Date: 03/15/13 10:13 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
Aww, I like the ending. I approve thje ending. It was what they deserved and I think Tom acted fairly, maturely with Bushido. It somehow made it better in my book since i was a bit worried if I'd be able to accept Tom's decision. It was important that they finally got peace and a chance to start over. Very comforting ending.
And that rimming was hot. Just saying. ;)
It has been such a great stopryu and I'm dso happy your muse served you through all these chapters. I'm going to give a proper the wholy reviee in the epilogue, but I say already that I feel like I can leave this story with light and happy heart. These two are going to have a great life together. :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you approve! I know you were hesitant about Tom's want for revenge so I'm happy that you are satisfied that he treated Bushido fairly in the end. Comforting is definitely what I was going for; for the boys and the readers!
Date: 03/15/13 04:31 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
Hey!
I'm sorry I disappeared .___. I just read all the last chapters and I wanted to leave a comment 'cause they were really amazing.
I can't believe Rough is almost over. It makes me wanna cry, I wish you could go on forever ;___;
I'm really happy about the way things went, I'm happy that they're back together, that Bu had what he deserved, that Tom is finally free. They're so sweet together, I'm in love
Author's Response: I'm so happy to see you! I was worried and missing you. ._. But I'm glad you got caught up and I'm so happy you enjoyed the chapters!
Date: 03/15/13 04:15 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
ya know... for boys, they squabble like girls :P Its a really heartbreaking chapter but it was excellent!
Author's Response: Haha, I quite agree! I'm so happy you're getting caught up and I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. :) Thank you!
Date: 03/14/13 04:11 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
I love you, I love the story, I love everything right now. I'm so sorry that my english sucks, and I can't tell you how I exactly feel about this. All I can say is: This was amazing, you are amazing. Don't ever stop writing, please.
Thank you for this beautiful piece of perfection.
Author's Response: I love all the love!! *-* Your English is really good, actually. So don't worry. :) I'm so happy that you enjoyed the story and I think YOU are amazing, okay? I won't stop writing as long as you all want to keep reading! I hope you enjoy the epilogue and thank you so much.
Date: 03/13/13 09:31 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
I LOVE YOU TOO!!!!! And I love this story so much. This is a stupendous balance of emotion. Seriously, you have a way of taking us to the edge of Tensions point, and theb just dispersing it so eloquently with a well placed joke that never feels out of place.
Shame on Gustav, blaming that sweet innocent little lizard. *totally believes it was Larry*
What Tom did was the stronger thing. And I think he proved to everyone that he's the better man.
I can't wait to find out what Tom decides to do with himself. And all their happy memories they make...and maybe we can even see Bushido a few year down the line, straightened out and repentant?
Fantastic work sweetness. I can't wait to see the next one. *huggles*
Author's Response: You have a way of making me feel SO good with your compliments! I think because I know you're honest, and I really appreciate that. If something confuses you or you don't agree with something you always let me know, so I know when you say something is good you mean it's good! If that even makes sense. xD I JUST LOVE YOU, OKAY. I'm happy too that the jokes and funny moments weren't awkward or forced as they led out of serious moments.
Date: 03/13/13 07:12 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
Finally!!! You go Tom!!! proud of him !!!
And to Bu... in your...oh wait for it...wait again........................face lol
i your face bu!!!
thank you very much, you did great. your story is one of the best. b29; :-D and yeah!!! another chapter!!
Author's Response: Aww, Tom appreciates that you're proud of him!! Haaha, you're so cute. RIGHT IN HIS FACE, YEAH.
Date: 03/13/13 07:12 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
WOW! Just... WOW! :D excellent work... THANKS FOR INCLUDING LARRY! :D
Author's Response: I always think of you when I put Larry in a chapter!! Haha, thank you so much. I'm really happy you liked it! :)
Date: 03/13/13 05:51 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
This was a very good story. It's so different from the Work out. This is a very hard and shocking story. Work out while I laughed a lot, and now I was sad at times because of human wickedness. Nice job, thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It was definitely different from Work Out and it made it a challenge for me to write. A fun challenge though! And it makes me so happy that my hard work was worth it since you enjoyed the story. Thank you for reading. <3
Date: 03/13/13 05:33 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
I... I just... I can't even. I think I'm having a moment here, brb *sobs*
That was absolutely perfect. I could use all the positive adjectives in the world to describe this chapter, and the whole story, of course. I mean, how could I not?
