Yay! A new story!! I like! I really, really like! It's definitely different than your other one's but I can tell already that it's going to be just as amazing! =]

I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: You don't even know how big I smiled when I saw this review. I'm so happy that you're reading this! It's for sure different but I'm really so pleased that you gave it a chance and are liking it so far! Thank you so much for your sweet review and I really hope that you enjoy the next chapter. :D

Momo... Best so far. I cannot even begin to explain how this makes me feel. My ovaries have just exploded about a million times. I love this. This review is a tad late, sorry, I was going to reply when I woke up but then my brother was in a car accident and since then it's just been kinda hectic, but I reread this and now I feel better because this story is just magical, and it's only chapter 1. I'm truly kind of excited to see what's going to happen, because this is a much differently styled story than I'm used to from you but I can already tell that it will be written fantastically, as always because well... You're fantastic ;D
I love your characters in this, Tom being all mysterious and all, and Bill being so... I dunno, just seems like he's pure? Does that word work? Probably not. See, this is why I leave the writing to you!
Honestly, you could probably make a ton of money is you wrote books. Not gonna lie. Yes, I'm giving you ideas. You need to make that ton of money, because you promised to be my sugar momma. So. Write. Lots. And lots.
BACK ON TOPIC.
So far, this story has got me hooked. Line and fucking sinker. I am freakishly excited about reading more and more of it. Almost as excited about this story, as I am about my new hot neighbour. And that's pretty fucking exciting. But... This Tom. Mysterious and Mafia-like and deep and brooding. It's like, the hottest thing ever (aside from us in bed together, love ;D) and I am so fucking psyched. ALSO, that last line, when you said Bill dreamed of Bruised Perfection... gflkwRTtrhlkerun that was just gorgeous. Such an amazing way to describe... anything. So. You're a genius. I bow down to you (and smile like a donut ;D)

Author's Response: Baby guuuuuurl!!! Do you have any idea what your reviews do to me? I'm sitting here, so so sick with some kind of bronchitis shit, and yet I'm still smiling so big and feeling so happy. The way you compliment me and the characters I write; there's no comparison. I'm so happy that you are excited to see where this is going! It's always so great to hear that a first chapter hooks someone in. Especially when that someone is YOU. This is definitely a lot different than what I've written before, but I'm so happy that you're giving it a chance. We're gonna get deep with this one...just how I like it! *overtly obvious wink* Awww shucks. You think I should write books? HOW DO YOU MAKE ME LOVE YOU SO MUCH. That would be amazing but I just don't know if I have that kind of talent, girl. You're so sweet to say so. I'll make sure to find a way to pay the bills and buy you pretty things though. I promise! Yesssssh I have you hooked! So happy happy happy. I can't wait to post the next chapter and fill you in more about the mysteries. You have a hot new neighbOUr?? You're lucky. My neighbor is pudgy and has a tiny and yappy dog named Max. Max's name is yelled in frustration about 20 times a day. Yessss brooding Tom! I've always wanted to write him. Sexy and smoldering. Obvs you and I are sexier though. :D I'm so pleased to hear that you liked that last line! You're so good to me, baby. Thank you soooooo much for reading and bringing your reviews back in my life. I get down on my knees for you. (hurr hurr). A donut smile? NO WAY THOSE ARE MY FAVORITE

Oh, I'm really intrigued by this :) I want to know what Toms' is doing, why he does it and why he can't let Bill get hurt. The whole hill billy scenario is very fascination and 'dirty' somehow *shrugs*
Bill is an academic and even still he ignores Tom's warnings in an 'I know better than you' attitude. I think he should listen to Tom when being in an environment where he's already acknowledged that he wouldn't be able to handle himself if someone decided to beat him up. So why is Bill behaving like this? *g* Great beginning. Looking forward to more, Kir :)

Author's Response: I'm so happy that you're here, Maria!! Your reviews always open my eyes and make me smile so big. I'm really glad that you're intrigued, I can't wait to let you know what Tom is up to. I like the idea of a dirty and rough Tom as well. Jagged around the edges and needing someone to smooth him over. I think you're totally right, Bill should definitely listen to Tom. Hopefully I'll be able to answer some of your questions in the next chapter! I'm so pleased that you liked the beginning and are looking forward to more. :D Thank you so much! <3

*sets up Larry surveillance cams.

This sounds intriguing. Tom's got secrets and Bill's gonna probe (no pun intended )
Gonna be reading as usual.

