Date: 03/06/13 05:01 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
10th comment, just for the hell of it. I MUST SAY ONE LAST TIME THAT THIS NEW CHAPTER IS AWESOME. There's some sad parts with Tom feeling hopeless because Bushido keeps pushing him and threatening him to do as he says or deal with the consequences of Tom's father coming to get him, then Tom finds out that his father isn't even here anymore which is kind of relief and shock and awesomeness because then that means Bushido can't hold anything over Tom's head anymore. And Tom being pretty sly because he wants to knock Bushido on his ass once and for all to get all his anger and frustration out and he's waiting for the moment when they fight like some patient attacker, and there was some sexy time over the phone between Tom and Bill and some cute stuff too where Tom called himself Bill's boyfriend and Tom calling later to say that he NEEDS Bill and calling him 'baby' which I absolutely adore. I want to hear Tom call me 'baby' too!!!! :S oh my god, this story is fantastic... there's just so much good stuff. Oh and there was also some great humor in this with Gustav when he asked Bill for sex tips and Bill walked out on him because he'd had it with Gustav's shit :D lol, I love Tom, Georg, Gustav & Bill. They are super great in this story and it's all just so dramatic, sexy, fun, cute, sad, lovely, awesome, hot and wonderful. You're an amazing writer and this story is what makes me excited every week. Thanks to you. I'm kind of looking forward to the end because I want Tom to finally get some peace and just be happy with Bill but I still want to read more and more about them. Do you think you'll write (towards the end when all is good) some parts of Tom and Bill just being together, cute, sexy, maybe some fights where they then make up and it's all hot and steamy? :D
Author's Response: Let me say it again: YOU ARE AWESOME. Thank you for all of your support and your attention to my chapters! I love how you focus on the details and tell me what you like. :) I was hoping that the happy moments could balance out the sad, so I'm glad that you thought so. Throughout all that Bushido is putting Tom through, he still has Bill to turn to and Bill will support him through all of this. I would love to hear Tom call me baby as well *-* What a dream that would be! Thank you for loving my story and the characters. Your excitement to read the new chapters seriously motivates me to write and make it good for you.
Date: 03/06/13 04:59 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
OH THAT WAS AWESOME !!! I kinda thought about Bleak and Melissa few chaters back, when you mentioned that both, Bushido and Bleak fought for her, and that she said she was in touch with Bleak while he was in prison made me thinking. But that plot is awesome!!!
My poor baby Tom. I am sending him all my love. I am sure he will kick Bushido's ass. I was kinda hoping it would happen in this chapter, but Now I am even more excited for the next update!
Great job as always my dear! *kisses and hugs*
Author's Response: Thank youuuu! *-* You are clever and that's why you saw that coming. ;) Bushido definitely won't see it coming though and you know it's going to be an intense moment when he finds out.
Date: 03/06/13 04:56 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
you are seriously the best writer on this website, hands down.
Author's Response: You seriously make me smile so much. Thank you for that awesome compliment!
Date: 03/06/13 04:56 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
I've had to comment so many times because there are so many great things in this chapter that I need to address seperately! OH MY LORD, TOM'S FATHER IS DEAD AND BUSHIDO IS STILL BLACKMAILING TOM, WELL AWARE OF TOM'S FATHER'S DEATH!!! THAT IS EVIL!!!!!!! I'M SO GLAD THEY FOUND OUT... you add such great twists to these chapters, I'm really glad about that and sometimes surprised because I don't even see them coming so it's really cool to read this and see how things go because in this story, you never know!!!
Author's Response: I absolutely LOVE reading your reviews and you are sooo sweet to take the time to leave them for me! Yessss, Bushido went lower than low and lied to Tom about his dad so he could keep using him. I'm glad i can still surprise you too because the last thing I want this to be is predictable. I hope to keep you guessing until the very end. n.n
Date: 03/06/13 04:54 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
WOW, Bleak and Melissa are vicious. Well, Bushido is too. It's going to be soooo terrible when Bushido finds out it's not his daughter. HOLY MACAROLY!!! ooooooh and Bill said it so well; how could people like that exist in this real world? People like Bushido and those other two. Also like Tom said; they are SO selfish and Tom keeps being used by people all around him. It's so sweet to read that Bill is the only good thing in Tom's life... *hugs self with glee*
Author's Response: It's going to be craaaazy when he finds out. That moment will be intense, for sure. Bill said it perfectly and it's sad to think that people like them really do exist in the real world. At least Tom has Bill, who is the reason why he wants to get away from all of this and have a good life. *beams*
Date: 03/06/13 04:46 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Poor Tom :'( when he sank to his knees and he began crying because he didn't know what to do. Bushido is EXTREMELY abusive, both mentally, emotionally and verbally. That stupid ass. I hope he gets what he deserves!!! Awww, poor Tomi :'(
Author's Response: Tom is only strong to a certain point. ._. I hated seeing that happen to him too but sometimes it helps to just cry and let it all out. Bushido will definitely get what he deserves!!
