pardon me. i need a cold shower. and a cigarette.

GOD DAMN!

okay, so this was amazing. not only tom kicking bu's ass but letting everyone know what a shit he really is. i wouldn't have given the douchebag any money, but oh well. agree to disagree, tom?

and the makeup/reunion/whatever sex...OH MY GOD! up against a wall baby! so hot to imagine it!
i seriously love this tom. he's used to being such a hardass that he's afraid to let his guard down and let himself care about someone. but then there's scrappy little bill who just worms his way into tom's heart and just refuses to leave, making them both better for it.

shit. i'm crying now! the chapter didn't make me cry, but my review is! the fuck??? leftover hormones maybe? *shrugs*

seriously. you amaze and astound me sis. beautiful story. sorry to see it end, but i always know just where to find it.

*sniff*

Author's Response: Hehee, I can always count on you to approve of the dirty parts. ;) And I'm so glad you do!

I don't mean to sound (too) needy, but it's not even morning here anymore... it's lunch time and I'm just really hoping you will update today/tonight, regardless of the time, just on this very TUESDAY. I'll be so excited to read your chapter. Thank you for writing and sharing such a wonderful sexy beautiful story. x

Author's Response: I will be posting it today, sweetie! My brother was in town for only a day and half and I've had to drive everywhere and haven't had a chance to read over it quickly and post. It will be posted no later than 11pm your time, kay? Which is 5pm my time and that's when I'll FINALLY be home! I'm sorry to keep you waiting but the chapter is around 10,000 words so I hope that makes up for it. ;) Thank you! <3

O-oh, plot twists! Haha, this was so good. I'm happy and excited to see things taking a new course and the hope I've been waiting for so long finally appearing. Good twists, btw. Sad for Tom, but I guess the level of how low people really went was nothing surprising. I'm a bit conflicted about Tom's want for revenge, but I guess it's understandable. The most important is to get him out of this.

I found it nice that you understood the feeling of loss of a familymember even if things were not so bright. It just is like that. I remember my friend, who lost of his father few years back. He always hated him, but when he died, it still was though for him. Because father is a father, no matter what.

I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter and yay, G's! :D

P.s. The phone sex scene a6t the beginning was hot! And Tom saying he'd bottom for Bill? SAsdfgh!!! :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you appreciate the twists. They were the kind that snuck up on even me, haha. I agree with you about how it's understandable that Tom wants revenge but it is a little worrisome. He won't let you down though and he will get out of this.

Hi.

I go from shock to shock with you. Do you intent to kill me with each new chapter?????

- I understnad Tom's reasoning about Mel and Sasha, about wanting to kick Bu's ass. But like Bill, I'm can't help but be worried despite agreeing with the plan.
- How cute they are!! after Tom's nickname for Bill.... didn't he already call him that??? I don't remember!
Bill is funny when he didn't catch Tom's innuendo.... I even catch it!!!
- Sex phone!!!!!!!
It was so unexecpted but so fucking good!!! And with even a small promess Tom would let Bill fuck him. will we see it? The first time Bill tops???
- Gus is totally incredible!!!!
- How I wish I could comme and neat Bu to death... You trully made him a supervilain. Asshole!!!, and it's too kind for him!
Tom is trapped with the threat....(but why would his father send him to jail??? did he do something? or is Gordon just being a jerk like always, just to put Tom down??
- I don't know why but since the beginning, I don't feel Dr Jost. Something about him being too eager for Bill's paper and busting Tom and Bill... Maybe I am wrong.... And Bill's paper will only be a revolution in psychotherapy world.
- A good thing I was sitting when I read this chapter!!!
Bleak and Melissa planned this for years!!!!!!!!! Sasha isn't even Bu's daughter!!!!!!!!!!
I want to revise a bit my opinion about Mel, I didn't think she was so manipulative ( And Bu so naive by the way) Why and how could she do that for years? Using her own daughter ? I trully don't understand. All I know is that this way, it's Tom and Bill who paid for their plotting, and I can't forgive them!!!
-Telling this to Bu is it going to help our lovers? You said there will be a fight, didn't you? So it won't change a thing!!
- Tom's dad is dead????? For two month????? Can I kill Bushido myself please??? I can't believe he's such scumbag! And his posse never tell Tom. They're not better than Bu, and deserve to fall with him!!
One more I understand Tom's reasoning. He needs it, needs the fight to have closure about it all and "gaining" himself his freedom.

