Date: 10/19/11 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 4
This story was super cute. Well written and funny and I liked your characters and your universe, and I especially loved the way Bill and Tom act together. This was unique and I'm glad I read it. If you write more twincest, I'll be sure to read it cuz I think you're a very good author! :) Well done.
Just watch out for typos.
Date: 10/19/11 09:27 am Title: Chapter 1
This is good, really catchy. You're a good writer n I'm having a great time reading it.
But before I proceed to the next part, I should tell you that you misspelled Versace and that USB is slow technology that's already being replaced, so not much chance it'll still be around in 2110(?) When your story is set. That's all. :)
Date: 10/18/11 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 4
And this is why you're my favorite author. =)
Date: 10/18/11 10:17 am Title: Chapter 4
Awww!!!! *o* cant wait now!
That was great!
Date: 10/17/11 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 4
Hehe, I already read this on LiveJournal, but it's a delight to see it up in its entirety on THF.
I really enjoyed this story; probably going to read it again ;)
A few people on LiveJournal (including myself) *were* curious about one thing, though... Why was Tom having all those one-night-stands if he believed he was dating Bill? Or were they fake? Please clarify, it's really bugging me...
Author's Response: Hee, thank you! ^_^ Oh wow, that means so much to me that you want to read it again! As for Tom having the one night stands, that'll be explained in the short follow-up fic I have planned. =) But just in case I don't get around to writing it any time soon, it's because while he was convinced that he and Bill were soul mates, Tom was also half convinced that he was wrong. That's really all I can say without giving away the plot for the followup. I'm sorry if that explanation doesn't really help any!
Date: 10/17/11 11:10 am Title: Chapter 4
Ah~~ Okay so maybe the term 'true love' was used a few too many times, quite possibly crossing my eyes up, but how terribly sweet. Tom's resolve certainly crumbled fast in the end there~~ :P Rather enjoyed this all, good little story here lovely. :)(The end was dorky and cute :D)
Date: 10/17/11 09:56 am Title: Chapter 4
Teehee, yay! They're soulmates!
I'd love to see a during-credits scene of them making out and the Bill realizing he still has to get to the library AND finish his paper. That would be hilarious!
This story was awesome! (As per usual for you) Absolutely LOVED it! Cute little sign-off in the end notes. Can't wait for the Stereo update!
XD
Date: 10/17/11 09:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Aww this has started out well. Enjoying it thus far. A little put off by the thought of Nicole Scherzinger *twitch* haha, but no I like the concept, it's quite sweet. Note that in a few sentences throughout this chapter, you seem to be missing words in and around them? Haha, just a heads up. Mm, kay, I go read on~ :3
Date: 10/17/11 01:38 am Title: Chapter 4
Awwwwww. I loved it so much.
Date: 10/16/11 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 4
oh, hunny!!! this is beautiful!!! the ending is so perfect, like, wow!!! i'm going to save this one on my computer, because there's no way i'm letting this go!!!
and btw, that timer is a really good idea. someone should invest in that. i'd totally buy it. :-)
Date: 10/16/11 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 4
Awwww! I just re-read this last chapter cause I really liked it the first time. I really enjoyed reading this fic when it was first posted for the FQF thing! I was so hopping someone would pick this prompt cause the idea is just awesome and you really did a great job. It was all I was hopping for and more! I really want to re-read and review the other chapters when I have the time too =P. This was a really really good story, thanks for sharing!
Date: 10/16/11 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh my god, this was the sweetest and most adorable story that I've read in a long time *-* Sadly short, but I lovelovelove this! Oh dear, I'm a puddle on the floor now...:'3
Date: 10/16/11 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 4
Bravo! Yay! I so loved the ending. Made me laugh, and melt. Yup, melt! Putting this story in my favorites, where the rest of your stories are.
Date: 10/16/11 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
loved the kiss at the very end! it was perfect!
*hugs you cuz you mentioned stereo* yeah, i seriously love that story!
Date: 10/16/11 08:43 am Title: Chapter 3
*wriggles in excitement* *-* O.O
Author's Response: Nice timing! ;) Next and final chapter has been posted! I'm glad you seem to be enjoying it. =D
Date: 10/16/11 01:08 am Title: Chapter 1
I love when they are not brothers because it gives more space for imagination
I canīt wait to read more :)
Author's Response: I wholeheartedly agree. There are a lot of plots that can be done while they're twins, but the plot opportunities really open up when you take away the family-factor. ^_^ I'm so glad you're enjoying this story. Thank you, dear!
Date: 10/15/11 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 3
And the plot thickens! :-O Hehe. Can't wait!
Author's Response: Heh heh heh >;) The final chapter has just been posted. I hope you like it! ^_^
Date: 10/15/11 07:37 am Title: Chapter 3
Aww, Tomi was trying to admit his love for Bill, wasn't it? The fact that he was doing in his own weird way makes all of it even more adorable. He's such a dork. Boys will always be boys...xD
Author's Response: Tom is definitely a dork, what with his spouting random facts and his love of biology, but that's what makes him fun! I'm so glad that you're enjoying it, my dear. Thanks so much!
Date: 10/15/11 05:19 am Title: Chapter 3
I love this story! I just wanna read more and more and moore! :) It's such a sweet scen to imagine too, Tom with his head in Bill's lap, Bill massaging his braids... cuteness!
Author's Response: That means so much to me, eep! Thank you so much, dear, it's always a pleasure to know that you're pleased. ^_^ When I had braids, I was always massaging my own scalp, so I figured it'd be something that Tom would enjoy too. And since he has a handsome roommate to do it for him, there's no reason for him to do it himself, right? ;)
Date: 10/15/11 02:17 am Title: Chapter 3
I really love this!
Author's Response: I'm so glad, bb! Thanks so much; I don't think you know how much your thoughts mean to me ♥