Date: 03/29/12 12:14 am Title: Setting Up Dates
Aww they're gonna have a mall run-in!! So cute. This was a nice little filler. Keep up the great work! I hope nothing serious is wrong with Espy.
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks ;-) Nope, nothing's wrong I just needed a situation so I could introduce Gusti into the story as her brother. I'm excites for the next chapter...
Date: 03/28/12 09:02 pm Title: Setting Up Dates
awwww tomi is such a good daddy -giggles-
Author's Response: I know, I know... ;-)
Date: 03/21/12 12:17 am Title: Flirtatious Situations
*befuddled* how did I miss a chapter here?... did you update twice in this past week or so?
Ok, I'm a little sad you didn't choose Ian, but s'all good. I'm just going to be ridiculously pleased you didn't choose Beau, because that's my brother's name, and would've given me the heebie jeebies.
Wonderful two chapters! Looking forward to what comes next!
Author's Response: Yupp! I updated twice because 1) I felt for leaving so long 2) It was one chapter split in two and 3) I'm trying to catch up! I'm not really sure right now but i'm considering updating once every week. I honestly DID like Ian , when i had the chappie types up it said 'Ian' but then I saw the name Kayden and it just clicked! I have to admit that would be a little uncomfortable by using Beau... Thanks again for all the help!
Date: 03/19/12 11:08 am Title: Flirtatious Situations
-giggless- YAY AND NOW WE GOTS GEO!!!!!!
omg kayden in the name of one of my rp kids on imvu XD.
oh oh now you just need to fit gusti in there somehow ^^
sorry i just finished off a red bull -giggles- thankfully i am not bad as bibi
Author's Response: Haha you gotta pick your poison, in this case Redbull! I have the perfect role for Gustav... You'll come to know;-) I fell in love with the nane Kayden ! It seemed to fit so well... Awwww come on Bibi could make strippers lool like a kids show. Thanks For reviewing love:D
Date: 03/18/12 11:24 pm Title: New Car
-happy dances-
Author's Response: DirtyDancing...
Date: 03/18/12 09:19 pm Title: New Car
Yayyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Done! It should be in the process of being approved by the admins;-)
Date: 03/18/12 09:04 pm Title: New Car
Tonight tonight please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Your wish my command sweetums!;-)
Date: 03/18/12 08:34 pm Title: New Car
as long as bibi and tomi are together i is a happy camper ^^
Author's Response: I know right! I'm doing the finishing touches to the next chappie. Should I post it tonight or wait a bit?;-)
Date: 03/18/12 07:52 pm Title: The Sky Is Finally Clearing
poor espy " even though i kinda figured it out before bill saw her "
Yay andi ^^
i been waiting a while for your update so i read it threw again befor comenting XD
Author's Response: Thanks alot! I thought Andi would bring a nice touch since he's close to Bill and all. You're a smartone!;-) thanks for being patient. I'll give you guys a treat and post the next chapter most likely tonight. Right now Espy IS in need of help, but what she does later on will make all of my readers slightly have a heartattack and want to rip her to pieces. It has to do with her and her baby. (No death!)
Date: 03/18/12 04:44 pm Title: The Sky Is Finally Clearing
WOW! I've waited sooooo long for the next chapter. I absolutely LOVE this series. You've done an amazing job with this series. Keep it up :)
And I was thinking for the name for the baby Blaze, Derrick, Shane, Kieran, Beau, Tad, Damon, Caden, Connor, Liam, Michael, Sam, Dean, Trey, or Skye.
Just a few :) lol
Author's Response: Awww! I LOVE you! I'm so happy to hear you've liked and waited for this. Honestly those names are incredible! Thank You so much. It really means alot;-) I'll have the next chapter up as soon as possible.
Date: 11/24/11 09:49 pm Title: Truth Can't Hide, Especially Love
dun dun dun
cant wait till you update ^_^
Author's Response: Aww, thank you sooo much! I'll try and get a new chappie up soon. Extremely happy you reviewed and like it!!!
Date: 11/15/11 09:39 pm Title: Truth Can't Hide, Especially Love
Oh goodness.Sometimes I swear I must be psychic. Wonder how thats gonna turn out...
Seriously? I suck at naming things. I kinda like Ian, it has a nice mouth feel with either Kaulitz or Trumper, and I can kinda see either of the boys cooing it like 'ohhh shh Ian it'll be alright" you know what I mean?