Of course I send all the love I can to Tom. How could I not? Sur Bill will be by his sides...but it's so hard being betrayed and it will become even harder next chapter.
But finally Bill and Tom will be together ad Bu will be down for good.
I can't wait to read it, even if I know you're surely plotting a few sudden developments for the last chapters!!!

Love. Kiki

Author's Response: I did not intend that at alll!! But I'm glad I was able to surprise you. :D I'm happy that you like Bill and Tom together ._. We miiight see Bill top Tom. ;) I really love all of your insights on the characters and your observations, as always! You understand them very well. I wouldn't worry about Dr. Jost though, he's just a good and supportive teacher and he won't cause any trouble for Bill and Tom. They've been through enough! Tom's dad is dead and Bushido is FINALLY going to get what he deserves! I'll be posting the new chapter later today, and I'm sorry my response here is so short but I have to go drive because I'm actually out of town right now. :( Thank you so so much for reading and for the love for Tom! He and I both appreciate it. :) I hope you enjoy the next chapter I'll be posting in 4 or 5 hours! <3

I would love it if you had time to go over my stuff. I've asked a couple ppl and they all don't have the time or aren't into it anymore. I'll let you know though when I have a chapter ready.

Waaah! :D I just can't wait for Tom to beat the living daylight out of Bu! 

I've missed you too!!! I read Workout again before coming back to this. Still love crazy Bill. lol.

Author's Response: I love that you read it again! I miss that Bill a lot. ._. Maybe I need to write another one shot. ;)

Omg that was such a good twist. I'm actually completely surprised that Tom's dad was dead and Bushido knew, but I'm not surprised that Bushido would stoop so low. I can't wait until the fight so Tom can really give Bushido what he deserves: a great and public beating. also, I totally laughed at Bill's comment about beating up the roadblocks "video game style" because I can totally picture that.

And the app picture was so adorable! Now the only thing that would make it better would be a Bill in the background...next one hopefully ;)

Author's Response: That's amazing that I was able to surprise you! It's true though, we all knew that Bushido could do horrible things so in that respect it wasn't shocking that it happened that way. Bushido will definitely get what he deserves after all he's put Tom through! Ohhh did you play that game? Haha. You're awesome for being able to envision that. :)

As to both the Bushido and the Bleak/ melissa situations, I didn't expect them but I'm totally not surprised either. Know what I mean? No disrespect.

Oh Tom *shakes head* you have to play that card up front when you first make a deal, you can't go changing the plan later and expect it to work. Especially with Bushido.

You know, before Tom found out about Bushido's lying, I think I would've told him, and tried to work out a deal with him to do the fight, screw Bleak out of the money and used it to buy my way out. But that's moot now, seeing as Bushido is an even bigger ass than we've realized.

It was nice seeing a bit of Jost.

You definitely gave us a good twist that I wasn't expecting. *flourishy bow to your greatness* keep up the amazing work I can't wait to see the next one!

Author's Response: I totally get you, girl! You didn't see them coming but they aren't surprising from those characters.

Oh. My. God. Can I just hug Tom to bits right now?

Believe it or not, I had suspected something wasn't quite 'kosher' where Melissa and Bleak were concerned, but Bushido's betrayal is even beyond him. What wonderful karma though, to have Bill and Tom discover the truth in time... someone is definitely looking out for those two.

I can't wait to see Tom kick Bushido's ass, and know everyone wants to see that!! Bring it on!

Author's Response: Yes, you can! He would appreciate lots of hugs. ._.