Date: 10/23/11 04:30 pm Title: Chapter Three
*snorts* bill's nana is a stoner! at least according to gustav's description. and i'm picturing larry sitting on geo's shoulder while he works. so good to see larry again! and hell yeah tom's going to win, cuz you wouldn't dare let him get his ass kicked, now would you? *glares*
Author's Response: Gustav has a very broad generalization of stoners, lol. Dude! I could picture Larry on his shoulder so clearly. I had to put it in! It really is good to see that little guy. Hmm. I think it's more like, I wouldn't dare do anything to anger elvisfan. :D We shall seeee! Thanks so much for reading and for following me on twitter! It'll be way easier for me to stalk you now. :D
Date: 10/22/11 07:18 pm Title: Chapter One
lmao silly I love you
Date: 10/22/11 10:55 am Title: Chapter Two
OMG I was so worried that Tom wouldn't intervene between Gordon and Bill. I'm so relieved that he did and helped Bill on his way. I am desperate to know what manner of mischief Tom is into, I have a couple of ideas but I'm probably way of the mark. Love this honey and can't wait for more *snuggles*
Author's Response: I hated writing that scene because I didn't want you all to worry. But I had to show Gordon's true nature so you could see the kind of life Tom grew up in : / I'm so happy that you're intrigued for more! I bet your ideas are closer than you think ;) I'm updating tomorrow so you shouldn't have to wait long for some answers! I'm so thrilled that you love this. Thank you so so much! /loves and squeezes
Date: 10/22/11 06:48 am Title: Chapter Two
.-. Why the hell must you torture me like this D:! You have to update soon or I'll just I unno DIE! That or Larry will come after me, or those unicorns for the bottle of cuteness. I dun want that to happen. So yes. please, update soon. ._.
Author's Response: I'm updating tomorrow! So you won't have to wait long at alllll. :D Larry has been pretty chill lately, so he probs won't come after you. But the unicorns on the other hand...hehe. No no, I shall keep you safe! I cannot promise the same for the characters in the story : / I hope I'll get to talk to here tomorrow! Thank you so much for reading. <3
Date: 10/22/11 06:35 am Title: Chapter One
.-. It should be a crime for being such an amazing author, but I guess it's a good thing it isn't or I'd be stuck at the jail cell bugging you all the time ._.
.-. But really, I love this already! It's so different from your other ones, but I know it'll be just as freaking amazing! ._.
Author's Response: You know what should be a crime? Having such amazing readers like you! But true, good thing it isn't. If I were locked up then I wouldn't get to write for you and talk to you. :D I'm so glad that you like this already. I'm thrilled that you're reading! And yes, it's gonna be very different. But I'm so happy that you're giving it a chance, girl. Thank youuuuu! :D
Date: 10/20/11 07:19 pm Title: Chapter Two
You are really writing this intentionally top get us all hooked, right? :)
Stupid Gordon. I indeed hoipe we won't be seeing him again. I love the easyness of the fialogue and interaction between Bill and Tom that you manage to write. And I must be as equally fascinated by Tom than Bill is. Definitely waiting for more revealings.
Author's Response: It's not intentional but I can't lie and say that I wasn't hoping for that. :D I really hated writing Gordon, but he was necessary to show how Tom grew up and partially why he is the way he is. But yes, hopefully he's gone for good! I'm so glad that that you like the flow of Tom and Bill's characters. I hope that as the story progresses, their 'relationship' will become more and more fluid. I am delighted that you are fascinated about Tom! I can't wait to post the next chapter for you to read. I believe it will be up on Sunday. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing again! I really enjoy your thoughts a lot. :)
Date: 10/19/11 04:54 am Title: Chapter Two
why are u such an amazing writer?? i fucking love you!
Author's Response: I'm sooo glad that you're enjoying! Thank you so much for the sweet compliment. :D I looove you too!
Date: 10/18/11 11:41 pm Title: Chapter Two
I've never heard of a person chewing gum immediately upon waking. ....EW Old man/Bill. EW.
I quite like Bill's random psychological analyses. It's kinda like in Work Out when you'd tell these random side stories. Bill's random analyzations. It's like on a tv show. And now, time for.... *drum roll* Bill's random analyzations! *applause*
I liked how Tom and Bill got a little bit better along... though not friends yet, for sure. It was nice of Tom to save Bill. I love your adjectives. And I like the way you write tough guy Tom. I want to feel him. I feel like (lol) he would feel very interesting. Rough, braided, ribbed, ripped, oily, smooth, calloused, bruised, soft... Mebbe you could have Bill travel on a tactile journey around Tom's body in a future chapter. Yes yes?