Author's Response: You know I'm not going to disappoint you, girl. Larry and I, we've got your back. ;) I'm really glad that you're intrigued! Bill is totally going to probe Tom (pun entirely intended). Pleased as punch that you're reading, as usual. :D

Hmmm interesting, very interesting ;) I am highly intrigued. I definitely think you should continue, but you could probably write a story about the twins making a sandwich and I'd ask for more haha

Author's Response: I am so pleased that I have snagged your intrigue! I will most certainly keep it going if you want me to. ;) Hahaha omg, you just made my night. I feel like I want to write a drabble about the twins making a sandwich, just for you! Seriously you're aws. Thank you so much! <3

*waves excitedly* yay you're writing again :) I like where this story is going already because Tom is how I always imagine him & Bill sounds like me (a Psych major who doesn't want to be social with other people in the field and is afraid of the dark and ends up having night time car problems) Btw: your stories have been (in order) funny, then the next one was cute so this one kinda had to be serious (or horror but really? You should wait for Halloween for that ;) ) anyways the point is I missed you & this has been good so keep it up! Lots of love!

Author's Response: *grins and bounces* I am indeed writing again! I've missed it so much. Mainly I've missed you all, though. :D I'm so happy that you like where this is going. I've always wanted to write a bad ass and tough Tom. And OMG you're a psych major too? That's awesome! What's your area of focus? Mine is counseling psychology :D I figured if I'm going to write this story during the school year, I might as well use some of the things I'm learning in it! Yessss, I keep trying to come out with something different each time! I don't know how well I'd do at horror...BUT there is a Work Out Halloween one shot that I will be posting this month! Thank you so much for reading and I really missed you too! I'll definitely keep it up. ;) Love love love~

Hey howdy girl It's been awhile and a new story again BTW i still haven't finish your story Precacious Serendipity, I had been busy for a while, I'm dying to finish it today and will leave you a review again....:D...about this new one I'll read it later after PS.....XOXOXOXO....LOL

Author's Response: Well hello you!! :D I'm so happy to see you here. Don't even worry about rushing to finish PS. You take your time, love! I'm just happy that you're reading it at all. :D I'm thrilled that you are going to give this story a chance, too! Thank you so much for taking the time to leave me this sweet review! *hugs and loves*

What a great beginning! You totally pulled me in -- I can't wait to find out more about the mysterious Striker, I mean, Tom. And Bill as a psychology major will be very, very interesting. I KNOW this is going to be great, especially because it's from YOU!

Author's Response: Listen, if I had known that I would be reeling in a zeph with this story, I would have worn my Sunday best! Hehe. I'm so happy that you're reading, truly. I can't wait to tell you more about the elusive Tom. And yes! I get to expound upon my own knowledge of Psychology! Maybe it'll even help me in my classes, haha. Awww shucks. I really hope it lives up to your expectations. :D Thank you sooo very much! <3

I'VE MISSED YOU!!!!! So glad you're back in my life again! Lol. Anyway, as always, amazing chapter. You always know how to draw me in and never let go. Seriously, I cannot wait for more, so hurry up!!! Ha ha, love it. :) :) :)

Author's Response: I'VE MISSED YOU SOOOO!!!! I can't even begin to tell you how mutual the feeling is, girl. Your reviews (and you) light up my life! I'm so happy that you were drawn in by the chapter. I'm just really lucky that I somehow manage to keep you interested. :D I can't wait to post more! I'm thinking the next chapter will probably be up on Saturday. Thank you so much for reading and sharing this sweetness with me! <3

This is going straight to my favs and I haven't even read the chapter yet! I'm just super excited to see a new fic from youuuuu! I love following your stories so much =D Just by the banner, it seems pretty different from what I'm used to read from you and that's even more exciting in a way! I can't wait to read this other side of your writing =P Okay I'm gonna read it now, brb!

GAhhh! THis is so good already! Seriously, it's amazing how you can set the tone and universe with just a few paragraphes! I wasn't even in the middle of the chapter and I was already addicted to the fic and holding my breath for what would happen next! It's interesting, original and just fucking amazing like everything you write =))) Brilliant start, I can't wait to see where you're gonna take this!

Author's Response: This is quite possibly one of the most amazing reviews ever. I mean, damn girl. I am soooo happy that you read and enjoy my stories. Your reviews are always so lovely and attentive. I really appreciate you, k? I'm so happy that i have you addicted already! I really hope that you continue to enjoy it and that it keeps you on your toes. I really can't wait to post the next chapter. I'm like, trying to respond coherently to your amazing compliments, lol. I'm pretty sure I'm failing at it. But just...thank you so much! The things you said mean so much to me~ <3