Date: 03/12/13 07:57 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
“I'm gonna kiss you. A lot. Just thought I should warn you.” --- Wow Tom’s sexy text message… it’s so sweet and hot and romantic and cute…
Author's Response: How amazing would that be to get a text like that from Tom? *-*
Date: 03/12/13 07:57 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
“Gustav looked at him seriously, “don't joke about that because it really could happen and you'll be the first one to be infected because you're a non-believer and the furthest from scrappy,”” OH MY GOD, GUSTAV YOU ARE NOT ALONE IN THIS. I’m paranoid about that shit too. Not that it ruins my life or anything, but sometimes I’ve thought that there’s no way people can just brush it off and say it’s impossible because our world makes almost anything possible, both good and bad and I love Gustav for being so childish and smart at the same time and so entertaining and cute and funny. I’m not waiting for an apocalypse or anything like that, but I do wonder sometimes if it’d ever happen. I HOPE NOT!! :) --- Aww and in one moment Gustav is faking tears because Bill doesn’t want him at the fight, the next he’s all into the candy bars :D lolol, so easily distracted. Gotta love Gusti
Author's Response: I'm paranoid about it too and in the same way as you! xD Like, I'm not scared about it to the point where it affects my life at all, but I do occasionally think about it and decide that anything is possible and I shouldn't just assume that it never could. I hope not too, though. Haha. But Gustav understands us! He gets so distracted by food, doesn't he? xD That's his big weakness.
Date: 03/12/13 07:56 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
I love that this chapter is so long. Oh yes, merci!
Author's Response: You are so very welcome! I'm happy I was able to get it to be that long, too. :)
Date: 03/12/13 07:55 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
“I guess I was a pretty big jerk.. Now look what you've done to me, I'm fucking soft” Awww and I like soft Tom :D but I laughed when Bill said that he didn’t feel soft to him – dirty boys!!! :D and this too: "“What kind of celebrating were you thinking?” – “The naked kind.” … Ooooh, Nice Bill. Nice one. I’ll remember that!! :D As dirty, naughty and hot they are, just as cute, adorable and sweet can they be... like when Tom said; “You’re mine” to Bill while being on top of him and kissing him all over, I felt like I might just burst with love for the two… and arousal. :D
Author's Response: I like soft Tom too and how cheeesy he gets with Bill. u.u You know they are both very dirty boys, haha. But we like them like that. :D I'm glad they are a good mix of things for you. I didn't want them to be all about sex, even though that has its time and place. They genuinely feel love for each other and not just lust so they like to express that! Go ahead and burst with love and arousal, I'm not gonna judge you. :D
Date: 03/12/13 07:53 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
“…inched his fingers along the V shape of Tom's lower abs” OH MY FUCKING GOD, that part of the male body is soooo damn sexy… and imagining Tom’s naked body … *moans* I’m all flustered now and my cheeks are hot! *blushes* and Tom saying; “I.. I love you more,” to Bill is sexy as hell too. THEY ARE JUST SO PERFECT FOR EACH OTHER... oh and the last lines in this chapter about how Tom can feel free to do whatever he likes, it just dawns on me and I get all excited about that because Tom is FREE!!! Finally. And he's got his Bill. Awwww *hugs self with glee* I'm just sooooo happy. It was so cute when Tom talked about how it wasn't as scary for him when he had Bill by his side and that Tom would always want Bill there day and night... I'm almost crying here.
Author's Response: Ohhhh, I love imagining that part on Tom's body too. :D Aww look at you all cute and flustered! Tom will do that to a girl. ;) It's awesome that you can feel that they are perfect for each other! They are so different from each other but they fit together so great. Tom is freeeeee as a bird! And they have each other and they get to live and be happy. It's been a long time coming and I'm happy that you as a reader finally get to feel free too for them!
Date: 03/12/13 07:52 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
Oh my god.
-takes a deep breath-
Just... oh my god.
I am so proud of Tom, he kept his act together so well when Bushido was, in a fucked up way, trying to be nice, he could have just exploded right there and then and no one would have blamed him, but he didn't. He stayed strong knowing that the reward would be bigger in the end if he kept it together.
And then he was forced to be in a car with him for seven hours... complete torture! Thank god for Tom he had Bill to text and the idea of kissing Bill to keep him occupied for the time being.
The grocery shopping with Bill and Gustav really felt like the silence before a big storm, so glad that Gustav was there to keep Bill's thoughts from worrying over the fight. If I were Gustav I would've been pretty disappointed that I couldn't go to the fight though. ;)
When the boys were finally reunited again I had to admit that I felt quite relieved that Tom made it back into Bill's arms safely, it meant that Bu didn't pull any sick crap on him during the car ride.
