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Reviewer: sers Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/13 08:43 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

God, this story is just perfect; perfect plot, perfect characters and so damn sexy! I'm soooo happy to have found it :D Can't wait to see Bushido getting his traitorous ass kicked!

PS: The phone sex scene was amazing ;)

Author's Response: Wow, this review made me smile SO big! :D Thank you so much for the awesome compliments and I'm very happy to have you here reading. Bu will get his ass kicked in the next chapter!

Hehe, I'm glad you liked it. ;)

Reviewer: LillithValo Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/13 07:29 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

OMG I have soooo much to catch up on..... Looks like I get in some good reading before I sleep.

Author's Response: YOUUUUU! I'VE MISSED YOUUUUU! I'm so happy you're back and reading. *-*

Reviewer: EmZZz Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/13 07:29 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

YES, I saw the pic of Georg and Gustav. Ohhhh, Georg cut his hair off - he looks amazing as usual. I'm just so glad to see them again. I've missed the G's. I still look forward to their album and some interviews to come, because I want to see more of Gustav and Georg. I love them so much. There's no Tokio Hotel without them. --- Yes, this was a very beautiful chapter and very hard on Tom. I'M SENDING TOM ALL MY LOVE. :)

Author's Response: He really does look amazing! With long or short hair. I love seeing both of them and I can't wait to see all four boys together! It will make my heart so happy. I agree, Tokio Hotel doesn't exist unless all four of them are together and I can't wait for new music and concerts and interviews! TOM APPRECIATES YOUR LOOOOVE. <33

Reviewer: nathalicious Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/13 07:11 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Ohhhh, the phone sex, me likey! *eyebrow wiggle*

To be honest, I feel a little bit bad for Bu. But then again... He lied to Tom about his dad and kept using him and now he wants to drug him as well and just... Nope. I don't feel bad anymore. Let Tom hurt him as much as he wants. And I don't only mean hurt him physically but also mentally. He totally deserves to be hurt mentally, yes. Ok, maybe I do feel a super tiiiiiiny bit bad for Bu but that's just because of the fact that Sasha isn't his daughter, but shhhhh.

Tom has to stay strong because of obvious reasons, FOR HIS BABY BIIIIIIILLLLLLLL *throws heart all around*

AND OMG YES THAT PIC OF GEORG AND GUSTAV AND OMFG GEORG'S HAIR

Author's Response: Haha, me likey that you likey. ;)

I totally understand your conflict about how to feel with Bu! But the way I look at it is: You can't continually do bad things in this world and expect to get what you want. You can get away with things for a while but karma really does always come back to you. Who knows, maybe when Sasha was older Bushido wouldn't be as good to her. I think she's better off without a "dad" like that. Tom will definitely get his revenge and Bushido will get what he deserves!

HIS BAAAAAAABY!! *floating hearts* He's got something worth fighting for now. :D

GEORG'S HAIR LOOKS FABULOUS AND YOU ARE FABULOUS OKAY. Thank youuuu!!

Reviewer: pandasarelovex Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/13 02:49 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

This chapter had so many twists! IT WAS SO GOOD! But poor Tom :(! I am sending him warm fuzzy feelings and a bunch of cuddles from Bill.

AND OH MY GOD THE NEW PICTURE OF GUSTAV AND GEORG! IT MADE MY DAY SO HAPPY! I'VE MISSED THEIR FACES SO MUCH. All my babies are such grown up men now :'( Georg looks so handsome and mature with his short hair. Ahhh. I can't wait for their new album and I just miss them so much.

Author's Response: THANK YOU SO MUCH! I love twists and I never want things to be predictable. Tom appreciates your warm and fuzzies and of course the Bill cuddles. u.u

I'VE MISSED THEM TOOOOO!! Georg looks amazing like that and Gustav is still our teddy bear ._. I can't wait to see them all together again! I miss them too. ._. Thank youuuu for reading and for your thoughts! :)

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/13 01:57 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

I have to say I did not see any of that coming...well done! Now I'm ready to read about Bu getting what he well deserves. I will be anxiously waiting for next chapter!

Author's Response: I'm glad that I was able to surprise you! Thank you. :) You will find out what happens to Bu in the next chapterrr. Thank you so much and I won't keep you waiting long!

