Date: 04/30/08 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Trial and Retribution
I'm really glad all that is over for the boys now. LOVING vampire!Gusti in this, does he get a bond mate?
Author's Response: Thank you :). Ah, the bond mate question ... you'll have to wait just a little longer to find out ::g::
Date: 04/30/08 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Trial and Retribution
this really is a masterpiece of a story
the most creative vamp story i've ever read :)
i bow down to your superior imagination!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. There is only one chapter left, so I hope you enjoy that too.
Date: 04/30/08 11:40 am Title: Chapter 19 - Trial and Retribution
Such a good chapter!
I'm glad that Gustav's taking it so well. It was funny, him winding Bill up like that.
The whole court scene was amazing. It really felt like I was right there in the midst of it. It was beautifully described and as usual, contained such an immense amount of detail that it was completely believable.
I'm so glad that Nikols is dead now. He deserved it. He was insane, but he was insane before, not because of the bond. Bill was so brave, to agree to the mind touch, to have to live through it again must have been terrible.
The last few paragraphs were so touching and powerful. I really felt Bill's pain, his sense of grief, confusion and almost numbness. I really hope he can put this behind him now. And move on, together with Tom.
Author's Response: Thank you :). It's always the quite ones you have to watch and the only reason I can see for the twins not taking the piss out of Gustav the same way they do with Georg is that Gustav is more likely to take revenge ::g::. I'm so pleased the court scene worked well; it was somewhat intense to write. I think Bill is strong enough to look to the future and leave the past behind.
Date: 04/30/08 11:30 am Title: Chapter 19 - Trial and Retribution
Am I ever so glad that Nikols is gone!!!
yes yes I'm lovin' this very much!
Author's Response: I think Nikols being gone has universally been received as a good thing :) Thank you so much for commenting.
Date: 04/29/08 10:52 am Title: Chapter 18 - Plus One Makes Two
i have always loved possessive!tom so yay for this chapter!
georg is amusing!
Author's Response: Thank you, so pleased you enjoyed it.
Date: 04/29/08 12:30 am Title: Chapter 18 - Plus One Makes Two
Tom as sweet as ever!!!
LOVE!!
Author's Response: Thank you :).
Date: 04/28/08 09:24 pm Title: Prologue: Missing
Aw, I love motherhen!Georg. ^^ Makes me smile.
I want Gusti to get a bondmate... He needs happiness, too. *cough*Georg*cough* *wink*
And Tom's possessive jealousy is love. *beams* Bill likes jealousy. And so do I. Lol.
Author's Response: Thank you :). Poor Georg; he'll get used to the whole thing eventually. Jealous!Tomi is fun :).
Date: 04/28/08 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Plus One Makes Two
Oh, what a relief, I think I was as worried as everyone in there when Gustav put his hand in the sunlight. It's great that he's a day dweller too. Georg being all mother hen around him was really cute! I'd like to see if anything develops between those two.
Aw, jealous Tom. I loved that bit. David being all shell shocked was quite amusing... It must have been quite a shock for him. I found Saki's concern quite touching.
I loved the amount of detail in this chapter, everything has been really well thought out.
Fantastic as ever, can't wait for the next chapter ^_^
Author's Response: I couldn't have done anything too terrible to Gustav; I already almost killed him, poor chap :). Poor Georg is having a little trouble coming to terms with what he's seen. I'm sure the others will make sure he's okay though. Jealous!Tom is so much fun to play with, and so it shell shocked!David. Can you imagine seeing the majority of your managees being shot in front of you and then being told that vampires exist? I think there are probably two ways to go; blind acceptance and total shock :). Thank you for your lovely comments *hugs*
Date: 04/28/08 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Plus One Makes Two
I love this story! At first I thought it was a little corny. >.>; But I kept reading because it's very well written! And now I find myself very attached to it! Update soon! =D
Author's Response: Thank you :). Corny??!!!! Okay, I can see why you might have thought that ;), I'm very pleased you kept reading.
Date: 04/28/08 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Plus One Makes Two
Lovely chapter
Author's Response: Thank you :).