And then the big fight, the fight we have all been waiting for... I think I died a little bit from all the tension. But again, Tom was so strong. He knew exactly was he was doing and kicked the hell out of Bushido, finally!!
Not only did he manage to hurt Bushido physically but he also destroyed him by telling him the truth about Sasha.
After everything ended, Tom goes and shows compassion for Bushido, something Bushido has not deserved at all. But the fact that Tom was able to do that shows what an amazing person he truly is!
And now he's forever free, I think my heart exploded from love for our boys, they deserve so much happiness, now they are able to just be and love each other, nothing is holding them back anymore.
Despite all the happy fluttering butterflies with love in my heart I am also sad that it's almost over... what am I going to do without them?
You are amazing! Thank you! :D
XX
Author's Response: *breathes in with you* This was an awesome review!!
Date: 03/12/13 07:51 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
wonderful wonderful wonderful wonderful wonderful :3
Author's Response: Yep, you are!!! <33333
Date: 03/12/13 07:51 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
OMG IT WAS AMAZING WHEN TOM KICKED BUSHIDO’S ASS AND STARTED SPEAKING UP ABOUT HOW BUSHIDO HAD BEEN SUCH A JERK… what’s more is how Tom handled it all afterwards. Tom even helped Bushido out. Tom is SUCH A GREAT and wonderful person. Very decent. So is Bill. And Bleak isn’t even that bad in my opinion. He got sent to jail because of Bushido… Wow, this story is so interesting and pulls you in wanting more…
Author's Response: Tom definitely showed good character after the fight when he was actually kind to Bushido. I think he even surprised himself with that since he was so angry with Bushido about everything. Yeah, turns out that Bleak wasn't even so bad, Bushido just framed him. I'm so glad that the story pulls you in! I like leaving little surprises here and there for you to find out.
Date: 03/12/13 07:50 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
And I laughed when Bill said that only food could motivate Gustav to wake up so early and Gustav started talking about cartoons and he was all bitter about Dora and Bob. He apparently wanted something else which I think is understandable… HAAAA, he’s so cute. And I love cartoons as well!!! You can never get too old to watch the really great ones.
Author's Response: I totally agree!! I will never be too old for cartoons or Disney. :D I'm glad that made you laugh, hehe. Gustav just knows what he likes and doesn't put up with anything else.
Date: 03/12/13 07:47 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
Ohh and when Gustav sat on top of Bill and said it was a comfy bed he’d found… awww *smiles* Ohhh can I just please get my own Gustav right now!!!!!!! I want a friend like him, a guy friend that's just a friend but a loyal and so close one like Gustav is with and to Bill. I want to move out of my mom's house and get an awesome roommate like Gusti.
Author's Response: I want a Gustav too! I have female friends like that but I want a guy that's just a friend that eats all the time and bugs me, haha. I know exaactly what you mean though and guy friends like that are hard to find. But I have hope for us! I bet you could find a great roommate, I've had some really good ones.
Date: 03/12/13 07:47 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
Oh my God!!! Eeeep you're like the master of making my day at work just that much better! I was pretty much flipping shit while reading that xD Thank God I'm in the media gallery at the moment and can get away with it. If I had been in a meeting I probably would have caused a scene.
But oh my God, oh my God, oh my God, oh my God!! I'm seriously freaking out right now, haha. MAN though. I seriously don't want this to end, but I can't wait for the finally piece! I'm excited to see what their future holds for them!!
I think I have an idea for what Tom's job in the end will be, buuuuut I don't know if I'm right, I guess I'll just have to wait in see. Luckily this is my last week on the job (PRAISE THE LORD) so I'll be able to fangirl freely when you post the epilogue, woo!
Okay, bye for now Kirsty, luuuuuuurve you!
Author's Response: OH MY GOSH THAT HEART AT THE END IS SOOO DAMN CUTE!!! JUST LIKE YOUUUU!
Date: 03/12/13 07:46 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
Gustav saying "“We built a fort out of blankets and did a hotbox in there” and Georg saying Gustav farted but then Gustav blamed it on the lizard… LMFAO!!! They are the cutest ever. I love it when you include the G’s. They are so important to me. And they add great, light humor to this story. I love it. I love the intense, sexy parts with Tom and Bill while I also really adore Gustav and Georg and their funny moments that are so cute and sometimes even hilarious.
Author's Response: Hahah, I looove writing those two and Larry. I figured with all the drama and sad things in the story that it would be good to have a couple of characters that bring some humor. I'm glad you like it mixed in with the moments with Tom and Bill. :D Thanks so much!