I'm so proud of Tom I think I might explode with pride. He simply nailed it. Not only because he finally fought Bu, taught him his place, but still was decent enough to show kindness to him, even after all that he has done to him. But well, that's Tom, he's just... Perefct.
Bill and Tom, oh man... Ok no, I will stop right here. I don't want to bawl my eyes out yet, there's still an epilogue. Yes :D
Wait, ONE MORE THING
“Everyone knows the number one rule in forts is that you're not allowed to fart.”
WORK OUT REFERENCE SQUEEEEAL Oh, pretty dick, I miss you! *giggles uncontrollably*
Ok, that's it I guess. Thank you for being a fanfiction genius, kIloveyoubye.
Author's Response: Your reviews are always like a ray of sunshine on a cold day! And the sunshine is rainbow-colored because you are fabulous. :D
Date: 03/13/13 04:49 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
BLANKET FORT!!! I'm so glad that Gustav and Georg understand the finer things in life like blanket forts. Bill and Tom should build one to take their minds off of things. I could comment in more detail about how wonderfully perfect this chapter was and how I'm sad to see this ending... but wall sex. The wall sex. The beautiful, beautiful wall sex.
Author's Response: We've gotta make a blanket fort together, for real! Because now that I've mentioned them in two stories AND in our emails, pretty sure I cannot hide my undying love for them, haha. Bill and Tom SHOULD build one! Ohhh, wall sex pretty much sums it up. :D I'm glad you appreciated that as much as I hoped you would. Wall sex is always a good idea. Thank you for reaaaaading my beautiful friend! And I'm sad to see it ending too, btw. :(
Date: 03/13/13 02:18 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
Wow, such a beautiful chapter! So many emotions and feelings..... It's amazing that Bill & Tom have the guarentee that they will be free of the fighter's life forever!
I loved all the little jokes of Gustav & Bill!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you a lot! I'm really happy you liked it and felt all the things. :) Bill and Tom are free to live their life together now! I'm glad you enjoyed the silly moments with Bill and Gus because I love those too. n.n
Date: 03/13/13 12:59 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
Fuuuck it's over... almost. What am I going to read now? :( amazing chapter as always xx
Author's Response: I don't even know what to do, either. ._. I'm going to miss writing this so much! But hopefully in not too long I will have another story in the works. Thank youuuuu! <3
Date: 03/13/13 12:23 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
Can't believe that there will only be an epilouge after this :'( i have to find a new fic that is as good as this one :'( this is like losing a child really. BUUUUUUUT AMAZING CHAPTERRR!!! And Bushido totally got what he deserved! And Tom and Bill had their sexy time >:))) always happy to read those parts! This fic will propably come one of those fics that I read ao many times I know them backwards! You are amazing and if someone could win a nobel price from writing tokio hotel fiction, it would undoubtly be you! Thaaaank youuu and i will be on the look out for the epilouge!
Author's Response: Oh my gosh, I know! I've grown so attached to these characters and I don't want to let them go either. ._. But I'm hoping the epilogue will give us all the closure we need, lol. There are some incredible stories on this site so I'm sure you'll find one to read! I'm so happy you enjoyed the chapter and the sexy time ;) It seriously delights me that you'll read this again. Omg, could you be any sweeeeter?? I'm not the best writer but I do have the best readers. Thank you so much! I hope to talk to you next week. <3
Date: 03/13/13 11:57 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
Baby, this was amazing. You've done such a good job with this story. Brava! *gives you sparkles and cookies and Tomi
Author's Response: It's youuuuu! *-* Thank you, thank you. I'm really so happy that you enjoyed it, even when Larry wasn't in chapters! *takes your gifts happily* You are the bestttt. :*
Date: 03/13/13 05:46 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
Lin lining Sanskd lhbsdvojb so fucking breathtaking! I have never been emotionally attached to a story before this one. The way you portray your characters is beautifully done
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! That made me smile soooo big. :D I'm very happy that you enjoyed it and I appreciate your lovely compliments. <3
Date: 03/13/13 12:39 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
Karma well served i'd say! I've had so many emotions while reading this story, to sum it all up...BRAVO, well done! Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Looking forward to the epilogue and what's going on with Tom and Bill.