Date: 04/28/08 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Plus One Makes Two
This was a very informative chapter. It seems like most of the people who need to know now know the truth (with the exception of Gustav's parents). The guy, (don't feel like trying to find his name) is still alive, and gustav's a day dweller like bill. Does he have a bond mate too? Giorg sounds like he'd be fine w/ it but IDK how Gstav fells about that. Also is there going to be a court scene or something where they convict the kinapper? I'd like to knok more about him, motive, background, age, accomplices, did he think he'd just not actually properlly turned bill? How did he justify bill's ability to go into the light? Would he have attacked him if he had know how poerful he was? And why did he call Bill a slut? That's kinda annoying. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you, and yes, most of the people who need to know now do. Yep, Bill's attacker is still alive ... if I give you a hint that the next chapter is called "Trail and Retribution" does that answer some of your questions? ;)
Date: 04/28/08 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Plus One Makes Two
aaaaahhh this is soooo good!!!! x)
im obcessed =D
Author's Response: Thank you :).
Date: 04/28/08 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Revenge
more please! i love this story. it took me 4 hours to read it all but its amazing! please update!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so pleased you're enjoying it. :)
Date: 04/28/08 12:13 am Title: Chapter 17 - Revenge
Oh man I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you :).
Date: 04/27/08 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Revenge
I was finally able to catch up!
I was hesitant to read this at first since I'm not really a fan of vampire stories but I'm so glad i gave it a try coz this one changed my opinion.
You're really good! The attention to details you put in this story is superb!
can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so pleased you enjoyed the fic. I love vampires; just can't help myself so I really enjoy writing about them. It makes me very happy to have changed your opinion on them, at least for a bit. The problem with vampires is they are a cliché that some just throw in for a bit of pazzaz (amateur and professional writers alike), so they get a bad rep.
Date: 04/27/08 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Revenge
Wauw.. This was surprising.. And even though it's might not the best surprise to Gustav, I like it a lot! Wauw.. I'm counting on Georg to be his bond mate and I'm counting on you to make this story even better than it already is.. though it's gonna be a hard one! I loooove this story!
Author's Response: Thank you :). Poor Gustav, I did put him through it didn't I.
Date: 04/26/08 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Revenge
Oh My God Beren!
That was amasing!
Please continue this!
Don't ever end it!
I swear I will read it for the rest of my life if you just, please, continue this!
I love vamp-fics but this just beats them all!
This is even better than The Vampires Chronicles by Anne Rice!
Can I please worship you? PLEASE?
okay enough! I know, I'm being creepy again! ^_^
But this is just magnificent!
Author's Response: Thank you :). I'm afraid it will have to end, well the story will, but that doesn't mean the universe will; there's always the option of another fic if the muses call :). My ego might get a little too big if I have worshipers :D. Thank you again.
Date: 04/26/08 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Revenge
oh my gosh. this is amazing. please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you :).
Date: 04/26/08 11:58 am Title: Chapter 17 - Revenge
Oh my god.. I just realised I haven't reviewed this in ages! :O I tend to do that when a fic is just so good I can't come up with anything that no one has already said. But I have to review, or else I feel like shit XD
My poor heart! What a scary chapter. Gustav O.o I thought you had killed him there for a while! I'm glad Bill could save him.
Damn.. Vampire!Bill is just so attractive... X_X *random*
(and btw, the chapter before this was so hot)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review :). Me kill Gustav! How could you think that? :) If there's one thing I can't write it's death fic - can't read it either. So pleased you enjoyed the chapter.
Date: 04/26/08 11:52 am Title: Prologue: Missing
this was the best vampire story i've ever read. srsly. it was so creative! you really fleshed out the vampire characters into something believable. they aren't just perfect beings who wear goth clothes and seduce everyone they meet. they have weaknesses and flaws and many dimensions. oh, and you handled the twincest in an extremely creative way as well. tom and bill's relationship really pulled at my heart.
you must continue! :D your imagination is too beautiful to be kept bottled up.
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm so very pleased you're enjoying it. Vampires are a pet fav of mine so I really enjoy writing about them and pulling bits of different legends into stories (and plain making stuff up ;)). I think if I didn't write I'd go bonkers pretty quickly; there'd be all these voices in my head with nothing to do except drive me mad ;).