Date: 11/02/11 04:32 pm Title: Chapter Four
As my little badasses :) haha I did -sorta- see bill getting into a fight. He just seemed too into it lol I love the fight club type atmosphere by the way in any case I want more of this story ASAP! I love it!
Love,
Marissa
Author's Response: Hehe, badasses indeed! That's amazing that you saw that coming. He really was quite into the idea! I'm glad you like the fight club feel :D I'm really enjoying writing about it so I'm just lucky that you like reading it!
Yaaay, thank you for reading and loving it! I will definitely post more as soon as I can, darling!
Love, Kirsten
Date: 11/02/11 04:32 pm Title: Chapter Four
this...
cant even....
Author's Response: Girl, don't give up on me. I need you around to ensure my happiness! <3 Thank you so much for reading!
Date: 11/02/11 04:30 pm Title: Chapter Four
GJHDSYJGMEUHJDGFHYHDMJGFUVF I AM ONCE AGAIN SPEECHLESS. *takes moment to compose self* *deep breaths* Okay. The first thing I saw when I read this was BILL'S PRETTY FACE. Yes, Bill does have a pretty face. and so does Tom. Which we have discussed before xD ANYWAYS. Ohmygooooddd WHY DID YOU HAVE TO CUT IT OFF THERE?!? WHY, DAMNIT!??! This is all, like, too goood! I can just imagine Bill being a badass and fighting Bushido with Tom standing there like :O. I'd be all like 'daaayyumm, he's good' xD Yeah. But like I can't even type properly I'm just too happy and stuff :D You make me feel like unexplainably happy! I was in a crappy mood, then I saw this got updated = instant smiles! And I shall continue smiling for pretty much the rest of the evening. :D *sings randomly out of tune* Yoouuuuu aaare awesooooome! And as for my predictions: BILL SHALL BE VICTORIOUS. Because...he's just awesome. Or maybe...he could lose but then Tom will make him all better somehow? XD Lolz. And what is that you say? more Bill/Tom action? HELLS YES. *whoops* Well, I'll go now and have a little happy dance session. I loves youu *gives you lots and lots of love and candy and fluffy things* :D
Author's Response: Gaaaaah how do you always manage to make me smile SO BIG? Seriously, I need you in my pocket, kay. That way I can just pull you out whenever I want to snuggle or smile. :D
We have most certainly discussed they're purdy faces before! Hehe. They really don't need to be fighting and messing with those faces.
I'm really sorry I cut it off! I mainly did that so I could get the next chapter up faster, because this one was too long and the other one was too short, hehe. So I melded them together! I WON'T WAIT TOO LONG TO POST I PROMISE <3
I'm really glad you can picture all of that! I'd so be like that too. Tom is prolly leaning on that damn wall, being all impressed. Listen, I'm just really glad that I make you feel that way...because maybe it'll help you understand JUST HOW YOU MAKE MEEE FEEEEEL! I love your singing and your overall adorability, sweetness, awesomeness, etc~
THESE ARE VERY GOOD PREDICTIONS. :D I am pleased by them. Yessss, Bill/Tom action fo' sho! Do you mind if I join you in the dance? It sounds lovely!!
I love yous toooooo! Thank you so much for reading and sharing all things that are sweet with me, including yourself :D
Date: 10/31/11 11:53 am Title: Chapter Three
Awww Larry's back! I love Larry! Shame on Tom for street fighting though. Doesn't he know it could harm his beautiful face? Then where would he be? He doesn't kinda look the part though, especially with that bit of scruff he's been sporting lately. Stoner Georg's super hilarious. I can definitely picture it
Author's Response: Larry is indeed back! He just can't seem to stay away...or maybe I love him, too. Hehe. Seriously though Tom, why must you endanger your glorious face? Hmmph. The scruff really does make him look like more of a hoodlum though! You're totally right. I'm so glad you like Georg's character! He was really fun for me to write :D Thank you sooo much for reading! I'm really happy that you are <3
Date: 10/30/11 08:49 pm Title: Chapter Three
Oh my god. Larry the freaking Lizard!! Hooray! I love your stories..honestly. Never stop writing k?
Author's Response: Larry! He made his way in here! Listen, I am sooo glad that you love them! I really am. You're just sooo sweet. As long as you don't want to stop reading, I'll keep on writing. I promise. :D I really hope that you like the next chapter, love! Thank you!
Date: 10/29/11 02:10 pm Title: Chapter Three
Gahh! I'm so sorry I'm so late to review this chapter!