Great chapter. I can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: I'm feeling you, Ian does sound good...the sound rolls right off your tongue. I'll most likely use it unless I get more suggestions:) If it were up to me to name things they'd probably end up with like #1, #2 or the colors and months and/or seasons... Anyway thanks once again!rnrn
Date: 11/03/11 10:32 pm Title: Waiting
*blushes* Danke schön
This was a really good chapter. I thinkwe might've been able to go a little deeper into the whole 'Bill waiting for himself' thing. The point got across, but maybe it could;ve been drawn out and elaborated a little more, you know?
For some reason this party scene kinda reminds me of Ke$ha's song TicToc. Thats not really a bad thing erdsay, it just means I have that damn song stuck in my head, and probably will for the rest of the weekend.
I'm glad Tom was so responsible with Bill, even though they didn't actually go together. I'm not sure why he took Bill to his hous though, as opposed to his own. Was he worried about Bill's parents reaction to his drinking?
Umm little grammar thing, when you wrote "Tom even helped his dad out with some work. While Bill rearranged his wardrobe." The second sentance ins't a complete sentance. You could either remove the "While", or you could decapitalize it, take out the period between the two, and add a comma. Just so you know.
Wonderful chapter. I feel kinda bad that Bill only has his parents in his phone. I'm glad Tom took it upon himself to add his number.
Can't wait for the next chapter dear. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Score! Thanks once again:)
Date: 10/30/11 10:21 pm Title: City Stroll
Oh Bill, *pats head* A pretty girl flirting with you isn't harassment, especially when you never asked her to stop.
Great chapter. I can't wait to see what comes next! *hugs*
Author's Response: Great! Thanks So Much! I was trying to make Bill seem in a light mood:)
Date: 10/27/11 10:52 am Title: Sharp Edges
Hmmm *ponders* *lightbulb* Is Espy preggers?!...Ohhhh, she is totally pregnant isn't she??
Great chapter. I'm glad Bill decided to at least try and give up the cutting. Good for him. Its hard to do from what I understand. I hope Tom keeps him on the right track.
I'm thinng Tom is going to either A) Ask Bill to work on the project today, and Bill isn't gonna get to go to the river, or B) Ton is going to sneakily follow Bill to the river to observe him. Or, I suppose possibly C) Tom asks to work on the project with Bill today, and they both go to the river together to work on it. But, it'd be kinda hard to
Author's Response: Incredible! Yes Espy is indeed prego. And the correct answer is B! Thanks for the review and keeping up with the story! I will dedicate the next chapter to you which I might submit tomorrow:)rnrn
Date: 10/22/11 04:40 am Title: Drifting Away
Oh god, cutting, really? Please don't let that go on for very long. I mean, at least he has a semi 'legitimate' reason for it, watching his friend die and all. But seriously. Its over done.
Other than that it was a lovely chapter. I can't blieve a student at the school died and no body knew about it. And they only took 2-3 days off? I'd think they would get away with at least a week. Also, Bill's mom seems to be worrying awful quick about Bill not being all perky and happy. After all, he did just witness his friends murder, and was a potential victim himself.
Wonderful chapter. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: The cutting only last for arounf two chapters because Tomi comes to the rescue!:) Thanks so much for the feedback!
Date: 10/20/11 10:09 am Title: Black Day
That was good. Maybe bit rushed dead, but something needs to happen before car fears and all. So sad for Bill and Tom to loose their important friend:(
I was thinking in my mind which kind of fear for cars Bill could have, but maybe I see that in future. keep going:)
Author's Response: Thanks! Actually in the next chapter I'll be describing the phobia to cars:)It's nice to know you like it!
Date: 10/19/11 11:39 pm Title: Black Day
Sad...
Als, kinda short. But good. I can't wait to see more soon! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks! It was necessary for it to be sad, but there's happiness soon:)
Date: 10/19/11 10:49 pm Title: Black Day
awww *wipes tears*
it was just great sad chapter love!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! The next chapter will be updated soon:)
Date: 10/12/11 12:40 am Title: Consequences
This was a nice start, but the Summary is a bit misleading to me. Afterall, his reckless behavior does cost Zeke his life (unless his just in a coma, which I don't consider vegetative states 'living', but that not how it looks at this point anyway) and it wasn't an accident that did it
BUt other than that, so fsr so good. I look forward to seeing more soon! Keep up the nice work.
Author's Response: Yay! Glad you like it. I'll try and fix the summary.:)