Date: 04/21/08 07:42 am Title: Chapter 13 - What It's All About
So good!
Please continue soon!
And what is Bill's powers?
Seriously! I wanna know!
Author's Response: Thank you :). You'll find out about Bill's powers later :)
Date: 04/21/08 06:49 am Title: Chapter 13 - What It's All About
Great chapter! I'm so loving super protective Tom in this, and how he always seems to come to the rescue for Bill and know what to say.
Author's Response: Thank you :). I'm really enjoying writing protective Tom.
Date: 04/21/08 06:47 am Title: Chapter 13 - What It's All About
Niccee!! :D
Can we expect some more biting things in the next chapter? I kinda miss it :P
Author's Response: Thank you ... and yes, I'm just writing some biting now ;)
Date: 04/20/08 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 12 - The Grind Stone
Just Perfect!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 04/19/08 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 12 - The Grind Stone
Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant. I love the progression. Thank you. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you, so pleased you're enjoying the fic.
Date: 04/19/08 11:54 am Title: Chapter 12 - The Grind Stone
It would be awesome if they made a video like that! Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you. TH as vamps ... I'd kill to see that.
Date: 04/19/08 03:45 am Title: Chapter 12 - The Grind Stone
Friken AMAZING! at one point I forgot it was a fic and was looking forward to seeing the music video lol ^.^
Author's Response: LOL - I would love to see that vid too :) Thank you for commenting.
Date: 04/18/08 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 12 - The Grind Stone
Omg, I cried so hard when Bill told about ordeal....T.T
And the video was amazing! I really wish they would make a song and video like that in reality...D= Bill must have been the most sexy vampire in the history!8D And I would have loved to see Tom in that costume!x)
Please update fast! I can't wait for more...
Author's Response: Thank you so much for commenting, I'm so pleased you are enjoying the fic. I'm sure Bill and Tom would both make vamps to die for ... :)
Date: 04/18/08 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 12 - The Grind Stone
HI! Yay for updating quickly. Sorry about my review yesterday. I was just telling you my ideas I don't expect you to follow them or anything. You're doing a much better job than I could ever do (which is why I don't write). I loved the idea for the video. Did you come up w/ it or did you get the idea from another video? If it's even remotely based off of something else I'd like to kwo b/c I want to see it. I was a little dissappointed there wasn't a feeding scene. You got me really hopeful... I was so impressed w/ Bill for telling about what happened to him. The end was so sweet too. I love them! Update soon.
Author's Response: No need to apologise, I like to hear what others think. So pleased you enjoyed the video part and yes, it all came out of my head :). I doubt it's the most original idea on the planet, but it was fun to come up with ::g::. Thank you for reviewing.
Date: 04/18/08 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 12 - The Grind Stone
I adore it.
I fuckin' love you. :)
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 04/18/08 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 12 - The Grind Stone
I think that was very cathartic for Bill, speaking aloud about what happened to him on the kerner show. I hope he'll be stronger for it.
I really wish they'd make that video, I really want to see it now! And those outfits, wow! I could imagine Bill and Tom wearing that and I think they would look stunning!
I love wolves and my brother has a husky, so I liked that bit. And the dogs reaction to Bill was amusing.
I love the amount of detail you include in this and how you don't shirk away from the everyday happenings. It has a lovely pace to it because of the attention to detail and your lovely engaging style of writing. This is a pleasure to read and I can't wait to read the next installment.
Author's Response: I think Bill continues to grow stronger all the time and he had Tom there for when he can't be strong. I would love to see them in those outfits as well. Someone on LJ did an illustration of the photo shoot and now I want to see it even more (http://pics.livejournal.com/beren_writes/pic/00035tb2). I love wolves too - they are such beautiful creatures. Thank you so much for the lovely comments (again); your reviews really brighten my day.
Date: 04/17/08 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Back to Work
I like this chapter but I feel like in some aspects the story isn't moving fast enough. Their relationship is moving at a good pace and so is Bill's recovery. What I want to know is if Bill's kidnapper is ever going to show up again and if he's (actually it's they isn't it?) going to be caught. I was thinking maybe like, they try to kill tom this time or something but the bond it too strong and they can't or if tom dies bill dies too or something like that. Don't acutally kill them though... And don't kill the kidnappers quickly either. I want to see them suffer a little first, or at least have to hear syb and the other elders scream at them for a while. Just to make me happy (yeah, I'm morbid like that!) As for Tom and Bill sleeping together. You could just have Bill have a screaming nighmare and Tom announcing that he's not letting Bill sleep alone. End of discussion. No one would be able to argue w/ that. I don't know, just some ideas. Update soon. Btw, how long were you planning on making this? I read around 14 chapters somewhere. I don't see how that's long enough. Update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you enjoyed the chapter. There are issues I need to explore before certain things happen, hence the reason some thing are not happening immediately. I won't say what happens at the end, but it is already written and I hope you will not be disappointed ::g::.
