Date: 10/23/11 11:11 pm Title: Chapter Three
I NEED THIS IN MY LIFE.
Like literally I just ate a bowl of chili and read this and I am just... so happy, and content, I will sleep for a thousand years tonight. I love you, and you know it, so stop asking, jfc
I am so excited for the fight next chapter!!! YOU KNOW THIS TOO. I am just so endlessly thrilled that you took on something like this, which is right up my alley. <3 Violence and humor and Larry. LARRY LARRY LARRY LARRY LARRY LARRY LARRY
So seriously though. I love this so damned much. Thank you <3
Author's Response: IT'S YOURS, TAKE IT. AND ALSO MY HEART.rnrnrnOh wait, you already have that~ Oh gosh, you ate Chili throughout this? No wonder you loved the chapter so much. Chili skews the alpacavision and makes you think things are better than they are. I thought you'd read about that at iamalpaca.tumblr.com. GEEZE. But I really do hope you have a lovely night's sleep. You just really deserve it, k? And I'll stop asking ;) Or at least I'll try!rnrnrnI am soooo excited for you to read about the fight! Your opinion is so integral to my brain. And my beune! I'm really happy that I went for this too. And your support is more uplifting than a 1,000 camel caravan. Violence and humor and Larry, OH MY GAWSH RADGER.rnrnrnOkay but for real, you're the best. I'm so happy that you love this. Truly! Thank YOU! Many regards and beunes. <3
Date: 10/23/11 10:56 pm Title: Chapter Three
I'm loving it hun!
Can't wait for the fight.
Author's Response: That means so much to me that you do! I can't wait to post the next chapter so you can read about it. Thank you so much for finding your way here, lovely! :D
Date: 10/23/11 10:46 pm Title: Chapter Three
Firstly: GAH! SHIT! Tom's gonna loooose!
Secondly, I was so happy to see an update from this after a longish day out of the house, smashed in the backseat with my siblings.
I liked Gustav and Bill's banter in the beginning :3 And woah, Bill's been buffing up taking self-defense!
Lol, having to yell so the person right next to you can hear you. Been there, of course XD
Rawr, prepared!Georg with the eye drops. Not that I endorse the taking of drugs in any way.
Drug dealing to support a lizard. That's... interesting XDD
I love how dinosaur fossils and pie somehow ended up related XD
Again, there's no way Tom's gonna win XD I can't even believe this. If Bill (or I, in his position) had less sense, I could see him trying futilely to, Idk, stop him from fighting :P Eh, but that won't work.
Let's hope Tom doesn't see Bill, get distracted, and get pummeled into the ground.
Author's Response: Tom...he certainly has QUITE the challenge in that big oaf. But, perhaps he has more experience than we know? Or maybe he's just gonna get pummeled. : / Can't wait to reveal! I'm so glad that I could make you happy after a long day. It's never fun to be out all day and smothered. Yay for banter! It's one of my favorite things to write, to be honest. I couldn't have Bill just stand by and let something go down like what happened with Gordon and not do something preventative! No more weakling Bill :D YES, I've been there too. And then the music cuts off right as you're yelling, lol. Georg is totally prepared. I don't endorse it either! But I mean, if you're gonna do it...it's good to be prepared, haha. It is certainly a different reason to deal drugs than the norm. :D I don't even know how dinos and pie ended up in here! I blame the part of my brain that was responsible for Work Out! Hmmm. You have really good points. I wanna tell you all of my secrets! But...it shall be revealed in the next chapter. I really hope I get to talk to you after it. I hope that too, girl. I hope that too. Thank you so much for reading and for this amazing review!
Date: 10/23/11 10:46 pm Title: Chapter Three
Larry. And Georg. And just...this! I mean, really, K. This is amazin. Almost made me forget how bad I'm hurtin. :/ But I lol'd...Stoner!Georg. I love it. "I like pie."
Author's Response: Eeeeeeeek! You know I'm thrilled that you think so. Your opinion means so much to me! Awww. I'm glad I could almost reprieve you from your pains. I'm glad you got a laugh out of Georg the stoner! I just feel like it suits him. And LARRY. :D Hehe. Listen, Georg just really likes pie. We can't question these things. I love YOU.