Date: 03/12/13 07:44 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
"As long as you stick with me, your dad will never harm you again,”" Bushido is such a fucking lying arse!!! Btw random thing, but Bill's written 40 PAGES?!!! are you kidding me!!?!! how can he write FORTY pages...? O__O whaaaat
Author's Response: He is a huuuuuge liar. D: I'm totally not kidding! That's a normal length for thesis papers in graduate school here. :/ It's something you work on for months so you have lots of time to get it done, but still. It's so much work!
Date: 03/12/13 07:43 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
OHHH and I'm so excited about the epilogue. Reading how their future will be. This story makes me so happy. Thank you for all these wonderful chapters. I LOVE YOU.
Author's Response: You are so very welcome!! I hope you'll enjoy it because I'm really looking forward to writing it. :D I LOVE YOU TOOOO!
Date: 03/12/13 07:43 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
I'm going to have to write several comments because there are so many things I want to write about; tell you how I appreciate the little funny and cute things or the intense sexy moments... I NEED to comment on them, I can't help it. Seriously, I had to open up a Word document to write down all these things I want to comment on. As if taking notes... That’s how much your chapter means to me. LOVE IT.
Author's Response: You don't even know how cute you are and how happy that makes me that you opened up a word document! *-* I'm so flattered and appreciative of your attention to detail and your love of my story! Thank you so much, I'm excited to read your other comments. :D
Date: 03/12/13 07:42 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
OHHH THIS IS JUST SO BEAUTIFUL I FEEL LIKE THERE ARE NO WORDS TO DESCRIBE JUST HOW AMAZING THIS STORY IS I LOVE IT SO MUCH OH MY LORD
Author's Response: YOU ARE AMAZING THOUGH AND YOU SHOULD KNOW IIIIIIT!
Date: 03/12/13 07:11 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
Fantastic! As sad as I am to see this end, I can hardly wait for the epilogue :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm sad as well but also excited to get the epilogue done for you to read. :D
Date: 03/12/13 06:57 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
OMG OMG... I don't even know what else to say! Sweetie, that was one hell of a ride reading this story. It gave me so many great moments. I laughed, cried.. was excited, angry.. smiled and punched some walls with frustration. And exactly all those feeling made this story perfect for me. I might honestly say this will be forever one of my favorite fan fictions on THF. You are a great writer and I can't wait for the epilogue as well as maybe for some new story you'll post someday. THANK YOU, truly THANK YOU for making this experience so amazing. Well.. you'll see the rest of my fangirling on twitter anyway. Love You :* xoxo Your A.
Author's Response: This is the kind of review that makes me smile from ear to ear! I'm really happy that you felt so much while you were reading. That's pretty much the best compliment I can get as a writer. Is this really one of your favorites? *-* Thank you!! I hope that I'll write another story after this one, because I really do love doing it. I'm excited to write the epilogue! It'll be good to let these boys really be together. Thank YOU for being such an incredible reader and person. I loved your fangirling on twitter. :D Love you. :*
Date: 03/12/13 06:49 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
Oh my god, it was so good! I'm going to miss this so much buuut guess what? It's march break here, I'm going to reread "work out" all over again mouhahaha nothing's gonna stop me! Except maybe that huge book I have to read for french :O
Hope we are going to know what happens with bushido in the epilogue, it would be hilarious if he turns out to be a male stripper or something like that (not the most honnest job).
Poor gustav, I mean I wouldn't mind being in his place, but it seems like didn't really enjoy Tom and Bill's show.
Thanks for the chapter *hugs and kiss*
Author's Response: I love your attitude! :D I need to read Work Out again too because I seriously forgot most of what I wrote, lol. Mainly because that story is so random and also because I wrote it almost 2 years ago. Craaazy. But don't let your schoolwork fall behind! I let fanfiction take up my homework time a lot, haha. Ooops.
Date: 03/12/13 06:40 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
OMG YES I SEE YOU UPDATED... I WANNA SCREAM OF EXCITEMENT, BUT IT'S LATE AT NIGHT SO I CAN'T... DAMN YOU, YOU BEAUTIFUL WRITER... btw, how do you know what time it is here where I live?? :O are you very smart, or am I stupid for not knowing how you can know that ... or are you stalking me??? :O :D :P
Author's Response: Haha, you're adorable!! I know because you mentioned once that you're from Europe.. Denmark, I think? I have a really oddly good memory, which comes in handy while writing a story with a lot of details, hehe. I promise I'm not stalking! I just remember the things that people I like tell me. :)