Date: 02/25/13 07:46 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
I LOVE YOU SO MUCH! LARRY IS BACK!!!! :D YAYYYYY!!! :D
Author's Response: You are one of the main reasons I brought him back!! haha. I love you tooo!!
Date: 02/25/13 06:57 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Fantastic!
Author's Response: Thank you, love!
Date: 02/25/13 06:40 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
A burning question has searing me ever since I started reading your fics. What kind of lizard is Larry? An Iguana? A Komodo Dragon? A radioactive mutant creation that crawled out of the depths of a nuclear power plant and radiates fear and awesomeness?
Author's Response: You know, I don't think he resembles an actual type of lizard! I'll tell you what I picture if you promise not to make fun of me, haha. There was this cartoon show when I was little called "The Magic School Bus" and the teacher in it had a pet lizard. If you haven't seen the show, you should google that lizard and you will see how I picture Larry, but obviously not in cartoon form. xD he definitely radiates all sorts of awesome though! Thanks for the cool question, I like that you were thinking about that.
Date: 02/25/13 06:38 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Gustav with long hair......noooo, can't imagine it.
Hmmm but maybe it will be nice?? We need a wig here!
You can't write before monday, does that mean you are going to write the next chapter in 3 days?? Oh God...
The ending was indeed unexpected! Bushido fighting will be awesome, hope nothing bad happen to his daughter, her dad is an ass but she is just a little kid, I have a thing for children.
Author's Response: Every time I try to imagine it I just crack up laughing, haha. I think he just doesn't have the right hair texture for long and silky hair. It would be thick and poofy. xD He could try on a wig though! You know, for our entertainment. n.n I probably will write it in that amount of time, yep. That's typically how long it takes me, anyway! I just spread it out over a week.
Date: 02/25/13 06:38 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Ok, one last comment for now. When I read the love-making part between Bill and Tom I felt sooooooo much love for them - as always when I read about them in this story because your writing is fantastic and they are so meant for each other and I love how they say they make one another happy and Tom saying how much he loves Bill, I LOVE that he doesn't keep it in and that he just openly says it to Bill like some born romantic... omg and I nearly burst when I read this: “I’ll come home to you soon,” Tom whispered" --- OHHHH, how beautiful!!! Bill is Tom's home. Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. The amount of cuteness, sexiness and love is overwhelming and I can't get enough!!! As always, your chapters are just spectacular.
Author's Response: All of your comments are so amazing ._. Thank you for sharing them with me, sweetie. It definitely took some time for Tom to be so open about his love for Bill, but I'm happy he has embraced it too. Thank you for the compliment on my writing! I'm happy that you are able to feel the love between them and that you enjoy the little cheesy moments that they have. Really, thank you! Your reviews always give me the biggest smile! <3
Date: 02/25/13 06:35 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
+ Gusti that loves to eat - I LOVE LOVE LOVE when you put stuff about him in those chapters and I always notice it and smile and grin because of it. So wonderful. (:
Author's Response: The fact that you smile because of Gustav makes me sooo happy! He's like that little bit of comic relief in all the hard stuff in the story. He definitely makes Bill's life more entertaining! Thank you. <3
Date: 02/25/13 06:34 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
And Georg of course is super fun and cute about his love for lizards and especially Larry :D
Author's Response: I'm glad you think he's cute! I love writing his character and the bond that he and Larry have, haha. :D
Date: 02/25/13 06:34 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Wednesday instead of Monday? :( awwww, well your chapters are so amazing, you never disappoint and you've got a life outside writing this so of course I will patiently wait with excitement and look forward to the looong chapter that comes next. Hope you and your mom have a great time together.
Author's Response: Awww, you are so so so sweeeet! Thank you for understanding. I have the hardest time writing when I have other stuff going on, so I won't even be able to write once she's gone to bed. I promise to have the chapter up no later than Wednesday! Maybe it'll be up Tuesday if I have a lot of inspriation, but we will seeee! Thank you so so much. <3
Date: 02/25/13 06:32 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Yes, karma paying Bushido back!!! He's been so god damned selfish and he could've had some other lousy job or maybe have two just to support his daughter and be in her life without being a danger to her and himself!!! I really really really hope you'll make Tom kick Bushido's ass... REALLY!!!
Author's Response: We knew karma was going to get Bushido sooner or later! I totally agree, Bushido had other options to make money and work hard instead of just making money through other people. I promise that Tom is going to kick his ass. I've been looking forward to this as much as you have!