Date: 03/06/13 04:41 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Btw, their phone sex was awesome too. How they suddenly just began talking dirty and that wasn't even their intention at first. Tom wants Bill to tug at his hair a little? That sounds sexy!!! And that Tom said no one had done that but that he'd let Bill do it - another cute, dirty thing that Tom would let ONLY Bill do because we all know that Tom loves Bill and only Bill. And Bill feels the same way. It's soooo lovely.
Author's Response: I'm happy you liked that. ;) I didn't plan on them having phone sex either but those boys just have a mind of their own. n.n Tom loves only Bill and would let him do anything he wanted to him. *-* I think I'm not the only one that likes picturing that, haha.
Date: 03/06/13 04:39 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
AWWWWWW TOM CALLING BILL 'BABY' ohhh, I love that word when someone says it to their loved one with affection. - And it was so funny when Gustav asked Bill for advice about sex in the beginning. Gustav wanting to know what made Bill moan so loudly and Gustav kept asking but Bill just left before he could finish his next sentence. I love how you put Gustav in there with cuteness, loyalty and great humor. He's so awesome!!! LOLOLOL and "does the carpet match the drapes?" That brings back some old Tokio Hotel-interview memories. :D you are awesome.
Author's Response: I love it in that case, too! But I can't stand it when people start calling each other that like the day they start going out. Gustav definitely doesn't have a filter, haha. Bill has learned that sometimes it's best to just leave and not answer his question. I'm so happy you love Gustav!!! He appreciates your love and so do I. u.u Thank you!
Date: 03/06/13 03:50 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Couldn't even spell correctly, that's how EXCITED I AM!!!!!! :D YAY!!!
Author's Response: Yaaaaaaay for excitement! Spelling errors don't matter to me. n.n
Date: 03/06/13 03:49 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
WHEN* I have calmed myself...
Author's Response: Hehe, I got you. :)
Date: 03/06/13 03:48 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
OMG YES YOU HAVE UPDATED. I JUST HAD TO WRITE HOW EXCITED I AM. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR ALWAYS POSTING CHAPTERS WHEN YOU SAY YOU WILL. YOU NEVER LET US DOWN. I LOVE YOU. I WILL READ THIS IN A FEW MINUTES WHE I HAVE CALMED MYSELF AND MADE A CUP OF TEA. (: *hugs*
Author's Response: I ABSOLUTELY LOVE HOW EXCITED YOU GET ABOUT THE UPDATES! IT MAKES ME EXCITED TOOOOOO! I'll always update when I say I will because you deserve honesty from me. :) What kind of tea did you have? I love tea and I love YOU!
Date: 03/03/13 02:55 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
awwww, I real talk love you! I'm going to forgive you for ending it soon because I know it'll be great and then you'll write something else amazing for me, yess? this chapter was everything we've been waiting for! so glad they fell back into their love story without struggling or hesitation :)
Author's Response: That's lucky for me because I real talk love you too! Thank you for your forgiveness. :D I will do my best to write another amazing thing for you. I'm happy you enjoyed the chapter and the way they came back together. Thank you so much! I hope you continue to enjoy. :)
Date: 03/03/13 05:41 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Hi!!
A very good chapter, like always.
- The wake up was beautidul. I could'nt help being sad, since I know and they know they soon will be apart. It was a bit playfull, sappy but they needed it to be able to cope with the future separation.
- The last sexy time.... it was slow, no less passionate than before, stronger emotionally. Their times together before looked almost only like fuck; it was rougher, this time they trully were making love!
- I like Melissa, even if she fears Bu- being abused it's understanding- but she doens't fear to tell what she thinks to Bushido. She clearly wore the pant in their relation... but he's right, she is a bit naive.
- The "see you soon" scene was perfectky written. Not too sappy, just the good amount of love, promess and sadness. A very good balance!
- Tom isn't cooperative with Bu. But hey asshole, what did you expect??? You made his life a living hell, tearing him apart from his love... Do you want him to thank you??? Asshole!!!!
-Gus and Geo. Did I already mention what great friends they are??? A lot of times. Then I will tell it once more. Bill couldn't have better friends. They shake him but it was needed!
Gus id right. Tom's life has nothing good to bring. it's bette rif he can enter Bill's life, instead.
Thanks to his friends, after spending a night moping, Bill will get a grip on his life!
- Bleak is back. I still can decide if he's useful or not. Threatening Sasha... I don't feel confortable doing it to a little girl, but she's Bushido's weakness, so... let's see how it will turn out.
- I love high Bill... but it's funnier with Geo and Gus.. and Larry of course!!
- Tom and Bushido fighting... I'm so excited about it... and afraid something would go wrong. This fight will not be a walk in the park. I want to see it but I fear for Tom/
Bill will necesserily be there, Bleak too.... and Tom's father, I think. All the main important players will be there, but I don't know how it will end. Surely not well for a couple of them!
As much as I was expecting Bill and Tom's fight, I didn't see this one coming.
Will Tom add a clause for his freedom in it? Will it be really over? I hope so, but I still worry about the consequences for the lovers....
Guess I only have to have faith in you, like always. You never disappoint, don't start now.
Love ans "see you soon"!
Kiki
Author's Response: Hey there!! I know their morning was a little bit sad, but at least they enjoyed each other. :) I agree, they were totally making love this time.
