Date: 11/03/11 07:11 am Title: Chapter Four
Oh, that was surprising, but I like it, alot!
Author's Response: I'm glad it was a good surprise for you! :) And dude, your name on here is PERFECT for this story, hehe. I'm so glad you like this. Thank you so much for reading and leaving me this sweet review!
Date: 11/03/11 06:18 am Title: Chapter Four
OMG!!!!!!!!!!O_O'
how couuuuuuuuld YOU leave it THERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?????????????????????
*cries* wanna read more! *sniff*
Author's Response: I'm SO sorry I left it there! :( But I promise I won't make you wait as long for the next chapter, kay? DON'T CRY!! *hugs you tight* I'm so happy you wanna read more! Thank you sooo much for reading :D
Date: 11/03/11 05:51 am Title: Chapter Four
I read tour other two stories and facebook FR accepted! :D haha I loved this chapter gotta love a rough and rough Bill -huggles and loves-
Author's Response: Yessss I am very pleased by all of these things!! :) I'm so happy you loved this chapter. I like the idea of that kind of Bill, tooooo! Thank you so so much for reading, darling! *loves and hugs*
Date: 11/03/11 02:07 am Title: Chapter One
I'm glad you do because you wouldn't have had a choice otherwise ;) BTW I dyed my hair purple and when I showered it the water ran purple, so I got to be in purple water :D
Date: 11/03/11 01:10 am Title: Chapter Four
OMG WITH THE CLIFFHANGER!
You're really good at that, you know. ._.
I love it.
Author's Response: I'm really sorry about that! I always feel like such a jerk when I do it. But...it just had to build! I promise I won't make you wait as long for the next :)
Thank you SO much for reading and I am delighted that you love it!
Date: 11/03/11 12:30 am Title: Chapter Four
Wow, what an intense opening scene! You wrote the action really well, great job! I love the terrified and fascinated tone you wrote for it. Bill's got sass! I quite like him. Plus he's all smart and analyzing behavior and stuff.
I love how the main reason Bill didn't want to run away was because of his awkward running. That's so funny! And then wow! Bill surprised me, and it's sweet how he stopped Tom from getting hurt. But poor Bill! Head injury, ow... I was surprised Bill could even take Bu, with their sheer size difference. I imagined Bu as bulky, and Bill like his usual twiggy self. I pray Bill doesn't get hurt. No head injuries, pleeease ;_; I make a tearful appeal. Brains are precious, Kiwi. Precious. I can't, I just can't...
So anyway, I am perpetually amazed at you writing such a serious story! And that playful, snarky and tell-it-like-it-is style with which you write is just lovely! P.S. I need to teach you the html code for links, yes yes?
Author's Response: I love how you just jump right into your review and pretend that you didn't make my heart stop upon seeing your review <3
I'm so glad that you liked the action! You know I've never written things such as this before so your feedback is much appreciated! And Bill appreciates ze compliments, as do I! Thank you kindly :D
Oh look! I learned to make paragraphs! Yaaaay! Finalllyyy. Listen, that's a legitimate reason okay. I'm glad Bill surprised you! I kinda like how they keep trying to protect each other even though they're virtual strangers. But, yeah! Bushido vs Bill seems like a lofty dream. Thankfully Bill has lank and bendiness on his side! While Bu is all bulky and stout, you know? Listen, don't worry okay? I promise not to harm your sweet little eyes with head injuries. Their brains will be safe, I swear it. <3
I'm so happy that I can still amaze you after all of this time! You are definitely right in the fact that I have a style, no matter the genre it seems haha. I'm just lucky that you like it ;D Thank you soooo much for reading and for this review, Bee! P.S. OH COULD YOU PLEEEEAAASE
Date: 11/03/11 12:07 am Title: Chapter Four
Dude, I was not expecting to see Bill fight, but it definitely was a good surprise. I think he's gonna kick Bushido's ass and gain some respect. Loved it! Definitely worth the wait. And love YOU girl! :) :) :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you thought it was a good surprise!! I think that you're assumption is amazing and definitely what I would like to see too ;D You have no idea how happy that makes me that you loved it! Thank you so much for reading and I truly hope you enjoy the next chapter! Oh and hey, I love youuuuu <3
Date: 11/03/11 12:00 am Title: Chapter One
I'll always love you :D Remember you're my Kirsten :3 I'm not mad excited xDDD I'm more of like WHOA!!!! WHAT THE HELL?! WHAT'S GUNNA HAPPEN NEXT?! -bounces- kind of excited. And YOUUUUUURRRR WELCOME!