Reviewer: Skebe-Neko Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/13 01:54 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

I am speechless. My first thoughts were that now Bill and Tom creamed their pants , but now I am creaming my pants too. Gustav is so awesome cause he always thinks about sex or food XD i love him! But Bushido is such a horrible humanass that he makes my blood boil! On the other hand i feel bad for him.. Melissa is a total B-I-T-C-H!! How could she do that to some one, even if the some one is asshole like bushido?! And awww i feel so bad for Tomi :'( but thank god he has Billa!! More sooooooon or i will dieeeee!!!! :D

Author's Response: So much creaming of the pants! xDD I'm glad you like Gustav, the dude just keeps it real. Haha. Bushido is seriously just.. Horrible. I hate writing him so I can only imagine how much it sucks to read him! But, I do know what you mean.. Melissa is going to take away the one thing that made him just a little bit nice. But, in this world you can't keep doing bad and not have to pay for it. Tom has Bill to make him feel allll betterrrr. ;) There will be a new chapter next week, of course! Thank you so much. :D

Reviewer: Mrauw Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/13 09:43 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

First of all, I'm glad you had a good weekend with your mom!

And second, oh my god....!! My heart is breaking for Tom.. fucking Bushido deserves to be hurt so so much, we all know he what an asshole he is but even for him, keeping news like this, is low. And on top of that Tom is all alone in the middle of nowhere... I wish I could give him a big hug!

Deep down I knew something was up with Bleak and Melissa and I quite like that they are getting revenge on Bushido as well, he really doesn't deserve anything good, it just would've been better if Tom didn't have to fight because of their revenge.

I hope our boys are reunited really soon, Tom is in need of cuddles and love!

X

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's always great to see her. :)

Bushido really does deserve all that is coming to him and I think we will all be relieved along with Bill and Tom when he's gone! He went lower than low. I wish you could hug Tom too! He would so appreciate some love right now. But he will be back with Bill soon and that will cheer him up!

I like that they are playing Bushido too. It will leave him with nothing, just as he has almost left Tom with. I would have Tom just leave and not fight, but the best way to get him back is to fight so that Bleak takes his money and Bushido finds out that Sasha isn't his. Plus, Tom just really wants to kick his ass after all of this. :)

They will be reunited soon, I promise! And Tom will get all of the cuddles and love he needs. Thank you so much for reading!

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/13 09:12 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Wow, I'm so surprised. Everyone is lying around them but hopefully Tom's fight will go with his plan and he will win with Bu and be free. Plus that Bill supports Tom with everything he is doing ;)

Author's Response: Yes, they are surrounded by liars! But at least they have each other and support each other. :) Thank you so much for reading! The next chapter you will see what happens with the fight. n.n

Reviewer: TomsCanadianGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/13 09:03 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

I forgot to add:
Yay for Georg and Gustav!! It was such a wonderful surprise to see a new photo of them on the app!! They look so good and so happy and yeah, they look great! I definitely missed seeing their faces!

Enjoy your week, hun =D

Author's Response: I loved seeing them! It feels like it's been so long since we've seen them, especially together! Now, if Bill and Tom took a photo WITH them I think I might die of happiness from seeing the boys back together again. *-* Geo's hair looks fantastic, too. Eeee, I'm so happy. You have a great week too! <3

Reviewer: TomsCanadianGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/13 09:00 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Wow!! That was intense!!

Woo! Phone sexy time with Tom and Bill! Nice! =D

I just love these two together! Have I told you that yet? lol I think I have but still, they're great!


Poor Tom ='[ My heart broke for him when Bushido told him that he would be still fighing for him because he'd just call his dad. I hate the power that Bushido has (or shall I say had lol) over Tom. Bu definitely needs a big ass whooping and I'm glad it's going to be Tom who gives it to him.

OMG! I didn't see that coming! I had a feeling that Sascha wasn't Bu's, but I didn't think they were messing with Bu! Definitely surprised me there!

And damn, Bushido, for making Tom think that his dad was still around for him to worry about! Smart of him to do, but shit, if only Tom would have known. He could have been done with Bu and living his life with Bill.

I do think it's a great idea for Tom to pretend that he didn't hear Bu. That guy deserves everything he gets and if Tom can help mess up Bu's life, I'm all for it!!