Date: 10/23/11 10:13 pm Title: Chapter Three
Oh Gustav so adorible and weird. And Georg oh my God I can not stop laughing over him being a stoner. It's awesome! I like Bill as a person who cassually smokes to. Fit's his charecter here. Dear God Tom fighting is friggin hot. Even though he can get beat to shit it's still soooo hot. I hope Tom wins and I hope that maybe they see eachother. This story is so good already. But then again it's you whos writting it. :D
Author's Response: Oh, hello again! :D You're so sweet to review both chapters. I love your reviews. Gustav is a weird little guy. Glad you like him! :D And Georg, haha. I just thought being a stoner suited him! I'm so happy he makes you laugh haha. YES. I'm pleased that you said that about Bill's character because I think it fits him too! For some reason, it really IS hot to picture Tom fighting. Mmmhmm. There is the chance that he'll lose but...he's a strong one. You never know! I can't wait for you to find out. I can give you a hint that they are probably most likely gonna see each other. ;) Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me! I'm delighted that you like this story already. And thank you for that compliment :) <3
Date: 10/23/11 10:01 pm Title: Chapter One
*runs over, panting*
Finally.... got.... here....
*gasps*
*falls on the floor breathing heavy*
*thumbs up*
Author's Response: *jumps, squeals, dances* YOU'RE HERE!!! I'm so happppyyyyy. :D Thanks for taking the time for me, love. I hope you enjoyyyy!
Date: 10/23/11 09:45 pm Title: Chapter Two
Ugh THF never sent me the update email on this story so I found out I'm two chapters late today. Anywhoooo...
Ooooo I don't like Gordon. Nope not at all. Rude drunky person. Poor Tom having to deal with all his shit. And poor Bill for being touched by him icky. Is it weird that I am kinda maybe a lot in love with this kind of Tom? I love how he's all tough but he has that moment of being gentle. I can't wait to see how you will make Georg out to be. I'm gonna go read that chapter now. :D
Author's Response: Oh nooooo! I'll make sure to let you know on twitter each time I post, in case that happens again. I'm so glad you're here now! I don't like Gordon either. But yeah, I needed to put him in here so you could see what Tom had to grow up with :( And it explains why he is the way he is, a little bit at least. It's not weird at all! I'm really glad that you're loving this Tom. The tough and gentle combination gets to me toooo. Thank you so much for reading, darling! I realllly hope you liked the next chapter. :D
Date: 10/23/11 08:52 pm Title: Chapter Three
Omg this chapter made me laugh so hard! Georg as a stoner is PERFECT & sneaking Larry in was a stroke of genius :) also this Tom would be in a street fight! I hope he doesn't get hurt too badly, street fights can be deadly :(
I heart you!!
Marissa :)
Author's Response: You should just know that I'm smiling sooo right now because of your review. I'm so happy it made you laugh! Glad you think Georg fits as a stoner :D He's just so chill in real life that it seemed perfect to me too. LARRY! I couldn't leave Larry out, haha. You're so sweet to me. Yep, you know what Tom is up to now! Street fights can be very serious for sure. But Tom has a lot of experience...so hopefully he can hold his own against that big guy. I can't wait for you to find out! Thank you so much for reading, Marissa! Love, love, love. ^_^
Date: 10/23/11 07:28 pm Title: Chapter Three
Larry must have a very good agent, getting him in all these fics.
Stoner!Georg...wow...it does seem to suit him though.
I'm glad Bill took his experience so seriously and got himself some self defense classes.
I am officially worried about Tom fighting that big galoot. BUt...I think he can win. I believe in him.
Wonderful chapter. I can't wit to see more! Keep up the spiffy work!
Author's Response: Listen, he really must. I mean, he gets around! First he's living outside Tom's front door, then he's an evil ruler of a world, and now he's chillin' on Geo's shoulder. :D Haha, I think being a stoner suits Georg so well because he's such a chill guy in real life. I'm glad you like him like that! And riiiiight? I didn't want to have Bill just pretend like it didn't happen and continue to be a weakling. OMG GALOOT. Such an amazing word, lol. I think with your belief in Tom...he might just win. ;) I can't wait to show you how it plays out! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed the chapter. Thank you so much for reading and I shall keep it up as long as you want it! :D
Date: 10/23/11 07:18 pm Title: Chapter Three
Stoner Georg is so funny! I wonder what made you want to write him that way. Not that I'm complaining at all.
As for the fight, I don't know. That Flesheater guy sounds pretty tough. Can't wait to find out the outcome!