Author's Response: Okay, great! So the good kind of excited! Awww, I love being your Kirsten :D
Date: 11/02/11 10:59 pm Title: Chapter Four
Welp. Imma sit here and wait for another update.
Author's Response: Alright(said in your voice) /flops down beside you with a bag of Whataburger
<3 <3 <3 Thank you soo much for reading!
Date: 11/02/11 10:51 pm Title: Chapter Four
wow...they look...kinda creepy there. Can't really blame them though, they have yeeeeeaaaaars of Halloween catch u to play.
Wow...yea, totes did not see Bill fighting Bushy (reason number one I don't like Busido right there. It was awesome!!!! I have no idea whats going to happen, but I'm sure it gonna be pretty 'mazing!! I kinda hope Tom jumps in the fight and helps ill, but I doubt thats gonna happen.
Damn Georg, and his stoner senses, knowing when bad shizz is about to go down, and not insisting had on coming with. Whats wrong wit-...oh...right...he was kinda stoned...
I loved Work Out, and i will go right over and read the other one right now. Btw...in that vid on the site, was Bill wearing a proud to be an american type shirt? Or was I seeing things?
Wonderful chapter! *snuggles* I can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: They do! But it is Halloween so I guess we can cut them a break, haha. I'm so happy they dressed up though! So cute.
I'm glad I caught you off guard with that! And I really hope that you end up liking the outcome ;D Hehe. I really wanna tell you what happens but I'm trying to keep my fingers from giving it awaaaaay.
That must be some magic weed, huh. Giving him premonitions and shit. :)
I'm so glad you loved the Work Out one shot! And I got your review for the other ficlet. Thank you so much for reading those. :D DUDE I think he WAS wearing something with the American flag on it! I'll have to rewatch.
Thank you sooo much for reading and sharing this lovely review! I couldn't be more pleased that you enjoyed it. I hope you like the next! <3
Date: 11/02/11 10:07 pm Title: Chapter Four
Hmmm Bill vs Bushido... now THAT is something I want to see haha. At least Bill's finally getting some use out of those lovely big muscles he's been sporting lately ;)
Oh prickly little Tom. He's like one of those cacti who look super sharp and pointy to scare people off, but they're actually pretty soft. He acts all tough, but I think it's just to hide his soft interior. He's really just a marshmallow. A big, squishy, battered, bloodstained marshmallow
And OMG at those new pictures. The one of Bill from carnival? Drooooool. I need more. I'm happy they get more privacy living in LA,but I miss seeing them. It's crazy how insane the fandom goes every time something new is released.
Keep on being fabulous!
Author's Response: So basically this review was awesome, okay? Or I guess it's YOU that's the awesome factor here. :) I'm glad you want to see Bill make use of those splendid muscles that he's growing! Because, mmm. Those are niiiice. And yes! Bill vs Busido, let's do this.
...somehow you have managed to stumble upon the most perfect description of Tom's character. That was glorious. How did you-
I NEED MORE PICTURES TOO, OMG. It really is crazy, isn't it? Twitter was QUITE overwhelming today, lol. But it's because we rarely see those dudes and so when we get even a tiny picture, all hell breaks loose. :D
Thank you sooo much for reading! I'm gonna try to see if I can get some of your fabulosity to rub off on me, kay? <3
Date: 11/02/11 09:37 pm Title: Chapter Four
I really hope Bill beats the snot out of Bushido... it will be some form of justice for all the bull he has said about Bill. LOL!
Soooo hooked on this! I demand more!
Author's Response: YUSSSS. I am all for this! :D I'm so glad that you're hooked! That really means a lot to me, kay? You shall have more soon! Thank you sooo much for reading, love <3
Date: 11/02/11 07:14 pm Title: Chapter Four
I adore the way you write. This was hilarious to me: ``Bill had a pretty face. He really couldn't blame someone for trying to eat it.``
I so didn't expect Bill to fight Bushido! But you go Bill! That was awesome! I hope he's gonna be alright. Love the moment of connection between Bill and Tom! Can't wait to read the Bill and Tom interaction in the next one!
Author's Response: You make me smile so big! I'm so happy that you adore my writing, like inexplicably happy. And hehe, I mean...I think there are a lot of people who would like to get their mouth on that face a little bit :D
I'm so glad I could surprise you and that you liked the twist! I promise I won't let him get scuffed up too badly. Yaaay for noticing that moment! I really liked that too.