Date: 02/25/13 06:31 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
OMG THE ENDING WAS TOTALLY UNEXPECTED!!! Tom and Bushido are going to fight? YOU BETTER MAKE TOM WIN OOHHHH, Tom has gone through so much already he has to win and make a deal with Bushido that if Tom wins then he will be free and that Bushido will leave him the fuck alone forever!!! TOM + BILL... YAY I LOVED THE SEXY TIME, I'M SO HAPPY YOU GOT SOME OF THAT IN THIS CHAPTER. REALLY REALLY REALLY AWESOME.
Author's Response: I was able to surprise you, yaaaay! They're gonna fight and don't worry, Tom is gonna put Bushido in his place, once and for all. I agree, he's been through so much and he deserves to have a worry-free life! I'm happy you loved the sexy time, hehe. ;)
Date: 02/25/13 06:09 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
oh! i almost forgot!
more talk about bill's baby soft ass. cuz that shit was both hilarious and adorable.
Author's Response: Hehe, there will definitely be more talk of that! I cracked up as I writing it, honestly. Ass talk is the best.
Date: 02/25/13 06:07 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
KICK THAT MOTHER FUCKER'S ASS!!!
sorry. instructions for tom. not you.
but please god, let this be the end of the drama so tom can go back home and continue to love bill more than he thought possible. cuz that was a seriously awesome line.
didn't full on cry this time. i literally had one tear in the corner of my eye like some cheesy romantic movie or something. god, the things you and this story do to me!
Author's Response: I'll make sure that Tom gets your instructions, hahaa.
Date: 02/25/13 05:41 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Tomorrow I will read again the ass' part because it is incrediblyyyy funny!! really like i laughed my ass off! well you know that. I will keep my shoes until the fight so I can hit Bushido while they are fighting and Tom can win and go back with Bill for more soft moments with Bill's ass. AAAMAZING!
Author's Response: I am so pleased that you liked the ass part xD I'll try to make you laugh a bit more in each chapter. u.u Kay, keep your shoes until it's time to pass them off to Tom to use against Bushido. He's gonna need them! After the fight Tom can go back to Bill's baby soft ass. xD THANK YOU, NENAAAA. :*
Date: 02/25/13 04:54 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
DID NOT SEE THAT COMING.
Looking forward to more!
Huuuuuuuuuugs!
Author's Response: I'm glad I could surprise you! Thank you so much, I hope you like what's coming next. :) Huuuugs and kisses. :*
Date: 02/25/13 04:42 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
I HOPE BUSHIDO GETS HIS ASS KICKED TODAY if not i will throw my shoes there ok? ok! there I go
Author's Response: I think I'm gonna have one of Tom's moves be, 'throw Maribel's tiny shoes'. xD Yaaay, I like it when you get the first comment. u.u
Date: 02/24/13 06:20 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
HI!!
It was a long chapter.... But what a heck of a chapter!!!!!
- Gus wants to be there for Bill. I can understand why Bill doesn't want him to be but he knows he can use some moral support nonetheless. So he accepts.
- I can't help but picture Bill while he prepares himself.... He's so fucking hot and I thought Tom won't be able to spto oggling over him, which is distracting.... And I was right about his reaction even if the seriousness soon takes over...
But Tom is really not so bad himself. They will be quite a look fightinh together.
- How I despite Bushido.... but Tick-Tock, time is running out for you bastard, laugh while you still can.
But I'm surprised he didn't see through Tom's and Bill's charade. He's too busy oggling the money and laughing about what he makes the lovers do.
- I love the tenderness before the blows... Tom and Bill are really fucked up, but it's like that since the beginning and it seems to be perfect for them.
- The fight.... you wrote it so well. it's so good. From a exterior point of view, it must seem real... they fake it perfectly... until Bu began to be suspicious and they fight fo real. I almost had in the eyes tears of frustration and pain for them.
- When it's over....I don't know, a bit abrupt, and a feeling of unfinished, something off Bushido. First I wonder why and then I knew Bleak was there and it made sense. Bu is afraid of him and that's what distracted him from the fight, allowing Bill to 'knock Tom off". I could almost send him flowers too, but I'd prefer he takes piece of Bu's ass!
- Hot bath between Tom and Bill. The situation could be so romantic if it weren't after a fight again each other. It's so tender however, so calm and soothing after all they faced. Not only for their aching bodys, but souls and hearts too.
They finally have the so needed talk to smooth out their issues.
