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Reviewer: em_rose483 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/15 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Others

Oh the way you deacribe Bill feeding from Tom is insanely gorgeous!! Beautiful, beautiful writing :)

Reviewer: em_rose483 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/15 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 3 Learning

Aw so nice to see Bill returning to his former self a little :) gosh this is wonderful! I'm glad I can't remember the details of this story because I can enjoy it almost like a new fic all over again!

Reviewer: em_rose483 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/15 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 2 Beyond Reality

Ohh it's all starting now, I forgot how amazing this fic is! I like Markus and Sybill. I can't remember how the twins explore their new relationship in this story so I'm very excited to find out :)

Reviewer: em_rose483 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/15 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 1 Not Dead

God this is just so good!!! I'd forgotten how utterly wonderful this fic is, I'm going to enjoy re reading it so much :)

Reviewer: em_rose483 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/15 07:11 pm Title: Prologue: Missing

Some chit chat on twitter brought me back to this fic, I think it was one of the first I ever read on the site. It's such an unbelievable read!

Reviewer: GeisterfahrerOTE Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/13 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Coming Round

Looooved it!!! Danke schön!!!

Reviewer: GeisterfahrerOTE Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/13 11:20 am Title: Prologue: Missing

OH MY GOOOOOOOD BEST PROLOGUE EVERR

Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/13 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Coming Round

Cool story!

Reviewer: SunMoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/11/13 07:39 pm Title: Prologue: Missing

aww you could have put vampire in warnings...!!! i was so excited reading chap 1 and 2 and then i was just like....ow.... :c

Reviewer: FallenAngel40317 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/13 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Coming Round

I was very pleasantly pleased with this fanfic. I did NOT expect this kind of story from the banner, nor the description. It was so out of left field that it was what kept me entertained, especially when you brought Sybil into the picture. It was AWESOME to read, but, I do have a few constructive criticisms if you don't mind.


1 - I would have added one or two chapters that focused on Tom during the three weeks that Bill was gone. The raw emotion you could have added would've been superb. Tom making a statement (via David or just himself) to the press, comforting or being comforted by his mother and/or bandmates (that way, the G's would have had a little more limelight than before halfway into the story). Vivid dreams and/or nightmares he had. You could've also injected in a few paragraphs where it would tell from Bill's P.O.V., so that way you aren't kept so in the dark with everything that happened until halfway into the story (damn, I'm saying that alot).

2 - I would have interjected some sort of conversation with Tobi about his part to do with Bill's kidnapping. Not in the sense that he had anything to do with it, no, it wasn't his fault. But I know if I was in charge of taking care of someone and someone else took that person, I would be driven to the point of insanity with guilt. You could've added a little conversation between Tobi and Tom, or Tobi and Bill, or all three where Tobi expressed soul-consuming guilt that he "let" Bill be taken. It could've been a good conversation between Tom and Tobi while Bill was absent, like I mentioned above.

Other than that, I don't really have any complaints. The way you categorize, monopolize, and leveled the vampires through their different traits, attributes, and powers was very real-like and really made the story complete. Your "cycles" and "powers" were all very unique and very entertaining to read and think about. You're very skilled in writing and this story was absolutely wonderful to read. I'm gonna read your other works of art and mark this as a favorite. :)

Reviewer: Raveness Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/12 09:22 am Title: Chapter 20 - Coming Round

I seriously loved this story!!!!!

Reviewer: ItsTrue1229 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/12 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Coming Round

AMAZING!

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/12 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Coming Round

I really loved this!!! Thank you for giving me something lovely and LONG to read while I'm sick in bed :( and I thank THF for helping me find it :)

Reviewer: nessavonkaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/12 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Coming Round

OMGGGGGGGG
Im so glad you made it to the Halloween Feature Fic!!!!!! congratulations!!
your fic is so fckin amazing
Dramatic, cute, hot so original and oh gosh!! i just bow you are amazing thank you so much for share it
i will forever love Strigoi!!!!!!!!
dlaksdjsakdjalda the video should be real i gladly would give anything for it to be.
The fic should be a movie OH GOSH MY FEELINGS !!!!!! aklsdjaksd brilliant, amazing, love it!!

Reviewer: TomsCanadianGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/12 12:37 am Title: Chapter 20 - Coming Round

I have no words...this is one of the best fics I have ever read!! I'm not normally into the supernatural/alternate universe fics, but after seeing so many wonderful comments about it, I had to give it a shot. I'm so glad I did! There aren't too many fics that I have read that have touched my heart and soul as much as this one did.
The characters you created here and the story is absolutely wonderful! I'm glad I was able to spend some time in this world and most definitely see myself reading this again and again.

Reviewer: billxbesitztxmeinxherz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/12 01:20 am Title: Prologue: Missing

This is still the best story of all time in my mind. I find myself coming back to reread it constantly.

Reviewer: foreversacred13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/21/11 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Coming Round

Speechless! :O What a wonderful story! I'm not a huge fan of vampire fics, but this was AH-MAZIN'! Deff one of my favorites! And, unf, both the twins and the G's being together? That is just spool much sexiness! Thank you for such a beautiful fanfic! (: You deserve a big hug from all the ToHo boys! (;

Reviewer: MidnightStorm Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/11 06:36 pm Title: Prologue: Missing

I have to admit, I was a little dubious about this fic when I noticed the paranormal warning because God knows some stories do not do vampires justice (Twilight's were sparkling like a christmas tree or something.. wtf?). But I decided to read a few chapters as a trial to see if I could get into it and needless to say, you had me hooked.

I love how you have created a universe which is romantic and fluffy at times whilst still maintaining the vicious vampire instincts I love so much from films like The Lost Boys and Dracula, etc.

Syb had to be one of my favourite characters of the whole thing (other than the boys of course!) I loved how she weaved her way into being such a big part of Bill and Tom's lives as a tutor and kind of motherly figure they could rely on supporting them.

I also adored the way you wrote Bill's thought processes- I could really feel his confused thoughts as well as how Tom became his lifeline. The slowly building sexual tension between the twins was lovely too- I adored how they didn't just jump right from a strictly twinly bond into full sex. The build-up of that made their first time immensely more enjoyable to read.

And the feeding *shudders* If that's what it feels like then where can I sign up as a donor? ;)

Sorry for my long and probably rambling review but I just had to give you something back in return for sharing this with us all. Few fics leave such an impression on me where I feel compelled to leave a review but this is definitely one universe which will stick in my head for a long time. xo

Reviewer: silver_lining Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/11 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 9 -Hints of Normality

The part where David mentions Gustav writing his memoirs is hilarious. I can just picture him doing that too!

Reviewer: LifeLoveMusic Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/11 01:13 am Title: Chapter 20 - Coming Round

Amazing!

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