Thank you so much for reading and I really hope you enjoy the next! <3
Date: 11/02/11 06:35 pm Title: Chapter Four
Bill will fucking kick his ass. THANK YOU FOR THE WORK OUT ONE SHOT
Author's Response: Damn straight, guuurl. :D YOU ARE SO VERY MORE THAN WELCOME FOR IT <3
Date: 11/02/11 06:12 pm Title: Chapter Four
I wasn't expecting Tom to win lol You did make it sound like he was going to lose though and then, all of a sudden he took the guy down! Way to go, Tom! lol
I definitely wasn't expecting Bill to end up in a fight! I don't know what to expect but I have a feeling he's going to surprise us all (especially Tom). I actually would like to see him make an awkward run for it, though lol I can just picture him making a run for it, arms a flailing hehe
I so cannot wait for some more Bill/Tom interaction.
Great chapter, hun! =]
Author's Response: The odds were definitely against him! I'm glad that Tom could surprise you a little bit ;)
I wasn't either! OMG. Haha, but it just started flowing that way and the story started writing itself out. So I was likey, 'hey, I won't stop you from fighting'. hehe. I have a feeling that your feeling might be right on track ;) And I'll make sure to have him run at some point in this story! Just for you <3
I'm excited about their interaction, tooooo! Thank you so much for reading and sharing this lovely review with me! I'm really happy you enjoyed it :D
Date: 11/02/11 06:08 pm Title: Chapter Four
I definitely want Bill to win *-*
Author's Response: I'm totally rooting with you. Maybe if we keep cheering him on he will pull through! Thank you so much for reading <3
Date: 11/02/11 05:22 pm Title: Chapter Four
omg! bill's a sudden bad ass! i love it!
Author's Response: He is! I love the idea of Bill as a bad ass. I'm glad you do too. :D Thank you so much, giiirrrrl!
Date: 11/02/11 05:15 pm Title: Chapter Four
Whaaaat?? This took an absolutely crazy twist XD Omg, must you do *another* cliffie?
Bill lazily tried to hit Georg on the shoulder and missed it by at least a foot. -- So here we see Bill's accuracy.... What the hell XD
Aww, Georg is concerned for Bill through his high. That's nice. That's how it should be normally, actually. There'd be a lot less stupid accidents in the world.
Error here: Bill took stood frozen
Lol, I have no idea. I can't comment as to what'll happen to Bill XD
*imagines 'Priss' being Bill's fighting name* :P
Author's Response: I too was surprised by the twist! But I'm excited about where it's going next :D I'm sorry about the cliffie :( But I shan't keep you waiting long!
I just hope that the fact that a burly man is trying to beat him up, helps perfect his precision a bit more, haha. We can only hope.
Thank you so much for pointing that out! It is fixed :D
I'm glad you're left guessing! I hope you'll stick around to find out what's upppp ;) OMG perfect fighting name. Like, really <3 Thank you so much for reading!
Date: 11/02/11 05:12 pm Title: Chapter Four
Weed gives me a sinus infection and causes me to read the side of White Castle bags out loud for hours. Weed apparently gives Bill a rush of adrenaline so major that it turns him into a beautiful version of The Hulk. Man, Georg really does have the good shit!
Bushido is a little bitch that is gonna get his ass handed to him by a boy in heels and makeup. And people say there's no such thing as justice.
Author's Response: Everything except the sinus infection part, sounds awesome! It's like an abridged story, on repeat foreverrrr. :D You are right, weed is apparently a transformation drug rather than a gateway drug for Bill. Beautiful version of The Hulk. THAT's what he should have been for Halloween, hahaha. Damn Georg, hook a sister up, right? JK I don't have the time to read White Castle bags for hours. :)
I LOVE your prediction! I really do. It was beautiful. I really hope you'll stick around to find out what happens~ Thank you sooo much for reading and sharing this awesome review with me!
Date: 11/02/11 05:03 pm Title: Chapter Four
gah! why must you end these chapters on such cliff hangers! I wanna know who wins the fight now D: Meanie butt!
Author's Response: I'm sorrrrrrry :( Will you love me still?? I promise I won't leave you hanging too long! I'm glad you're excited about the next chapter, even if it's a mad kind of excited, hehe. THANK YOUUUUUU, cutie butt :P