The koalas have delivered thee, Kiwi. I'm glad you did well. Girl! Don't forget about your tests, you silly!
Author's Response: I've only done it when a toothbrush wasn't readily available. Like if I unexpectedly spent the night at a friend's or something. Or was on a plane all night long! That sort of thing. :D AND YES, EW. It just...had to happen though, k? It was the push that Tom and Bill needed to make a little bit more of a substantial connection. Hehe, I'm really glad you like them! They kind of just flow out and I just leave 'em there. Thank goodness you approve! Applause? For meeee? You're too good to me, bee! They definitely aren't friends yet...but they took a step, for sure. You're so sweet to love my adjectives. Have I gotten better about my commas? I feel like I have! :D You've helped me growwww. Dude, I'd love to feel up on tough guy Tom too. Shoooot. And girl, you KNOW that journey is going to happen for them at some point. Tom's just begging to be touched. So, YES. Hehe, I shan't forget about a test again! It's my only online class and I honestly thought the test was on Thursday! I'm just...out of sorts today, clearly. Haha. Thank you so much for reading, reviewing, and being YOU! <3
Date: 10/18/11 10:57 pm Title: Chapter Two
/presses fic to forehead
I foresee that Georg will be...
AN ALPACA
Author's Response: IT TAKES AN ALPACA TO KNOW ONE. But srs, you're liek amazing and stuff. <3 Thank you for everything. But mostly, for your beune~
Date: 10/18/11 10:01 pm Title: Chapter One
Geaorg... HE IS FLAMMINGLY GAY, JA? JA? I hope so :3 ANYPOODLE. Gordon, you nasty creep, stop acting like me and being serious about it! NOT COOL. And, LO AND BEHOLD, TOM SMILES? I love how you write this Tomi :3 He's joking around one minutes, then ready to have insane angry sex the next. It is truly beautiful! I am so excited to read more. Can't stay long to write this review but... I love you. So much
Author's Response: Wellll hellllooooo!!!! Actually, I THOUGHT about making him so...but alas, that is not his schtick! I'm looking forward to unveiling his true nature to youuuu. Gordon IS nasty. Good thing Tom put that creep in his place. I'm glad you like this Tom! That makes my heart so very happy, truly! Angry sex, you say? PERHAPS IN THE FUTURE YES. I'm so thrilled that you're excited for more. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. I love you tooooo! <3
Date: 10/18/11 07:47 pm Title: Chapter Two
Ewww Gordon! That's nasty. I think I literally shuddered when I read him coming onto Bill like that. Well done! And Tom...man, you can't be all intriguing like that and expect a boy not to be intrigued! (or a reader, ofc!) ;)
Author's Response: Ugh, it was really difficult for me to write that. I hate putting anyone in that situation. But, I definitely had to show the kind of life that Tom has grown up in. And unfortunately Bill got a little taste of it. :( I'm sorry it made you shudder! But thank you so much for the compliments on it. :D And I knowww, right? Come on Tom, get real. Stop hiding and let some people in! Hehe. Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me! :)
Date: 10/18/11 07:26 pm Title: Chapter One
And I'm so delighted to have such wonderful stories to read by such an amazing writer! =D
Author's Response: Well there you go, making me smile and smiiiiile. :D <3
Date: 10/18/11 04:04 pm Title: Chapter Two
Gordon is the bad guy with all the political incorrect characteristics... I think that's brave. It's always poor Jörg who's the bad guy :) A what a disgusting behaviour which makes me sad thinking abut what Tom must have endured growing up. Thank god he can handle himself now and that Gordon can't hurt him any more.
There is such a delicious attraction between Tom and Bill already. Tom has created an opinion about Bill by now. He's trying to look after him, and that's romantic even though it's based on danger ;) Can't wait for more! :) *tickles and kisses*
Author's Response: It really is always Jorg who ends up as the bad guy, isn't it? That's exactly why I decided to put Gordon in that role. He really is a creep :( I had a hard time writing him, but it was necessary so that you could see that Tom's had a hard upbringing. I'm really glad Tom is strong enough to handle himself now too. :D YES there is definitely some tension between the guys, hehe. I'm so excited to let you guys see their "relationship" progress. Hehe, you're so sweet and cute! Thank you so much for reading, Maria! I really hope you continue to enjoy. :D *hugs and loves*
Date: 10/18/11 03:21 pm Title: Chapter Two
This is so different from your other work. It has a dark feel to it and that makes it all the more intriguing.