I LOOOOOOVE Georg's character! I can't remember reading a fic with this kinda of characterization for Georg so it's really cool and interesting to read! And omg, it must have been so scary for Bill to realize that the other fighter was Tom! I wasn't expecting this to be Tom's secret.... it was way better than what I imagined it would be! I can't wait to read more, I hope Tom is gonna survive at least! XD Loooove this fic so far! LOL at Larry!
Author's Response: Ohhhh you, don't ever worry about something like that! You know I don't mind :D I just get happy to see a review from you at any time! I'm so glad you love Georg like this! And that makes me really happy that you haven't read a story with him as a stoner before, haha. I'm glad it can be something new! Eeeee I surprised you with Tom's secret! That makes me really excited actually. I'm thrilled that you're ready for the next chapter! It should be up on Monday. :D Tomorrow I'm posting the Halloween Work Out oneshot! Tom will def survive. I wanna keep him around, for sure :) Thank you so much for reading! I'm so happy you're enjoying. And yes, LARRRRY! <3
Date: 10/27/11 04:33 pm Title: Chapter Three
Georg the pothead, lol! :D
Damn, I knew it! I knew from, the point where they notice that something was going on at the alley. I feel like a winner now for guessing what was going on. :D. And I really like thisl. The second half of this chapter gathered so much tension that I was really excited to read it. There was just something I really liked - and I WILL enjoy the next chapter, I have no doubts. Just bring it on! :)
Author's Response: Yes! He's a total pothead :D I'm so proud of you for guessing what was up! And I'm absolutely delighted that you like this, and that it has you intrigued. Your tweet earlier made me so happy, btw! I'm really glad that you're looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you for reading! I'll totally bring it on :D
Date: 10/26/11 11:50 pm Title: Chapter One
Let's talk about fairy tales....by the aid of my magic keyboards asking Mohan *clicking*, mystery be revealed, secrets be told when I would know what chapter it will be told?......harharhar....giiiirrrrrrlllll you are fucking awesome everytime. When would you keep on surprising me? Damn! this again keeps me wondering in the first two chapters what mystery and secrets Tom are keeping, then here on the third he's in for streetfight with bets, but then again you silly little thing LARRY????????? again?????? in WO, then the ugly villain in PS then now George's pet? Girl are you in love with him???? me???? I do....LOL....keeep going on gosh why did I always have to be giddy everytime I read a fucking awesome story, pls dooooo surprise us again will you.....mwah!!!!!!takecare!!!! see yah then soon again....tah! tah! ^_^
Author's Response: GIRL! I've missed youuuuu! Hahah you're adorable. This entire review made me smile sooooo big! I'm so excited that you're intrigued and want to know what's happening next! LARRY IS BACK. I think he's going to make his way into all of my stories. He's just a sneaky little guy. I am absolutely delighted that it makes you giddy when you read my things! Thank you sooo much for reading and for making me smile so big! I really hope you like the next chapter!
Date: 10/25/11 11:28 pm Title: Chapter Three
:O Tom why are you fighting in the street like a hoodlum?! What is thisssssssss? XD And oh god, from the last chapter? Gordon is such a creeper. He needs to fall of a cliff or something. e___e I really want to try and understand what's the deal with Tom, like is he in some sort of gang or something? I don't understand. D: And then the way his demeanor changed so suddenly, it seemed odd. I guess he just wanted to do something nice for Bill without any questions being asked? I mean some people are like that. Who really knows? (well you, the author knows of course! :P)
Love, love, loving it of course! Can't wait to read more soon! :D
Author's Response: Fighting like a straight up hoodrat, lol. Gordon should fall off a cliff, onto another another cliff, and then fall of that one! Yeah? I really hope that as the chapters progress you can get a better idea of why Tom is the way he is. How he got sucked into what he's doing and why he keeps doing it. I'm actually really glad that this has you questioning! I hope I can clear more things up in the next chapter. Thank you sooooo much for reading, girl! I'm really glad that you're enjoying it. I hope you like the next chapter :D <3
Date: 10/25/11 08:43 am Title: Chapter Three
LARRY THE LIZAAARD
Author's Response: HE'S BAAAAAACK! HAUL ASS. :D Girl, you light up my life. Thank you so much for reading!
Date: 10/24/11 11:39 pm Title: Chapter One
D'awww we were meant to be :D
Date: 10/24/11 08:04 pm Title: Chapter Three
I get the stupidest grin whenever Larry creeps in. And I never even liked lizards before. Now every time I see one of the frilled ones I'm all: Larryyyy!
Please let Tomikins win, I hate to see him get his ass kicked. It makes me cry. It's kinda cool to see the underdog win against all obstacles, even if he gets banged up a bit first. *hugs.