Author's Response: I'm so glad he made you laugh! I think I wanted to write him like that because he's just so chill in real life, so I could always envision him as a stoner. :D Flesheater sounds quite terrifying, buuuut...Tom is a tough guy too. We shall see! I'm so happy you're excited! Thank you so much and I hope I get to talk to you on the next chapter. :D
Date: 10/23/11 07:03 pm Title: Chapter Three
I'm so excited to read what happens next *-*
Author's Response: The fact that you're excited makes ME really excited. And also smiley. :D Thank you so much! I hope you like the next one!
Date: 10/23/11 06:23 pm Title: Chapter Three
omg haha@ georg.. #@%&*(^$%#@ ohh soo that's toms secret mmm i can't wait to see what happens next! *excited*..you just made my day
Author's Response: I'm so glad Georg made you laugh! Yesss Tom's secret has been revealed. I'm so happy that you are excited for more! And girl, you just made MY day. For real, though. :D Thank you so much for reading!
Date: 10/23/11 06:17 pm Title: Chapter Three
Wow! This IS quite different from other things you've wrote. I love the way you wrote Bill interacting with his friends! p.s. don't ever get a lizard. I had one. Just don't get one. Not that they're bad, they just don't work out (lol, punny) and some of them don't do neat things like sit on shoulders.
Anyhoo. I will be sticking around for more for two reasons!!! One is because it's an interesting and unique story, and two? Because it's you~ Don't let anyone get too beat up because head injuries are frightful things. I heard once that bare-knuckle boxing is better than boxing with gloves, though, because the gloves add hundreds more pounds of force to the blow.
Author's Response: Well, look who it is! My favorite bee! I know, I was not frontin' when I said it was gonna be quite a stretch from my other things. :D I'm glad you liked the interaction! I wanted to convey that Bill's life is pretty normal, away from Tom. P.S. Don't ever worry about that. I'd be the last kiwi to get a lizard! The boy I nanny wanted to get one and I talked him into a turtle instead. Wassssup. Hehe, you're so punny AND you make honey. Could it get any better? I'm so glad that you aren't sticking around solely for the second reason, even though I love that reason. I'm happy that I can actually produce something fresh for you! I won't let anyone get tooo beat up, I promise! Things will get a little messy sometimes, but they will resolve! Ohhhh. Hmm. That makes sense! Although, I feel like the bones and fingers would cause more abrasions than the gloves. Ugh, just thinking about getting punch in the head with a boxing glove gives me a headache! Eeesh. Thank you so much for reading and for this review, lovely as always! :D
Date: 10/23/11 05:58 pm Title: Chapter Three
It is what I was thinking it is! Oh yeah, I'm sticking around. I don't wanna miss this. :D
Author's Response: I knew that you would be correct in your assumptions! Being that you're so clever and amazing and all. :D I'm thrilled that you're sticking around. So much more story left to share! Thank you so much for reading!
Date: 10/23/11 05:54 pm Title: Chapter Three
Larry is like Ron Jeremy. Frightening, famous, disgusting and has the ability to show up anywhere at anytime.
Author's Response: Well. I guess I should go ahead and let you know that his is quite possibly the best review I have ever received. It made me laugh heartily. I do hope I'll be lucky enough for you to grace me with your wit and amazing on the next chapter. Larry is SUCH a porn star. :D
Date: 10/23/11 05:07 pm Title: Chapter Three
Fight Cluuuuuub!! Hahaha. Oh, man! I knew it!