Bill, an angel for Tom? It could be chessy but.... it's so normal, so full of good sense. There's no other explanation after all. It was meant to be.
- It was so good, and then... the call. Finally Bleak was more a pain in the ass than an asset for the lovers. And for doinf it to them, Bu is really a.... I can't find a right word to describe him. Neither seems to be strong enough for this bastard.
Bill and Tom ( and I too) thought it was starting to go better for them.... and now Tom must leave. But Bill is right, Bushido is afraid and not so strong that he wants to appear. There is a flaw in his tough mask and they will make use of it.
Will they have a last sexy time together before Tom leaves? I think they need it. Their time apart will be obnoxious: of course they will be apart, but Bushido will be more on Tom's back after all that happened.
I hope the threat about Bleak ans their plan will go well, but I can't help worrying. Not a lot of things went how they planned them.
Will Tom really be free when he comes back?
Will we see the final altercation between Bushido and Bleak?
I also think Tom's father will make a come back to distrube Bill and Tom.
Wonderful chapter. But when a issue is solved, another comes and bites them in the ass.
Soon over???? Make good use of the last chapters you plan to get them back together and deliver justice to those who deserve it.
I hold onto the hapiness for now and have faith in you.
Kiki
Author's Response: Hey you! Wow, this was such an incredible review. I wish I could respond to each and every little thing. It was a looong chapter and I'm so happy that you enjoyed it. Thank you for picking up on the details as always, that's incredible. I'm glad that you thought the fight was written well because that's always a challenging part for me to write!
Date: 02/24/13 05:47 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
I LOVE you and your story and I'm so looking forward to tomorrow's chapter. :)
Author's Response: I just updated! I hope you enjoy, love. <3
Date: 02/23/13 09:14 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
As usual, I'm supposed to be in bed, but I saw this chapter up and... I wonder if I might be the only one who looked forward to Tom and Bill's fight with near equal amounts of sick excitement and trepidation - because I wanted to see how well they did and for them to get it over and done with.
The nevous tension was so well pitched, and Bill and Tom's feelings... that Tom sought Bill out just before the fight was one of those little details of Tom's soft side, like washing Bill's face of blood and makeup that makes their relationship feel real to the reader.
Now can we just deal some rough justice to Bushido? Good intentions towards his daughter aside, Bu's motives are so greedy and evil and he must be stopped. I will be heartbroken if there is no happily ever after because Tom so deserves it and Bill.
Author's Response: You always stay up so late! But I'm happy that you used your night owl habits to read the chapter. *-* I was looking forward to writing it because it was a big step that needed to be taken, and it's kinda exciting for them to go against each other in that way when they feel so much for each other.
Date: 02/23/13 07:46 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
Eh... Both happy and sad at the same time. It aöwayus happens when a löong, great story is getting closer to the end. I also wish this could go on forever!
Their fight was really nervewrecking to me, especially now when I was emotionally exhausted already in advantage. I was really nervous of how thing would soprt out, but they went just well. Yay!
We do love romantic Tom and tbh in almost any other context I'd find his cheesyness awkward, but ion here you made it work just right. It was sweet and touching. Aww, I love big softie Tom!
It's sad that things need to be dealed like this, but I'm counting on you making them find their way back together again - as real boyfriends.
I hope you'll giver us at least one smut scene before this ends. Please? ;)
Author's Response: I know, it is definitely bittersweet. I'm happy that I can give it a good ending that it deserves and that you deserve but I do wish it could keep going. ._.
Date: 02/22/13 05:59 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
/SQUEALS AND RUNS ROUND ROOM
How do you manage to make every chapter so amazing and heartbreaking and adorable??? I'm so glad that Bill's free now *squishes Bill's waist affectionately as I only come up to his armpits* ROMANTIC, SOPPY TOM IS WHAT I LIFE FOR. That whole speech about Bill being an angel and his mother looking out for him made me cRY A RIVER.
I DON'T WANT THIS TO EVER END AAAHHHH WHAT WILL I DO WITHOUT THIS BEAUTIFUL FIC??
Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter, as always, and you are very welcome to come and visit me in my hub (I'll give you free chocolate, promise). I LOVE YOU OKAY OMG
Author's Response: I guess I just have a jar of amazing, heartbreaking and adorable sprinkles and I just shake them over every chapter after I'm done writing it! :D But really, thank you for saying that. I'm happy that there's a good mix of emotions. Aww, you're a shorty? *-* Squish him gooood, he needs it now with Tom having to leave for a bit. ._.