It was like a huge weight was lifted when I read that Tom's dad was dead. I wonder if that is how Tom is feeling as well or if it just hasn't hit him yet. Either way, I'm looking forward to Tom being free and able to live his life the way he wants. And of course, alongside Bill =D

Every one of your chapters leaves me on the edge of my seat and wanting more and more! Thank you for this wonderful chapter, my dear! I'm so glad you enjoyed your weekend with your mom! =D

By the way, you might be my favorite writer on here. Not only are you an amazing, fantastic writer and person, but you take time to respond to reviews. Not a lot of writers on here take the time to respond to everyone and I think it's awesome that you do! You're the best!

Author's Response: Intense is a good word to describe the chapter! I'm glad you liked the sexy phone times. ;) You have mentioned that you love them together before, heha, but I really do love to hear it!

Bushido had waaaay too much power over Tom and Tom just got to the point where his poor body and soul couldn't take it anymore. :( But he is going to get his revenge and Bu will get what's coming to him once and for all.

Can you believe Bushido? He really does deserve to lose everything and Tom is going to do whatever he can to make sure that happens.

I agree, Tom's dad being dead really does solve a lot of problems. In terms of how Tom's feeling, he's pretty much still in shock about it. He's not going to miss his father but he doesn't quite know how he feels about it yet. But, Bushido will no longer be able to threaten him with his father ever again! So Tom and Bill can be together and free, like you said. :)

I'm thrilled that my chapters leave you wanting more! Thank you for your wonderful words and for all of your support. I had a fantastic time with my mom, thank you!

You are seriously so sweet. The thing is, I get such amazing reviews like yours and I think: How could I not respond to this? Your reviews motivate me and I like to thank you for that. Plus, I like talking to you! You're the best though, kay? :D Thank you so much, really!

Reviewer: CrimsonClaudia Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/13 08:46 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

WOOP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Haha, this was an awesome review! Thank youuuu!

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/13 07:12 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Fantastic!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: thosechocolatebrowneyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/13 06:45 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

*sends endless love to Tom* OMG THIS WAS AN AMAZING CHAPTER! :D so many new stuff.. :) please, include Larry in the epilogue :D thanks in advance, his biggest fan

Author's Response: He so appreciates your loooove. I'm happy you liked the chapter and I promiiiise there will be Larry before the story is through. :D Thank you!

Reviewer: caro4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/13 06:35 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

800th review !!! Sorry I had to do this, plus I didnt say thank you for the chapter!!!

Author's Response: Haha, you're awesome. Congrats on the 800th review and thank YOU for reading! :)

Reviewer: caro4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/13 06:33 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Georg is fricking GORGEOUS with short hair, oh my god...
So much in this chapter, I can't even think straight, never start eating a cookie box while reading your chapters, because they are all gone at the end :O
Melissa is such a b*** Sasha is Bleak's, I kind of felt bad for Bushido at first...only at first...
I a have a bad feeling about the fight, Tom should have just left, (yeah I'm a bit of a pussy) buuut then the story would then faster :/
Chapter 26 im waiting for you!!

Author's Response: He was always so handsome but damnnnn he really does look GORGEOUS! Or shall we say... Georgeous. ;)

I know, there was a ton. Ohhh, now I want cookies. xD You are adorable, have I told you that?

It was my goal for you to feel a little bad for Bushido and then have it change when you found out what he'd been hiding from Tom. The story would definitely end faster if he just left. ._. Tom has learned to be a very patient man and that's why he's able to wait until the perfect moment to get out of there. Don't be nervous for the fight! Tom is going to ensure that he wins. 26 will be there next weeeek! Thank youu. <3

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/13 06:23 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

but...bu...tom's dad...and bleak...THE FUCK???

omg! my chin literally hit the table when bill saw bleak with melissa and then when tom overheard bu on the phone! omg! i can picture it. tom's acting like he can't fight, let's bu get in a couple punches, and then he gets this look in his eye like "oh i don't think so bitch" and POW! there goes bu! god, i don't think i've ever hated a character this much!

oh! and making tom cry? how could you??? i thought you loved me!!!

Author's Response: I LOVE your reactions, haha. They are amazing.

I wasn't even planning on the Bleak and Melissa thing but as I was writing it just made perfect sense! Yep, Tom is going to trick Bushido just like that. Bu won't see it coming and it will knock him on his ass in more ways than one. I'm glad I was able to write a villain that you hate that much!