Ugh! Gordon's a disgusting jerk. Tom saves the day! Like the knight in shining armor saving a dandy in distress. *sighs dreamily*
I'm loving this. Can't wait to read more! XD
Author's Response: Helll yeah! You're a good guesser :D Eww, Gordon really IS so vile. Omg, lol yes, Bill is such a dandy in need of saving! Thank goodness Tom just happened to put on his shining armor the night before. I mean, I'm sure it's uncomfortable to sleep in but hey! He needed it. *sighs far too long with you, clears throat* Hi, I'm so glad that you're loving this! This was an awesome review. Thank you so much for reading and I hope I get to talk to you on the next chapter! :D
Date: 10/23/11 04:56 pm Title: Chapter Three
*flails around in happiness* OMG. Firstly; LARRY. FREAKIN' LARRY THE LIZARD, MAN. Is he just gonna find a way into all of your stories or...? And LOL at stoner Georg. I cracked up at the Will Smith thing xD All the random, like, dino bones? what even? This is why I love you. And ZOMG, TOM. The connection brings them together once again. Dundunduunnn. I'm excited for the next chapter but I don't want Tomi to get hurt :( His face is too purdy to get bruised! *strokes picture of Tom's face* Uhh...yup. Can't wait for the next update! *bounces up and down* You know I'll be here camping out until it comes :3 I LOVE YOU, YOU AWESOME PERSON *huggles you to the death* Oops. *edges away slowly*
Author's Response: *flails simply from seeing your username* Oh wait, you left a review? *flails even mooooore* LARRY. I think he might just find his way into all of my stories. He seems to be a bit of a calling card, lol. But I think he's gonna be nice in this one! ....probably, at least. ;) I'm so glad that stoner Georg made you laugh! I don't even know where the dino bones and Will Smith came from. Probably from the same part of my brain that wrote Work Out, let's be honest. haha. I'm so glad you love me for my random! I love you for being so sweet and cute and adorbs. The connection has struck again! I don't want him to get hurt either, k? I'll see what I can do to keep him as safe as possible! *looks around, strokes picture as well* I'm so happy you're excited for the next chapter! As long as you're camping out, might as well join you. I have some hw to do and it will be much more pleasant with someone like YOU by my side! We can talk about Tom's purdy face if you'd like. I LOVE YOU TOO OMG. *dies* ........ *comes back to life to write more story for you* Phew, that was close! :D <3
Date: 10/23/11 04:47 pm Title: Chapter Three
Oh boy, I'm more than excited about this! I can vividly imagine Bill taking care of Tom this time, because I think gross muscled guy will kick his arse severely....
I liked the whole club scene. This chapter was very generous with the jokes. Larry is apparently behaving nicely but we know why Bill wouldn't like him! Other than that, I can barely wait for the fight and its aftermath - but I must :)
Author's Response: It's sooo good to hear you say that! Really, it is. :D That's a niiiice picture to think about. I can't wait for you to read the next chapter so you can see how it plays out! I'm glad you liked the club scene. It was fun to write Bill with his friends, and show how his life is when he's not around Tom. I just can't seem to get away from the humor genre entirely, hehe. Larry is being nice for now! Hopefully that will stick. I'm so happy that you're excited for more! Thank you so much for reading, Maria! <3
Date: 10/23/11 04:38 pm Title: Chapter Three
"Watching you attack a punching bag is like watching a giraffe try to juggle" - BEST LINE EVER. I can so see that happening.
“That's good shit, man,” - why do ppl always say that?
Sexy times. I hope Tom is like a Capoeira master!
Author's Response: Yes! That's just the most accurate description of Bill going at a punching bag. It really is. And I don't know why people always say that! But it's like, the quintessential thing to say after you smoke, I guess? Sexy hexxxxy. :D I really hope he is too! Thanks so much for reading, loooove!
Date: 10/23/11 04:37 pm Title: Chapter Three
First off, I most definitely will be sticking around for more!!
As for if I think Tom will win or not, I don't know what to think yet. I have a feeling he may lose and be pretty badly beaten and then Bill will have to help him or whatever. But then I think he could surprise everyone and come out on top. His cockiness may be his down fault though. I don't know and I can't wait to see what does in fact happen!
I absolutely love the banter between Bill and Gustav! You seriously have a way with words and are really good at writing comedy. I love that you incorporate the funny in with the serious. It makes the story all the more better =]
And Georg, what can I say about Georg LOL I honestly wasn't expecting a stoner, that's for sure. It definitely makes things more interesting lol
Lastly, I loved it! I cannot wait to read the next chapter! (and the one after that, and the one after that haha)
Author's Response: I"m so happy that you'll be sticking around for more! I really am. :D I think both of your ideas on the outcome of the fight are really great and perceptive! I'm excited for you to see how it really plays out. Awww you always make me smile SO big when you compliment my writing. YOU my dear, have a way with words. They make me smile endlessly. I'm really glad you like the funny with the serious. I just can't seem to write anything entirely serious xD Haha, I'm glad I kept you on your toes about Georg. He's just such a chill guy in real life that it just seemed to fit. And it seems like stoner!Georg would totally have a lizard for a pet, and I had to show Larry some love in this story, lol. Ok seriously, this was such an amazing review! I always love hearing from you. I'm so glad you loved it and that you'll be sticking around for so much more! I'm such a lucky girl :D