Author's Response: You have to know I was thinking about you when I wrote that part of the chapter :D I'm so glad you have a special place in your heart for that little bastard. I completely agree with everything you said at the last. But..I must keep the outcome a secret for now! I can't wait for you to read the next chapter. Thanks so much for reading and for loving Larry! *huuugs*
Date: 10/24/11 03:48 pm Title: Chapter One
I'm so not kidding that really is my grandpa's name! I wonder which of my families name you'll use next xD But I couldn't resist doing a manip of that :D I'm glad you enjoyed it though :3
Author's Response: OMG it's like some kind of weird destiny that we have. And I wonder that too...I do. :D OK I LOVE YOU FOR REAL
Date: 10/24/11 11:53 am Title: Chapter Three
Oh my god! O:
Author's Response: Craaaaazy, right? I hope you'll stick around for more! Thanks for reading, love :D
Date: 10/24/11 09:50 am Title: Chapter Three
*flails together with you like an idiot for no reason* :D. Larry's not gonna be evil this time? Woohoo! I gotta admit he is pretty awesome, though. Lizards in general are pretty cool to me. And I looove the part of your brain that wrote Work Out! For serious. You should be proud of your powers of random :D You love me, too? *blushes and smiles awkwardly* Fank youu :3 You make me feel so loved xD And you know I won't mind you camping out with me! *pushes aside various cuddly toys, candy, fluffy things and CD's to make a mohanrocks-sized space* Come sit! and OF COURSE I WOULD LIKE TO TALK ABOUT TOM'S PURDY FACE. Maybe Bill's too. ;) That would make me extremely happy ^_^
Anyways, this review is starting to get long-ass (for me, anyway xD), so I shall depart. I LOVE YOU TOO *hugs you tight and letting go just before you die again* Stay awesome! *hearts* 8D
Author's Response: Long reviews equal happy Kirsten :D Well mainly reviews from you equal happy Kirsten! Hehe. Larry is a pretty cool guy as far as lizards go. I HAVE met some mean ones before. But I shall not go into that! : / I'm so glad you love that random part of my brain. It loves to write random things for you! You should feel loved! <3 You deserve love and happy things. OKAY LET'S CAMP OUT. Seriously this is going to be the cutest, cuddliest, and most amazing camp out ever. I hope you're ready. We can of course talk about both of their faces! Thanks for making room for meeeee. :D K I LOVE YOU BYE. Thanks for keeping me alive this time. :)
Date: 10/24/11 07:14 am Title: Chapter Three
OMGeeez Tom was a fighter!! that's so fckin sexy! oh I can't wait I can't wait >_
Author's Response: There really is something sexy about imagining Tom fighting. Mmmhmm. I'm so excited that you're excited! Thank youuuu and I can't wait to hear what you think about the next chapter. :D
Date: 10/24/11 06:54 am Title: Chapter One
o yeaa I love dark fic, bad Tom and stubborn Bill! it just fit perfectly!
Author's Response: Yessss, I'm really glad you love dark stories and that you found this one! Thanks so much for reading and I hope you keep enjoying those two guys. :)
Date: 10/24/11 04:30 am Title: Chapter Three
.-. DUDE ITS LIKE YOUR FUCKIN' STALKIN' MY FAMILY! First my dad's name, now my grandpa's name like what the hell xDDDDD
BTW Tom better win, but then again he could loose and Bill could be all "Imma help him!" And go play nurse. yeeaah. lmao I love stoner georg though xD to great.
P.S Larry is like your signature on each store. A durr. :D Love you
Author's Response: LMAAAAAO. Your grandpa's name is Leonard? I am sooooo pleased! lolol. Dude, it really could go either of those ways...I cannot wait for you to see what happens! I'm so glad you love stoner Georg. You are just deeeelightful! Thank you so much for reading and sharing that hilar Bill/giraffe manip. It made me chortle into my cereal. P.S. SO TRUE, GURL. I love youuuu!
Date: 10/24/11 12:51 am Title: Chapter Three
LOL gotta love georg..and LARRY!!! amazing job my sweet love!!!!
-your biggest fan
Author's Response: Good thing they love you too! And so do I! :D Thank you so much for reading. I'm sooo happy that you liked it! <3
Date: 10/23/11 11:52 pm Title: Chapter Three
I cannot wait for the fight. So excited! Loved the chappie! :) :) :)
Author's Response: Eeeek, thank you so very much! I'm so excited that YOU are excited. I really hope you like the next chapter and I hope I get to talk to you there! :D <3