Reviewer: LuneBleue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/13 04:54 pm Title: Chapter Five

So he did win the fight! Will Bill start fighting as well?

Author's Response: You will definitely find that out. :D Thank you so much for reading!

Reviewer: LuneBleue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/13 04:33 pm Title: Chapter Three

I hope Tom wins. I wonder how he got into this mess.

Author's Response: You find out more and more about Tom as the story goes on, so I hope you enjoy it enough to keep reading!

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/28/13 01:44 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

I haven't gotten around to leaving a review on this or the final two chapters of this story and so therefore I suck xP

But anywho, ahem:

Oh lord, I don't know -- and God forbid I ever find out -- what it's like to be in a car with someone I hate for four hours -.- Though I *was* in the car with someone I disliked for about half an hour once. And just that was very uncomfortable.

“Only food would motivate you to get out of bed this early.” -- That's almost entirely true with me XD

Ooh, it's really nice that they were able to meet up in person real quick before the fight :D

And hehe, I had rather assumed that Tom would fake being woozy for a minute or so. Then it would have been an even bigger shock XD But oh well. Oh, also, my occasional dyslexia made me read a sentence in the previous chapter to mean that Bushido was going to attempt to drug Tom a whole night before, rather than immediately before, the fight, so I was kind of surprised here when the jug was mentioned but then figured it out =P [/rambling]

Bleak's speech was more... eloquent than I'd expect from a criminal, and I think that slightly impacted the mood you were going for, but c'est la vie.

Aww, Bill and Tom's closeness makes me jealous. I'm in a semi-relationship with a guy right now and it leaves a lot to be desired in the communication department. I'm rather sick of him never telling me about his day, always swearing that nothing of interest happened :( So it kind of aches in a bittersweet way to see fics with such a utopian -- yes, even with the obstacles, I call this utopian XD -- bond.

Will review the surprise extra chapter and the epilogue soon :3

Author's Response: You don't suck at all! I'm always happy to see you here, whenever you get the time. :) I don't know what that's like either! I'm glad I don't. But I do know what it's like to be in a car with someone I don't really know that well for that long. It can be awkward for sure.

I'm the same way. If I know I have an awesome breakfast ready, I will get out of bed sooner. xD Yes, yes, I'm always happy when they get to see each other and have a cheesy moment. :D

When it came down to it, Tom didn't want to keep up the bullshit. Bushido assumed he'd be slow so he saw what he wanted to see, and didn't see that Tom was obviously perfectly fine. Also, it kills me to write in poor grammar just for the sake of a character. I figure I'll write correctly and then people can imagine Bleak how they want. Also, he wasn't really a criminal. Bu just painted him to be that way.

Aww, I've been in relationships and friendships where the conversation can be more one-sided. It's awesome when you find someone that you can talk and talk with. I'm sure things will get better with your guy!

Thank you so much and I will go and respond to your next review. :D

Reviewer: SunlovestheMoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/13 04:10 pm Title: Epilogue

Oooh, Bushido working at McDonalds. To quote their slogan, I'm Lovin' it! Hahaha. Although, I would have thought Bushido would have managed to find a better job than that, but hey.. that works nicely.

The sex scene...Oh, what a nice switch; Bill having Tom, and over a car no less. Most of the time I can't really imagine the scenario but you've done very nicely with it. I liked how you used Tom's secret plan as a kind of 'push' for the rule break. It didn't feel token or as an obligatory thing, you know?

And I really liked how you left it open ended, so you know what I'm going to say, right? ONE SHOT, ONE SHOT, ONE SHOT! That's /three/ one shots, bby! Joking... I think. Do it however you think best.

Thank you for sharing with us Bill and Tom's life here. They have become one of my favourites within all the different Bill and Tom fanfics I've read.

Author's Response: Haha, nice! I like to think that Bushido is working more than one job to try to make up the difference in the lessened amount of money he's making. That just happened to be one of the jobs and Gustav ran into him there.