Date: 03/03/13 01:26 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
yayyy!! things seem on the ups, always a good place to be. I'm nervous for this fight and this...what's his name again...bleak? anyway. onward!
Author's Response: I quite agree, up is the best direction. :D Yep, Bleak. I see you already read the fight chapter so I hope that it was everything you hoped it to beee. Onward and upward! n.n
Date: 03/03/13 12:57 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
i'm back and leaving reviews! haha. well, of course I'd have preferred them to have ended up fucking on the floor towards the end of this chapter, but I think your way was still good. ;) I'll hold out hope tho, since it's "up in the air" and all!
Author's Response: I'm happy to see you back! Thank you for leaving me your thoughts while you got caught up. :) Ahh, I think every chapter should end with them fucking somewhere, haha. If it was possible then I'd make it happen! I'm glad you still liked it though. ;)
Date: 02/28/13 11:54 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Your updates are making me so happy. I had been wondering if Tom would actually get the chance to fight Bushido and here it will beeeee!
Softie Tom and Bill are melting me, especially Tom. The scene where they're packing and Tom says he's never had nice things before? I could just hear the wistfulness in his voice, the longing for that something better he's striving for. It made me want to hug him and tell him everything is going to be all right.
And it /will/ be... won't it??
Author's Response: That's great to hear because making you happy makes ME happy. :D I'm so glad that you're reading my story again! Yesss, Tom will get a crack at Bushido. I've been waiting for this part of the story to happen for a long time.
Date: 02/28/13 03:39 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Holy onion chips, batman!! I totally thought Tom was going to be gone for *months*. (But then that last line happened, and also I belatedly read your note that said this is gonna end in a couple chapters XD)
Back to the beginning... oh man, I love post-... well, this actually isn't post-coital, but I love lovey-dovey breakfast in bed ^^ Or even just soft kisses.
Hehe, and then there ~were~ post-coital kisses! Mm, sweet love-making *heart* And yes, I ~can~ feel the love tonight between them!
Blarg, having a dead/almost-dead phone when starting a trip sucks. That part sort of jumped out at me and made me sympathize. I think what's worse, though, is when your mp3 player is dead O_O Then you can't block out the arguing ppl in the car.
and cringed when he realized that he’d just touched Larry, something he had avoided doing ever since he’d known the little green guy. -- Oh no, Beel, wash your hands! Lol, I'm honestly not sure if I'd be okay with touching a lizard. I'm used to touching fur and feathers, not leathery scaly skin.
Gah, can't find anything else to comment on because it's past midnight and I'm really tired.
*hugs*
Author's Response: I thought about having them apart for a long time, having them drift apart and face more challenges.. But then I realized that they really have been through enough. Not just together but in their whole lives. They deserve some happiness! So, Tom won't be back tomorrow or anything, but sooner than expected.
Date: 02/28/13 02:38 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
(Oh geez -.- I didn't review this before because I'm an idiot, aka was in a week-long emotional funk. But then you updated again after this one and that kinda shocked me out of it =O I was like, 'Oh no! I didn't even review the other one!' So here it is)
Omg, I was afraid to read this chapter at first. More so than with any of the other updates XD I must've stared at the table of contents for a good ten minutes. That said, I pretty much had my fingers over my eyes immediately before and during the fight :P
Lmao, what Gustav said about the pom-poms. That's like what Bill said to Tom earlier in the story.
Dear gosh, I just knew that they'd have to resort to real fighting. It was just bound to happen in this crappy situation! Eep, but you wrote the fight so well.
And it just made my world when they said I love you to each other afterwards :DDD *squeee*
Totally wasn't expecting Bushido to call soon after o.o
P.S. How much do we love romantic Tom? I need me one of those. -- YES. Extremely. :'D I mean that in: "me too" XD
And now, on to leave a review for the latest chapter.
Author's Response: You are so sweet to go back and review this! I'm sorry that you were in an emotional funk. I definitely know that feeling as I've kinda been in one the last couple of days, myself.
Date: 02/27/13 05:13 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Oh! This is going to be soooo good! *excited butterfly clapping* :)
Thanks for the smut, it was indeed "useful" to brighten up my day and eventhough it was sad to see Bill and Tom forced to be separated, I knew it'll turn out good. Bleak is a douche, but a useful one in this case. This will be very good!
Can't wait to have our boys back together. :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you're excited! I really am too. I've been waiting a long time to write this part of the story. :)
Date: 02/27/13 12:42 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
I LOVE YOU! Seriously. You made my day with the last sentence :D Bu is going to have his ass kicked very hard :D YAY.
I have the feeling boys will meet again quite soon so I will be a strong girl and won't cry that Tom left Bill... But you know, some phone sex would make it easier.... I am sure boys would agree LOL.
And excuse me while I will laugh myself into death okay... Bill has super soft ass.... oh my sweet lord, that was priceless hahaha LOL
Thank you for this chapter, great work, just like always :)
Author's Response: I LOVE YOU TOOOO! Yes, Bu is FINALLY going to get what's coming to him and you better believe that Tom is going to enjoy it thoroughly. :D