Author's Response: Thank YOU so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me along the way. Writing this has been amazing all thanks to wonderful readers like you! I'm glad you're excited for the epilogue. :) Thank you.
Date: 03/13/13 12:01 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
I'm super glad I got to read this before my surgery.
Author's Response: I'm so glad too, girl. You are in my prayers and I know everything will go great. I love you!
Date: 03/12/13 11:54 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
that was AMAZING!!!!!!!!
Tom is finally free and can have normal life with Bill. Hell, they now seams like lovely couple so there is no doubt they will always do.
can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you sooooo much!! They are both free to just live and love each other now. :D They got through the hard stuff! I hope you like the epilogue. :D
Date: 03/12/13 10:20 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
Awww, I'm sad that this was the last real chapter =[ I've grown to love the characters so much and I'm sad that we'll have to say goodbye next week. All good things must come to an end...
Now, even though I am sad that this will be over very, very soon, I am so excited and happy with the way things turned out! I have to say, I was a bit nervous that something was going to go wrong, but you definitely surprised me with things going Tom's way. I knew Tom would kick Bushido's ass, but I thought Tom would get a bit more punches thrown at him. Way to go, Tom!
haha sassy pants! I laughed when I read that because I always say 'I'm not wearing my smart pants today' lol. Not the same thing, but close LOL
This chapter had it all! Drama, fluff/romance, sex, and of course an intense fight scene!
Oh, I am going to miss this story so much! I hope you plan on writing something new because I am so looking forward to more of your work!
Are you excited for the DSDS live shows? I'm interested to see how Tom's and Bill's hair looks now!
Have a great week, hun!
Author's Response: I'm sad too, girl! :( I really do mean it when I say I wish it could go on and on. I've been writing this story for over a year and I've grown so attached to the characters. :( I'm hoping the epilogue will give us all some closure!
Date: 03/12/13 07:59 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
I hope it wasn't too much that I wrote so many comments, I just really wanted to note all those things and tell you I appreciated them because it's what I do when I get excited and happy about something and this chapter was just so long and beautiful so there were even more things to write about than there usually is. As always, your chapters never disappoint. They are so perfect, just like Tom and Bill's love for each other... and like Gustav and Georg are so cute and sweet. I love how Bill said; “It’s you” with such happiness when he saw Tom again and I felt so happy for them. I missed them together, because yes even though they were talking on the phone every night it still wasn’t the same and it just seems so right for them to be together for real like that again, touching and kissing and being able to look into each other’s eyes and get reactions and see expressions etc… it’s so beautiful, their love. You couldn’t have written a better story for this, I mean you did so well it’s a masterpiece I love it so much. I must applaud Tom for having so much self-control because I don’t blame him for wanting to beat the shit out of Bullshit-o (as Gustav so wonderfully said) Poor Tom, having to put up with all those things and knowing Bushido is playing tricks on him in all kinds of ways. So cruel and manipulative… it’s like he’s got no conscious when it comes to other people than himself and his daughter. It’s almost evil. If it wasn’t for his feelings for his – actually NOT really his – child, then I’d think he’s non-human or a sociopath… Anyway, I’m glad Tom has been so strong and held on for so long… he found his Bill. And Bill found his Tom. I love you, Tom!
Author's Response: I honestly had such a great time reading your comments and I think you are amazing! Thank you for taking your time to leave me such awesome thoughts and tell me what you liked about the story. Your excitement is contagious and I have a big grin on my face now because of you! Thank you so much for all of your amazing compliments and attention to details about the characters and the story. It really makes me feel like the time I spent plotting and writing this chapter was totally worth it. I do think Bushido is slightly sociopath, good job picking that up! Bill and Tom have each other and nothing can keep them apart anymore! I hope you enjoy the epilogue and seeing some sweet, serious and sexy moments between them. :) Thank you a million times! You're the best.