I'm so glad to hear that it didn't seem obligatory! I wanted to work it in if possible, because I like it when Tom bottoms under the right circumstances, even though I do mostly picture Bill as the bottom. I'm pleased that you liked it. :)

Haha, you're so cute. I would love to write a one shot one day for this, but I think I will let it stew a bit and give others the chance to read now that it's finally complete. We will see!

Thank you for reading, I'm really so happy to hear that my Bill and Tom have become some of your favorites. That's a huge compliment!

Reviewer: zuzana899 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/13 02:44 pm Title: Epilogue

PART 2 of my review:

Also, you managed to surprise me 3 times in this chapter (if I remember correctly, I read it two days ago, life decided it needs my attention now :/, so only now I am writing a review).

First surprise was Tom bottoming. I didn't think something like that could happen but it was SO sexy to see him/read it in that position :D Plus I just love when he is blushing :D

The second surprise.... Bill's father and Tom helping him. I didn't expected this at all. But when I think about it, it was all so logical and it just feels right that Bills parents want to back in his son's life, that Tom helped them meet Bill, that he loves him so much, he wants the best for him. And so he decided to propose him :D Well it was and wasn't a surprise. After what Gustav said I had the feeling they had a good inspiration in him now, Tom didn't disappoint :)

And well, everything was perfect. Long chapter, what I totally love. Perfect characters, what I love too. Funny moments, what I adore very much and a bit of drama what is always good. Plus... some very hot scenes, I don't need anything else, everything is here.

Thank you for this story. And can't wait to see you here again with new work :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad I get to read the rest of your review and that I was able to surprise you in the chapter! Thank you for taking the time to tweet me and leave me a review for the chapter. You don't know how much that means to me.

The reason why I like Tom on the bottom is because I looove seeing Tom shy *-* and giving up control. There is something hot about it and I'm glad you liked it too! I didn't plan on Bill's father coming into the chapter until I started writing it and everything just clicked together. I was literally only going to have Tom propose, but then Bill's father happened too. So funny how that happens.

I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and the story! I like a little bit of drama mixed in with the love and sex, I can't lie. I'm happy to deliver everything you like! Thank you again and I hope you like whatever I write next. :) :*

Reviewer: zuzana899 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/13 02:40 pm Title: Epilogue

thanks god I can go "back" in my internet window, here it is, full review again, hope it will be there:

Hi sweetie :)

First, I would like to thank you for this beautiful perfect story. I loved reading it, and I am sure I will reread it again soon :)

Somehow I feel this was the best chapter. Maybe it's because it is the last chapter and I am full of sentiment and really don't want to say goodbye to the boys, they became part of my life, also Gustav and Georg and Larry (I love that little animal. And when I imagine that he has his own "office" .....haha sweet lord, I am bowing to you :D) Little Larry - The Diva

Author's Response: It really is a good thing that you could go back so you didn't have to type the review again!! I don't mind seeing the first part of the review again because it is so lovely. *-*

Reviewer: zuzana899 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/13 02:36 pm Title: Epilogue

Hi sweetie :)

First, I would like to thank you for this beautiful perfect story. I loved reading it, and I am sure I will reread it again soon :)

Somehow I feel this was the best chapter. Maybe it's because it is the last chapter and I am full of sentiment and really don't want to say goodbye to the boys, they became part of my life, also Gustav and Georg and Larry (I love that little animal. And when I imagine that he has his own "office" .....haha sweet lord, I am bowing to you :D) Little Larry - The Diva

Author's Response: I saw your drama with posting a review and you were soooo cute! I'm gonna respond to each one because I love you and I loved your accidental spam. xD I'm so happy you loved reading this and want to read it again! It means a lot that you thought this was the best chapter because I think it was the hardest to write. I'm going to miss writing about these boys every week and I'm glad I won't be the only one missing them. :( Larry is a total diva that was meant to be a star!