I'm so sorryyyyy ._. I DO love you!! ;-;

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/13 05:49 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Wow! You impress me with how low Bushido can get! I keep being surprised! Not sure why I keep thinking "Okay, there's no way he can get worse" XD In a twisted way, I can understand him lying to Tom about his dad, but holy crap, DRUGGING HIM?

I too was torn between wanting Tom to just ditch Bushido that very moment and wanting him to yell at/whale on him and then walk away. As tempting as that is, I guess I agree with Tom that it's more satisfying in the long-run to leave Bushido floundering in the dust.

Oh my gosh, and that phone sex was hot as hell XD

Hmm, the whole Bleak and Melissa thing did seem a *little* bit contrived to me, but I guess it's not at all unrealistic. And this does need to wrap up for the end XD

A friend asking Bill how he masturbates? That is beyond embarrassing. I think I would cover my face in shame and sink down XD And well, yeah, Gustav, it's better with someone you love. Or at least are attracted to in a real way.

Author's Response: Thank you! I've never written a character so evil so it's good to know I'm accomplishing it. I can understand why he lied too, but he pushed it waaaay too far to justify it at all. Good thing Tom overheard him and won't fall for his tricks any longer.

If it were me, I'd probably just explode at Bushido, tell him the truth about everything and then storm off. But Tom has patience that he's learned from years of doing what other people told him to, and he will wait for the greater pay-off and to ensure that Bu will be out of his life for good and left with nothing.

I'm glad you liked the phone sex. ;)

I'll admit that it was a little forced for me how they just talked about their plans right there, but Bill did need to find out and I hoped that Melissa mentioning in a previous chapter how she'd kept in contact with Bleak and everything would at least give a little hint that they could be plotting. You're right though, it does need to wrap up!

It would depend on which friend was asking me. xD Gustav is so blunt though and holds nothing back, haha. I agree, it's better with someone you're into. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: zuzana899 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/13 05:40 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Girl, you will be the death of me /deep sigh/.

Okay. I liked very VERY much the first part of the chapter. :D Phone sex. Readers just love things like that ;) Then there was absolutely hilarious and adorable Gustav. He is the funniest character here... with his eating and asking about tricks to improve his sexual life and... lmao... Bill's wrist XD

Then I was soooo sorry for Bu, when we all found out the truth about his daughter. And THEN I was absolutely furious. No need to write when and why. Seriously, Bushido is an extra big asshole. Can't believe him. But still... I am so confused. Don't know what to feel right now. I am sorry for everyone. For Bu, for Tom, for Bu's not-daughter.... /Because her parents are horrible/.

Just... MAKE LOVE NOT WAR, EVERYBODY D:

I am an emotional mess, thank you :(

God, I've never thought I will feel sorry for Bu. what are you doing to me....

Author's Response: I'm gonna need you to not die because I like you and want you to stick around, kay? :D

Hehe, I do believe that you said that phone sex would be a good idea so I may have had you in mind when I decided to let them do that. ;) Gustav is all about food and sex, haha. It's true. I have so much fun writing such a blunt and honest character who just says what he's thinking with no filter. I'm happy you like him too!

I'm shocked that you felt sorry for Bu because I think you may hate him the most out of all of my readers! But I understand it.. His daughter was the one person he had a soft spot for and now that will be gone. I'd feel bad for him too if he didn't deserve all that's coming to him. Poor little Sasha, yes. ._. But Bleak really does intend to make a fresh start without anything illegal, and I don't know if Bushido would ever get away from being a bad person entirely. So hopefully the girl is better off.

I AGREE COMPLETELY!! But I'm sorry you are a mess. *hugs and tea and chocolates*

I don't know what I'm doing to you but I hope you'll stick around to see what I'll do next. u.u Thank you so much, honey!

Reviewer: Rainii93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/13 05:08 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

All I have to say us OH MY FUCKING GOd!!!! OMG OMG OMG ONG O.O!!!!!!

Today has been a bit of a boring day (minus the sudden chaos now going on at work) and this just made it all better. BUT!! I kneeew Toms dad was dead, but all that other shit whoa o.o!

Haha can't wait for the update

Author's Response: I am still SO proud of you for your job! That is seriously fantastic, sweetie. :) I'm happy that I could surprise you with parts of this chapter! Did you know Gordon was dead? YOU ARE CLEVER! I hope you like what's coming next and thank you sooo much!

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