Gordon is a real creep and I'm so glad that Tom managed to show up in the nick of time. I'm also glad that Tom knocked him out. Imagine the life Tom must have led having that man for a father. It disgusts me the pain he probably caused Tom. I'm glad he won't be in the story anymore.
I have an idea of what Tom is doing and why he doesn't want Bill to know. For now I'll keep it to myself in case I'm wrong. That would be embarrassing! :) At least I'll find out if I'm right or wrong in the next chapter.
I wonder where they will meet again. I know it will probably be a tough road to get them together and can hardly wait to see what happens.
Love this and will be highly anticipating the next chapter. Much love. :)
Author's Response: It really IS different! That's why I'm so grateful that people are giving it a chance. :D I'm so happy that you're intrigued and anticipating more! I agree, Gordon is such a creeeep. I really didn't like writing him. But I'm glad that Tom showed up in time and was strong enough to protect Bill. I know :( Tom has not had a happy upbringing. He definitely needs comfort in his life! Maybe Bill can provide somehow? ;) Aww you can always share your ideas with me! But you will definitely get an idea of it in the next chapter. I'm so happy to have you reading! Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me. Love, love, love, :D
Date: 10/18/11 12:50 pm Title: Chapter Two
Re: Serendipity, the epilogue was unnecessary, I told you that before, but it doesn't diminish the story so that's good.
Re: Rough, oooooh chills and shivers.
Author's Response: Re: Re: Serendipity, I know...to be honest, it felt unnecessary when I was writing it. But people wanted it so I did it. But it means a lot that you think it doesn't diminish. I was really hoping it wouldn't! That's why I kept it nice and short. :D Re: Re: Rough, Oooooh girl, that makes me delighted. I'm glad it made you feel that way! I can't wait to post the next chapter. Thank you so much for reading and for your thoughts!
Date: 10/18/11 12:40 pm Title: Chapter One
tease!
Author's Response: Hehe, that's me. :D
Date: 10/18/11 10:10 am Title: Chapter Two
aaaaaaaa!!! Love the story!
Author's Response: You just made me smile sooooo big! Thank you so much! I hope you continue to enjoy it :D
Date: 10/18/11 09:45 am Title: Chapter Two
Even though this is only the second chapter, I am in love with this story already. You are a fantastic writer, my dear!
It's a nice change to see Gordon as the skeezy father rather than Jorg. I have found in a lot of the stories I have read, Jorg is always the bad guy. I like that you changed it up a bit and used Gordon instead =]
I am very curious (just like Bill) about Tom and how he is under that rough exterior. I am so excited to see what happens next! =]
Author's Response: Can I just tell you how happy that makes me? I am so delighted to have you as a reader! I know that this is a lot different from my other stories that you've read. You are sooo sweet! Thank you for the compliment on my writing. :D And yes! I've noticed that people always make Jorg the bad guy, too! That really is exactly why I chose Gordon to be the bad one, this time around. I'm so glad that you're curious and excited! I really hope that you enjoy the next chapter. Thank you so much for reading and for this lovely review!
Date: 10/18/11 06:28 am Title: Chapter Two
Woah, I love this. I love your characterization of Bill and Tom. And Gordon, even if he's a creep, he seemed sort of real to me.
I have the same "quirk" as Bill when it comes to sleeping with other people there xD I cant sleep in the living room, in the car, on planes, etc xD No idea why, just can't.
Will be tracking this and hoping to see an update soon :D
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you like how I'm portraying Bill and Tom in this! To be honest, that is a huge compliment because I really enjoy your writing! Gordon was definitely a challenging and unpleasant character for me to write, but I tried to make him as real as I could, even for the brevity of his appearance. Thank you for appreciating his role! Ohhhh my gosh, yes! That's exactly why I wrote Bill that way, because I can't sleep with other people possibly watching either! It's nice to know there are more of us out there, haha. Thank you so much for reading and I really am so excited and happy that you're tracking. I hope you enjoy the next chapter! :D
Date: 10/18/11 05:59 am Title: Chapter Two
Wooaaah a serious one from you, thisll be exciting!! :D -huggles and loves on you- Loved the chapter! Cant wait for more
Author's Response: I knoowwww! Crazy, huh? I'm trying to push myself so that I don't get stuck in the funny/fluffy genre. Not that I'm gonna stop writing that! I'm actually posting a Halloween Work Out one shot soooon :D I'm so glad you're excited about this! I am as well. :D Thank you so much for reading and I'm happy that you loved it. *hugs and loves and more hugs and loves*