Date: 02/22/13 05:49 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
Oooh!!! I was having a Potter week so I completely forgot that you update on mondays , but now I remembered it and went to read this right away! And i absolutely LOVED this!!! Can't wait for it to be monday (thank god there is only few days left)!! Bu is such an asshole! I hate myself for feeling bad for him in the other chapter. He is so selfish, that son of a bitch!!! But lovey-dovey Tom is so adorable!!! This was great this chapter, and the fight was awesome! And you are fucking awesome!!!!!!
Author's Response: A Potter week? *-* That sounds amaaazing. Were you watching the movies, reading the books or reading fanfic? I like quite a few Harry Potter fanfics. But yaaaay, I'm so happy you loved it! Yep, not much longer at all. Which means I really need to focus on the chapter this weekend. xD Don't hate yourself! You have compassion and that's a good thing. u.u But really, he is one of those rare truly awful people. Good thing we have lovey-dovey Tom to make up for it! Thank youuuu, thank you. YOU are awesome, okay? See you on Monday! <3
Date: 02/21/13 06:11 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
The fight was simply amazing. Wow. It seemed so REAL, and so fucking good.
I love that they're back together, that Tom has understood that he can't go without Bill. It took him a long time to clear his mind, but now hopefully he'll never forget it lol
I want so badly to see Bleak kicking Bushido's ass. Believe me, usually I love Bushido even if he's the "evil" part of the fanfiction, but THIS Bushido... Grrr, I want to kill him! He can't oblige Tom to follow him just because he needs money and he doesn't want to fight himself to get them.
I really like Tom's plot to leave Bu, and I hope he'll succeed. I can't believe that we're almost done with Rough, I wish this could go on forever ;___; What am I gonna do when this is over?
Amazing as always. Thank you for this perfect chapter, I've loved it *__*
P.S. Please, more romantic Tom before they part, or at least before the end ç___ç And yes, also more perv Tom (and also Perv Bill lol) before the end if you want to make me happy (or better, to make EVERYONE happy) lol
Author's Response: I'm happy that the fight seemed real to you! Those are always so hard for me to write because there is so many technical details. So thank you for saying that! I don't think Tom will forget this time, haha. Not after all they've been through, I hope!
Date: 02/20/13 06:47 pm Title: Chapter One
Only three more chapters? :(
Hope Tom can get away from Bushido, and that Bleak helps him...!
This if one of my favorite fanfics, and I am seriously in love with it!
Author's Response: Yes. ._. I wish it weren't so! I love writing this story and hearing your thoughts. Tom will be able to get away from Bushido in one way or another, I promise! Wow, thank you for saying that. That makes me super happy that this is one of your favorites. Thanks, again!
Date: 02/20/13 05:40 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
Fuck, this really is one of the best stories I have read in a while.
I feel so sorry for them.. I think my heart broke a little bit when they had to fight each other.
I really do love romantic Tom and need more of him, please :D
Author's Response: Thank you for that awesome compliment! I'm happy that you gave the story a chance. I definitely wouldn't have had them fight each other if it wasn't for something as big as Bill's freedom. It broke my heart to write it. I will do my best to deliver more romantic Tom! Thank you, again.
Date: 02/20/13 03:32 pm Title: Chapter One
I was thinking...Larry should totally be the hero once everything comes to a head.*nodnod* Bu could be deathly afeared of lizards, his secondary secret, or something. It would be awesome. Admiiit it, even if that's not what you went with, you thought about it.
I'm glad Bleak is focussed on Bushido, and is gonna leave our boys alone, for the most part anyway.
Author's Response: I would love for Larry to be some sort of secret weapon that just busts out and saves the day, haha. However, I don't think I can wrap it up like that without it totally not fitting with the story. He will definitely be in the next chapter though! He's just kind of like a deliciously lizardy side dish for the story. Nobody knows why he's there but he adds something, lol.