Reviewer: Skebe-Neko Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/13 08:22 am Title: Epilogue

Yyyhyyy i am almost crying right now :') this was so great and i am happy that every one got their happy ending

Reviewer: nathalicious Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/13 07:16 pm Title: Epilogue

Ok, here I am!!! I hope everything makes sense because it's pretty late here ;_;

I think I've said several times that I'm probably going to bawl my eyes out. And even yesterday, right before reading, I felt this huge wave of sadness rush over me and just ugh but then I finally started and omg it wasn't really possible to cry while reading about Larry having his own office! That was absolutely priceless and I was pretty sure I won't shed a tear :D (Not that I'm happy it's over ;_;)

I had this big smile on my face not only because of Georg and Larry, but also because of married Gustav going on food tours, Bushido working at McDonald's, Tom buying a house aaaaaaaaaaaand of course sexy times but then Bill's dad showed up and oh my, you won't believe it but at first I thought it was Tom's! Idk, I just thought he didn't die and it must've been a mistake or smth planned but then he said something about the mother and OH! Well, I think Tom's idea was good nonetheless. People obviously do change (Bushido, for example! :D) and if they really want to it's good to give them a chance, especially when they're your parents, right? And well, Bill will definitely need them more than ever now because tHEY'RE GETTING MARRIED OHHHHHHHH *flutterclaps all around* They are like the most amazing couple ever ok, I just can't handle it anymore ;_; The mix of a badass and a sofite aka Tom is absolutely perfect, I think I've mentioned it already, lol. Speaking of the devil, I saw this tweet some time ago, that made me instantly think of Bill & Tom "I think every girl is a sucker for an asshole that is only sweet to her." Isn't it right, though? :D

Ok, I have something to confess. I wasn't even going to read Rough in the first place, you know? I'm not really fond of the drug use and violence warnings (but I end up loving them anyway, lol). I don't remember how did I end up HERE but I'm glad I did. SO FUCKING GLAD because this is one hell of a fabulous and perfect story! I loved every single chapter! One more, one less, but still loved it, loved it to pieces!

I can't wait for your new stories or one shots or whatever, just don't disappear, ok? Get well soon and see you around :) *sends lots of hugs and kisses*

Author's Response: First of all, this all made perfect sense! Second of all, you're awesome and I love you. ._.

I'm glad you were able to stay strong because of Larry! That's what he's there for, to put a smile on your face. :)well, Gustav and Georg are there for that too and okay, allll the other characters, haha. You just deserve to smile a lot!! People definitely do change and Bill and Tom have both seen it happen, so I think Bill was thankful for what Tom did for him. I'm just so happy that you think they are the most amazing couple. ._. They are getting marriiiieeeeed! I totally have to agree with that tweet, too. Every girl loves a badass who is only sweet with her. *long dreamy sigh*

I am SO happy that you decided to give Rough a chance. I don't blame you for being scared off by the warnings but I just had to include them ._. Really, thank you for reading and for always leaving me reviews that made me smile soooo big! I hope you'll enjoy whatever I read next. Thanks again. <3 Muahh. :*

Reviewer: shitpisscatfuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/13 10:57 am Title: Epilogue

So sad to see this one end :( But it had a lovely ending indeed. I was expecting them to get married, buy a house, the whole nine yards, but I didn't expect Bill to reunite with his parents (at least potentially). And Gustav settling down! I definitely didn't see that one coming, but I'm glad he'll still always have a shelf of food in Bill's fridge waiting for him. I'm definitely gonna miss ol' Larry the most - you have to give him his own story or special feature or something. The guy's a classic! And ok, let's just put it out there cause we're all thinking it: he's just a great guy. Really good friend, never hurt anyone, just there to stare deep into your soul until you feel entirely uncomfortable with your existence. I definitely encourage the idea of one-shots, whether they're pertaining to Rough or any of your other stories. I need your genius writing in my life

Author's Response: First of all, it was sooooo great talking with you last night! I missed you. And I always love seeing and reading your reviews. I'm happy that you liked the ending and that a bit of it surprised you. Gustav found his food soulmate and he just had to hold onto her! It is good that he'll always have his food shelf at Bill and Tom's. xD I would love to write a story just for Larry.. Maybe a one shot through the eyes of Larry in which he makes many people feel uncomfortable with his penetrative staring. :D Thanks again so much and I will definitely let you know when I plan on writing something new! <3