Date: 04/17/08 07:43 am Title: Chapter 11 - Back to Work
It's nice, seeing Bill get back to normal again. Although obviously still far from completely healed. I think he was very brave, dealing with that meeting room full of men, it must have been difficult.
Bill was so cute at the interview, all excited but still nervous. I am very much looking forward to the photo shoot now!
I can't help but keep wondering about the strigoi who did this to Bill in the first place. I really hope they catch him and make him pay for what he did.
Looking forward to the next chapter, as ever!
Author's Response: So behind, apologies for not replying sooner. As to the Strigoi who did this to Bill ... he is not forgotten, but that's all I will say :)
Date: 04/13/08 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 10 Getting Ready
I like it, these chapters are really good, and long I like it a lot.
I think Bill is getting better and better and can't wait to see more of his progress.
Author's Response: Thank you ... Bill is definitely making progress.
Date: 04/13/08 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 10 Getting Ready
Glad to see their relationship is getting so much better. That was such a nice thing Bill did for Syb (and everyone else too). Can't wait for the next chapter. BTW are they ever going to come across the creep who hurt bill? Does he even know Bill's alive? Well, he's about to find out if he doesn't.
Author's Response: Thank you. Well if I answered your questions I'd be giving away the plot, but let's just say he's definitely not forgotten.
Date: 04/13/08 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 10 Getting Ready
Awww they are just to cute!
Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you :).
Date: 04/13/08 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 10 Getting Ready
I have this ritual I go through every time I see you've updated. I mute the tv, kick my boyfriend out the room, get rid of all the distractions and sit down to read and be transported to another world for a little world for a little while.
Bill was so cute at the start of this chapter... How he was so nervous about the meeting and the gift giving. The idea of him giving that pendant to Syb and the symbolism behind it was beautiful. Very touching and she completely deservd it. As did everyone whom he gave gifts to, they were all lovely. I hope we haven't seen the last of Syb and Markus yet, I have the feeling we haven't.
It was nice to see the teasing back between the twins again, although it obviously has a sexual undercurrant to it now. You can see how Bill is beginning to get back to normal.
The scene between Bill and Tom was very sexy and really well done. I'm glad that you haven't rushed the sexual side of their relationship. It wouldn't seem right after what has happened. It's nice that they're taking it slow, and that Tom's being so understanding.
The very last scene was actually very touching and I think quite necessary to the story in my opinion. I was worried about how Bill would react to going back 'into the world' so it was nice to see his insecurities and Tom's reassurances. The last line was lovely, and it gave me the feeling of an ending to one part of the story and the beginning of the next. (If that makes sense?)
I wish I could actually leave a review that could really tell the extent to which I love this. There's not one thing I dislike about the story. Everything seems to flow and 'fit' right. I've read some sci-fi/fantasy stories where you can see the plot hasn't really been thought out fully. Not so with this, at all. Everything is just right.
Anyway, I'm going on again... Lol. Suffice to say, I love it!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for your wonderful comments. I do hope the boyfriend doesn't get too grouchy about it :). SO pleased you liked the gift giving and the present for Syb; I agonised over what it was going to be once I had decided to go that route (it was honestly totally different until I started writing it and it gained a mind of it's own :)). Definitely not the last of Markus and Syb. Poor Bill, I think he's craving normal. I can only imagine what it would be like for someone who had been raped to try and enter into a normal sexual relationship; it must be incredibly difficult, so I didn't want things rushed in the story (even given the added incentive of the bond). I'm so pleased you liked the last little scene, I added it after realising that the chapter needed a little bit more closure, so I'm very glad it came across like that. Thank you once again for the fantastic review; it made my day :).
Date: 04/12/08 11:13 am Title: Chapter 9 -Hints of Normality
I want more.. :(
Please update soon.. OK? :)
It's sooo sooo Good :D
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 04/11/08 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 9 -Hints of Normality
This chapter was good. It was devoted to the whole idea that Bill's recovering well... I liked the part w/ Andi but personally I wanted to see more development w/ Bill and Tom. I find the feeding scenes entertaining but then again I'm totally screwed up. Update soon please. Sorry about the lateness of this review I didn't realized I haden't reviewed.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review. There will be lots more Bill/Tom, never you fear :).
Date: 04/10/08 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 9 -Hints of Normality
OH MY GOD!!! I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!! I LOVE THIS STORY SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: THANK YOU! ;)