Date: 02/20/13 11:20 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
OMG YOU POSTED THIS ON MY BIRTHDAY OMG OMG OMG GREATEST GIFT EVER! :"D oh and I DIDN'T CRRRRRYYYY ok I did, but just a bit, though :p and finally our Bu was a bit scared awwwwww I'm happy that he wanted to escape to another town, but should he bring Tom along? ugh -,-
Even though I didn't cry, you made my adrenaline get in such a rush because of the fight, even though they faked it. But actually I really wanted them to fight each other, like, literally. Not just faking it, so that my eyes would produce more tears. Oh I'm so mean, you know that? :"D okay I'll stop blabbering!
sincerely,
love love love love
Author's Response: Ohhhh my gosh, it was your birthday?? HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!! I hope it was a wonderful day and I'm so glad that I could have this chapter up for you to enjoy. :D I'm sorry I didn't have you sobbing with tears, hehe. Perhaps it'll happen before the story ends! I really have no idea as I just write the chapters as I go without any real plans. Thank you sooo much for leaving me your thoughts and I will definitely work on the tears thing, haha. loooooove and hugs. <3
Date: 02/20/13 03:18 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
I loved the chapter. The fight was great but the bathroom scene was aaaaawesome! Washing off Bill's war paint was so, so delicious. Tom was lovely:-) I love tender/sexy/emotional moments like that. Tom was tender, Bill was vulnerable, Gustav was funny, Bushido was ass-kicking worthy and everything was so, so emotional.
Bushido's tight grip on Tom is infuriating. I hate it when somebody dictates or tries to run Tom or Bill's life - grr. I am quite surprised that Bu stuck to his agreement with Bill and let him go.
Author's Response: I absolutely love moments like that too!! Seriously, there's something so intimate and lovely about someone wiping away someone's makeup or washing them. I love the adjectives you used to describe the characters! Very spot on. I hate it when Tom and Bill aren't in charge, either. But at least Tom is starting to take control of his own life. Bushido definitely would have been more of an ass after the fight if he wasn't freaked out about Bleak being there, so Bleak helped in more ways than one. Thank you so much!
Date: 02/20/13 02:25 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
My dear sunshine, since I didn't have the time on Monday, cause after reading your chapter I went straight to bed to be ready for work the next day and yesterday was a hell of a day running around some doctors appointments I decided to leave you today few thoughts about the chapter (btw I read it just now again and I have the same emotions all over) So...
I LOVE it you know I do! Everything about them is simply magicall. Of course I am a Tom Girl, so every moment with Tom in it makes my heart melt. Especially a mushy romantic Tom is PERFECT *_____* I'm seriously fangirling over him in this story so much, you have no idea. He is indeed a perfect mixture of hard and soft.
I am sorry they are going to so much trouble again with Bushido. I'd almost teared up again at how sad Bill was, well both of them. But still I am loving where the story is going. It can't be all "lovey dove" all the time.
The fight was awesome as well, I really felt like I was in there watching it closely, probably next to Gustav lol.
The bathroom scene, especially the one where Tom was wiping away Bills make up was very touching.
I can't express how much I love your writing!! You are really gifted and I'd encoirage you to try to pubish them!!!
*kisses*
your Amalena
Author's Response: You are an absolute doll for taking the time to leave me a review later! I hope everything went okay with your doctors appointments, btw, whatever they were for. <3
Date: 02/20/13 12:38 am Title: Chapter One
Of course
Author's Response: That's good to hear! :)
Date: 02/19/13 09:20 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
I sign for one Tom too alskjdakd hahah
OMG *sobbing* ahhhhhhhhh so amazing chapter adlasdja
intense fight, sexy kiss, scary moments, cute sweet bath OMG *melting* Tom's confession about Bill asdlakda but the enddddd ahhhhhhhhhhhh *sobsalittlemore*
can't wait for the next chapter!!!! i have faith the plan is going to work!! but i feel is going to be a dramatic path ;u;
dying for read that date with lots of chocolate
hahahha thank you so much for share this awesome chapter!!
Author's Response: I will see what I can do to get one sent your way! ;)
Date: 02/19/13 04:54 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
I so look forward to a happy ending for these boys. I hope Bushido will get some payback! Love romantic Tom!
Author's Response: I look forward to it too! They deserve to just be together. Bushido will definitely get what he deserves; he won't get away with what he's done! Thank you so much. We need romantic Toms in real life!
Date: 02/19/13 11:22 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
I am so frustrated. I am not a violent person at all but when you write the word Bushido..... I am losing it. Seriously, that guy is going on my nerves SO MUCH.
I loved the part after fight. Together in the bath ;). I guess they were too tired and sore for a hot passionate sex, but I am sure their last day together will be special ;)
I also loved the romantic Tom. What he said about his mum and Bill being his angel, it was so touching.
Can't wait for the next chapter, thank you for this one :). Love youuuuu
Author's Response: I've never written a villain before but judging by how many people hate Bushido, I guess I wrote a good one! But really, it's getting to the point where Bushido is going to get what's been coming. Don't worry!
