Date: 04/22/08 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Not Gently Enough
They handled that pretty well. Gustav makes me laugh. Actually the whole band relationship makes me laugh but I get the sense that it could be pretty realistic. Thank you for updating so soon. And catch that creep please! Update ASAP!
Author's Response: Thank you :). The next update is going to take a wee bit longer than the last three, but shouldn't be too long.
Date: 04/22/08 03:18 pm Title: Prologue: Missing
This is seriously one of the best vampire fics I've read in ANY fandom. And considering how into vampires I am, I've read a lot.
I'm so thrilled the Gs know now. And are mostly okay with it. Georg will come around.
Dear lord, I hope they never have to tell David.
Author's Response: Thank you so much ... I love vampires too :). I'm sure Georg will come around, he just needs adjustment time. David's face would be a picture if they did tell him :D
Date: 04/22/08 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Not Gently Enough
That...Was...AWSOME!
Is Gustav going to knock out during the movie?
What question are they going to ask, will Georg every be totally ok with it?
Author's Response: Thank you :). Questions, questions ... you'll have to wait and see :D
Date: 04/22/08 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Not Gently Enough
nnngh
so hot
Author's Response: Thank you :).
Date: 04/22/08 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Not Gently Enough
Oh thank god! Tom's immortal too. I was scared about that, that Bill was immortal and Tom was not. It seems only fitting that the human bond mate should be sustained by their strigoi though.
I thought it was so cute, that Bill wasn't concerned with anyone else but his brother when he was hurt. It was very touching.
I think Gustav's right... There is no easy way to break to someone that you're a vampire^^ Poor Gustav and Georg, what a shock. Bill's breakdown was sad, but understandable; it makes my heart ache how he keeps blaming himself and worrying about everyone else.
Lol at Tom teasing Georg. How very like him^^ I'm sure he'd never pass up the opportunity to get a dig in at him!
God, your feeding scenes are always so damn sexy! As I've said before, I've always had a thing for vampires and you describe them beautifully. And I'm with Tom on the level two thing ^_~
Georg and Gustav's reaction was very well done. I can understand that they were very confused and shocked. I loved that Gustav worked it out before Georg. He strikes me as the type that thinks a lot and likes to know what's going on. God, Tom's speech, was so touching to read. I'm sure the G's will come round eventually. They're good friends.
Yet another long review! Hope you don't mind me telling you my thoughts. Loving it as ever. And loving the quick updates too. ^_^
Author's Response: There was no way I was leaving Tom to grow old ... that would have been terrible. I kind of hinted at it with Markus, being that he is much older than he looks and to tell you the truth I didn't realise i hadn't spelled it out until this point until Razzle mentioned it after an earlier chapter :). I think Bill's just as protective as Tom, he just doesn't have much opertunity to show it. Oh there is definitely no easy way to tell someone you're a vampire; I think that's a given :D. Poor Bill is going to be somewhat mixed up for a while yet I think. So pleased you enjoyed the feeding scene :). It's always the quiet ones you have to watch because they do all the thinking and I'm sure Gustav does a hell of a lot of thinking all the time. Thank you so much for the lovely long review; I really enjoy reading them.
Date: 04/22/08 11:49 am Title: Chapter 15 - Not Gently Enough
The feeding scene was incredibley erotic.
Author's Response: Thank you :) I do enjoy writing those scenes.
Date: 04/22/08 11:32 am Title: Chapter 15 - Not Gently Enough
ooh... wow! I actually couldn't believe that bill healed tom's cheeck right before the eyes of the G's! but it's good that they know it right now, that bill is a striori.. they get used to the bond, i'm sure of it :P :D
really really nice chapter!
Author's Response: I wanted to put them all in a situation where Bill had to reveal what he was, rather than them all sitting down and talking it through, and I thought the one thing that would tip Bill into doing that was an injured Tom. I'm sure the Gs will get used to it :). Thank you so much for commenting.
Date: 04/22/08 03:01 am Title: Chapter 14 - Gently Does It
LMAO the end was completely hilarious!
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 04/22/08 01:15 am Title: Chapter 14 - Gently Does It
LOL a hilarious end to a good chapter.
I like the little hints Bill's giving the G's. String them along slowly is the right method. I loved the sexual tension between the twins. You do UST and RST very well. Guh.... so well. :)
I can't wait until the next chapter; hopefully the boys will come clean to the G's and take that next step. *waggles eyebrows*
Author's Response: Thank you :). Stringing them along slowly might help a little, but could you imagine one of your best friends turning around and saying, BTW, I'm a vampire? ::g:: Talk about a little bit of a shock. Would RST be resolved sexual tension? Thank you again *hugs*
Date: 04/21/08 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Gently Does It
OMG!! This is such an excellent story, though I have to admit that I was skeptical when I read Non-Con/Rape and Bill/OMC but the summary kept me intrigued. I must say not only am I delighted but I'm patiently waiting for more!! ;) You've not only done an awesome story but you've added vampires as well. XD Plus, you made it more realistic than I thought possible, instead of the usual, "Hey! You're a vampire now!" and then the whole thing unravels rather messily, instead of leaving you wanting more. Anyways, I can't wait for the next chapter!! ^_^
P.S. I love the building of the relationship between not only the twins but also the other characters as well. It's extremely well written!
