... the comment Gustav made about having some pom-poms and cheering for Bill like some cheerlader made me giggle... I WISH I HAD A FRIEND LIKE GUSTI!!!! I love him. :)
Author's Response: Gustav appreciates your love! I'm pretty sure I write about him eating food so much because I wish I could just pig out on food 24/7, too. Haha. Gustav resisted food so he could come and watch Bill! Let's be honest, it'd be hilarious to see Gustav dressed up like a cheerleader, haha. I'm so pleased that you love him! Maybe you will have a friend like him someday. :)
Date: 02/18/13 05:04 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
I agree with Bill, Tom is the perfect combo of tough and soft. He's so manly and handsome and boyish and strong and sexy and dark and dangerous, yet he's romantic and vulnerable and going through so much emotional and mental AND physical pain and a fucked up past that he's still trying to recover from so obviously that makes him very vulnerable and he's opened up to Bill and he's a little soft and romantic and that's so cute and beautiful and awesome.
Author's Response: I love that in men in real life too. Where they are sweet and soft but they can also defend the one they love when necessary. *-* But poor Tom has definitely gone through a lot and it's good that he has opened up to Bill even though that's not his nature. I love the way you describe them!
Date: 02/18/13 05:03 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
I'M CRYING. This is the best chapter ever, but I feel that way about every chapter I read on this... because I love your story so much. I'll probably re-read this and review many times because there are SO many things I want to point out and my head isn't working well right now, I've just got tons of feelings all over the place because of this amazing chapter... God, the last part about Tom having to leave made me cry... I even cried before I read how Tom said: "Bill, please don't cry..." and that made me cry more. I LOVE THAT THEY JUST SPENT TIME TOGETHER AND they didn't have sex... though I'd love for them to make love once more at least in the story before you end it.
Author's Response: I love it that you think every chapter is the best chapter ever! And you are soooo sweet and generous to leave me reviews with your lovely thoughts. There will definitely be time for sex still in the story, but I'm happy that you enjoyed them just being together without getting dirty. ;) Thank you sooo much, sweetie!
Date: 02/18/13 05:02 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
buy me one Tom in Bill's body like him? yeah? oh thank you!!! love you too xD out of that what i told you, baby, write cute nice things is easier than write a piece of asshole like Bushido, PLEASE LET BLEAK KICK HIS AWESOMEEEEH AND STUPID ASS, seriously, or i go there and throw him my tiny shoe eh? but with all my anger...and you know i'm pretty strong so he will bleed u.u I love Tom...that Tom not Tom K (letting it clear) and Bill loves chocolate *-* what a cutie pie... AWESOME IT IS MY FAVOURITE CHAPTER!!
Author's Response: I still think this is the cutest review, btw. u.u I will see if I can write a Tom in Bill's body into existence for you. xD Thank you for the compliments on Bushido! It's not exactly fun to write a dude like that, but I'm glad you think I do it well. Bleak or Tom or you with your tiny shoe will take care of kicking his ass. xD I know you're strong and fast when you wanna be so Bushido won't be able to run from you! I'm happy you love this Tom, nena. I don't think this Bill loves chocolate as much as B though, let's be honest. u.u REALLY? *-* THANK YOUUUU, NENA!!
Date: 02/18/13 05:01 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
I like that you couldn't stop writing! This chapter was great and so full of ups and downs that my feelings are so confused and conflicted. I'm so glad that Bill is out of the situation, but now Tom's in even deeper (hopefully only temporarily). It's hard to see when the situation is going to improve, whether it will take a few days, several weeks, or even a year. But I can't wait! This chapter was amazing just like all of them!
Author's Response: I have a feeling that the next chapters will be just as long! I've got a lot to write. I'm sorry for mixing up your feelings but I'm happy that the chapter brought on all the feels. I'm glad Bill is out too, but Tom definitely got the short end of the stick. But yes, it will only be temporary and I promise Tom and Bill will get back to each other! Thank you soooo much. I'm so happy that you enjoyed it. :)
Date: 02/18/13 04:36 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
STILL LOVE IT. AMAZING. HAPPY TO SEE THEM TOGETHER. NO AMOUNT OF CAPS LOCK CAN EXPRESS HOW CUTE THEY ARE. YOU RULE.
Huuuuuuuugs!
Author's Response: ALL CAPS JUST HAPPEN TO BE MY FAVORITE SO YAAAAAAY. I'M HAPPY THAT YOU ARE HAPPY! THANK YOUUUU. HUGS AND KISSESSSS. :***
Date: 02/18/13 04:27 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
Okay, so my finger hurts. And while I was trying to hide and read this, this woman was on my salesfloor sneezing. But it was like a cheetah battle cry/white girl being murdered in a B rated horror flick. Seriously. She was scream sneezing and I dunno what got me more: Bushido or this woman. Did I mention my finger hurts?
Author's Response: Omg... How dare she sneeze scream! D: I have to admit, it sounds hilarious but I know I'd be very alarmed if I was there. Bushido is a worthy rival of the sneezer? Then I guess he's doing a good job as the villian, haha. I hope your finger feels better now, babe! If you haven't had Whata yet then you better go get some.
Date: 02/18/13 03:46 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
I ADOOOOORE ROMANTIC TOM!!!! Like, what Bill said, he's the perfect combination of rough and soft!!!!
AND I HATE YOU!!!! Well, no, I actually LOVE YOU, but seriously! They've only spent 1 night together, and the troubles are already on their way? Seriously, I was actually hoping and waiting for some actual peace....
Oh well, that's just grumpy me xD But, I loved this chappie! It is very well written! Can't wait till the next one!
Author's Response: I'm glad I'm not the only one! Seriously, I wish I could write him into real life. :D Ahhhh I will let you hate me a little bit if you still love me underneath it all! Well, they still have a day to be together first.. So, there is that to enjoy!
Date: 02/18/13 03:45 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
ICH BIN READIIIING XD YEAH
Author's Response: I like it when you get the first review. u.u
Date: 02/18/13 02:51 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
You will update tonight right? *hopeful puppy eyes*
Author's Response: Juuuuust updated! *cuddles you*
Date: 02/17/13 09:23 pm Title: Chapter One
*prepares to smack you into focussing on writing; sees the kitty's adorableness; falls to the floor and cuddles the kitty with you*
Author's Response: Heheheh! I just updated! So the cat didn't distract me tooo much. But now I will go and play with him and you shall join us!