Date: 02/19/13 12:57 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
Tom saw the light, thanks to Bill....hallelujah!
God I love these two more and more. If it wasn't for Bu being a dad, I'd love for Bleak to beat him to death! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Yes, he did! Let's thank Bill for not giving up on him. I'm so happy you love them! I agree, it'd be an easy fix to get rid of Bushido that way, but he deserves to live with the consequences of his actions! Thank youuuu and I will see you Monday. :)
Date: 02/19/13 12:20 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
I'd love to have a romantic Tom, or any handsome, beautiful man in my life ;) Things still seem to be looking up even though they're getting temporarily separated but I don't think, or I hope not, that they'll have a bumpy ride. The end of this chapter made me feel so warm and cuddly, like cuddling in a cozy bed on a rainy day and you live in a really nice apartment with a view of the city!
Author's Response: You and me both, girl! We'll find our guys. :) Things are looking up, even though they still have to get through a little bit more. But after what they've handled already, they can deal with it! Okay, so, your description of how the end made you feel made ME feel like that! Wow, how lovely. *-* Thank you so much!
Date: 02/19/13 12:05 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
Romantic Tom *swoons*...
I'm honestly a little worried about Bleak using Bill against Tom somehow. But let us hope not. I really hope this plan work out smoothly for these boys, they need a bit of good luck here.
The fight was splendiferous. Keep up the great work! I can't wait to see the next chapter. I hope Kitty is doing well, as well as Mohan.
Ps. Getting some Larry withdrawl o'er here
Author's Response: *swoons with you because how could I not*
Date: 02/18/13 10:26 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
First of all, I'LL BE YOUR ROMANTIC TOM. I'll bring you chocolate even if you're not on your period. But in all seriousness, this chapter was amazing. I flinched every time one of the boys got hit, but I laughed my ass off as the idea of Bushido checking the crowd and looking over his shoulders. I'm glad Gustav made it to the fight - and I'm even happier that he didn't starve to death. The bathtub with the two was just too adorable and absolutely perfect. I'm just pissed at Bushido for ruining a perfectly good moment. I'm sad that Tom has to leave, but it seems like they have a pretty good plan figured out... I believe in them.
Author's Response: WILL YOU REALLY? *-* If you bring me chocolate no matter the time of the month, then yep, you totally get the job. :D Ahhh, I'm so glad you liked the chapter. I worked very hard on it and spent time away from playing with Pip and writing you! It's so cool that the fight made you react like that. Bushido definitely deserves to be scared for once! And you know Gustav will always find food. He's got animal instincts when it comes to finding his next meal. How cute is it to take a bath with someone? Because I don't think there's anything more relaxing and sweet than that. I'm glad you liked that! Bushido is gonna get his and Tom will be free and just DON'T STOP BELIIIIEEEEVIN'. :D Thank you so much, stud.
Date: 02/18/13 09:56 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
as u wrote "I wish this story could go on forever" - i'm wishing for that too. i'm so happy that everything with the fight went well and Bill is free from Bu and i'm wishing for that too for Tom. and this sweet moment between Bill and Tom before and after Bu call. can't wait for more
Author's Response: Aww, you are so sweet. I'm happy you love my story enough to want it to go on forever! I'm glad that this chapter made you happy and that you enjoyed the sweet moments between the boys. Bill is free and Tom is on the way! Thank youu. :)
Date: 02/18/13 09:39 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
Fantastic!
Author's Response: Thank you, darling!
Date: 02/18/13 09:24 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
What happned to not making me cry lol
Author's Response: I didn't mean to do it! .__. Were there at least a few smiles?
Date: 02/18/13 08:53 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
Kay, yet again I'm going to cry in the corner.....
Fuck! I was all anxious throughout this chapter, and what's worse, I had to leave for work right before I got to the part with the fight. But UGH!!! Damn it Bu, go away ;-; Or get Bleak to beat the freaking tar out of him. BAH! I'm all spazztic now xD
I can't wait for the next update *O* I'm hoping their plan doesn't have to go into effect and something better happens xD
Lurvers you Kirsty :D
Author's Response: Nooooo more tears! .____. Aww, you had to leave before the fight and had to wait longer to read it? Well I'm glad you got a chance to finish it! Bu is gonna get what's coming, don't worry about that! *spazzes with you because I love you*