Author's Response: Thank you, so pleased you're enjoying it. On LJ I tend to warn with Non-con/Rape non-graphic, but getting into that granularity in archives is just asking for trouble :). I have a huge weakness for vampires - totally addicted to the genre. So pleased you're enjoying the progress of the fic. Thank you again for reviewing.
Date: 04/21/08 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Gently Does It
Ah...2 chapters in one day?? YES! Awesome, thank you! I was just thinking the other night that if Bill could tell Andreas, why couldn't he tell the G's? I love this...can't wait for the next installment.
Author's Response: Thank you :) They told Andi first because they were leaving him behind (sort of) and with the Gs it's more than just personal - at least that's my reasoning.
Date: 04/21/08 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Gently Does It
I'm glad Georg and Gustav know they're sleeping together that's a good start. It would be really funny if Gustav just figured out on his own that Bill was a vampire. I am also really happy w/ Bill and Tom's relationship. Wish they'd gotten a little farther though.
Author's Response: The Gs had to find out sooner or later. Gustav is good, but I'm not sure he's that good, well unless he exhausts every other possibility first, because, y'know - vamps are really out there :). Bill and Tom will get there eventually - I know, I already wrote it :D
Date: 04/21/08 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Gently Does It
Exciting, nice and long!
What happens next?
What else happens, what other hints do they drop before they tell, I'm anxious for their reaction!
Author's Response: Thank you. Shouldn't be long before you get to find out the answers to your questions :)
Date: 04/21/08 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Gently Does It
one more update in such a short time!! unbelievable!! I am enjoying for sure how Bill is dropping the hints!! ))
Author's Response: Thank you :).
Date: 04/21/08 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Gently Does It
So much to love about this chapter ^_^
I liked Bill's idea, of gradually letting the G's know about his 'Significant physiological changes.' Lol, I love that expression. The G's are obviously getting curious about Bill's new found skills. I can't wait to see how they react when Bill tells them the reason for them... They might well be relieved, considering all the surprises Bill's springing on the, lol!
I know that they keep the feeding separate from sex but damn, that scene where Bill was biting Tom... Very sexy! And the scene after that... Well, that was hot^^ I loved how considerate Tom was still though. How he wanted to make sure it wasn't just the euphoria of feeding that was driving Bill. Very cute, I adore Tom in this.
And now, I really, really want to see level two ^_~
I loved the ending, so funny! Poor Georg and Gustav! Rofl!
Okay, I'll stop now, lol. It seems I can't leave a short review for this^^ Testament to how much I love it!!
Author's Response: Thank you again :). I think dying and coming back as a vampire counts as a 'significant physiological change' :D G's reaction coming soon. Finding out what's going on will certainly answer a huge number of questions they must have. Feeding and sex are getting closer and closer ... they'll figure it around eventually! I think Tom wants to see level 2 as well ;). Thank you so much for all the lovely comments.
Date: 04/21/08 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Gently Does It
whahhahaa, lol! :D
Thanks!! Another great chappie today! You must have a lot of ideas :)'
I really loved the biting thing, finally that's becoming more a sex thing :P
I'm curious about the G's reaction ;)
Update soon! :D
Author's Response: Thank you :). I have far too many ideas - they eat my brain :D. The biting was always a sex thing, Bill is just having to come to terms with it. Not too long to wait for the Gs' reaction - promise.
Date: 04/21/08 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Gently Does It
Run Bill! Run! Lol!
Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you ... shouldn't be too long.
Date: 04/21/08 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Gently Does It
HAHAHAHA!!! OMG!!! Is that true? In the story, I mean?
Author's Response: You mean in the fic does Bill really know Gustav's pet name for his todger? It's up to the reader :D Thank you for commenting :).
Date: 04/21/08 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 13 - What It's All About
I loved the scene with the twins, Georg and Gustav, they really are so cute and good friends too. I hope they react well when Bill tells them. It really helped to show the strength of Tom and Bill's bond, and how it's difficult for them to be so close, and yet not.
The concert was cute too, I loved the fact that there was a fan holding up that banner, and Bill's reaction to it. I loved how Tom is supporting Bill. I absolutely adore protective Tom. It's just too cute.
I'm off to read the next chapter now, two in one day, you're spoiling us ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you :). Everyone has been so lovely with comments that I thought a treat was in order ::g::. You don't have too long to wait to find out how the Gs will react. I like to write protective!Tom, because if Bill and Tom are anything like myself and my twin, we are so protective of each other. We can scream at each other and yet if the other needs something that's all that matters. Thank you again.
Date: 04/21/08 07:52 am Title: Chapter 13 - What It's All About
Protective Tom=love. I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you ... I'm rather fond of protective!Tom myself :).